JME2 wrote:Well the tactical goals for SoA were good in my eyes, helping to create a sense of supsense.
Agreed, SoA was suspenseful. The problem I had was the ending which proved the writers didn't think about the consequences of their actions.
*snip Dominion strategy*
Once that is achieved, the Dominion reinforcements which have been building up in the Gamma Quadrant for the past four months can join the Alpha Quadrant war effort. Since the servants of the Founders are already winning the war against the Federation, the arrival of 2,800 extra ships from the Gamma Quadrant would virtually ensure victory.
Good point. Instead of wiping out those thousands of ships with the Hand of God, how about this for an alternative?
The Dominion, unbeknownst to the AQ, has had to deal with a Borg invasion, or insurgency on trouble worlds. This has lead it to tie up it's resources in defeating the problem in the GQ. That means they can only send a couple hundred ships, if that, to reinforce their AQ front. So the Dominion and Cardassian alliance will get a shot in the arm, but the war wouldn't be over.
As for the handling of the battle, wouldn't it have been nice to have seen DS9 open fire on the assault fleet coming through the wormhole? Remember why DS9 became a battlestation? It was supposedly for the whole purpose of defending the AQ from Dominion incursions. Also, the battle for DS9 should have taken place
near DS9, not someplace else.
Imagine that: the Federation fleet arrives at the Bajoran sector, where the Dominion and Cardassian fleet await them. Sisko's plan was to utilise Kira and her resistance forces, who instead of doing petty acts like sow discontent between the Jemmies and Cardies has been acting like a good girl in prep for what she has to do. For most of the battle it's just the Federation ships duking it out with the Dominion ships. At this point the last mine is disabled by DS9 and Dukat gives the order to fire-
-Just when Kira and her resistance force storm Ops with the intent to capture the station. Say Ziyal helped her, and that embarassing shit with Damar never occured (how many times do we need to see dainty Kira slug a guy who's bigger than her? Not that I didn't want to see Damar go down, but geez, kick him in the balls instead of boxing him). So now there's TWO battles for DS9, the struggle outside and the struggle inside. ANd both sides are getting increasingly desperate.
Kira manages to secure Ops easily thanks to surprise. She sets up transporter blockers, as Dukat and the survivors beamed out as a retreating action. They're probably going to smash Ops if given the chance, but thankfully Dukat warmed up the guns. Acting quickly, Jake or whoever goes to the weapons console and opens up on the Dominion fleet, completely surprising them.
Now here's the kicker: Dukat knows the last mine has been disabled, but his fleet is getting decimated. So, he orders a squadron to attempt to clear the minefield at least partially to allow some reinforcements in. Now here's where the fleet on the other side of the wormhole comes in. Let's say the squadron manages to clear a third of the minefield, before either being destroyed or driven off, then Dukat realises this is as good as it gets so makes the call. But then tells them some ships will make it, some won't.
There. Perfect end to a hard fought battle. The Dominion fleet comes through the wormhole - to everyone's surprise there's few of them than they were expecting. We see some ships get destroyed thanks to the minefield, others just get damaged. It makes no difference, as the station is in the hands of the Federation again and it's wasn't damaged during the fight that much. The Federation and Klingon fleet has been depleted, but no significantly enough to not cause pain or a stalemate should the reinforced Dominion fleet decide to push on. Dukat chooses to withdraw.
Instead of going insane with grief he goes dangerously unstable with revenge. In his mind he's become unhinged but not to the degree that he was before ie useless at his job. He thinks Ziyal has been brainwashed or something by Kira, and retaliates by cooly detonating several hidden bombs on Bajor. Let's say they were put their on his initiative, and Weyoun knew nothing and is indeed almost scathingly furious at Dukat for doing what he does. Dukat doesn't even bat an eyelid.
Kira hears the news and breaks down. Sisko hears the news and feels like a failure. The battle was won... but the war continues.