Ok, so I've been working on this story for a while now. It's based on the mobile MMO Star Legends, and due to the rather thin story and worldbuilding involved in that game, I've had to create a lot of it one my own. This is the first fanfic I've written, and so I'm less than certain that I've done any of said story/worldbuilding elements well. Any feedback or comments would be appreciated.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8450111/1/ ... Chronicles
I haven't seen anything saying that just posting a link rather than the raw text is an issue, but if it isn't I'd be happy to repost the whole thing here.
Star Legends: Vanguard
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