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Re: C & C Suggestion Thread

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The Vortex Empire wrote:I think Noble Ire's The Rift should be in there.
I was going to say "But it's already there! That's why I didn't do it!" And then when you mentioned it I double-checked to make sure, and I just now realized that it's not complete. So now it's added to the queue.
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This one took a while, so it's probably the only one for this weekend.

UNNAMED PORNO FANFIC...FUCK YEAH!

Cleaned up...sorta, kinda, to the extent that I could technically do that, though it almost defeats the purpose...and now reposted to C & C. It's unstickied along with everything else but the original thread ishere. It's NSFW but you should know that.

And don't whine about it not being completed. It has no real plot and no ending. It can keep going or stop whenever it wants to. Reasonable enough! If there are any more updates, I'll add them.
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A recommendation I feel silly that I forgot: To Betray A Traitor

Another RotS AU where a slightly more sympathetic Dooku figures out Palpatine's plan and kick his ass before surrendering to Kenobi.
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As long as we're talking RotS AUs, I ought to throw NecronLord's Star Wars: Rise of the Machines. General Grievous becomes suspicious of Palpatine's motives and realizes that he is Darth Sidious.
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That's not complete.
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Yeah, the guy that writes that is really lazy, probably should be shot.

More coming soon, though. Thanks for the reminder.
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The Rift Parts Three, Four, and Five have been added so the complete multi-crossover epic is posted in C & C. The parts are posted separately as the previous ones are, which does lead to some ordering weirdness, but people should be able to figure it out.

EDIT: how do people feel about me going back through the cleaned stories and fixing typos and mistakes or removing little author's notes at the beginnings and ends of chapters (like things saying "I won't be writing for a few weeks because of exams/real life situation/aliens")? And what about removing those "Completed/Cleaned Fanfics" tags on the titles of the older stories?
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I'd say go for it. The old threads still exist, so you're not expunging things from existence, just tweaking things for readability in a context of a lump of text, not a meandering thread.
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Today I've added another short one: "The Decision" by Steve, another TGG fic. I apologize for not posting a new one every day, but...Children of Heaven is taking a long time to clean up, since it is very long.
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After several days of on-and-off work, I've added a cleaned up version of Bladed Crescent's Children of Heaven to C & C. Just as a note, if/when he gets it published, I'll yoink it from the forum.

Until I get permission from Murazor to repost his story, this'll be the last one I'll be reposting for a little while. I'm going to do a little cleaning of the stories already there and make a sticky or announcement post with short blurbs, since the titles often aren't all that descriptive of the stories within, but I don't want to clutter the titles.
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Added "To Betray a Traitor" by Murazor.

Also put in a sticky with a brief blurb about each story currently in C & C. Corrections and comments are welcome, as are more stories that I should add.
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Big update day.

Added Thousand Shinji by Academia Nut, the prequel to The Open Door.

Also, a big thank you to Ace Pace for the new and improved formatting on the story listing sticky.
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BoH2: The Chronicle of the Citadel by Lonestar

A sequel to The Battle of the Hymn by Knife.
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That's not actually done, but you could bug Lonestar into finally writing the last chapter or two so I could repost it. :wink:

Anyway, nothing big to update. I'll be going through all the stories and doing a little cleaning, and authors, if there are any typos or other things you want fixed, PM me and I'll get on it.
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Having been denied my D & D today, I got bored and reposted the prologue and part 1 of the TGG Federation Civil War: "The Sundered Dream" and "The Devil to Pay" by Steve. And did some little things that probably aren't noticeable at all.
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Yay for Amy!

....and no, I haven't started doing more on "Hold at All Costs", don't ask. :P
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Added three more TGG fics: "The Burning of Kass Zaris", "One Small Step for Man..." and "The Last Woman Standing."
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As per author request, I have pulled "Children of Heaven" from C & C.
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I have added Stas Bush's "Don't wake me while I'm quiet."

Also, I've been working on a big something, hoping to get it done by Christmas. Probably not very hard to guess, but I'm bad at keeping secrets.
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Merry fucking late Christmas, everyone. After way, way too damn much work, I have completed my slight cleanup of Hull no. 721. More like touching up slightly, hopefully making it a bit more readable. I apologize if it still has a hint of ketchup but I think I scraped off most of it (if you really want to know what that means, you can PM me.)

Eleventh Century Remnant, I hate you for several weeks.
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Wait, you made it readable? I :luv: you forever and ever, MB. I had to give up reading it because A) my monitor was dieing, and B) it was a wall of text in parts.

No offence, ECR, it's a great story and everything, just... bleeding eyes, y'know?
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Aww, thanks man.

Anyway, a couple recent updates: Among the Naked Stars and The Land of the Falling Wall, both by Imperial Overlord. The latter comes with experimental Chapter-O-Vision...the name is also pending me actually thinking of something that doesn't suck.

And anybody mind me also turning this into a story commentary thread, since there aren't too many suggestions going? I can lock it and start a new whenever it gets too long and unwieldy.
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Re: C & C Suggestion AND COMMENTARY Thread

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Since nobody said anything, I'm opening it up to commentary and comments about the stories. Want to ask questions about De Imperatoribus Galacticis? Make some comments about Armageddon without spamming up the current thread? Go for it. If it gets ridiculous I might stop this experiment but we'll see what happens first.

Also, chapterization is now in progress.
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apologze, I hadn't realized that the other thread was offlimits. I'll do better in the future in being more thorough in what to post to which thread.
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