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Hey, I got credited, Woohoo!
That was great, but it frankly didn't drag on enough to give the full interminable waiting effect. Stupid short attention span of internet users.
And yes, I did log in here two minutes before the link was posted. Bow before the useless power of inconsequential luck in situations where it doesn't matter.
That was great, but it frankly didn't drag on enough to give the full interminable waiting effect. Stupid short attention span of internet users.
And yes, I did log in here two minutes before the link was posted. Bow before the useless power of inconsequential luck in situations where it doesn't matter.
Running thoughts:
I like the zippy crawl. It's legible without outstaying its welcome.
Vader's "fuck" was great.
I'm liking the elevator scenes better than the ones in the bunker. Maybe it's the deadpan-ness.
Force Shitretention? That's a new one
The bit at the burger place reminded me of Spaceballs. Deliberate?
Overall - nice. Real nice.
I like the zippy crawl. It's legible without outstaying its welcome.
Vader's "fuck" was great.
I'm liking the elevator scenes better than the ones in the bunker. Maybe it's the deadpan-ness.
Force Shitretention? That's a new one
The bit at the burger place reminded me of Spaceballs. Deliberate?
Overall - nice. Real nice.
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Awesome, Wayne. And the elevator were some of the best, and Vader going "Fuck" was just perfect. Yes, trektards will still cling but this does put a great perspective of how stupid it is.
And omega...shut the fuck up, you useless spamming windbag.
And omega...shut the fuck up, you useless spamming windbag.
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Saying and doing are chocolate and concrete
Sometimes we can choose the path we follow. Sometimes our choices are made for us. And sometimes we have no choice at all
Saying and doing are chocolate and concrete
It was awesome. Even though I knew the punch line and set up the elevator scene made me laugh out loud. I also loved that every guy had stubble growing progressively as the days dragged on. The use of the motif "That's stupid." "Yes, it is." was great too. Without putting too fine a point on it you summed it up beautifully.
"Fuck you farm boy, let's go to the hangar." another great Vader line.
"Fuck you farm boy, let's go to the hangar." another great Vader line.
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"That's real stupid." "Yes ... yes, it is." *eye waggle*
I did think that it didn't drag on enough. Perhaps some more short, dialogue-less scenes could be inserted to give a better sense of the monotony -- e.g., "7:30 PM, EST" *Han, Leia, Chewie run down the corridor* ... "9:30 PM, EST" *Han, Leia, Chewie run down the corridor*.
I did think that it didn't drag on enough. Perhaps some more short, dialogue-less scenes could be inserted to give a better sense of the monotony -- e.g., "7:30 PM, EST" *Han, Leia, Chewie run down the corridor* ... "9:30 PM, EST" *Han, Leia, Chewie run down the corridor*.
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Very funny. Just one slight criticism, in the fighter scenes, when cutting between the two fighters, having an identical camera angle in each made it somewhat jarring. That's about it for what was there, the only other issue is I would have liked to see some of the other ideas that were suggested. I suppose that might have made it too long, of course. Very nice work.
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Fuck off. Spam testing where we're allowed to mock you. Pissy Cuntflaps.OmegaGuy wrote:But 4chan popularized itTerralthra wrote:If you're referring to "butthurt," that word's been around in slang usage for longer than 4chan's existed.OmegaGuy wrote:You ruined it by using that stupid 4chan fad word in the intro and description
Excellent work Poe.
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AWESOME!
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Luke: He probably smelled us two levels ago.
Luke: Well, it wasn't me.
Darth Vader: I assure you I'm quite incabable of *lift stops* The Emperor is expecting us.
Luke: He probably smelled us two levels ago.
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ROTFLMAO. Wonderful. Anyone going to post this at SFJ?
Just a bit disappointed that the Blazing Saddles toll booth scene wasn't included.
Just a bit disappointed that the Blazing Saddles toll booth scene wasn't included.
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"Watching Sarli argue with Vympel, Stas, Schatten and the others is as bizarre as the idea of the 40-year-old Virgin telling Hugh Hefner that Hef knows nothing about pussy, and that he is the expert."--Elfdart
"You see now you are using your thinking and that is not a good thing!" DMJay on StarTrek.com
"Watching Sarli argue with Vympel, Stas, Schatten and the others is as bizarre as the idea of the 40-year-old Virgin telling Hugh Hefner that Hef knows nothing about pussy, and that he is the expert."--Elfdart
lol. Love the fighter scenes, especially the last one. Perfect.
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But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
Surely you're aware that all 8 or them or whatever have already seen it on this thread?Darth Servo wrote:ROTFLMAO. Wonderful. Anyone going to post this at SFJ?
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