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Re: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)

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~’/|\’~


26th September, 2091


She stood on a tarmac road. She could feel the material, heated in the height of summer, suck slightly at her shoes, whenever she stopped, and so kept on moving. She had to keep on moving.

It was hot. Sweltering. She couldn’t understand why anyone would want to be outside here.

And yet she was surrounded by dark-robed figures, veiled and masked, a legion trudging on foot as one vast, collective organism. They were giants as to her, figures that towered above her. One was holding her hand, clutching it tight, and, she realised, half-leading, half-pulling her along with the crowd.

Was passieren?” she asked, confused. She didn’t know, and it was confusing her. No. That wasn’t quite true. She knew, but she’d forgotten. She couldn’t remember. She couldn’t even remember remembering. But she could remember remembering that she remembered, and that was enough to tell her that something terrible was happening.

The looming figure above her stopped, and glanced down, a hint of green light visible under the hood, casting the dark material in a viridian light, before it looked away, and continued pulling her away.

There was a grittiness in the air. She could feel it, horribly dry, horribly itchy, sucking at her skin like some swarm of infernal insects. Moving her fingers of her free hand as she was pulled along, her palm felt like sandpaper.

There were guardians by the side of the road; tall, taller even than the giants in the crowd, and far more bulky, bearing their weapons in grey hands. She began to count the glimpse of their helmets she could see over the top of the masked and robed throng, eins, zwei, drei... If any of the crowd tried to leave the road, they would push them back onto the path. If any stumbled and tripped in the march along this baking road, pairs of the guardians would step onto the road ... vier, fünf... and take the fallen. She didn’t know where they were taking them, and any questions she asked of the robed figure with her at most gained her a stare, and the same hint of green light from under the deep hood, before the march continued.

... sechs, sieben, acht, neun...

She couldn’t stop the march. It was going to happen, one way or another. All she could do was try to stay upright, and stay with the giant who clutched her hand.

Another fall. ... zehn, elf... Another one taken.

In the distance, far behind her, something began to scream, ancient, horrid, and yet horrifically young; a mechanical rise and fall which rose until her teeth vibrated, the sensation dropping just as the sound did until she could feel it in her gut. She wanted to turn to see what it was, but she now knew that she had been told not to look back. She couldn’t look back. She would be in a Lot of trouble if she did, she thought with a sudden giggle.

The crowd, the pilgrimage, only picked up its pace.

...zwölf, dreizehn, vierzehn, fünfzehn...

And that was when it happened. The first sign was the sudden white light which lit the giants from behind, and cast deep, dark, hungry shadows on the road in front of them. There was a sudden wash of heat, extreme even in the already baking temperatures of the height of summer, and she screamed in terror and pain, as did the robed and masked giants that surrounded her. And then came the noise, a terrible booming thunder to go with the flash of sun-lightning.

She looked back.

The pillars of light erupted from the great city, devouring its pyramids and consuming those pilgrims which had not gotten far enough away. The wrath of the heavens came for all alike.

Screaming in pain, clutching the rods of agony into her skull which she had once called eyes, she fell to the ground.

And strong hands closed around her feet and her arms, and carried her off.

...sechzehn, siebzehn...

Asuka Langley Soryu awoke, streaming with sweat. The acrid scent of terror filled the room, the hint of red light from the nightlight plugged in at the end of the room enough to cast the place in striations of crimson and black, but not enough to banish the shadows which lurked at the edge of vision, even to her eyes.

Arching her back, sticking her chest into the air (and suddenly feeling a hint of welcome cool, for the covers had evidently slid off in the night), she took a deep, shuddering breath, and let it out slowly. The gauze bandages, sealed over the sympathetic burns from the missile, were a patch of warmth, tight against her inflamed skin. Slowly, slowly, her spine lowered itself back into the hollow in the mattress, and she scrambled for the light at her bedside table.

In the soft glow, Asuka stared up at the ceiling. Then, with an effort, she swung her legs out of bed, to sit upright. No longer lit in red, it had the identical feel of so many military-type accommodations. Identical feel, and identical structure; this was a standard room design. In a sense, although she had only been here for a week, for the training at 2501 which had turned into... into what had happened today. No, what had happened yesterday, now, she realised, glancing over at the clock. She shook her head, an exhausted gesture of annoyance at how distracted she was feeling. Yes, despite the fact that she had only been here for a week, the ceiling was so utterly familiar that even the smallest quirks of design were known.

Clumsily, with stiff-feeling fingers, the girl peeled off her soaked top, the slight chill of the night air against her wet flesh a reassuring feel. Taking the drier front, Asuka dried herself off against it, further. She might as well feel more comfortable, as the top was already ruined for sleeping in, at least this night. Scrunching the sodden garment into a ball, she hurled it into the laundry basket, bouncing it in off the wall.

If one were to look at the contents of the plastic basket, one might see identical garments forming geographic strata of disturbed nights.

Asuka shivered slightly, and crossed her arms in front of her, before uncrossing them again. Why did she care about that? Either Kaji was home, and he might get a look at her wonderful body, or he wasn’t, and she didn’t need to care. Either way, there was nothing to be ashamed of. In fact, yes, after all, Nazzadi culture, insofar as one could refer to one culture, rather than a vast and complex noosphere of experimental memeplexes, didn’t have a nudity taboo, and if he did get a look at her, she could just say that she was emulating the cultural practices of Homo sapiens nazzadi.

It would probably be more convincing if she didn’t smell of hot and dampness and fear. And, always, underneath everything, the scent of LCL. It never came out, not really. Not when it was being swallowed and taken in through the lung walls and through the tear ducts and through anything exposed. There was a reason the plug suits were sealed at the neck, after all. It just diffused into the body, and stayed there. The injections and the scrubbers and the medichines and the UV-washes and the denaturing agents and the... and the everything did their best.

Their best wasn’t good enough. She could always, always smell it in her sweat. Just a hint, normally, but in these terror-filled nighttimes, it was notable to people who didn’t spend time around it, a recognisable tang of metal and blood and something to the air. Bed coverings didn’t last long with her.

She licked her forearm.

God, she could even taste it.

Sagging forwards onto her lap, Asuka stared down at the green carpet. She just wanted to sleep. It was true that she only needed about five or so hours, and could cope on less; a gift of what her grandmother had had done to her mother. It still wore her down, to live like this. Physiologically, she would be able to operate fine. Psychologically, the reddish-blond girl always wanted more sleep. That had to wait, though, as she’d feel even worse in the morning if she didn’t shower before putting on a fresh top.

But before that, there was the necessity to write down what she could remember of the dream. Her psychologist insisted on it; a problem made worse by the fact that all the dream suppressants they had tested on her interfered with the synchronisation process. Or, in one case, caused a violent allergic reaction, which had almost put her in a coma.

Which made them not an option.

Clumsily, she reached for the PCPU on her bedside table, without looking, gaze still locked on her pale feet and the green carpet which they rested on. By touch, she turned it on, and only then did she drop it between her feet, as she composed her thoughts, trying to ensure that she could record everything.


~’/|\’~


“Ryoji?”

Two naked bodies, entwined together.

“Hmm?”

“You’re good at this.”

“Hmm.” His tone was rather self-satisfied.

“Just one thing.”

“Hrhmm?”

“Shave, man!” Oxanna propped herself up on her elbows, mussed blond hair hanging loose around her face. “For... mmmrph... for fuck’s sake, shave! Stubble is not good.”


~’/|\’~


In the cold, harsh white light of the bathroom, Asuka stared at her reflection. Few would have recognised the Second Child, the confident, assertive, almost-arrogant prodigy, with her face grey with fatigue, hair soaked in sweat.

The faint scent of LCL was making her slightly hungry.

There was a hiss of water, as she turned on the tap, grabbing a pink mug from beside the basin. She filled the cup, and took a gulp, before spewing it all out, and unleashing a blister of profanity. The water went into the sink, and the tap was switched to “Cold”, before the process was repeated.

“Who the hell leaves the tap on ‘Hot’, anyway?” Asuka angrily muttered to herself. It was a brief outburst which would have been far more recognisable as the face she wore to the outside world to an outside observer, before the cold brightness of the light and the dull grey of her exhaustion snuffed it out.

The gush of water was a momentary distraction. The splash of the cold, as the jet hit the plane surface against her skin was a sudden chill quite unlike that of sweat, and Asuka flinched away, hairs already standing on end. She didn’t really have to clean herself down now, did she? She could just sleep like that, just sleep, and do it in the morning. There wouldn’t be anything wrong with that, would there?

Yes. There would be. She forced her cupped palms into the water, and splashed it over her face, massaging the water in. And then, because it really was cold, she turned around and grabbed the nice dark red dressing gown, a birthday present from Uncle Cal a few years ago, and wrapped herself in the fluffy warmth. It was only as she turned back to the mirror that she sighed. This was going to have to go in the wash, for sure. She liked this dressing gown, and didn’t want to see it ruined. And a replacement just wouldn’t be the same, for all that it would have the same structure.

Automatically, unthinkingly, she cleaned her hands, carefully scrubbing at them with soap and the nail brush. Then, with slow deliberateness, she looked down at her hands. Fine, delicate fingers, the nails cut short and, on the left hand, a little bit bitten. Asuka reminded herself that she’d have to go get some new ones, soon. Long nails were completely impractical for a plug suit, and tended just to get broken (sometimes messily) if they got too long, but it was nice sometimes, just for an afternoon, before her next synch test, to get to show them off. Before she had to trim them down, the synthetic keratin discarded, to be recycled. Just like everything else in her life.

With equal slowness, she raised her right index finger, and jabbed herself in the eyeball. She did not even blink.

The smooth, inorganic hardness of an Eye met her questing finger. As always. Just as every time she did it.

Good.

They might be able to make them look real, but they weren’t real to the touch. The surface was hard, solid, quite unlike the squishiness of the jelly-filled eyeball she had been born with. The retina was engineered for efficiency and effectiveness, quite unlike the haphazard ministrations of Darwin. They gave above and beyond peak-human clarity of vision, quite apart from the other tweaks incorporated from nature, from Nazzadi, avian and mantis-shrimp alike.

She had had them for so long, since just before her ninth birthday, periodic upgrades necessary to adjust for her growth. And that made them her eyes. Not the ones she had been born with. Her Eyes. Not anyone else’s.

She ran her finger under the eyelid, around the point where the Eye fused with her rebuilt skull. The eye socket was a weakness, an entry point, and, in more technical matters, they needed somewhere to anchor the heavily rebuilt, only partially organic sensory organ. Asuka could feel the difference between pseudo-flesh and flesh, feel the transition from conventional bone to the vat-grown variant that edged the Eye. Removing her finger, she cleaned it off, under the running water.

Yes. A shower. Good. No, Kaji might be asleep. I don’t want to wake him. If he’s here.

I could always go check...


Slowly, carefully, she placed one naked foot after another, making her way without sight (not that the low light levels were a problem for her) through the familiar corridors of the standardised housing. The carpeting under her feet was warm, even if it was a little hard, and perhaps wearing thin in places from the roughness. She placed one hand on his door, to push it open.

Asuka then paused, and tweaked her dressing gown, such that an almost indecent amount of cleavage was showing.

Through the open door, she could see that the bed was untouched, the neat sheets obviously unslept in. Again.

If she cried as she showered, alone in this empty house, then it was lost in the torrent of warm water.


~’/|\’~



As it turned out, Lance Corpral Xuan Do was actually going to be getting a medal. In fact, she was going to be getting more than one. There would be the standard White Laurel of Bravery, because she had managed to acquire a broken ankle in the fight, as well as the fact that her neck was in a cast. But she was also going to be getting the Kanala Seal, for “Valorous Deeds While Unequipped For Combat.”

The morning light, streaming in through the east-facing windows of the surface hospital, was warm; they’d moved her far enough back that there wouldn’t be any of the emfog clouds, legacies of previous battles, to cast the world into silver-lit greyness. The sight from the window was less pleasing. The Blank, the Infiltrator that she’d killed, had not been working alone. And they had succeeded in their missions, at least partially. They’d managed a lot more than putting her in here, and killing all those people in the anteroom. The wreckage of Hangars 013 and 014 were visible, the fires extinguished, but the wreckage clear to see. The bugs had managed to compromise a repair technician, she’d heard, and the damage that had caused was evident. Only one wall of Hangar 013 was still standing; the rest was just rubble, while Hangar 014 was riddled with worm-like holes around which the building had run like wax. The recovery vehicles, hauling away damaged mecha and tanks, were still trying to extract as many assets as they could, in case the Migou attacked again.

Still, it could have been worse for the NEG. If they’d managed to get access to large amounts of explosives...

Cutlery clinked, as Xuan hungrily devoured the nutrient broth that was her breakfast. Her left hand was lay beside her, bandaged and in a cast; she had managed to fracture two fingers, as well as break her ankle, and it was numb through the targeted painkillers. At least she hadn’t broken anything in her right hand, as well. She’d have been useless if both hands were incapacitated like this.

