my fanfic

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Unnamed as yet





The new republic cruiser Orion sword winked into the Farley sector as if by magic but as it happened there was six other ships with two star destroyers and four escort frigates the orison sword took the lead while the other ships took up escort positions above the sector capital. The bridge of the Orion sword was a mad rush and tussle as all of this was happening the captain of the ship ‘commander Ben Hamilton was relaxing in the command eat and looking out of the bride view portal. “Here we are at last the Farley sector the hotspot of the galaxy” he said in a brisk manner to his second in command alert all ships to said down he said as the other ships drew up and stopped in the same orbit as the Orion.” Sir one of the frigates is hailing us” “ok he said to his comm. Officer as the static faded away from the screen.” Sir we have just checked with port control and they say that there is an unknown alien star ship in this area of space and it has tried communication but they could not get any info on it though and it was quit small and described as a flying plate”. As the captain continued with his blathering commander Hamilton started fidgeting and falling asleep at the continuous talking.”and what of it all we are meant to do is defend the area from renegade yuuzhan vong left over from the war. Ok ill talk to the overseers for the mission whether we can do that it will be than just staying here on our own doing nothing as he said that a huge explosion rocked the gigantean ship.” what in hells fury was that the commander said. “ I think sir” said the tactics officer “that was the unknown vessel” “well hail it and try to reason with it he ordered his comm. Officer “as the other officers ordered their subordinates a round the brief flicker of light from the enemy vessel a sudden feeling came over him he stood up he shouted “all hands prepare for impact!”



Cores system two weeks later




“Have we herd from them yet” said grand admiral martin of the new republic fifth fleet to his friend and college supreme commander gale who was in charge at the moment of the N.R his ship and fleet had only just got to the Farley sector and were doing scans find the grand admirals ship and this strange unknown vessel .not yet” said the supreme comm... “It will take a few hours to make sure that the system is still in our control and see if our uninvited guest is still there if it is we will try to take it but if they think they can take on the Salamander and survive then maybe the Orisons sword is alive although that is unlikely. Because it would have made contact’ by now”. He finished this sentence with a quick nod to the aide that bought them their drinks he left.” You are pretty certain of that aren’t you its dead why is that” said Ben to his friend. “Why do I think that I think that because you put the worst captain of the fleet in charge of one of the most advanced ships in the fleet that’s got to have side effects especially in a hostile situation “ so now you know what I think”
of this situation “ he ordered another drink “well for one thing I hope your wrong about this because if you are right then we have threat bigger than the yuuzhan vong or the empire” well then we are agreed than we all hope I am wrong .

Pyre system


the yuuzhan vong world ship was in someway a master piece in its own right but when put alongside the rest of the remains of the fleet it looked like new thing that was intriguing g and ponderous this was domain lah the last remaining world ship and the last hope of the yuuzhan vong former war master tsavong lah and leader feared leader of the now defeated fleet was looking out of the living ships hull and was concentrating on the newest ship in the fleet a new assault cruiser of an new and improved design by the last master shapers that were still in service to their gods he was staring at the flashes of light that were happening around the fleet he used the blaze bugs to how him the positions of the enemy craft one of which seemed to be crashing in to a large asteroid but really was one of his frigates but the ship held its position and swallowed it up with a dovin basal and the disk shaped enemy craft disappeared in a flash. “Well well “ he said to himself the captain of that of that ship must have been an infidel to the other infidels as well most of the enemy ships had been destroyed and sacrificed but one ship kept avoiding the fleet. It was by the infidel’s tongue a sovereign class a warriors and shapers ship by yuuzhan vong standards it must be the command vessel he thought”. “All ships target that infidel vessel”



1 hour earlier on the uss macramé


on the bridge of the uss macramé the captain was enjoying relaxing on the night shift where nothing happened . Usually. He was by federation standards a new style officer who always took direct action while not thinking of the consequences this in theory could lead to a major disaster but to him this did not matter. “Sir I have something to report “ “ yes what is it he said quickly and without major concern about what the tactical officer had come to tell him “ sir I have just detected a large asteroid belt about half a click from here I think we should investigate this “ very well inform the others of this I’m sure thay will agree . “ yes sir I will tell the comm. Officer now with this he walked away out of the bridge “lay in course for the co odes just provided by Lt collie “ aye sir ten minutes till we have visual . Ten minutes came and went “aren’t we meant to have seen it by now?
Yes sir I believe so “tactical report please “ sir I have located it its to our port its seems to have changed direction its coming right at us ! “ WHAT how on earth could that have happened rock don’t have sub light drives! Sir theirs energy surge coming from one of them “ all hands prepare for combat red alert !






While the fleet gathered itself it was already the night on the planet which they had got to. mon calamari was famous for its under water cites and amazing ships and shipyards . the fleet was here for one reason and that was information from a reliable source an old source who knew where they could get something very important.
---------------- sorry abut this rather pants piece of fan fiction

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so any ideas ie: not writing anymore please sugejest some some ideas becase im stuck!

[GRAND ADMIRAL HAMILTON]

YOU HAVE REAL CONFIDENCE IN ME DONT YOU YOU WALKING BLOODY TREE!!

[Dalton]

YOU HAVE REAL CONFIDENCE IN ME DONT YOU YOU WALKING BLOODY TREE!!

