Kenny_10_Bellys wrote:OK then, textures changed and added a bit more detail to it as well. I plumped for a sliding stock as it fitted in well between the upper cowling and the main gun body, as well as looking the best when retracted. It's a bit more functional than the first design at any rate, and pretty much just a copy of the ones fitted to MP5s. I couldn't resist setting up a little scene with it, so the picture below is a little larger than the usual WIP shots, about 100k and 1024 x 768.
http://myweb.tiscali.co.uk/kenny7/KBPscene.jpg
Ok the 2 biggest problems with it is the mag and Sight placements. With the stock folded you can't se the sight (turn your head so it' level wth your shoulder and tell me how well you can aim from that position

), the feed mechanism for your Mag has nowhere to exist. You need body space behind the mag to allow the working parts to work. Basically have the Butt end where you have it in the extended position and then extend the bodywork back to meet it, next, I must presume that the Black block sticking out at the base of the sight unit was meant to be the sight... bin that, the sight should be at the top of the housing and that allows it to be mounted on a proper Isolation base to protect it from the firing action of the weapon, major problems solved. Next you need some means to adjust the sight, and cock the weapon. You can put the Windage and Elevation adjustors in a recess along the base of the scope housing (the scope would be 'floating' seperate from the housing to allow for proper adjustments and to isolate it from knocks to the housing during handling), use dails, they're the best means and have been for over 100 years. The cocking handle? Well go the FAMAS route, place it on top (under the wireframe carrying handle), the ejection port is a problem as your breech is immediately above the thumbhole behind the pistol grip, and if you have the port over the magazine it's dangerously close to the firer (especially if someone fires it from the hip) so why not have the ejection port behind the mag and ejecting downwards (you now have the body room).
The Carrying handle is too thin, it'll be uncomfortable to use for any length of time. I presume the button on the foregrip is to activate the laser dot for close range fighting (the laser dot being housed in the forward upper bodywork I presume). You have to put an end ring on those flash hiders (BTW, they are designed to hide the fash from the firer, so having it slant upwards actually helps to blind him and render the design useless - the only reason Soviet designers did it was to counter the rise of the barrel when firing on full-auto and they didn't have to worry about the firer aiming too much as a rule

), you'd be better having it end flat and place a ring on the end, loose prongs are too prone to field damage (if one bends inwrds slightly, you're in a world of pain

). Are you going to fit a bayonet lug, never underestimate the psychological boost a soldier gets from having a bayonet!. I also presume you're going with rifle grenades as there's nowhere to fit a Grenade Launcher.
ADDENDUM : The slant of the magazine is the wrong way round. You have the slant at the back as that is where all spring needs to be stronger, so is saved from maximum compression (weakens the spring) by there being a little room for expansion at the rear (helps with a smooth feed as well); also the slope of the slant isn't
that severe.