Finishing up her bowl, she stared up at the ceiling, and told the LAI monitoring her that she’d finished. It took only a short while for a nurse to show up, to collect the waste.

He was kind of cute, too. Nicely built, square-jawed, very green eyes...

“How are you feelingly, Lance Corporal?” he asked her, as he picked up the tray, and added the pile on his trolley. He glanced sideways at the machine. “You seem to be doing well.”

Xuan shrugged. “I’ve had worse.” A smile crept onto her lips. “I’ve had worse in training, actually.”

The young man winced. “Really?” he asked.

She nodded. “Yep. Fell off a wall, managed to break my leg.” The woman paused. “You can check my record. I always throw everything I can into doing things. It’s something you should always do, live for the moment. Don’t you agree?”

Inwardly, Xuan groaned. That had been a really, really bad pseudo-pass at him. God, the painkillers must be affecting her more than she thought they were. With luck, he wouldn’t have...

The man raised one eyebrow at the remark. “I’m sorry, Lance Corporal, I do have a boyfriend.”

Damn. He noticed. And is in a relationship. And prefers men. Why me? She managed to stifle the outwards manifestation of her annoyance, though, and smiled weakly. “I had to try.”

The man shrugged. “Well, I think I’ll interpret it as a compliment. But... hang on a moment,” he said, raising one finger to an ear, his left Eye lighting up to show that it was actively intercepting his vision. “Yes?” He paused. “Yes, sir. I’m actually there at the moment... yes.” Another pause, longer. “Really? Understood, I’ll inform her.”

Xuan made a curious noise.

“Um... well, I don’t know exactly how to put this, Corporal Do, but...” the man paused. “Wait a moment, that’s a lie. I do know how to put this. You’ll be getting a visit from Marshal Hassan in a few minutes.”

Xuan turned chalk white. “R-r-really? M-m-marshal Hassan, while I’m still in hosp...” She paused, and shook her head. “I didn’t expect that,” she said, forcing a smile onto her face.

The nurse smiled. “Well, he’s visiting the victims of last night’s attack on the base, and, well,” the corners of his eyes crinkled up, “well, you did manage to kill the one Blank which made a break into the base, rather than military assets. I heard they think may have been part of an assassination thing... you know, going for commanders, before it got caught in the lockdown. Of course he was going to want to meet with you,” the man said with increasing enthusiasm. “You’re a hero.”

“Oh... yes. That makes sense,” Xuan said, slowly. “Just bad luck me and all those people happened to be in the same section as it.”

The green-eyed man nodded, more seriously, the smile gone. “Yes. Indigo Blanks are very hard to detect, and... well, you did what you had to do,” he said, seriously.

Xuan nodded. “What I had to,” she said slowly. “I just wish I could have got it before it killed all those people.”

A stomp of heavy boots, and the slow, crushing steps of Centurion powered armours in the high and wide corridor spoke of the arrival of the senior officer. Taking up position by the door and by the window, the grey-armoured figures were alert, scanning the exits and windows. Compared to all this elaborate security, the Marshal himself was just another man; shaven-headed, with aristocratic, even pharaonic features and high cheekbones. His dark eyes matched his neat uniform.

“Room is secure, sir,” reported a mechanical voice through the speakers of the armour. “We’ve got all exits covered, and windows were already set to opaque.”

“Thank you, Sergeant,” said Marshal Hassan, with a nod of his head. He took several steps into the room, coming to a stop at the end of Xuan’s bed. “Lance Corporal,” he said, his accent, from his childhood in the slums of old Cairo before the First Arcanotech War, still prominent, “congratulations.”

“Th-thank you, sir,” Xuan said, stuttering.

The shaven-headed man looked down at the injured woman. A small, slightly superior smile crept onto his lips. “Really, Corporal Do, you can relax a little. I don’t expect you to stand at attention. That would be a little hard in your current condition, for one.”

Xuan’s laughter was nervous, and overloud. She winced. “Sorry, sir,” she said, her face pale. “It’s just... well, I didn’t expect to get a chance to meet someone like you... um... to have you visiting my hospital bed... um, okay, now I’m babbling.”

The smile was somewhat paternalistic. “Actually, Corporal, I’ve had a look at your file.” He pulled up a chair, and sat down, by the side of her bed, on her left. “Well... what to say? You managed to survive the loss of the rest of your squad, held out against both Migou and Loyalist forces while keeping hidden enough that they didn’t find you, and managed to provide vital observational data. That alone would be impressive. Then, before you’d even cleared checks, you managed to take down, while unarmoured, a Heavy Combat Infantrywoman who’d been Blanked, by... well, by beating her to death with a rifle butt.”

Xuan blushed. Put like that, it did sound rather ridiculous, almost contrived. A look of embarrassment on her face, she massaged her right Eye with her palm. “I was just doing my job, sir,” she said. Then, with one precise, quick motion, she punched Marshal Hassan in the unarmoured thigh.

The man barely had time to look shocked, before the nerve agent in his bloodstream hit his brain. It was quick. The tiny carbon-fibre syringes, which had been hidden in her standard-issue light underskin bioweave, couldn’t carry much, nor could much be hidden without the NEG finding it, but the rigid hair-like fibres now sticking out of her knuckles still had enough to kill one man in less than ten seconds.

“Just doing my job,” Xuan Do said.


~’/|\’~


“Movement!” The tone was alert, concerned. “Camera 12, north. Looks like... yes, it’s a Dragonfly.”

There was a slight shudder among the troops. The Dragonfly classes may have different from example to example, but they were always shockingly fast fliers, with superlative stealth systems. The ideal scouts, in fact.

“Do!” the leader of Charlie Fireteam, the other half of her squad, ordered over the radio, “get those AA-Hornets set up!”

“Alpha-one’s operational,” she replied, checking the status on her casecreen, “and alpha-two is being loaded right now.” She paused. “We’ve got four Spada up, too.”

“Good. Make sure you tag’em into the Foxtrot-Oscar network when you’re done. Over and out.”

That was when the booming announcement resounded, the echoes shaking dust from the walls

“Surrender,” it said, calm and impassive, eminently reasonable. “We offer you a chance to surrender. Just surrender, and accept our entirely reasonable demands. There are much worse things out there than us, and we shall protect you from them. That is what we have done for billions of your years, and that is what we shall continue to do. Be not afraid.”

Sanginoji progogandi,” muttered Rereny, next to her, in her irritation applying the grammatical rules of Nazzadi to an English word.

Xuan paused. Yes, that was it. She had her provisional instructions.

Eliminate all witnesses if possible, then prepare for additional instructions.

“Baguna, Nahuel, you’re on overwatch. Maintain radio silence until you have positive contact,” she ordered. “Rereny, you’re with me. Cover me while I check the feed.” The rest of her squad moved to obey.

Pulling out her casescreen, already connected up to her AICS, she opened up the control window, with codes that she shouldn’t have known, and turned back on the full-integration networking. Which absolutely, completely, utterly should not have been active when facing the Migou, and their superlative grasp of technology.

A coordinate was quickly put into an insecure datafeed, and then, before the artillery strike had even hit Charlie Fireteam, summoned in precisely on the cache they were preparing, she was up.

“Behind you!” she gasped at Rereny, her own rifle already raising, and as the woman turned, she shot her in the back of the head, a cluster of three bullets at point blank range. Settling back down, rifle aimed at the door, she took a deep breath, and controlled her voice.

“Baguna, Nahuel, get here,” she ordered, the measured tone of a NCO deliberately underlain with a hint of hysteria. “Rereny is down, needs medical assistance!”

The cautious movement through the ruins, to get to her position, was designed to make them harder targets for any snipers. All it did was meant that they were moving slower, and thus they were easier targets. The seeker took Nahuel in the chest, the explosive charge smearing him over the walls. Baguna was knocked out by the blast, bleeding from multiple puncture wounds in his SP-armour. Another cluster of bullets to the head finished him off.

Yes. Good. It was now clear.

“Operative in place,” she said, rattling off her identification code into the unsecured link. “Security is maintained. Requesting briefing.”

The voice was sibilant, thin, whispering.

Good it said. We now have access to your Armour Internal Command System. Necessary data alteration has been performed. Stand by for instructions.


~’/|\’~


“How... how, I would like to ask you, did a fucking Blank manage to get past all those scans to be able to get far enough in to be able to take out a fucking Marshal!” Colonel Oxanna swore, pacing up and down in the observation chamber. “I am going to be bringing in so many fucking internal investigators that people won’t be able to take a step without getting probed!”

Agent Kaji, in his role as the local representative of the Global Intelligence Agency looked up from his PCPU, face grim. “Because I’m beginning to suspect that she wasn’t a Blank. Even before we get back the results from the trawl. Just a common , garden-variety traitor. Mind changed through persuasion... not even trauma, that leaves characteristic mental patterns which a trawl, or if she were ever pulled in for a deep scan, might get.” He shook his head. “So much harder to catch, and...”

“... and we have a tendency to neglect that possibility, because of how we know Blanking works,” continued a female GIA agent with coffee-coloured skin, somewhat more neatly dressed than her co-worker. “That is to say, how we know that it works; Blanks can’t be turned or compromised or feel regrets... unless it serves their objectives, of course... unlike someone who just chose to work for the Migou. So we’re more scared of it. But these damn Migou operatives, they’re trained not to think about what they’re doing. Even a surface sweep from a trawl, or a parapsychic mind-reader won’t catch them.”

“Three-hundred-and-seventeen LITAAI subroutines were dedicated to an analysis of her background, as directed,” reported COEUS, its ARvatar suddenly appearing, and making several people in the room jump. “Attempting to correlate relationships, to build up who subject’s cell is. The report is now complete.”

“Thank you, COEUS,” Colonel Oxanna said, her tone clipped. “Forwards the results to the GIA, EuroHighCom, C2, and to Vice Marshal Slavik.”

“Understood, Colonel.” The virtual ‘presence’ of the TITAN departed.

“You really think we’ll get back anything meaningful?” a man in a white coat asked, one eyebrow raised. “You know how the bugs like their operational security.”

Kaji winced. “It could have been worse. Could have been another Anchorage incident.”

Most of the room shuddered at that. It had been much, much earlier in the war, and the NEG correspondingly less aware of what the Migou could do. As it turned out, what they could do was conceal a tiny amount of antimatter, approximately two milligrams, in a tiny, sorcerously reinforced arcanomagnetic containment field, planted in an adjunct to a senior member of the North American Command. It would not work now; the magnetic field and the sorcery were blatant if you were aware of what you were looking for. But back then, they had not known. The resultant blast had decapitated the Regional command structure, and in the chaos, a massive Migou attack had hit. And Alaska had fallen.

As a result, the people in this room, in the here and now, were more than a little concerned about what might be coming next.

“Do we have a secure link to Vice Marshal Slavik yet, COEUS?” Colonel Oxanna asked.

“Yes. Quantum link prepared. Please report to Communications Room 03, Colonel.”

She glanced around the room, over through the one way glass, to where the traitor was being... well, it had started as a vivisection, but after the tiny charge the bugs had evidently built into the back of her Eyes to detonate at a full level mental trawl had gone off, it had turned into a dissection. It had been just enough to release one of their tailored chemicals which caused rapid neural degradation, making her brain useless for the extraction of data. She shared a glance with Ryoji... no, Agent Kaji, in these circumstances. There was almost certainly a Migou-cult operating here. Except that wasn’t quite the right word. They weren’t cultists, in the same sense that the Dagonites, or other ENE-worshipping fools were. They were more akin to trained cells, of people who actually believed that submission to the Migou was the best thing that humanity could do to ensure its own survival. They were dangerous, because they were comparatively sane. They didn’t sacrifice people to dark entities, or set up child molestation rings, or smuggle captives off to the Dagonite camps. They just stayed in position, the rare few communications following ingenious paths to get to them. Just stayed there, living normal lives, watching, waiting.

Until they did something like this.

As she strode down the corridor, and was subjected to the necessary security checks, Colonel Oxanna Kristos really wished that they didn’t do things like this. Adjusting her beret, she entered the communications room. Only one other person was there, his image displayed in her Eyes, with the possible addition of COEUS, a nebulous blue presence, depending on how one classified the TITAN.

“Sir,” she said, saluting her direct superior. Although she was only a Colonel, an O-6, and he was a Vice Marshal, an O-9, she was nevertheless his direct subordinate, attached directly to his command. She served as his liaison, and as a field command officer; a specialist in psychological warfare and the strategic use of terror best deployed to where she was needed, rather than holding a permanent command.

More unofficially, she was his left hand, his sinister hand, for experimental projects, black operations, and things that the Army as a whole wanted kept at a step away from High Command. Things like the Army Special Weapons Division and the Evangelion Group, in fact.

Slavik paused, his image clear enough that even the beads of sweat on his forehead were visible. “COEUS,” he told the TITAN, “return the optimal strategy, assuming the Migou do attack with a Level 4 attack force.”

