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The Yosemite Bear
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An Idea Need help

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Basicly a reverse version of Resident Evil, or Species

While an evil corperation weapons suppliers have a nasty industrial accident killing everyone in the plant, some experimental genetically engineered bioweapon creatures escape, and in the small town near the secret lab, a family accidentally runs over a cute as a button naked teenager while driving down the highway.

The Government types come into the town trying to figure out what when wrong and to eleminate the evil secret. Meanwhile back in town the family worries about their mysterious accident victim who has made an almost complete recovery. (Laceration's and internal injuries completly healed, bones mostly healed. You guessed it, our cute innocent female protagonist is the dangerous bioweapon.
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Post by Asdeed »

Sounds neat, what's the problem?
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Post by Stormbringer »

Frankly the idea has been done to death. Unless you have a new and interesting twist to it or exceptional writing skill, then I wouldn't bother. Don't interpert this as an attack on you. You just need to be careful to avoid turning it into a cliche.

And what exactly did you need help with?
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Post by The Yosemite Bear »

For the life of me I cant think of a title, or a name for the protagonist
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Post by Asdeed »

How bout
'A funny thing happened on the way to the genetics lab'?

yeah, that's not helping, is it :?


or how bout 'a case of murphy's law' meh, made me laugh :lol:


So I suck at title's, good luck anyway
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