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Alternate Galla

Post by Typhonis 1 » 2015-10-24 10:03pm

Alternate Galla

By Typhonis.

This story is written for fun, not for profit. All owners own their respective properties.


Celestia leaned in close to Twilight Sparkles ear. Just a single word. A single word to cause this whole, entire , fiasco to explode in a most wonderful manner. She was about to utter the word when she froze, and froze time as well. Time slowed to a snails crawl as she felt them. Two presences she knew very well. Knew personally well , especially since she carried one of them for eleven months. She sent a tiny pulse of power and the elder one responded. A grin split her face and she started time up again.

Once more she leaned in close to her student's stunned form. She whispered the word. "Run."

Her grin threatened to spilt her face as Twilight whistled and caught her friends attention. She watched as they tore out of the palace at a fast trot all headed for the exit. Celestia slowly trotted after them. A wide smile and her face as she sang. "Sompony's getting laid tonight.....!"

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Shining Shield tried to keep things from going to Tatarus , but his sisters abrupt escape with her friends and the disappearance of Princess Celestia made things even worse. He was ready to call in reinforcements when power erupted in the middle of the dance floor. A pillar of light exploded upwards as something appeared within it. The light vanished to show a good sized pony standing there. Dark grey fur covered the stallions body and a pair of Pegasus wings graced his sides. His cutie mark was hidden behind a pair of saddlebags and...

Shining stared at the unicorns horn gracing his head. Alicorn, dray grey fur. That could be only one pony he knew of and he saw , said pony, loosing his temper. Shining bolted forward and then was stopped when the pony bellowed out a single command. "STOP"

Everyone stopped, guests, animals, guards. They all froze an turned to look at this pony that RADIATED power. He glared around and then spoke up again."GUARDS". Shining and the others bolted forward bowing to him. He looked them over. "Summon reinforcements, corral my mother's private zoo and escort the guests out. I will find whom did this and get answers for it.....move."

The rest of the guards all bolted to carry out their orders Shining moved to join them when the grey pony spoke up. "Shining, stay. "

He looked at the other pony as he slowly took his saddle bags off, "Two weeks and mom is hot to trot. Ugh I should have visited aunt Hela but no I had to come here to visit mom instead and since Dad isn't here..."

"Right , as I said corral the guests and get them out of here. Tell the servants to hire some help and clean this place up....as for mom and dad..."

He got no further than when a cake covered pony tackled him. Said cake covered one slid to the ground and looked up at him. "Cousin Grani, thank Celestia you are here! It's terrible there was a harridan and then cake in my fur.."

Grani, son of Celestia looked at Blue Blood and dipped a hoof in the cake. He licked it off his hoof with a nod. "Hmm not bad. Blue Blood...there are worse things to try to get out of your fur. From personal experience...my own blood. That is a right witch to remove and....."

He looked over at Shining, Blue Blood having fainted outright at his feet. He spoke up in a faux innocent voice, "Was it something I said?"

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Celestia smiled as she and her student and her student's friends left the Doughnut shop. They were still talking happily when she felt it and smiled. A dark shape lurked near a lamp and she walked over towards it. Twilight and her friends watched puzzled as Celestia spoke up. "Well hello there , stud. What's a stallion like you doing in a place like this?"

The figure took a step forward and startled gasps came from several mouths. A grey horse walked forward, he was easily taller an stouter than Princess Celestia , however two things stood out about him. One he had no cutie mark and two he had eight, not four legs. He smirked wickedly at Celestia. "Waiting for a cute little thing like you."

She smirked at him and walked closer to him. "Whatever would your wife say if she heard you speak like that?" Her voice feigning innocence.

He laughed and nuzzled her, "Well since I would only say it to her...she might say lets go find someplace private to get reacquainted."

Celestia giggled and returned the nuzzle. "That I would, that I would and it's good to have you here. We are going to have to make it up to Grani though. I sorta left a mess for him to clean up. "

"Eh it'll be like training in Valahalla, a character building exercise. Besides with all of the fillies that will be tossing themselves at him? "

Celestia turned to look at the Mane six and Spike. "Girls, Spike I would like you to meet Selipnir Lokijarrson of Asgard. My husband. I will fill all of you in on it, in the morning. Now then I think my husband wants to abduct me and have his wicked way with me."

The two of them walked off. Celestia turned towards Twilight and her friends one last time." Don't wait up for me." She called out in a sing song.

Mouths slowly crawled back up from the ground as the seven of them looked at each other. Stunned looks were passed around.


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A short oneshot crossing MLP FIM is Norse Mythology.
Last edited by Typhonis 1 on 2015-10-26 12:28pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Alternate Galla

Post by Grimnosh » 2015-10-26 10:27am

Oh, THIS should be amusing.

A few typos :
She was about to utter the word when she froze, and froze time as well. Time slowed to a snails crawl as she felt them. Two presences she new very well. new should be knew
forgot the "and" in "Tell the servants to hire some help clean this place up"
"Well hello there , srud. What's a stallion like you doing in a place like this?" srud should probably be stud
"Well since I would only say it too her...she might say lets go find someplace private to get reacquainted." too should be to
"That I would, that I would and it's good to have you here. We are going to have to make it up to Grani though. I soprta left a mess for him to clean up. " soprta should be sorta
and finally "Eh it'll be like training in Valahall, a character building exercise." Valahall should be Valhalla.

As a side note, training in Valhalla not only builds character it also builds lumps. They take training seriously there.
You know, its remarkably easy to feed an undead army if all you have are just enemies....

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