“Level 4?” Oxanna echoed, the data in her Eyes bringing her up to date.

“Yes.” The man’s face was grim. “That’s assuming they use all the potential assets. They’ve been planning this, Colonel. The TITANs have noted a slight shift in troop rotations over the last two months; just slightly more coming in than being cycled out, but no increase in frontline troops. And, of course, the establishment of one of their forwards repair bases for capital ships.”

The blond shook her head. That was not good.

“Computation complete,” COEUS reported. “Assuming a typical Level 4 force, there is an approximately 70% chance that they will break through at Nova Kakhovka. Forces stationed there are insufficient. If all available military forces are scrambled, the probability is reduced to approximately 55%. Casualties will be severe even in the case of success.”

Colonel Kristos leaned forwards. “And if field-capable prototypes are deployed as well?” she asked, supported by her superior’s nod.

“Unknown. There is a lack of data.”

“Extrapolate from file EVA_02_25092091, then!”

A pause. “Breakthrough probability is reduced to approximately 45%. Error bars are plus or minus 10%.”

The two humans shared a glance over the link. “Not good enough,” Slavik said.

“By pulling the majority of the forces at Nova Kakhovka back to Position Alpha-Indigo-Xray-Xray One-Zero-Zero-Six, the line can be restablished,” COEUS added. “Moreover, Nova Kakhovka will be an inviting location for their own fortifications. By pre-emptively use of strategic-yield weaponry while they set up, a favourable outcome, within the limits of this scenario, can be achieved.”

Slavik paused, leaning his head on one hand. “Define ‘favourable outcome’, COEUS,” he ordered.

“They all die,” stated the TITAN, impassively.

“That’ll do,” said the Vice Marshal. “Colonel, obtain the data from COEUS. Tell Brigadier Anama to base his plans on its scenarios.” He paused. “And there’s one more thing. About Evangelion Unit 02...”


~’/|\’~


To a human, it would have been night-dark inside the hold. To a baseline-Nazzadi, it would have been dimly lit.

But to the Loyalists, both conventional and Elite, it might as well have been midday, for all the difference it made to their implants.

Rack upon rack upon rack of main battle mecha were stacked there, ready in position for a combat drop from the inside of the Drone Ship. The faint blue lights marking the path up to their cockpits were, in fact, the main source of illumination in this cavernous space. Back in the First War, they would have been all colours; relying on a lack of cohesiveness and distinction to force the foe into suboptimal firing choice. And, more subtly, the Migou had not wished for the Nazzadi to win to easily. It had been part of their plan for both sides to be heavily mauled, such that the Nazzadi would not think of expansion into the outer system. That had been stripped from them by the grim necessities of the Second Arcanotech War, though; the same greys and greens and blues that the New Earth Government used were now also present on the Nazzadi mecha.

And then there were the mecha of the Elite. The lesser Nazzadi used units which were still built with human-level technology. They were cheap, expendable, and could be repaired by the Loyalists. The Elite did not; their machines were sleek, almost techno-organic, but approaching the line from the other side. They were not flesh merged with machine; they were machine so advanced that it had almost become flesh. In some of the more specialised ones, the pilots were fused with the machine, little more than another processing centre for the Migou-designed machinery. For the others, the cockpit was more akin to an iron maiden, an-inwards facing coffin of fine nails designed to make the flesh and the machine twinned in unity.

Red eyes. Glinting red eyes, everywhere, reflecting the hints of light like a cat’s eye.

A signal was sent around, instructions to the computational equipment in the cerebrums of every member of Homo sapiens nazzadi present, alerting them that it was time. In neat, organised ranks, they filed, climbing the ladders to their assigned craft. Slowly, the light levels in the craft increased, bringing it up to the daylight outside, to give them a chance to adjust. There was camaraderie, and bickering going on from the more normal Nazzadi, dialogue and attitudes that would have been scarily familiar to anyone from the New Earth Government.

There was none from the Elite. They knew what they had been instructed to do, and they were ready. There was nothing else that needed to be said. They would survive, or they would not; either way, they would complete their missions.

And if they did not survive, well, their knowledge would live on, ready to go into the melange which new Nazzadi, grown in the facilities in the Asteroid Belt, would be decanted with. It was immortality, of a sort; all that was worthy, useful of you would live on in others.

The hatches were sealed. The motion felt, as the Drone ship folded back up, the armoured landing area folding back as a ribcage would into its hull.

A faint buzzing. A thin whisper. The noises of one of their masters, emulating human speech through the motions of their wings.

the sensory data is such that it has been determined that the forces of the New Earth Government are retreating it whispered, in the Nazzadi language. this was expected and desired; there will be no changes to the plan. The buzzing shifted, the tone sounding almost satisfied. your duty is to strike and harass their fleeing forces, while your kin hold the new conquests until the capital defences are set up; that is all that matters.

A cheer rose through the hollow space; a jeer of victory foretold.

There was a second message for the Elite, uploaded straight to their cerebral cortices. They did not hear it; they merely remembered hearing it.

they will be targeted, it told them. they are a diversion. The facility identified as ‘Testing Facility 2501’ must be destroyed, for it cannot be captured, and cannot be permitted to exist in hostile hands. Let nothing escape.

There was no cheer from them. Only silent acknowledgement.


~’/|\’~


Asuka Langley Soryu donned her plug suit with all the solemnity of a medieval knight preparing for battle. And for much of the same reasons. The black undersuit; soft and padded, came first, covered in interface ports and conduction mechanisms. A press of the button at the neck, and the suit suddenly contracted, the memomaterials hugging up to her like a second skin. Next came the outer layer, the crimson carapace obvious to the rest of the world. “02” was emblazoned just above her breastbone; she had got permission to put the white hand and triangle of the Soli Vodi Dexti on her right shoulder. Thicker, clumsier, it was nevertheless there for a very good reason, as an impact and acceleration suit, as well as functioning as full ANaMiNBC protection should she find herself out of her Evangelion. That was vital. Berlin-2 wouldn’t be permitted to happen again. Last came the cowl, the plated material folding out from a collar on the outer skin, to cover the A10 superconducting QUI Devices. A hiss, and it sealed itself. Her face was a thin mask of pale flesh, a heart-shape rimmed by her brow line and her jaw.

All she had to do input a few commands, and the plug suit attached itself to the A10s, and to the ports for her Eyes, just under both earlobes, and she was ready. Eyes reflexively flicking back and forwards, she read the feed from the local fork of Gehirn, Unit 02’s Ouranos LITAN, and nodded once, in satisfaction. Another perfect plug-suit set up. Naturally.

“COEUS, I am ready,” she informed the TITAN, as she stretched, the bulk weighing her down. It seemed sometimes like the plug suit was accumulating mass as she got older; years ago, it has just been the undersuit, but they kept on refining the technology.

“Good,” was the LAI network’s response. It paused. “Colonel Kristos is coming to see you for a tactical briefing,” it added.

The girl tilted her head slightly. “Hmm. We will be retreating,” she said, with narrowed eyes. “I don’t like it, but it’s the only sensible thing.”

The bluish-light of the ARvatar of the TITAN pulsed in her Eyes. “Why do you believe that?” it said, in the same neutral tone.

“Two reasons, COEUS,” she said, the smirk not quite overcoming the frown of annoyance. “Firstly, after the loss of one capital grade defence, Nova Kharakhov will be very hard to hold. You’ll have been unable to properly decide what I could do in the defence due to lack of data, and the fact that my AT-Field ruins your statistical databases. And the stupidity of the Army means that they won’t be willing to risk it, even though I know that I can pull it off.”

The TITAN was silent.

“You will’ve come to that line of logic,” Asuka said, leaning forwards, blue Eyes shining. “You’re conservative, COEUS. Just something to do with how your LAI programmes interact... your personality, if I were to anthromorphise you. Like RHEA, and not like CRIUS. Uncle Cal always says that it’s funny how your emergent ‘personalities’ are different.”

“What is the second reason?” it asked, its voice even a hint more mechanical than usual.

Asuka shrugged. “‘Cause if we were going into action now, she’d have been briefing me in the entry plug, not externally,” she said with a smirk.

“Then why would I insist that you wear your plug suit?” came a voice from behind her.

“Because you’re afraid that the Migou will be targeting Facility 2501 and want to have me ready to pilot in case they break through before they can get 02 into the transports.” Asuka rolled her eyes as she turned. “It’s not exactly hard to work out. The entire fact that they’re hitting Nova Kharakhov, rather than Gladiator or Sentinel,” two of the purpose-build military facilities along the line, “suggests that they’re after something.” The girl frowned. “And the way that they got Marshal Hassan suggests they have enough infiltrators in place to know about it.”

“Continue that line of logic, then, Asuka,” said Oxanna, tilting her head slightly.

The girl smiled. “Which means that the retreat is just an opportunity for the counterattack,” she said, confidently. “You’re going to let them have 2501; why does it matter, when you’ve got rid of everything important from it, especially me and Unit 02. And considering our position... you’re going to hit them, because they’ll have to overextend to hit 2501. Which means that I’ll be spearheading the counterattack, because that’s exactly what I’ve trained to do. A Evangelion doesn’t take and hold ground; it smashes weak spots and flanks, eliminating specific targets. It’s a lance, perfect for a counterattack backed up by naval support.”

“No.” The words were flat, measured. “That is incorrect.”

“B-b-but,” Asuka stammered, “that’s the optimal use of an Evangelion, tactically and strategically! It’s what I’ve trained for! I can do it!”

The blond woman stared at the girl, dressed up in the thick, almost slightly insectoid, from the smooth lines and the bumps on the head which marked the place of the A10 clips, without overt emotions. “You are being moved back to Ostberlin-2. You are not a front-line soldier, not yet, and so it is not appropriate to use you in that fashion. You are still a Test Pilot.”

“I-I-I...” The girl was almost incoherent, before her shoulders slumped. “I understand,” she said, eyes closed and downcast. “Can’t I even...”

“No. Unit 02 is being attached to a Phoenix for transport. You will be riding in-plug, back to Ostberlin.” Colonel Kristos’ face softened. “If what I’ve heard is true,” she said, reaching out to lift Asuka’s chin, “it’s probably going to be moved over to Chicago-2, for final field tests. You’ll be able to...”

One black-gauntleted hand, the thinner material around the hands a different colour, batted the hand away. “Don’t patronise me; I said I understand,” the girl hissed, turning on her heel, and stalking off. “I’ll be getting this... this toy checked over by professionals,” she said, jabbing herself in the chest, “since obviously the Second Child can’t be trusted that her plug suit is operational on her own.”

The blond gritted her teeth, eyes narrowed, but said nothing, and let Asuka go.


~’/|\’~


Through the line of defence, the oncoming Migou forces swept; like the onrushing tide they washed away the bastions of defence, weakened by the withdrawal. The skies were filled with the booms of their hypersonic craft tearing through the air, as, below the contrails of warped air, the vast, heavy shapes of Migou craft moved their own stationary capital grade defences forwards, deploying the new additions on site. The lines had move forwards, and Containment was proceeding on the third planet in a horribly contaminated system.

This was the Aeon War.


~’/|\’~
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I suppose the only question is in the upcoming military action, who the universe has it out for more: the humans or the Migou? And considering that the Migou are EarthScorpion's woobies...
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Academia Nut wrote:I suppose the only question is in the upcoming military action, who the universe has it out for more: the humans or the Migou? And considering that the Migou are EarthScorpion's woobies...
Just to answer that question for you, implicitly...


Chapter 8

Rei 01 / As if just there, though an immortal, she felt cruel pain.

EVANGELION



~’/|\’~


Every Angel is terror. And yet,
ah, knowing you, I invoke you, almost deadly
birds of the soul. Where are the days of Tobias,
when one of the most radiant of you stood at the simple threshold,
disguised somewhat for the journey and already no longer awesome
(Like a youth, to the youth looking out curiously).
Let the Archangel now, the dangerous one, from behind the stars,
take a single step down and toward us: our own heart,
beating on high would beat us down. What are you?


The Second Duino Elegy
Rainer Maria Rilke


~’/|\’~


A Day That Has Past
A Time Which Is Now



Representative Gendo Ikari stared at the projected screen. He adjusted his glasses, pushing them back up onto the bridge of his nose.

"Activate."

“What’s the first thing you remember?”

The buzz of the Technical Centre started up again. Status updates came from all the technicians, staring down at the white-painted behemoth that stood, restrained to the wall, before them.

“Connect internal power supply to all circuits,” ordered Dr Akagi. “Initialise connection of exterior power in T-minus twenty seconds.”

Feeling rather useless, Major Misato Katsuragi, Director of Operations for Project Evangelion, and the woman who would be responsible for tactical command of this Unit if this test succeeded, did the best thing she could, and crossed her fingers. One hand unconsciously crept to the bulge under her uniform, where her cross-shaped necklace hung .

“What is the first thing you remember?”

