Just a few random observations regarding this novel (I guess it's inconsequential to warn about
spoilers):
* It's not steeped with the same kind of minimalism which has plagued so many EU novels. The Alliance lost 500 X-wings (and the Death Star lost fewer than a hundred of its TIE-fighters) in a futile attack on the Death Star.
* In said attack, the Death Star fires a low-powered superlaser blast which completely vaporizes the Alliance carrier, a
Lucrehulk-freighter. So much for the inability of the original Death Star's superlaser to target smaller targets...
* Although the authors quotes ANH verbatim, they seem to have ignored other relevant quotes, most notably this one:
A New Hope wrote:DODONNA: The battle station is heavily shielded [...]
On page 14, it's claimed that shielding had to be "
downgraded to a rudimentary level". It doesn't seem likely that the Alliance would have gotten incorrect information about the shielding as they had access to the complete plans.
* What about the Geonosians? If George Lucas's words are taken as gospel to the point that the name of character is changed as a result of an off hand joke, then what about the DVD commentaries (from the AOTC DVD that the Geonosians were to be the ones commissioned to build the Death Star)? Even if the EU has established a backstory about the construction of the Death Star, I found the absent Geonosians
* All in all, while the novel has some redeeming factors (the technical aspects, the largely absent minimalism and some nice passages), I did not find it quite satisfying.
EDIT: Added a missing preposition.