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I'm not particularly happy with the next bit, for various reasons, but I've decided to use it anyway. For that reason, you guys get two segments (for some reason the word "chapter" doesn't feel right) in one post (as I'm actually quite happy with the second bit). Happy birthday
One last thing: I did some (relatively minor) edits on this using the post-creation form thingy. If you see terms that are inconsistent, that's why. That's my story and I'm sticking to it
Story:
THE TRIBAL GROUNDS
Leesh ran. It was something she enjoyed doing, most of the time, but now was different. Her father had told her that she was to be offered to the sky-monsters as a tribute, so they might look upon her tribe with mercy and perhaps even generosity.
The reasoning made sense. She ran anyway.
Father would send the hunt-packs after her, maybe even the war-band. To her, it didn't matter. They would not find her if she chose to hide.
Her legs took her across the Great Bridge, disturbing flocks of birds that nested in the trees and bushes that grew there. A herd of game beasts, driven by fear past the point of hiding, fled from the undergrowth and ran in front of her like an honour guard. On any other day, she would have praised her good fortune, and picked off the bulkiest members of the pack with her hunting bow. Today, however, the bow sat beside her sleeping mat, and she would not have tried to hunt even if she had it.
One of the huge Stone Forests lay ahead, crumbling slightly in the breeze. The hunt-packs were skilled at the craft of hunting in them, but this one was different. She came to a hole in the side of one of the square stone-trees, and climbed through. The space within was mostly clear, unlike some of the other Pillars, and the faded colours on the walls of the chamber were visible in the morning light. She had once come here with her friends, and they had talked for hours while trying to find out why there were colours inside the trees. On their way back, they had stumbled across a large metal case with a button on one side. When pressed, it made an unearthly screeching sound for a second, then died. They had traded it for a bit of food from one of the Metal Tribes, who had a strange attachment to such objects.
Leesh shook off the memory, and plunged into the depths of the cavern. While there were more caverns above her, the way up was dangerous and unstable.
No, what interested Leesh was the way down, a way only she and one other knew. She felt for the familiar protrusion next to the shaft that linked all the caverns in the pillar, and was rewarded with a click, and the wall next to the shaft opening. She had discovered this by accident, trying not to fall into the shaft which led much deeper than the shafts in the other trees. She had only just been rescued by her friend Land, who almost fell in himself. He'd grabbed the wall to try to stop them from falling, and had opened the secret passage.
A stepped ramp lead down into the depths of the planet, turning every so often so as to fit into the square hole it was squeezed in to. Unlike the rest of the building, this area was lit by torches the two of them had brought from the camp in their exploration of the Pillar. She dearly hoped Land was not one of the people hunting her now; he was trying to gain membership in the war-band, but so far none of the current members were willing to vouch for him. Even so, they would likely ask him to help them search for her.
She reached the bottom of the ramp, where another sliding wall awaited. This one was not lit by torches, but by a strange light that came from a half-ball above the part of the wall that slid to the side. She pushed the button to open this wall, and ran inside the corridor behind it. She took no time to contemplate the markings on the door, as she normally did, but went straight to the Komand Senter, where the Maji had first spoken to the two children as they explored the place the voices called the “Komplecks”. The Maji had threatened them with something called “Prosekushion” if they told anyone about it, so they had kept it a secret between them.
Before she got there, she was stopped by the waiting figure of Land. She sighed in resignation.
“I suppose you are here to return me to my father,” she said, wondering why he didn't just pick her up and carry her there right then.
“Do you want me to?” he asked, surprising her.
“I am being hunted by the tribe, wanted as a disobedient tribute. Helping me will only earn you death!” she shouted at him, despite the voice in her head that screamed at her to let him help. He laughed.
“You are so predictable, Leesh! I knew you'd run, and I knew where you'd run to! If I wanted to help your father suck up to the Sky-Monsters, I'd have brought the packs with me.”
“But... we can't stay here. There's no food, or water. And I don't want you being an outlaw too!” she replied.
“I have a plan.” he said, simply. She'd once been afraid to hear those words, but this time she stopped and listened intently. “The Maji are old, far older than even the oldest Sky-Monster. They are wise, too. Maybe they know of some way to get away from here, to find another tribe which won't sell us to the Sky-Monsters. They might even be able to give us knowledge that will make us valuable. They talk of something called “Akri-Kulture” and “Ekonomiks”.” The look on his face turned to that excited one that she'd come to associate with finding out something new. The last time she'd seen it was when he had thrown the contents of one of the red canisters on the walls of the Komplecks over a fire, and it had smothered it. After a long moment of looking into that face, she made up her mind.