“Main power system connected,” reported Lieutenant Ibuki, heading up the team of nine Operators running in full immersion mode, down in the Magi tanks. “Activation system online. We are ready to begin adjustment of attunement pattern at your signal, doctor.”

“Who are you?

Dr Ritsuko Akagi looked around the observation chamber. The Representative stood closest to the diamond viewing plates, Deputy Representative Fuyutsuki taking up his customary position just behind the younger man. In a very real sense, despite the fact that she was the Director of Science for Project Evangelion, and the Director of the Evangelion Group (as was customary for the eponymous Project of a Group), the Evangelions were not hers. Both men, the former a prodigy sorcerer who had climbed the ranks of the Foundation with almost indecent speed, the latter a legend in the field of arcanobiology, as the man who had done the first systematic study on the variant hominids known as ‘ghouls’, were much more tied to it than she was, had been involved in it longer than she had. It was theirs.

The woman ran her tongue over her lips, and swallowed, watching the digits count down in her harcontacts, time-as-volts ticking down until the critical activation voltage was hit.

This Test Pilot Candidate shouldn’t fail. Not like almost all the other ones before her.

“Who are you?

“It’s reached,” announced Lieutenant Aoba, the man leaning forwards towards his screen, his long hair tyed back, for once, in a ponytail. “Attunement is in process. Synchronisation is non-zero... 0.04... 0.13... rising.”

“We’re getting some fluctuations here,” Maya’s voice, coming in over the speakers in the room, said. “She’s... no... we’re stabilising. Subject is forming an EFCS Type-1 Attunement. Synchronisation is... clarifying second order harmonics... third order... yes, we have a stable animaneural wavefunction.”

“Who are you?”

“Start Phase III,” ordered Dr Akagi.

“Who am I?

“Plug is level 2. Beginning test sequence.”

“LITAN feed is clear... reports from in-Unit correlate with external feeds.”

“Feeding external power to non-vital systems. Right arm... left arm... all limbs are powered.”

“Releasing limited motor controls. D-Brakes are operating at full capacity.”

Slowly, ponderously, like the upswing of some vast pendulum, Unit 00 raised its head, to stare directly at the onlookers. It was just an illusion, though; it couldn’t actually see them. Not through the reflective surface. Could it?

Was it really just staring at its own reflection?

“Absolute borderline in... 0.5...”

“Who are you?”

“... 0.4...”

“Who are you?”

“...0.3...”

“Who are you?”

“...0.2...”

“Get away from her!”

“...0.1...”

“...”

“I know who you are.”

“The pulses are flowing back! Chaotic breakdown in AN-waveform!”

“EFCS-2! Mode has flipped to EFCS-2! No... back to EFCS-1!”

“Synchronisation is constant!”

“What?” Dr Akagi spun, to stare at the unfortunate civilian technician. “That doesn’t even make sense! Abort! Break the connection!”

Straining, the white giant fought against its bonds, the dimensional technology that wrapped over its hull trying to keep it in place. It was fighting a losing battle. A deep-bass roar, that shook the gut and the walls alike, emanated from the beast as it fought its bonds. Its one red eye swept from side to side, with jerking, wrenching motions. The deep crackle of breaking ceramics accompanied each jerk of its head.

“D-Brakes are failing! We have an AT-Field! Systematic breakdown of r-state differenatiation!”

“Abort!” barked Dr Akagi. “Operators, break all connections, raise plug to level 0.”

A cacophony of screams buzzed through the speakers, made mechanical by the limits of the technology. In Ritsuko’s harcontacts, the icons for four of the operators went yellow; two more were a fatal red.

“My...m-my DMIN is stable,” blurted out Maya, the pain evident in her voice, “b-b-but the Unit just attacked the retrieval process. My... my... that wasn’t the LITAN... only just enough time to cut before it broke thr...”

“Mute the Magi link,” ordered Gendo Ikari, coldly, the LAIs complying with his orders and silencing the Operators. “Cut external power, blow the D-Engines.”

The shutdown of the external power was immediately effective. Together, the legs and the arms slumped loose, swinging back down to slam into the wall, tearing chunks out of it as they impacted again and again. The head still wrenched, that same bass roar filling the air, but then the charges placed on the D-Engines mounted in the torso blew, shattering the power sources safely. The design for such tests was quite clear; it should always be possible to cut all power. All that the Evangelion, when set up like this, had access to at this moment were the life-support batteries, and they were on a completely different power circuit to the armour systems.

There was a communal sigh of relief from the observation room, now that the Evangelion was now back under control, and a set of blessings for the people who had been careful to ensure that the Unit failed-to-safe.

An almost animalistic cry of rage and terror and pain, made worse by the fact that the voice that cried out was unmistakably human.

“No!” A shrieked exclamation.

White fog; surrounding, enveloping, obfuscating everything.

“What are you doing with her?”


“You will be a god among men.”

Evidently, someone had forgotten to inform Unit 00 of this.

In a single, terrible motion, it tore itself loose of the wall, the barrage of broken connections and constraints impacting like an artillery bombardment against the other side. Fighting the inertia-thieves of the D-Brakes, the vast body slammed itself back into the wall, crushing the sophisticated technology with sheer bulk. The shift in its inertial mass only aided it, as it pushed off from the wall and crushed its front in the same manner.

In terror, the onlookers stared, and the one vast eye of the Unit stared back.

“Initialise TCP-7!” ordered Representative Ikari, the red eye reflected in his own orange glasses.

Softness, gentleness, calm. All was fogged light, but it did not matter, for two vast hands held her, and rocked her from side to side.

A children’s rhyme, fumbled by someone who only half-remembers the words.


“You will show men that they do not need gods.”

And then she was plunged into warmth and darkness.

Roaring, screaming, Unit 00 began to scrabble at its own back with fingers locked into claws. With another impact which shook the room, it pushed backwards into the other wall, and that was enough, for the superstructure snapped of this armoured shell, designed to take a point-blank nuclear blast. It had been ravaged impossibly by the impact with a cleanness which brute force should not have achieved. The containment protocols that Gendo Ikari had ordered were already kicking in, as jets of hard-setting plastic began to coat the white a dull brown, but it seemed unlikely that they would be enough.

[WARNING! AT-FIELD DETECTED!] reported a dumb LAI, audible even over the tumultuous chaos of the titan’s violence.

Yet it seemed that escape was not the beast’s goal, even as the bass took on a strange, shrill whistling.

Black and white blur to make grey, a finger retracts.

The damage done to its own back was enough to get a finger under the armour plating that protected the plug.

The look of horror on the bearded man was indescribable. “Rei! No!” he yelled, face as pale as death.

“I see you.”

With both hands, the titan tore at its own back, reaching up and around with inhuman flexibility. With both hands, it flensed the white plating, and tore at its own implants. With both hands, the flagellant sought its own plug. Gory ichor, dark and septic, ran down, to swirl and mix with the constraining fluid, but the beast did not care, and indeed the shrill noise began to ululate, in a cacophony that sounded all too much like celebration.

“My baby...”

One vast finger crushed the exposed end of the entry plug.

And the beast went limp. Legs now sealed in hard-setting plastic (though the onlookers now doubted how effective it would really be), it fell backwards, pivoting at the knees, to slam into the floor with one last terminal impact. Wounded, self-maimed, the fallen titan lay upon its back, dark seas of ichor and tainted plastics pooling around it like some perverse cloak around its white hide.

“Rei!” roared Gendo, in a cry of horror, as he sprinted out of the control room, his glasses falling from his face to land with a snap on the ground. Ritsuko watched him go, and glanced down at the fallen Evangelion, before screwing her eyes shut. She did not see, minutes later, Gendo rush across the floor of the test chamber, only wearing a protective suit because the medical team behind him had forced him to put one on as they waited for the airlock to cycle.

No, she knew how badly she had failed.

Standing behind the behemoth, the man could see the damage in a much more personal way. He was already knee deep in the dark blood of the Evangelion, and was having to wade against the slowly decreasing flow. The transparent faceplate of the suit was blacked out in wide areas, the autocensors doing their best. With a few words, he overrode them, to turn down the filter level. The LAI’s protests were ignored; he needed to see what he was doing. Hooking his fingers into the fibrous musculature and broken armour of the Evangelion, he began to climb, up to the partially protruding plug.

The end of the metallic cylinder was a mess, crumpled and crushed by the two impacts. By his estimation, a third one would have wrecked it completely. The second might have been enough, he thought, with a sinking heart, but those thoughts were discarded as he clambered along the plug, a crumpled metal ladder barely enough of a foothold for feet slick with ichor. The damage made it easier to balance on top of the cylinder, but he was still perilously close to slipping as he made his way down it.

With his suited hands, Gendo grabbed the twisted metal around the largest tear in the outer shell of the tube, and pulled. The metal was sharp, and the gloves of the containment suit, although insulated, were not enough. Screaming into the helmet as blood seeped from his palms, he levered open the shattered plug, and clambered inside, screaming again as the edges tore at his back.

The remnants of the LCL that pooled in the nooks and crannies were much redder than normal.

Rei was on her back, still in the pilot’s seat, almost inverted from the angle at which the Eva lay. This was not by choice; the control yokes were crushing her midsection, the structure of the plug warped and bent such that they were rammed into her abdomen. It was, in fact, probably the only reason she had not been thrown free by the impact with the ground. Her plug suit, just the undersuit for the test, was lacerated all over; red blood welling up white fabric and white skin. Her breaths were laboured, wet-sounding; she had evidently managed to hack up enough LCL to have marginally functional lungs, but the red drool which stained her lips pink told Gendo just at sight that her lungs had been severely damaged by the effort. It was a marvel that they hadn’t collapsed.

And then there was her face. Almost unconsciously, he had been skipping over her face, which lay limp against the headrest. Because one eye, her left one, was a ruined mess, perforated by shrapnel, the ruined eye spilling forth from the socket. The other eye was closed.

Gendo Ikari had seen worse. But he had not seen much worse for someone who survived, and not in a long time.

“Rei,” he gasped, through the pain in his hands and his back. “Rei? Are you alive?”

Slowly, wonderfully, the intact eye crept open, a dilated pupil nevertheless focussing on him. She gurgled something through ruined, fluid-filled lungs.

The man smiled, even as the rescue team climbed in behind him, having coated the edges with plastic to make them safer, and widened the hole. “Good,” he said, before turning his attention to the others. “Get her to an LCL tank,” he ordered. “Keep her alive.” And with that said, he collapsed, as the pain overcame him.

The first medical team called for a second one.


~’/|\’~


24th September, 2091

“Well, I’m rather surprised,” Ritsuko said, running down the details in the file on the desk in front of her. “I will, of course, defer to your expertise in your field, Dr Tam, but...” she left the statement hanging.

“No, no,” the younger man said. “I’m really rather surprised, too. I did not expect this at all. But,” he shifted in his seat, in front of Ritsuko’s desk, “well, he’s mostly bored. Well, and a little irritable from the sympathetic burns, but that’s natural.” He snorted. “Most people tend to be.”

“I see,” the blond said, running her eyes over the file. “Well, we’d always suspected that the EFCS-1 would provide better anti-AWS shielding than the Type-2,” she said, almost to herself, “but this... well, we’d need a bigger sample pool before we could say so.”

“I believe the relative lack of trauma... um, especially the psyche-corpus animaneural synthesis issues that arose due to the sudden and traumatic loss of the eye, this time, was also a contributing factor. From conversations with him, he was much better able to come to terms with the fact that he has mild sympathetic burns which match with the injuries, than experiencing the muted pain of the loss of an eye, without actually doing so.”

Ritsuko looked up at him, gazing at the younger man with blue-encircled eyes. All of those were reasonable suggestions; the man had been a prodigy of a medical doctor, before transitioning to psychology after a nasty family-related incident, after all. That was why he had been assigned to Project Evangelion. “Maybe,” she said out loud. She wasn’t willing to commit to anything. “But, you believe that he can be released from observation?”

“Well,” the man licked his lips, “erm, it would be more accurate to say that observation can be reduced to the standard day-to-day level...” he glanced at his superior, “oh, you meant that? Then, yes, he can be released from the Observation bay.”

“Good.” Ritsuko signed the document, and handed it over. “Well, I’m sure Misato will be pleased,” she said.

“And you aren’t?” The tone was questioning.

Ritsuko rolled her eyes. “Please. This isn’t the time for that. But I wouldn’t call myself pleased, no. Satisfied, yes. It’s important to remain detached when considering these things.” She held the gaze of the brown-haired man. “We all know the issues with getting too involved in matters which are important, don’t we, doctor?”

The man took the signed document, gathering it to him, to hold, almost as a protective barrier. “Yes,” he muttered, before blinking. “Thank you, Dr Akagi, for your time,” he said, more formally. “I’ll be off then.”

“Yes,” Ritsuko said, her head already lowered to the progress report for Unit 00.


