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Steve
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by Steve » 2003-09-24 10:30pm
http://stgjr.racknine.net/misc/logchap1.zip
Let the ass-kicking officially begin!
*kicks on the music*
"Don't want no revenge!
Ain't no payback time!
It ain't called getting even!
Here comes the Reckoning Day!"
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Peregrin Toker
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by Peregrin Toker » 2003-09-25 02:37am
Looks interesting!! I'll read it soon.
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Dalton
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by Dalton » 2003-09-25 12:45pm
Kick-ASS!
Muhahah! That was fuckin' cool. I like how my character axed people to death.
Er...that didn't sound right.
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Posbi
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by Posbi » 2003-09-25 05:23pm
Yep, that simply rocked. Looking forward to more.
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phongn
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by phongn » 2003-09-25 10:25pm
More fanfic!
Coalition
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by Coalition » 2003-09-27 01:37am
Looks very good. If I may, a couple requests:
For a rescue saying:
"Come with me if you want to live."
For a saying at the end:
"I live for the one, I kill for the one. Semper Fi"
Or watch the Goreans try to kidnap a T-X.
Okay, so the last one might be a little silly.
Still though, a very good beginning.
Peregrin Toker
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by Peregrin Toker » 2003-09-27 02:14pm
Very good what has happened so far... it at least has proved that Gor can be used for something else as paperweights.
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