“We will ask them if they can help. If they cannot, you will take me back to my father.” With that, she pushed past him into the Senter.
One of the voices greeted her as she walked in.
“Welcome back, Civilian (Access Level Delta) Leesh. It has been one month and twenty-six days since you last conversed with us. Have you come for another story of the wars against the gods?” It was the one that had introduced itself as Baltha-sar, the one that was the friendliest to her and talked the most.
“Is your friend Land here too?” Asked another of the voices. This one was Kas-par, the one that was friendlier to Land. That it even talked to her was strange, but then she hadn't brought Land here for the past two visits. She talked before Kas-par could talk to Land, who had moved to stand beside her.
“We need help.”
Both voices were silent for a moment, then a third voice spoke. This one had only spoken when she had brought Land here when he was ill, and called itself Mel-kior.
“We had calculated that you would ask this of us soon. We received a message from a dreadnought that was lost long ago. We can send a reply, asking for it to help you, if you will give us a message to send.” That was how Mel-kior spoke, talking of predictions yet never speaking in riddles. If one could ignore the strange words it used, anyway. Land looked ready to interrogate it – he'd never forgiven her for not letting him do so last time – but she cut him off, knowing that time was short.
“What do I need to do?”
“Push the buttons that glow on the panel in front of you, in the order they glow. Then, speak your message, identifying yourself and the trouble you are in.” Mel-kior explained.
“We will add all the other details.” Cas-par said.
“And I will ask them to hurry.” said Baltha-sar. “Sending this message will alert the xenos (gamma-class) to our presence.”
The panel Mel-kior referred to lit up, and some of the buttons glowed. Leesh pushed them as soon as they did so, knowing that the voices would not like it if she had to repeat the sequence. Another panel, this one transparent, slid out of the top of the pulpit the first panel rested on. It lit up, and markings flashed across it. Remembering Mel-kior's instructions, she spoke quickly.
“I am Leesh of the Mountain Tribe. I, and my friend Land, are being hunted by our tribe to be offered as tribute to the Sky-monsters, who destroy our mightiest war-bands and take our people as slaves. If you can hear this, please help us.”
There was a low throbbing sound, the scrape of metal on stone and the humming sound of all the panels in the room working at once. Dozens, hundreds of markings scrolled across the transparent panels, and a large panel at the back of the room lit up. The familiar symbol of the Maji was displayed across it, with more markings below it. This lasted for only a moment, then everything was silent and still once more.
“Message sent.” Melchior said.
“You should pray to your gods that they listen,” said Caspar.
“And if they do, the xenos should pray to theirs for salvation.” Balthasar said.
“I have taken the liberty of activating the external sensors. Your fellow tribespeople are in the city above. I recommend that you persuade them to fight the xenos and protect us. We are the only means of communication you have with the lost ship.” Mel-kior interjected, cutting off its siblings.
Land looked across at Leesh, and motioned her to follow him outside. As they returned to the surface, her mind raced, trying to figure out how to persuade her father to follow her in rebellion against the creatures which had once decimated entire tribes.
As it turned out, she didn't even have to try.
The Stone Forest – no, Sity, she used the term the Maji had used to describe it – had undergone a transformation while they were underground. Some of the Pillars had disappeared, replaced by newer-looking pillars with what looked like the Sky-monster's fire-tubes attached to them, and metal men – a wonder only spoken of in the oldest of legends – plodded about the streets towards a knot of people.
Her tribesmen.
They had their spears and bows levelled at the advancing tide of metal, ready to fight if need be. She saw her father, proud warrior that he was, standing in front of the largest group of metal men, the fragment of the ancient war-blade Godsplitter in his hands.
The metal men stopped a few meters away from the crowd of hunters and warriors, awaiting orders.
Leesh stepped forward, Land at her side, and her father looked at her with defeat in his eyes.
“So,” he began, “You are so determined to avoid your responsibilities that you would kill us all.”
“No.” Leesh said. “I have consulted the Maji, in the depths of the Sity, and they say that help is at hand if we fight the Sky-Monsters. An ancient Dread Nought, from the days of legend, will come to our aid, and bring us salvation.”
“Have you forgotten the stories?!” exclaimed her father, “Where all the ancient vessels were lost in the great void-wars? You risk damning us all with false hope!”