~’/|\’~


Potenejactakrona what!” the little black-skinned, red eyed girl screamed at him, remarkably active for someone only just out of intensive care, before continuing to babble at him in an incoherent pidgin of Nazzadi and English. Her friends, clustered around the bed recoiled from the invective. A nurse rushed over at the outburst, obviously worried that she was going into convulsions or that some other medical emergency was occurring. “No, I’m fine,” Kany told the orderly, panting, teeth locked together. “But my brother is an idiot!”

The man stared at the boy through narrowed, suspicious eyes. “She’s still on the mend,” he told him, in a somewhat patronising tone of voice. “Do not agitate her, or I’ll have to ask you to leave.”

Toja winced. How, exactly, had his sister’s friends managed to talk him into coming with them, to explain everything? How was it that he had been persuaded by a bunch of nine-year olds?

“I am fine, by the way,” said the dark-haired one, Imi, the girl who had been the reason for him running out.

“And what did you think you were doing, huh?” continued Kany, turning her head to stare at her friend. “Why’d you run out! You know we’re not meant to!”

“I did not run out...” The little girl blinked under the glare from the red eyes. “Oh. Because I needed my injectors, and they don’t keep spares down in the bunkers, only under the desk. It was necessary.” She seemed almost pleading. “You know I need them. Otherwise I get very ill.”

The little nazzady relented a little. “Well... maybe. But,” she yawned, “but it was silly of both of you. Well, it was silly of you, Imi, and stupid of you, bro.”

There was an awkward pause. It wasn’t helped in Toja’s books by how much Kany managed to sound like their mother had. The voice was younger, higher, but the intonations were near identical.

Toja raised his hand slowly. “Um... can I have back my manuprokedi? Since you’re out of the tube...”

She shook her head.

“Awwww, come on. Why can’t I?”

“Punishment! For making me worry like this when I’m sick and all that.”

“I am sorry,” he said, the guilt hitting him again, dropping his head.

“You should be!” Kany drew a breath, and seemed to calm down a bit. “Now, come on... not my stupid brother... but what have I missed?”

A boy grinned. “There hasn’t been any school at all,” he said, “‘cause the school building got damaged and stuff... I can see it from the observation place, and there’s a big tent thing whole area, and silvery dust everywhere. And really cooooool machines sucking it up. So we get to just do stuff.”

Kany pouted. “Bleargh. I’m still in this bed, haven’t relearned to walk yet, and I’m not even missing school.”

A little girl, her hair platinum blond, poked him in the side, while the conversation continued. “Well, I think it was pretty cool,” she whispered to him, gazing up at the tall boy with eyes that he suddenly realised were adoring. “And tonnes of us agree. You’re totally like some kind of fairytale prince, coming back with...” she giggled, “Princess Imi and stuff. Of course, Imi isn’t a very good princess. She played the witch in the school play,” she informed him, with all apparent seriousness.

“Ah,” was all that Toja could manage.

“So... you know, if you’re looking for a princess...” The ten-year old, her t-shirt covered in childish entopics, smiled shyly at him, then headed over to the rest of the group.

This was... awkward. Of all the consequences of leaving the bunker, he had never expected his little sister’s friends getting a crush on him to be one of them. A talk with the FSB over the breach of Bunker Security, yes, an immediately scheduled meeting with a counsellor from the Health Service to look for any instability induced by the exposure to the being (fortunately fairly small, and Toja could live with bad dreams), yes, immediate scans, for the second time that day, for any contamination, yes.

At least one nine-or-ten-year old getting a crush on him, no. And there was another thing that he’d have to do, too, because of what had happened on that Wednesday.

He was going to have to handle them both like a man would handle them.

For this problem, Toja ran away.


~’/|\’~


25th September, 2091

Of all the unfair things in Shinji Ikari’s life, the fact that the Academy has classes on Saturday morning had to be pretty low down the priority list, all things considered. It wasn’t as if he wasn’t used to it, after all; the Academy back in Toyko-3 had been the same. But this morning, of all mornings, he really didn’t enjoy the sight of children who went to other schools who were getting to hang around in normal clothing, not the high-collared black overcoat of the Academy, and make remarks at him and the other students on the maglev.

I mean, it’s not like they even need to be up this early, he thought to himself. For me to see them on the way to school, they’d have had to get up that early, and not chosen to lie in at the weekend. Are they doing it just to rub it in our faces?

And talking of rubbing in faces, Shinji had been somewhat surprised when the boy who had punched him in the face, and that one with glasses who had been hanging around with the rather attractive Nazzadi girl, came up to him, with a special request. In fact;

“Actually, why are you here?” Shinji asked the human boy, Kensuke. “I mean, you didn’t hit me...”

The brown-haired boy blushed slightly, and glanced sideways at Toja. “He said he’d hit me if I didn’t come to apologise too,” he explained. “It’s... it’s sort of my fault that he found out, because Taly and me were the ones who sort of worked out a link.”

“So why isn’t she here?”

Toja gritted his teeth. “I couldn’t really threaten her in the same way as Ken, here.”

Shinji raised his eyebrows. “Chivalry?”

Kensuke shook his head, with a hint of a grin creeping onto his face. “Nope. She’d kick him in the balls again. She’s... she’s kinda heavily into her martial arts. ‘Specially hun zuti.”

“We’re getting off topic,” Toja said somewhat hastily, with what Shinji suspected was a hint of remembered pain creeping into his expression. The boy straightened up again. “Mr Ikari,” he said, in a formal manner, “I want you to punch me. So that we’ll be even.”

“In that case, shouldn’t I punch you twi... no, I’m not going to get started on that.” Shinji blinked. “Why? I mean, I know why I want to punch you, but why do you want me to want to punch you?”

“See! You want to, so just do it!” The boy’s jaw was stiff, his eyes closed.

“But...” Shinji drew back his fist, but paused, wavering. “I... it... it’s not the same,” he said out loud, trying to work through the mess of feelings and emotions. “I mean, it was sort of my fault.”

“Rubbish!” Toja snapped. “It’s all my fault. I’m a hot-headed idiot who never thinks about anything. You need to do it, I want you to do it, and it’s kinda the only way to be fair!”

The Japanese boy’s hand wobbled, moving back and forth. On (and with) one hand, he actually did want to punch this guy. But... this would be in cold blood. It was completely different to snap, and try to attack someone which angry, to just going and punching someone.

“Do it! As hard as you can! Don’t hold back!”

He... he actually wants to be hurt? Why? That doesn’t make sense. And... and how dare he force me into this kind of situation! This is just a normal school day, and I’m being forced to think about whether it’s okay to hurt someone when they tell you do. Why does this happen to me!

The blow, as it happened, went low, into the taller boy’s stomach, who doubled over with a meaty-sounding oooof. Hands on thighs, the other boy began to wheeze, falling to his knees.

“You’ve got a nasty streak,” Kensuke said, shock creeping into his voice. “Right in the gut? Not cool.” He paused. “Not cool at all.”

Shinji, meanwhile, was staring down at the boy before him, guilt and just a smidgeon of self-satisfaction blended together. The very presence of the self-satisfaction, however, was causing it to get diluted. Because, in the boy’s self-image, he wasn’t the sort of person who’d do that. And yet he just had.

“Why...the...gut...” croaked out Toja. “Meant... to be face.”

“You didn’t say that!” protested Shinji.

“I...” he started coughing, “I... thought... obvious.”

“Not to me!” Shinji said, wincing. He paused for a moment, before adding, “And... um, well, I didn’t want to hurt my hand!”

Toja continued to cough.

“Skulls are hard,” Shinji continued, realising how pathetic he sounded.

The Nazzadi boy began to emit a burbling noise. It took a few seconds, before Shinji could work out that it was, in fact, laughter, which grew stronger as Toja pulled himself upright, face still taut with discomfort.

“Nice one,” the boy croaked. “Teach me to tell someone to do it as hard as they can, and not hold back.”

Kensuke smirked. “That’s what she said,” he said, almost automatically.

“Shut up, Kensuke.”

Shinji stared at the pair. “You’re mad,” he said, slowly. “You’re... you’re mad. Utterly, utterly mad.”

Toja was still clutching his stomach. “Yeah,” he said, looking up, “but at least we’re now even.” There was something in his eyes that Shinji couldn’t recognise. “Listen,” he said, “I... um... I got stuck outside... on Wednesday. Not outside outside. But in a surface building. A school.”

Shinji felt his stomach boil with sudden terror. “... I,” he blinked. “What... happened?” he said softly.

There was a sudden expression of shock on Toja’s face. “Oh, no,” he said hastily. “No one got hurt. But... um, I saw it.”

Shinji relaxed, a sudden rush of adrenaline making him shake. “Don’t say things like that,” he said. “I don’t want to think that I’ve hurt people.”

“No... no, what I mean to say is, right, I saw how that thing you’re in is like.

The brown-haired boy grinned, weakly. “Thank you,” he said, relief in his voice. He paused. “Uh... why were you stuck outside,” he asked, gingerly. “Was it just an evacuation thing, or...”

Toja blushed, a slight darkening of his face. “Um... no,” he admitted. “I ran out to look for someone in the class who’d gone missing.”

Shinji felt his eyebrows raise without prompting. “That’s pretty brave,” he ventured. “I mean, I probably wouldn’t have the guts to do it.”

“No, it was just stupid. It may have looked brave... I just wasn’t thinking.” The Nazzadi boy blinked. “Can we just put everything behind us?” he asked.

Unnoticed, unobserved, a white-haired girl watched the scene through dead grey eyes, no expression on her frozen face.


~’/|\’~


“Rei Ayanami.” The muse’s voice was calm, emotionless; disturbingly similar to the subject of discussion, thought Misato with a shudder.

Ritsuko caught the brief twitch of emotion, and nodded, sympathetically. “Pause briefing,” she instructed the system. “I know, yes?” she said. “Spend time around her, and you start hearing her voice everywhere,” the scientist said, a hint of dark humour in her voice.

“I was trying to make a point, Rits,” the Director of Operations said. “Resume briefing... pause briefing.” She glared at the blond. “And don’t pause my muse without my permission,” she added. “Resume briefing.”

“The subject is sixteen years old; date of birth: 5th of November, 2074. Subspecies: Homo sapiens sidoci. Genetic parents: classified. Subject was recovered in raid on cult organisation aged 4, and, after evaluation, was placed in state custody pending further investigation. Subject was inducted into newly formed Test Pilot programme as the First Child immediately upon programme formation in 2083, following discovery by Project Marduk that she possessed the appropriate characteristic factors. She is the exclusive and designated pilot of Evangelion Unit 00, the Prototype Model. Her current legal guardian is Representative for Europe, Gendo Ikari. The rest of her personal history is classified. Her psychological profiles are classified; a redacted file may be viewed separately. The subject possesses intuitive extranormal waveform manipulation capabilities, as is universal among her subspecies. These capabilities are classified; a redacted file may be viewed separately, and they have all been classified as non-dangerous and non-invasive.”

“I think that’s enough,” said the Major, her tone controlled. “Now, Director of Science, why don’t you explain why your Director of Operations has almost no knowledge of one of the assets she has to command?”

Ritsuko sighed. “Misato...”

“Don’t ‘Misato’ me. You’ve dodged this point before. I saw what happened at the last Unit 00 activation test, and things destabilised in a way that they never have even looked like they might for Shinji or Asuka. The next activation test is scheduled for next Wednesday, and I might be kinda worried that it might happen again.”

“You presume I have any more knowledge about her,” the scientist retorted.

“... well, yes. The Project Marduk is part of the Evangelion Group. That means they report to you.”

Ritsuko gritted her teeth. Misato could have both a rather perceptive mind and a highly functional memory when she put her brain to it. “And certain details are sealed even beyond what I can view. Yes, I do know more about her, but those are technical issues. I mean, I could ask for permission to release the details on... on the details of how her medichines react with her immune system, say, but I’m not exactly sure how useful it will be for you, so...”

The black-haired woman ran her hand through her hair. “Sorry, Rits,” she apologised. “I’m just a little... worried.”

She received a sympathetic nod in return. “I understand. But... please, don’t take it out on me. We don’t think it should happen again; the issue last time... well, we’re not sure what caused it, but we suspect it may have been mental instability in the pilot.”

“Mental instability?” echoed Misato. “In Rei?”

“Yes.”

“But,” the dark-haired woman searched for the right words to use, “from what little I’ve... that I know of her, she’s seemed fairly stable. Not necessarily at the same point of balance as anyone else, of course, but...”

“No. She’s... she’s disturbed at a deeper level; more that you’d think. And she’s sensitive to extranormal phenomena. She might have been affected by the... hah, by the harbingers of Harbinger-3. That kind of thing is not what you want when you’re trying to attune to a highly sophisticated ACXB organism.”

The New Earth Government Army officer shot a glance at her friend. “You do know that there are already suspicions that the failed activation test was what caused Asherah to show up, yes?” she said bluntly.

“That’s ridiculous,” Dr Akagi replied, with the same lack of prevarication. “We have had failed activation tests for all the completed Evangelions. And Harbinger-level threats failed to show up each time. You’re just displaying classic observer bi...” she was interrupted by the muse, and a simultaneous vibration of something in Misato’s pockets.

