Star Blazer in the Babylon-5

Jerry · Post by **Jerry** » 2006-05-11 06:56pm

The Starforce finish a 2 weeks of testing and training of crew of the new EDF ship Yamato 2 of the Great Yamato class space battleship. On the way home, they end up in the Babylon-5 dimension.

rhoenix · Post by **rhoenix** » 2006-05-12 12:26am

Is this a beginning of a story, or a premise?

The first story I wrote chronologically from start to finish, and the story suffered somewhat in characterization and plot because of this.

The story I'm working on now I'm...using a far less chronological method, but it boils down to planning ahead for all aspects of your story, including some psychoanalysis of the characters, second-guessing yourself on the plot (often - trust me, you don't want to have a reader say "well, that was cool - but couldn't you have just done x instead?"), and plotting out ahead of time, in skeleton form, what's basically going to happen.

This way, when you get to the writing stages and if you get a good idea while writing (happens to me all the time), then at least you'll be able to properly judge the idea's merit.

I hope this helps.

Raneko · Post by **Raneko** » 2006-05-12 09:24am

This is going be fun.

Jerry · Post by **Jerry** » 2006-05-12 12:50pm

This is only a idea and I hope someone well like it and turn this idea into a story.

Col. Crackpot · Post by **Col. Crackpot** » 2006-05-12 01:37pm

[Fanfiction.net quality fic mode on]

Chapter one

Tokyo, Japan 2010

teh yamatoargo rises into space from a hole ins teh ground to fight teh evil gamilons.

sander sez; "omg itz an anomoly"

Wildstar: "fire teh wave motion gun!"

Orion: "omg! itz teh broke!"

Smoke and fire burns in the vacuum of space for no apparent reason as the Yamatoargo is sucked into the void.

Wildstar: "aggghhh! DESSSLOCK!!!!!!!"

The doctor drinks some Sake

chapter 2

Somewhere in Bab5 Space

The Yamatoargo appears in the middle of a battle, smoke and fire still spewing into the vaccum of space for no apparant reason.

Sander: "omg! Wildstar those ships look like spiders!"

Wildstar: "Fire teh Wave motion gun!"

Orion: "It's fixed"

everyone grimaces puts on sunglasses and grabs their armrests.

kapaow!

Sander: It's dead!

Nova: Oh Derek!

Wildstar: Oh Nova!

the end

[Fanfiction.net quality fic mode off]

Jerry · Post by **Jerry** » 2006-05-12 01:49pm

hahahaha Sound like the show.

ElPintoGrande · Post by **ElPintoGrande** » 2006-05-12 01:52pm

OMG!!! Sp1d3r sh1pz! Z3rg russh! 1o1!

Wow that was a sad attempt at 'l33t speak'. But my thoughts exactly. Now back to Allies in Blood. I suggest you all follow me for the sake of your combined sanity.

ElPintoGrande · Post by **ElPintoGrande** » 2006-05-12 01:54pm

Allies in Blood is actually a pretty good fic hosted oddly enough at ff.net for those not in the know.

Col. Crackpot · Post by **Col. Crackpot** » 2006-05-12 03:41pm

ElPintoGrande wrote:Allies in Blood is actually a pretty good fic hosted oddly enough at ff.net for those not in the know.

because Albert Green is the shizznet

ElPintoGrande · Post by **ElPintoGrande** » 2006-05-12 03:49pm

Hizzle yizzle muh nizzle. Ha! try that one on for size!

edit: My mom thinks I'm cool...