“We should be fighting the Sky-monsters anyway, Father!” For a moment, the desire to order the metal men to close in on the stubborn fool ran through her. As soon as it appeared, she felt revulsion – why would she ever do that to her father? She continued, regardless; “You have damned us all with this lack of hope! Is it not told in the tales that we once ruled a mighty empire, when we did not even know of the Sky-monsters? Is it not said that we stood against our gods and their messengers, and drove them into the dust before us? You hold proof that we did that once! That blade pierced the heart of a god, and three of its messengers! The Sky-monsters are nothing compared to that. Their mightiest war-boats would be nothing before the Fortress-God, but we killed it in a day!” Some of the younger, more headstrong, warriors started nodding in agreement, “Their most skilled warriors would stand hopeless against the First Messenger alone, yet with just one Lance of Fire we destroyed it utterly!” She paused to catch her breath.
One of the older warriors took the advantage and spoke; “The ones who defeated the gods were not us, child. We do not have even one Lance of Fire. Those - and the other weapons with which we defied our gods and proved that we have a right to exist - have been lost for as long as the eldest's father's father's father could remember! While this “Sity” is impressive, do you really believe any of this can stand before the wrath of the Sky-Monsters?”
“It does not need to,” she retorted, “It only had to hold it back long enough for either the Dread Nought to appear, or for the Sky-monsters to learn the true price of rulership over these tribes. Even so, I have been talking to the Maji for a long time, and while they have not told me much, some is clear. This is one of the Sitys of legend, the ones the Gods chose to destroy first. Even though the Lances are long gone, and we have no war-boats, we still have a fortress that repelled the traitor war-band of the Final Messenger! A war-band far more powerful than any the Sky-Monsters could send against us!” The older warrior looked as though he would snap at her, but her father intervened.
“Are you sure that we can at least bloody them?” He asked.
“We can.” She did not say anything more. She did not need to.
“Then we shall.” her father, Alecks, Chieftan of the Mountain Tribe “I will send word to some of the other tribes, to take those who cannot fight... and to invite them to fight here too.”
The tribesmen raised their weapons in celebration, even the warrior who had argued against her. The metal men, acting on some ancient impulse, raised whatever passed for arms for them and walked off to continue repairing the ancient fortress-city.
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LUNAR ORBIT
The clan-ship
Builder's Wisdom was a hive of activity. Slaves from the system's third planet rushed to accomplish their tasks, whatever they may be. Warriors practised in the pits, waiting for a chance to use their skills against an actual foe and not the pitiful bands of half-trained and primitive free-slaves still on the Planet. Skilled workers of metal and earth oversaw the running of the ship, crushing any slave who made a mistake beneath their armoured legs.
Watching everything, Breeder-Captain Thornek felt a small amount of pride. He had taken the ship, given to him as a joke by the King's Court, and turned it into the pride of the King's Fleet. Not only that, but he had found an entire star system ripe for the taking, with a Green-class planet full of slaves and even, it was whispered, relics of the Builders themselves. The ancient gods had, for some reason, left this system littered with them, from autonomous orbital platforms to actual habitats on some of the planets.
Pride was, however, conflicting with annoyance. The system was no end of trouble, even for all of its wonders. The Transway Point between this system and the next in the chain was in orbit around the fourth planet, not the third, Green, planet. This meant he'd had to spend weeks travelling from that barren – but oddly enough habitable – world just to get here. Now, he would have to spend another month at least – after the years he had already wasted here - before being able to report back to the King and claim glory for this find. A month in which the plotters on his ship could spend overthrowing him or stealing that glory for their own.
The thrill of pride left him, and he scratched at his carapace with one of the vestigial claws growing from his back.
On top of everything else, it seemed the free-slaves on the planet were growing restless. One of his scout-ships had been destroyed, and its crew lost. They had found some old fortress, perhaps another relic of the Builders, and were resisting all attempts to dislodge them. Offers of weapons and preferential treatment hadn't worked, and bringing in free-slave "Tribes" (a term he'd never fully understood) from outside the area had just resulted in those tribes joining the rebels.
He let out a burst of air in frustration. He would have to deal with this in one fell swoop. Even if it meant destruction of a relic, and the death of countless slaves, he would have to order the
Wisdom to use its weapons against the fortress. He summoned one of the metal-workers to him, and relayed the necessary commands. As he expected from a metal-worker, it questioned why he would do such a thing, but explaining it to the creature before him allowed him to deflect any further questioning from his crew. After agreeing with the necessity of his commands, it left, leaving Thornek to look upon the dusty moon of the planet. He would have to search that rock next, in case any more relics were left there.
He allowed himself a small smile. Even though it was a pain, this was still going to be very profitable.