“Major Katsuragi to Communications Room 13. Major Katsuragi to Communications Room 13. This is a High Urgency call; ID number 05-02-65-32-98. Major Katsuragi to report immediately to Communications Room 13.”

“Oh-five, oh-two, sixty-five, thirty-two...” muttered Misato to herself, as she straightened up. “That’s the Unit 02 code. And 13 is one of the q-lines.” She blinked. “I’m off; this is important. That’s directly from,” she pulled the PCPU out of her pocket, “yes, I thought so. That’s Captain Martello’s code, and it’s got... it’s got an override-seal from Vice Marshall Slavik himself.” Almost reflexively, she tucked her hair back behind her ears, and adjusted her collar slightly. “I’ll see what it is.”

“I hope it’s nothing important,” Ritsuko said. Both women could hear the doubt in her voice.


~’/|\’~


The remains of Harbinger-4, Eshmun, were pooled in two separate vile, incoherent messes at the bottoms of Containment Chambers 09 and 10, in the Vault. It had been blown in half by that first ambush, after all, so they had been recovered separately. The fact that the whole creature would have been too large to fit in either of the chambers was only an added bonus, and had led to several new planned engineering projects which would be large enough. And ‘pooled’ was the operative word; with the death of the creature, it had lost cohesiveness at a dramatic rate, the beast decaying and rotting, as its structure disintegrated. Perhaps worse, its elevated r-state was decaying back down to a 1-state, throwing out high-energy variant r-state particles, in a parallel to more conventional radiation.

There were no people down in the Vault, working on the studies. It just wasn’t safe, even in full ANaMiNBC gear and added sorcerous warding. They were getting through teleoperated drones at a prodigious rate as the circuitry and hulls gave way under the bombardment.

Of course, Dr Akagi wasn’t too unhappy about this. A little bit annoyed at the fact that she wasn’t getting to carry out a proper dissection, but she could live without exposure to high-energy high r-state radiation. And because she had not been so exposed, she would continue to do so. “We’re discovering all new things about high variant r-state physics,” she ‘explained’ to Shinji and Misato, standing by the vast autocensored screen that was giving a sight into the progress in the vacuum-filled rooms. “The CCs are all set up as high end particle detectors for exactly this reason. I mean, the MAGI say they’ve seen a 512-state proton for the first time ever, and its behaviour means that we’ve just shown Imonike was right all along, and Juarez was wrong.”

“But what have you found out about the Harbinger?” Misato asked, hands in pockets. Once again, she was in a more formal version of her normal uniform, because the NEG had other, more senior officers on-site, and she was not enjoying it. She would really rather be dressed normally... well, actually, she’d rather be back in her pilot’s suit which were really comfortable, but that wasn’t an option anymore, and she wasn’t on the frontlines.

Ritsuko smoothed down her lab coat, a garment which, given what they were dealing with, would only really protect her from a coffee-based accident, and glanced over at the screen. “Not as much as we might have liked,” she admitted. “From what we can tell, from the state the remains are in, there was internal differentiation of layers, but only one thing which approximates an organ, as we would know it. Of course, that matches up with the feed from Unit 01, doesn’t it, Shinji?”

The boy, who had been drifting along in the mists of confusion, trying to understand and doing poorly at that goal, blinked, and refocused his attention away from the almost-hypnotic sludge which both parts had degraded into. “Um... excuse me?” he asked.

“There weren’t any internal organs in Harbinger-4, were there? Apart from the core-equivalent?” the scientist asked rhetorically.

“Not that I can remember,” the boy said, slowly. “But... well, I wasn’t thinking that clearly.”

“Yes... well, that is somewhat understandable.” Ritsuko shrugged. “Anyway, the current hypothesis is that the Harbinger we see is akin to a puppet vessel for a greater being which exists in greater-than-three spatial dimensions. Hence, it really doesn’t need anything beyond a core-equivalent, in the same way that your little finger doesn’t need lungs or a heart or... or anything apart from the connective tissue and blood vessels and the like, which in this analogy is the core-equivalent.”

Shinji stared down at the screen. A spider-like robot, all its many limbs dedicated manipulators, slowly descended from the ceiling, trailing its thread of power-cable behind it. Anchoring itself onto the outer carapace, it began to cut at the material. Despite the degradation, it really wasn’t getting anywhere. “I can’t believe I killed that thing,” the boy said to himself. “Is that what we really have to fight. Well,” he paused, “I say ‘we’, but... never mind. Why didn’t the outer shell-thing fall apart in the same way?” he asked, louder.

“That’s a good question, Shinji,” Ritsuko replied. “We’re... not sure. It might be that it’s only decaying due to r-state relaxation, compared to the rest, which is liquefying. We’ve actually got what might be structures in the outer carapace, which... well, it would suggest a biology completely unlike anything we’re familiar with.”

“No, really?” muttered Misato, who was ignored.

“We’re just having problems taking samples,” Ritsuko admitted. “Even when we do manage to extract specimens, the effects of removing them from the still-altered r-state of the region around the body, down to a 1-state environment, just massively speeds up the decay.” She paused. “They might be designed... well, I say ‘designed’, but that doesn’t mean intent... they might be there to enhance AT-Field generation. The properties of the regions that we suspect there might be structures... well, I don’t even know where to begin.”

“Oh,” Misato said, a sudden glimmer of understanding in her eyes, “this is the kind of matter is sort of like a wave and sort of like a particle, right?”

Dr Akagi fixed the other woman with a long hard stare. “Yes, Misato. It does, in fact, display properties exhibited by both classical particles and waves, at least at the quantum level. In fact, we have a super-special name for that very special kind of matter. It’s called... matter.”

“Oh.”

“I mean, that isn’t even arcane physics. It’s just quantum physics. That’s barely a step above classical mechanics.”

“Mbneah.” Misato flapped a hand at the scientist. “There’s no need to be condensing.”

“You mean ‘condescending’,” Ritsuko replied automatically, to a slight smirk from the black-haired woman. “Although I can try to explain condensed matter physics to you if you...” her eyes narrowed. “I see what you did there.”

Shinji quite deliberately said nothing. It seemed to be serving him well.

“Hey! Akagi!” someone called from behind them. Ritsuko shuddered, her face falling. Taking a deep breath, she turned around, her face set in a mask of professional neutrality.

“Dr Robinson,” she said, with a nod, to the woman, her skin so dark she could have almost passed for a Nazzadi. That illusion was shatterd by her eyes, a human brown, with the beginnings of crow’s feet marking their edges. “Doctor Malia Robinson, Deputy Director of Science for Project Engel,” she said, her voice lowered, to her two companions.

“Hey! How’s it going, Ritsuko?” the other woman asked, in her native Nigerian accent.

“Fine. Just fine,” the blond said, just slowly enough that it could not be taken as being rude. She paused. “This is Major Misato Katsuragi, Director of Operations for Project Evangelion,” she added, gesturing to the black-haired woman, while subtly trying to move to divert attention away from Shinji.

“Pleased to meet you,” Misato said, stepping forwards to shake the other woman’s hand.

“Katsuragi... Katsuragi, oh yes,” Dr Robinson said, and Misato’s face stiffened slightly at that. “You’re with the Army, yes? Which wing? I’d have to say, I’d have thought that they’d have had a Navy person for Director for Evangelion, given the strategic value of those things?” Her intonation turned something which wasn’t really a question into one.

“I used to be a mech pilot,” Misato explained. “It was decided that the actual command skills required for an operation involving the Units is more like those needed for land-based mecha than a naval ship, or even someone with the Marines.”

“‘Specially since the Marines are cutting down on their mecha component,” Malia said with a nod. “Pleased to meet you too, by the way; I’ll have to get proper communications set up with our DDoO Europe. I suspect you’ll end up having to work with us a lot, given how much we get used as spearhead forces, which, from what I’ve heard from the Eastern Front, worked really well for you today.” She smiled. “It’s nice to see our older brother Project getting some respect.”

“Parent Group,” Ritsuko muttered, just loud enough for Shinji to hear. Out loud, she added, “So, how is your Project’s research into Eshmun going?”

The other woman grinned, in a brilliant half-crescent of perfect teeth. “Amazingly. The other half of the torso; the part the Navy and static defences blew up, not the bit you got? Well, we’ve found several clusters of unhatched eggs. It’s a god-send, even above the live specimens. Anton’s got me heading up the work on the new Species, after my successes with the Hamshall and the Ish. And just looking at the combat data from the parent organism,” she let out a thin whistle, “well, damn. I think the Shamshel... that’s what we’re calling the Species by the way... it’s going to be an excellent super-heavy gunship, and that’s,” the grin turned slightly predatory, “a tactical role that the Migou are going to tearing out their cilia out over.”

“If you can get it working,” Ritsuko pointed out.

“Well, yes, that’s always the caveat emptor, and all that.” Dr Robinson frowned. “I don’t mean caveat emptor. I think I mean ceteris paribus.” She shrugged, an expansive gesture. “How are you doing?”

Dr Akagi smiled too, a slightly sickly expression. “We have several core fragments; damaged, of course, because it was necessary for the Evangelion to kill the target, but we’re already getting data from them.” Well, what the MAGI were actually returning was 601 “Insolubility” errors, even with an Operator diving with them, but that was data. Of a sort. “The r-states that thing was operating in, though... you know we’ve probably just disproved Juarez from its decay patterns.”

“No way.” The other woman blinked. “Let me guess. 512-state proton deflection?”

“Yes.”

“That was always going to be the big test for Juarez. Guess that leaves us with Imonike, then. Which is... kinda annoying. The maths is less elegant,” Dr Robinson said, with a pout. “Well, I really look forwards to you publishing. As in... actually, please do it soon. If we’re going to be dealing with it these things, then our team is really going to need your data on the behaviour of high r-state elem-n-ents.”

“Of course,” Ritsuko said, the corner of her mouth twitching. “

They watched the Deputy Director of Science for Project Engel depart.

“I like her,” Misato remarked. Shinji secretly agreed; the other woman had seemed pleasant enough, and, well, now that he actually had to fight against these things, the term “super-heavy gunship” was being linked to “more stuff shooting at the thing that’s trying to kill me,” and “more targets for the thing that’s trying to kill me,” to his approval.

Ritsuko rolled her eyes. “You would,” she said. “God, I hate that woman. Just... so... damn... bubbly. And she’s from Engel, of course. She’s like fingernails on the blackboard of my mind.”

There was silence. Then;

“So, what’s written on the blackbo...” began the black-haired woman.

“Shut up, Misato. The blackboard is not important. It is a metaphor.”

The black-haired woman glared at her. “I get that,” she said, somewhat snippishly. “I was just trying to inject some levity into the place.”

“Levitate in your own time.” The scientist pinched the bridge of her nose. “I’m sorry, that was uncalled for. But if I can dodge Dr Robinson until the analysis is done, I’ll be a lot less stressed.”

But Shinji was no longer paying attention. Over on the other side of the room from the screen, he could see his father on the other side of a window.

He was smiling.

He was talking to Rei Ayanami, her arm still in a cast, but all other signs of her injuries gone.

She was smiling too, a faint curl up of the side of her lips.

Down by his side, Shinji’s hands balled into fists. Through narrowed eyes, he stared at the scene, as the Director of Science and Director of Operations droned at each other about irrelevencies that the boy no longer cared about.

His father never smiled at him. He never even talked to him unless he wanted something.

This was unfair.


~’/|\’~


26th September, 2091

The two boys stood before the door. It was a normal-looking door. No fanged maw, biohazard warning symbol, disturbingly organic sphincter or inscription of "Lasciate ogne speranza, voi ch'intrate" adorned the portal.

It was still somewhat intimidating.

“You ring,” muttered Toja.

“No, you,” was Kensuke’s devastatingly scathing and witty retort.

They continued to stand there.

The bespectacled boy rubbed his arm. “Man, security is tight here,” he said, idly. “They actually did a blood check, not just a skin-scraping, just at the dome entrance. And here...”

“Look, are you going to do it?” the Nazzadi growled. “No. Then I guess I’ll just have to use my superior manliness to... argh.”

The door had opened, without anyone touching it. This would have been sinister, had it not been for the fact that a dark-haired, and very attractive, woman with Japanese features stood in the doorway, one hand still raised to the interior controls. “Yes?” she asked.

Both boys immediately stood to attention. And it would be crass to mention that this applied in both senses of the word. “Um...” eventually Kensuke managed to stammer. “Uh, we were wondering if Shinji was here.”

Toja suddenly paled, a change which went entirely unnoticed with his complexion. Was this the right address? He’d got it off Hikary, who had been rather approving of his ‘attempts to be nice to a person at an unfamiliar school’, which just indicated that word of the punching incident hadn’t made its way to her. He could tell that, because he could still hear, and was not shell-shocked from several hours of shouting from an angry class representative.

