A flashback is another means of showing, what I'm really driving home is the presense of the telling. It shouldn't be used at all, and especially not things that make you immediately go 'Oh, that'd be a sweet scene'.Hardy wrote:OK. Now I see what you are saying. But it still isn't the frist time in Star Trek that an exploit has been more described than visually shown onscreen. I dont think Archer does it too often either. They still dedicate entire episodes to flashbacks, or ussually just make a long story short by telling it. It saves some production budget as Enteprprise has one of the highest production budgets on Television.SirNitram wrote:
The concept of a battle from the bridge isn't really a violation of the 'Don't tell, show' maxim. It's a means of storytelling pioneered in old submarine movies, and Roddenberry carried this.. Purposefully.. into TOS. We're still seeing the battle, but the perspective is different. I'm talking about how Archer has literally said 'I've done this and that and this' and I keep thinking 'You know, any of those scenes would be actually INTERESTING, as opposed to you sitting your ass there'. That is what the maxim is supposed to prevent.
More annoying to me, as a writer, is the blatant disregard for internal continuity. My personal vex with the two chuckleheads in charge is for their willingness to wipe their asses with previous series, but as a professional, I'm aghast at how they just ignore their own bloody series. How many times, for example, would the Suliban Cell Ship the Enterprise has have been IMMENSELY useful?

