I'm not answering because of the thread or the technical aspect, except to say that none of the soc.history.what-if experts on Finland bothered to comment on the thread. If you pop on by and make a few posts defending your story I'm sure they'll show up, but that's not relevant now...
This however is:
Stuart wrote:One of these days Grazhdanin, I'll tell you the real story behind why Norseman is so pissed off with me. It's nothing to do with TBO per se., everything to to with elementary aerodynamics. When I do get around to it , you'll see why I don't pay any attention to anything he says.
Mr Slade I ignored the vendetta bullshit the first time you pulled it out. Given how obviously angry you were, I mean your spelling, grammar and punctuation went all out of whack whenever you talked to me, I thought it was just a "waaa waaa you're only arguing because you got a vendetta with me!" quote.
Now however I'm beginning to realise you were serious!
So what on earth could it be? And why wouldn't you bring it up?
The obvious answer is that you're not bringing it up because it'll make you look very bad if someone unbiased was to read it. I'm not quite sure why you'd think I was angry with you over it since I was actually quite grateful for what you did, and acted on your suggestions.
During the DrakaFic project I got the idea of writing a story called
Two Stars over Astrakhan (it is also
here on SD.net).
The idea is basically that the USAAF sets up an airbase near Astrakhan to bomb Drakan airfields and factories, and help intercept Drakan transport on the Caspian sea.
The point of view changes in each chapter, from ground staff to pilots, basically the idea is to give an overall feel of the place. Stuart actually liked the story according to
his comments at the time:
Stuart back then wrote:Firstly. I've read the latest part of Stars and the rewrite of the earlier section. The rewrite is a great improvement over the original; it rings true now. The story of the air attack on the radar station is also very good, well put together and gripping.
So what were his objections?
They were in regards to
Chapter II Dogfight (also
here on SDnet) which coincidentally has a dogfight in it.
His objections to the original writing was that:
1. The Drakan aircraft were too heavily armoured (they shrugged of .50 bullets).
2. A bomb won't explode if you shoot at it (yes I did that, it sounded cool).
So I corrected those, I increase the damage a bit, and I fixed it so that the pilot shot down the Drakan aircraft by shooting off the propeller rather than shooting the bombs.
Now understand, the DrakaFics are silly, and I certainly do not take any offence if anyone tells me that my aircombat scenes are wonky (I list freaking BIGGLES as my main source!) They're meant to be slightly gritty adventure stories, and when it comes to weapons I generally just run with what the Writers Guide says.
However you can read the entire discussion of that story
here and you'll see Stuart giving me some good advice on how to correct the technical aspects of my writing.
Advice that I accepted and used to rewrite the story, I was in fact quite grateful that there was an expert there to correct my mistakes and tell me what to do; it means I'll learn something, I can correct mistakes, and that will improve the stories. I don't mind this, it's one of the benefits of publishing online, you got tons of people who can critique and then you can act on it right away.
That is pretty much what I do when someone tells me that there are problems with my stories, and every now and again there is. I mean I got people that will IM me and go "No you can't do <whatever> in that story! Seriously what were you
thinking?" I like that it shows that they've read the story and have some suggestions to make it better.
You'll also notice bringing up aspects of the books to keep the discussion going, a good exchange of opinions is the best way to learn and Stuart brought a lot of information to bear. At one point I did defend Stirling outright, and that was in regards to his story telling abilities; say what you like the writing is good, he wouldn't sell as much as he does otherwise. I don't feel that Stuart has quite the same literary talent, though others are free to disagree with me.
This is the only time that I've discussed anything resembling aerodynamics with Stuart, well discussion is a bit much it was mostly me going: "Gee golly Stirling said this..." and Stuart going "Ah, but you see..." and then me going "Wow! You're right! I'll fix that story right away."
I should also add that I
do mention the story negatively at one point on SpaceBattles. When the discussion got to whether or not The Big One was well written I argued that it wasn't, and that the lack of quality was probably because you didn't recognise bad writing when you saw it; then in that context I presented a piece of writing that I had written and that I knew were bad, and which you had praised.
The Air Combat scene simply isn't one of my best pieces of writing because I've never read much about, or been overly interested in, fighter combat or airplanes. As a result a lot of it became very clichéd, because clichés and other peoples advice from air simulators were my main sources, and as a result of
that the section just didn't work too well.
I'm not too happy about the Ground Attack scene either, the introduction I think is good, but I don't really think the rest of it works it's too contrived in various ways. Then again DrakaFic is very silly so it doesn't hurt too much.
Now instead of bringing this up, instead of bringing the accusation out in the open and going "Norseman you're just pissed because of these posts!" you kept making snide remarks and trying to poison the discussion. Well I've brought it out into the open, there was no big argument, and there is no vendetta because of Aerodynamics of all things!
What you think I got a vendetta against Harry Harrison and S.M. Stirling now? I spent months hunting down references to write my enormous review of Harrisons "Stars and Stripes Forever." I've spent over a year writing stories in the DrakaFicVerse, I must have one
hell of a Vendetta against Stirling!
So here's my hobby psychologist thought: You couldn't understand why on Earth anyone would criticize your creation, after all this is the first time that anyone came up with questions and arguments that you couldn't counter. So what could it be? It couldn't be that
you goofed, while some idiot on the internet showed you up! Oh no! He had to have a Vendetta against you because
you told him what's what at some point, so livid with anger (please note once more how bad his spelling and punctuation got when he replied to me) you went looking for the
Real Reason.
I think also that deep down you know this is true, if you didn't you would have come out in the open about it, shown the links and said "and here you can see why Norseman is angry with me." Instead you go "I know the
real reason why he's upset!" in typical poison letter no evidence fashion.
Now the cats out of the bag... guys, please, take a look at the links and make up your own mind. Remember though who provided the links, remember who backed his case with real arguments and evidence, and who made snide remarks about vendettas and real reasons. Normally I would not be so direct in my speech, but when outright calumnies are levelled against me I have to speak up.
Stuart wrote:One last thought on Finland. You know, that place was much better off when your people ran it. Why don't you take it back?

You know... I'm not sure this is some sort of attempt to provoke me, or if you're just being juvenile because someone argued with you about Finland, but it doesn't look good either way.