Luckily, the woman smiled. “I’m afraid he’s out at the moment,” she said.

“Oh,” said Kensuke, his gaze descending, before rising back to her face with a regularity that Galileo could have admired. “Do you know when... um... when he’ll be back?”

She shook her head, ponytail whipping behind her. “No, I’m afraid not,” she said. “Why do you want him?”

“We were going to see a film,” Toja said, self-consciously running a hand through his hair, “and we were wondering if he wanted to call. To come. I meant come. With us.”

She favoured them with another smile. “I see.” The smile shifted into a frown. “Why didn’t you just call him, text him, or... well, do it any way that wouldn’t mean that you end up having to go through the security at this place.”

“We didn’t know about the security,” Kensuke said, grinning. “And he didn’t reply to the email to his Academy account, and we couldn’t find his number in the public lists. So we thought we’d just come over and ask.”

The woman blinked once, and then nodded. “Oh, yes. Yes.” She paused, as if considering things. “I can get you it,” she said, after some deliberation.

Kensuke nodded enthusiastically. “Yes please. Thank you, Mrs Ikari.”

The temperature suddenly dropped by about twenty degrees; the arcology air, kept a little cooler in this residential dome, suddenly freezing against the skin. Misato narrowed her eyes.

“I am not Mrs Ikari,” she said, trying to keep the annoyance out of her voice. “I’m Shinji’s guardian.” She paused. Yes, they deserved it. How dare they suggest that! There was no way she could be Shinji’s mother; did she look like the kind of person who’d have a teenage pregnancy like that; the kind of irresponsible mother who wouldn’t even screen their birth? She sincerely hoped not. She didn’t look a day over thirty!

That was completely separate, in her mind, from the fact that she was chronologically thirty one.

“Yes,” she continued, “I’m Misato Katsuragi, Shinji’s guardian. And you would be,” the overlay in her Eyes gave her their names, as well as a considerable batch of personal information, “Kensuke Aida and Toja Suzuhari. Your names have come up in connection to a certain...” she gave a deliberate pause, “... incident I was made aware of.” A series of clicks emanated from her hands held behind her back, which absolutely in no way whatsoever brought to mind, say, the sound of breaking bones. “If I hear of any more such incidents, there will be... consequences. If Shinji’s surveillance team suspects any more incidents might maybe be about to happen, the consequences will be much more immediate, though no more painful in the long run.” Misato leaned forwards, smiling. Unlike her previous smiles, it was not a pleasant smile. It displayed a little too much incisor for even the comfort of a Nazzadi, let alone a human. “I’m pleased we could have this chat.” And then her demeanour returned to normal. “So... shall I just get his gridlink?”

The details were given, and the two boys were left standing, once again, in front of the closed door. On the inside, Misato leant against it with a thump which was not transmitted.

I’m sorry, but what? ‘Mrs Ikari’? It says my name next to the door! Damn teenage boys and their predictable attentions! I mean, seriously, did they think I was old enough to be his mother? Or, in fact, that I was married to the Representative? I mean, it’s possible she hastily added mentally, that he could be a very nice person and a real charmer, and the mere fact that I haven’t ever seen a trace of it in his technocratic bones... oh, and the fact that Shinji and him have real issues... is just a persona, but, seriously? There’s a limit to the benefit of the doubt. I don’t think I know anyone who’s actually spent time around him who’d go throw themselves at him. Damn teenage boys and their... stupidness.

She sighed again. She didn’t look that old, did she? An innocent wastepaper bin received an almighty punt, which did make Misato feel better, although it failed to make up for either the blow to herself image, or the sudden and more immediate pain in her foot.

She would probably have been somewhat reassured to hear the conversation on the other side of the door, and she would have, had the door not been soundproofed and designed to take an RPG without breach.

“Wow,” Kensuke managed.

“Wow,” Toja agreed.

“Wow,” Kensuke expanded, before switching to a more conventional vocabulary. “That was... so hot. Shinji is living with a woman with breasts and legs and... and everythingnessocity like that.”

Toja slapped the other boy on the back, a little bit harder than might have been needed. “Yeah,” he agreed. “There’s no justice in the world.”

“You can say that again! He gets a giant robot and a totally hot chick as his roommate. I mean... that figure, and she’s military too... that attitude.” He flipped out his PCPU. “The figure alone would be enough to get her the coveted AAA rating, but the way she did those warnings... I think she’s going to be the first AAA+... no, AAA ++!” he said, marking it down. “What did she say her name was... oh, it’s right by the door.”

“... okay, I found that talk a bit scary,” Toja admitted.

“You just don’t appreciate the sublime beauty of a woman in uniform,” the bespectacled boy said.

“She wasn’t in uniform.”

“She was. In my mind.”

It should probably be noted at this point that the image in the boy’s head would not have been a very practical combat uniform; quite apart from the lack of ANaMiNBC protection, which would have instantly doomed the wearer, the heels were eminently impractical, and the exposed midriff, low-cut neck and miniskirt would have utterly ruined what little concealment the garment provided.

“Well... she’s probably not going to come out again,” Toja said, with reluctance. “You phone him, and tell him about the film.” He paused. “‘Course, he might actually be doing something... she did say he was out. At least we tried.”


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Re: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)

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The maglev ride was smooth and silent, as it always was; the only noise the hiss of air around the train. The only outside forces felt by Shinji Ikari, immersed as he was by the music in his headphones, were the accelerations in and out of stations, and, beyond that, the slight, omnipresent rotation, as the Fifth Circle Line looped around the city. Unlike many of the other train lines, the various Circle lines, all the way from the First, at the top down to the lowest, remained at the same depth; a cyclone and anticyclone which ran all hours of the day.

“This is Ellersmer Court,” the recorded voice played. “This is a Fifth Circle Line train, towards Whitborough Dome. Please allow passengers to leave the train, before you board.”

The movement of people, getting off. The movement of people, getting on. They flowed, and yet, to the eyes of the brown-haired boy, sitting here, eyes on the other people for lack of a better place to stare, he could discern no change.

With one last blast of trumpets, the current song came to an end. Slowly, quietly, the thin, gentle melodies of the violins gave the start to the next one.

Krehaba estel soli footbali serakroni sanginoji abismi,” a loud-mouthed Nazzadi, slurring his words somewhat, proclaimed, “Chelsi... absul hi abisakroni adisi radski!

Zy kokrehakrony,” a woman standing next to him, in the same bright blue shirt, agreed. “Absul footbalazi... serakroni suluperukredoneyakroni , absul serabi suluperukredoneyabi, pla absul serakausi suluperukredoneyakausi.

I’m sure you had fun, Shinji thought, irritation in his mental voice, as he turned up the volume, to drown them out, even if you thought the game was bad and the players are overpaid. But, seriously, can you please talk more quietly?

He didn’t say anything out loud, of course. Not only were they both bigger than him, but they looked drunk. There was no point in a confrontation; they would be gone soon, and he’d still be here, so what did it matter? In fact, yes, they had open cans of beer with them. A little voice in Shinji’s head gloated at the fines they’d be facing, because the watcher LAIs monitoring the CCTV cameras would have seen that and flagged their faces, but, still, it was irritating.

Shinji sated his annoyance by rolling his eyes at the girl sitting opposite him on the train, accompanied with a sideways glance at the pair. The dark-haired girl, who looked to be about his age, merely stared back without a change in expression, which suddenly made him feel more embarrassed. She was sitting next to an amlata, built like an athlete, and Shinji suddenly had a sinking feeling that he was accidentally flirting with someone’s (very attractive, a treacherous part of his brain noted) girlfriend. Actually, they both looked vaguely familiar; he thought that he might have seen there somewhere around the Academy.

Oh no. Just when I thought the situation couldn’t get any more embarrassing. To escape any further mishaps, he dropped his gaze, staring down at the screen of his PCPU, and just hoping that the world would leave him alone.

“This is Little Delhi,” the recorded voice played. “This is a Fifth Circle Line train, towards Whitborough Dome. Please allow passengers to leave the train, before you board.”

As they pulled out from the station, Shinji hazarded a look up. Phew, he thought, the football people got off. And the girl, too. That social minefield had been evaded, even if her boyfriend had stayed on the train. He flicked the volume back down, and sat back, as the music of Beethoven filled his ears.

*bleep* “Shinji has mail.”

Or at least it did, before his muse decided to inform him of it, subverting his music to do so. He really hoped it was something important to bother disturbing him. Then again, Ari was running high-end anti-spam filters, so she did tend to catch pretty much everything that wasn’t important.

He checked. It was a... well, an almost wary-sounding message from the human boy from yesterday, Kensuke, asking if he wanted to come see a film with Toja. They were meeting in Dome 3, in the Eddington cluster.

A few presses, to get to the map, and... yes, he had thought so. If he got off at Sideware, and then took the inclinator up to Third Tier, he’d be in the right dome. Shinji shrugged. It was going to be easy for him to do it, and he’d have to think up a reason for why he didn’t, which would be harder than just doing it. If he were to be perfectly honest, it wasn’t like he was doing anything vitally important. Just as long as he was back at Misato’s for six, because they were having dinner with Dr Akagi...

Why not?


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The room was a vast cylinder, rising far above, just as it could, through diamond plates in the floor, be seen to plummet far below. The full height was unseen; the white light from the lit areas ended before this hollow space, deep below the depths of the Earth did. It was not a pure white, though, because for every light, there was a path which took it through the transparent sphere, divided into eighths by the metal bands which ran around its equators, which hung in the centre of the room. The orb refracted the light which shone through it with an uncanny radiance which spoke of its adamant nature, and was filled with a blue fluid which could be seen to move by the patterns of bent light, much like light shone through waves in an aquarium. The chamber was suspended by a cobweb of threads no thicker than a spider’s web, the other, more visible profusion of flowing cables and arcane, in both senses of the word, equipment there for its function, not for its structure.

And speaking of its structure, if one were to look into the onion-like layers of the globe, and at the walls of this place with an electron microscope, one might see the warding circles, inscriptions and other anchors for sorcerous containment procedures which covered every square micrometer.

Rei Ayanami floated naked in the warm tank of fluid, eyes closed, hair drifting around her like seaweed. Curled into a ball, she twitched slightly, mouth moving with unheard words. Around her, the pale blueness swirled, cycled frequently to prevent her from depleting the oxygen. It was LCL, true, but not LCL as used in the entry plugs of the Evangelions; this was, quite apart from being a different colour, thinner, and, in the areas away from her body, almost an aerosol, never quite sure on whether it was a liquid or a gas.

It was, after all, designed for a rather different purpose.

A twitch, and she spasmed, straightening to full rigidity with her spine curving back, an unseen jet of fluid expelled from her lungs to send the blueness swirling and twirling. Slowly, slowly, she curled up again, only for, only a few minutes later, the process to repeat, her mouth open in an unheard, or perhaps, ignored, scream.

With a lack of care in her eyes, Dr Ritsuko Akagi flicked her gaze up, the light painting her harcontact-lit eyes blue-within-blue, before returning back to the feed, to deal with more important matters. Eventually, though, she was satisfied.

“Prepare for chamber evacuation,” she ordered the girl. In response, mutely (or maybe not? How could one tell, when no sound seemed to escape the sphere?), the girl swam into a position which would leave her on her hands and knees when the vessel was cycled, as, indeed it did, the LCL drained away and replaced by air.

Kneeling, a gush of blue-to-clear liquid rushed out of Rei’s mouth, as she coughed it out of her lungs, only for the fluid to effervesce and boil away before it hit the floor, the unhealthy-looking mist pulled out of the chamber too.

“Cycling chamber,” Ritsuko noted.

“That went well,” Ritsuko told her. “As far as I can see, there were no issues with this first test after your synchronicity accident.” She paused. “Did you feel anything different or wrong?”

“I did not, Dr Akagi,” the girl replied, hands still by her side, making no attempts to cover herself. Ristuko handed her a paper robe, which would last her until she got to the decontamination showers, to wash out the remains of the LCL-variant which still tinted her hair blue and coated her skin in a thin layer which made it look even colder than usual.

“Good.” The blond paused. “The Unit 00 restart test is on Wednesday. You are to attend school as normal; it is not scheduled until 16:00.”

“I understand, Dr Akagi.” Rei sneezed, the thin wisp of blue fog dispersing before the older woman could even recoil.

Ritsuko had the feeling that she was forgetting something. “We will schedule the next session for... the third of October,” she said, making note. “That’s next Sunday.”

“Yes, Dr Akagi.” The girl continued to stand there, unmoving since she had donned the paper gown, no hint of movement from her own conscious volitation. The sneeze didn’t count.

“That will be all, Rei,” Ritsuko said.

“I understand, Dr Akagi.” The girl paused, shifting slightly. “Dr Akagi?” she asked, raising one hand slightly.

“Yes, Rei?” the scientist asked, with a hint of interest.