What the hell?

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he is one of my former school colleges and has the iq of a nat


but please tell of my story (even if its very cr@p

[GRAND ADMIRAL HAMILTON]

Mean while on the half desimated bridge of Hamilton's ship he and his crew were trying to work out whathappend "so what your telling me is that the ship just fired the Chrono drive of it's own accord... well i find that hard to belive you bunch of imcompetent morron's"!" yelled the now outraged captain " "sir the drive is highly experimentel and ugugug..." the reasonhis engernier stoped talking was that the captain was now strangiling him with the force "god you are all dum" he sighed "tactical where the hell are we?" "well according to the navicomp we still were we were two hours ago sir" "sir" came the ensigne at communication's voice "there is a an on going hail to locate us" "well why dont we answer it? "the comm system's down" "doh".
meanwhile on the salamnder Laurence and Ben were very annoied that the Broadpark had just hailed them (to be finished at later date)

[Asdeed]

Keep writin dude, it'll be nice to read about the yuuzhan vong going against an enemy I could actually believe they can beat

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right i will continue the srory at some time soon because of scholl it will take a while




ps please ignore previous post by gah because he s very emmatesed at being dead in the first paragargh

[GRAND ADMIRAL HAMILTON]

TURN OFF YOUR CAPSLOCK KEY, YOU FUCKING MORON, AND GROW SOME COMMON SENSE. -Crayz9000

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yere right heres the next little part of my story
On the Orion Sword there were a lot of people who were wondering what to do with there free time there was a genaral assumptin that thay would be here for a few day perhaps a week but the captain was unsure at this because he knew the overseer far to well he proabaly thouht they were dead but commander hamilton was a very stupid fellow who had no sense of things going on around him . on time the rest of the fleeet arived at their destation which was by most standerds well deserted . but by most standards nothing that means nothing on a visual nothing so any thing that was not seen by the eyes of the captain was well by his opinion was ‘well it wasn’t there that was his outlook on life anything that fell in this cactogary was usally fond with the phrase “Well that’s amazing” . At this time he thought this to himself he had noyt asked the scanners for anything in this sector so he did not detact the armarda that was in a complex patten which if they were visable would have been soronding his flet which were as stupid as they were big because not one of the ships had preformed a sector scan or any thing





On the bridge of the warbird montus admril ardvon was curios at these visitors were thay were by the eyes of the romulan high consul a disaster wainting to happen
Thaety were huge and when he had first herd of them approaching it had been amazing to see them approach them in a broad formatin in to the main planetary system the main ship had caused a solar shadow and everyone had seen them coming in the had been a large media coverage so imense it was suprising they had not got a call from starflet intelligence about what the fuss is over a fleet

[GRAND ADMIRAL HAMILTON]

Meanwhile Ben and Laurence were getting seriously pissed off "waht do you mean ben's just hailed us he's dead god he annoys me" " laurence i did warn you about his resorsfulness.." "no you didnt" "didnt i well i'm telling you now"ben finished his tea and went back off the bridge
meanwhile Grand admiral hamilton was fuming on his own bridge "the two faced littel git he put me in command of this ship and fleet to humiliate me well we will see about that." one of his crew spoke up "sir how did you know all that?" "well the secret is that this ship has hidden microphones so do all the other ships so i just recalibrated the comm channel and bingo i heard there ploting." "brilliant sir!" "i know thank you""sir" piped up his sensor officer "i just did a sector scan of the area and" "well what is it?" the officer gulped "sir it's a fleet of 600 green cloaked vesels that look an a sortmunt of warbirds' sir i belive there romulan!!"
now this was bad news for ben well no it wasnt he knew they were romulan because he had secretly captured a soverign class starvessel of starfleet command now this ship had been easy enougth to captuer and imprision its crew but his crew had also hacked the ships main data base and found out the weakness and strength of every ship ever incounterd by the fedaration. And now the entire imperial fleet was sitting around doing nothing so Ben had the grate idea "i know i'll run away if they think im that imcompertant and ill leave them to rote in there own sarcastic stew" and with that the broadpark leaped into chrono and vanished

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could some one stop him from crapping up my story he is so annying well hers a small chapter witch is by most standerds bit stange



The beam struck like lightning. The ground where it had been shot at was now a doughnut shaped disc. the tribesman of the hellscream clan were not worried of this particular thing because they were used to things like this because of their dealings with the demons. But this unknown to them was no demon this shot of what they believed to be magic was really a giant plasma ball which had come from one of the many ships in orbit witch by orc standards were probably the gods but this was the just the beginning of the storm .






The command bridge of the war bird was quiet. as they sent the scout was sent to investigate the massive ships which hung in front of them. with an expecting look the admiral was amazed at the size of it the war bird fleet was the biggest they had but this’ this was ridicules this were powerful enough’ to take the empire by the neck and squeeze it to death. They had to be stopped.




Not far away from the location of where they had engaged the huge ship the uss macramé was at warp 6 on a course for sector 001. Starfleet command would not like the fact that that he had just lost an entire fleet plus’ 16 thousand crew. This was the time they had been waiting for to try out their new technology against a new enemy so powerful that even the Borg looked about as worrying as a horsefly with a mind to sting this was the day the united federation of planets would face the greatest threat to the human race .