“Why did you deem it necessary to have me stand-by for the Harbinger-4 incident, when I had not successfully synchronised with Unit 00 without a synchronicity incident? It was not necessary to have me do so, and any attempt to have me do so would have had unknown success.” If there was curiosity in the girl’s voice, Ritsuko could not read it. “It was not time then, and it was not necessary.”

“Because we couldn’t be sure that Test Pilot Ikari would be successful,” Ritsuko explained, any interest she could have before drowned by the... the Rei-ness of the question. “If he had been incapacitated, it would have been necessary to eliminate the Harbinger, and, as a secondary objective, salvage the Test Model.”

“But it was not necessary.”

“No, it turned out not to be necessary,” Ritsuko admitted. “To be honest, we did not expect Shinji to perform... well, to perform well. He’s been a bit of a surprise.”

“He has surprised you?” the girl replied flatly.

“Yes. Compared to the Second Child, the Third is woefully under-trained, and yet he’s a prodigy in the field of AT-Field manipulation. It’s a surprise.”

“The Third Child. Acedia. Test Pilot Ikari. Shinji Ikari. He is the son of Representative Gendo Ikari, and Dr Yui Ikari.”

The scientist waited for the girl to continue. She did not do so.

“You can go, Rei,” she said, framing the statement as an order.

“Dr Akagi.”

“Yes, Rei?” she asked, frustration creeping into her voice.

“Why are you surprised?”

The woman blinked, the lit harcontacts painting her eyelids purple as she blinked. She really wanted a smoke right now. “Because he’s defying the predictions made on you, the Second Child, and the other failed test subjects,” she said. “Now, if you’d just...”

Rarely, almost uniquely, Rei interrupted her. “I did not mean that,” she said. “What I meant was, ‘Why are you surprised?’”

Ritsuko frowned. “I just told you.”

There might have been a hint of sadness in Rei’s eyes as she answered, the doctor thought. “You did not understand. I am not surprised.” And with that said, she turned, and headed for the exit that would lead her to the showers.

Then again, that might just have been excessive and wilful anthromorphism, the woman thought with a hint of spite.


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The sirens were wailing with the high pitched scream of a newborn infant. Most of what could be seen on the mainscreen was the red of destroyed assets; prime among them, the flanks of capital-grade charge beams now entirely silenced.

A woman screamed; a high-pitched shriek of terror. “Contact!” she managed. “C-c-contact!”

“My god,” a young man, his temples still streaked with grey despite his age, muttered, staring at the screen in front of him. “God! No! It’s... it’s still coming! It just came out of nowhere! Why didn’t you detect it?”

Her face streaked with sweat, the Captain in charge of the facility ran in, her red eyes narrowed. “Report!” she barked. “What the hell’s going on? It’s hell on earth outside!”

“C-captain!” the man stammered. “An unknown object... maybe two hundred metres in diameter... just appeared in low earth orbit. And that’s only after it destroyed the defences. We think it must have had some kind of arcane field protecting it from detection!”

“Impossible!” the Captain snapped. “Nothing that large could be warded against detection in that...” and her face fell. “No,” she said softly, expression suddenly wracked with fear. “They’re back, aren’t they?”

“I can’t say. But... but they’re launching smaller objects. We can’t stand against them.” The man looked up, tears in her eyes. “We just can’t. We couldn’t see them. Oh, God, why? What does science exist for!”

“Stow your bellyaching,” the Captain snapped. “I’ll tell you what science is there for! It’s there for truth, for beauty, and for the realisation of the imminent potential in all things! And, most importantly, it’s there for giving us tools, whether to find out more about the world, or killing those who would kill us. Because,” the nazzady said, breaking the glass on the wall to remove a fire axe, “the Migou may have made me, and their Loyalists may have called us monsters when we rebelled. But let me tell you this. I’ve read Frankenstein since then! And it’s in the nature of so-called monsters to destroy their makers!” She pointed up at the screen. “Look at that! Tower 07, by the Elder Thing City, is still operational! It’s just not firing! So we’re going to go there, and start it up again! For Earth! For Human and Nazzadi alike! And for the honour of the Antarctica Defence Forces!” She grabbed an automatic grenade launcher from a rack. “Saddle up, men, because the 27th of December, 2073, is a day which the bugs are going to remember for a very long time!”

There was a cheer from the soldiers huddled in the room, and a mass checking of weapons.

“You’re... mad,” the desk operator shouted. “It’s minus 50 out there! And they’re still bombing!”

The Captain glanced back over her shoulder. “Then the fireballs will keep us warm.”

“I thought I said I didn’t want to go see a film about military stuff,” Shinji muttered along the aisle to the other two, as patriotic music swelled.

Toja looked uncomfortable, as he leant forwards. “Uh... yeah, sorry about this,” he whispered back, his eyes reflecting the light like a cat’s in the darkness. “I... would rather have gone to see something else, too. But he,” he jerked his head towards Kensuke, who was sitting in the middle, “had already paid for the tickets.”

“But it’s not even that good,” Shinji hissed. “I’ve seen this story before. And the script is terrible.”

“Shush, you two,” said Kensuke, who was still avidly staring at the screen. “This is awesome. You do know, right, that this is all Live Action, no CGI at all? It’s amazing! They used real military equipment, even old stuff from the start of the war for everything. I’ve never seen such a realistic use of conventional explosives to fake a nuclear blast.”

The other two boys stared at him. “You mean you didn’t see if the plot was any good?” Shinji managed.

“Why?” Kensuke frowned. “It’s really pretty.”

Toja’s palm collided with his forehead. “Last time I let you buy tickets,” he muttered. “Next time, we’re going to see Snake Fist IV.”


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Shinji was in a mixed mood as he got home. Some of the parts of the film, the ones which hadn’t been full of laughable dialogue or pretty explosions had been a little too close to home for his preferences. He’d heard that kind of controlled panic in the voices of other people, in the Evangelion Group, in training. He’d looked away at those points, especially when the bombardment had begun.

Of course, the events of December 2073, the so-called “First Strike”, had been a Migou attack against the Antarctican polar defences, the first blow in the Second Arcanotech War, which would properly begin the next year as the Migou Hive Ship arrived complete with escorting fleet. The first landings had been in Antarctica, which had not even been contested thanks to the damage done by the First Strike. But at least it had been a Migou thing, not anything to do with Harbingers or anything like that, so that had numbed it a little, disassociated it a little from what they made him do. Hah, Shinji thought, if I couldn’t do that, I basically couldn’t watch anything.

He checked his watch; good, yes, he was still back before the deadline at six. Only a short search was needed to find his keys, which weren’t actually mechanical keys, and the door slid open.

The... it wasn’t even a scent in the air anymore, more a taste, hit him in the face like a fist. A sensation which he was, regrettably, familiar with. Coughing, choking, he stepped back outside, and sucked in a breath of clean arcology air.

It, whatever it was, was even making his eyes water, just from the smell. Taking a tentative sniff, he could smell burning paper, chilli... yes, there was certainly chilli, maybe some kind of curry powder stuff... and that was when his endurance gave out, and he retreated back to safety.

“Ari,” he instructed his muse, pulling out his PCPU, “phone Misato.” If she didn’t respond, he should probably start getting worried, because peeking his head inside, he could see what looked like hints of smoke. Well, there would have to be. There had to be some point where a smell stopped being a smell, and started being a smoke, or maybe a vapour. Shinji couldn’t quite remember the difference between the two, from Chemistry.

There was a sound of sizzling and bubbling from the other end of the line, as Misato picked up her PCPU, and, using that peculiar tone of voice which people use when they’re holding the handset between their shoulder and the side of their head, said, “Heya, Shinji! I was starting to wonder when you’d call. Where are you?”

“Outside.” Either she was in a full medieval dungeon, complete with boiling oil, or she was probably in the kitchen, Shinji was forced to conclude.

“Oh. Let me just turn that down... wrong way... down! ‘Kay. ‘Kay. Right.” She paused. “Oh, right? Why? Are they not letting you through security? Your card should still be synched with your profile, right?”

Shinji shook his head, briefly wondered who he was shaking his head at, given that he was on the phone, and said, “No. I mean...right outside the entrance to the flat. I’ve got it open... are you alright in there?” he asked, with some anxiety. “I can smell smoke. Is there a fire?”

“Not anymore!” Misato said, cheerfully. “There was a leee~eeetle accident with some chilli I was frying with the beans, but that’s all okay.”

The boy relaxed. “That’s good, because...”

“... and the packaging is totally extinguished!” Misato added. “Although who’d sell real chillies in a paper bag like that, I’d like to know,” she added in a darker voice. “You can’t microwave it at all, even though it looks like you should be able to!”

“Okay.” Shinji blinked, lost for words. “Right.” She’s cooking she’s cooking she’d cooking a little voice in his head wailed, but he managed to keep it away from his vocal cords.

He could hear Misato humming tunelessly, as something sizzled. “So, Shinji, did you have fun today?” she asked.

“Yes,” he said. “Um... well, the film wasn’t that good, but, yes.”

“How were your friends?”

Shinji wasn’t quite sure that he’d chose to describe them as friends quite yet; associates, certainly, with a view to a potential upgrade later, but you really couldn’t say that when less than a week ago, one of them had punched you.

“Fine.”

“They dropped ‘round, you know?” Misato mentioned, an innocuous tone in her voice. “I had a talk with them in my capacity as Director of Operations... which was not what I wanted to do on a Sunday, ‘cause I managed to get a day off... and I don’t think you’ll have any more trouble with them.”

Yes, Shinji did know. Mainly because when the other two had asked what he had been doing, he had ended up explaining why he had got into the habit of just occasionally going out, and riding the Arconnect for hours at a time. It was something he’d done back in Toyko-3, too, because sometimes he just had to get away from people, to relax, and a house with one excitable little girl, and one very excitable little girl, was not a place where you could do such a thing.

And then he had made the mistake of using the line, ‘And sometimes Misato is a bit exhausting to be around’, which had been interpreted as two teenage boys, who believed that a double entendre could only have one meaning, would interpret it. There had been much discussion of the attractiveness of his guardian from the other two parties involved, with no appreciation of the fact that she was a slob, even when he explicitly pointed it out.

Shinji just knew this was going to get annoying.

“But... uh, Shinji, it would probably be easier if you’d come in, you know,” Misato added. “I mean, I could do with some help, and some of us have been working hard in the kitchen.” Shinji could smell it. If she’d been working hard in there, she hadn’t been working at cooking something edible.

No, that wasn’t fair, he corrected himself. She hadn’t been succeeding at working at cooking something edible.

“Um, okay, I’ll be in a moment,” he said, as he disconnected. No, thinking of it, a more appropriate descriptor would be ‘lied’. He was just going to wait out here for a while, let the air cycle a bit, before he’d come in, and try to help salvage dinner.

“Oh, hello Shinji!” called out Dr Akagi from behind him, the click of her heels a solid sound. He turned, noting that he didn’t think he’d actually seen her out of what he was going to call ‘scientist clothing’ before. The loose blouse and trousers looked somehow wrong on her, compared to the more common lab coat, or more specialist equipment. And the fact that her harcontacts were off, that her pupils weren’t rimmed with a blue gear... that was odd. “Why are you out h... oh, God, what is that smell?” Her eyes suddenly widened in recognition. “H-has Misato been cooking?”

Shinji winced. “I think so. And... um, when I called her, she said she’d burned it, too.”

Ritsuko nodded. “It smells familiar. She went through about... about three months at university,” she explained, “after a... difficult break-up trying to teach herself how to cook.” She glanced at Shinji’s expression. “No, I don’t get the chain of logic behind that decision, either. As I recall, I ended up spending most of my time in the library to avoid the way the flat smelt.” Her eyes narrowed. “Well, that and the tissue boyfriends.”

“Tissue?” Shinji frowned. “I don’t recognise the... what, were they all... oh. I see. Something to sob into and then throw away?” There was still a lot of doubt in his voice.

“Something like that,” Ritsuko said diplomatically. The actual line of logic behind the nickname had actually been that they were only good for a few blows, before they were discarded, and more covertly, that they were rather... limp. The blond had not had a high opinion of the other woman’s taste in men. “But,” she added, changing the topic, “did she say what she was making?”

Shinji shook his head. “No. She said something about beans and chilli, though, and it was sort of implied that she went and bought ingredients, rather than nanofac stuff.”

The woman’s eyes went blank for a moment. “Right,” she said. “In that case, Shinji, do you like Nazzadi food?”

The boy frowned, shifting his posture to lean against the wall a little more. “What kind?” he asked.

“What do you mean, ‘what kind’?”

“Well, it’s not all the same. At all,” Shinji said, with authority. “You’ve got the Traditionalist stuff (although, even then, you can split by Colony Ship), you’ve got nazzadanfrazzi nutrenti... that’s the stuff which takes inspiration from pre-existing human styles, but then twists it, and there’s at least one version of that for every culture, and then there’s the mess of ineveti nutrenti styles, which... well, you can’t really...” he trailed off, as he found the blond staring at him. “Gany, my Nazzadi foster mother, was the one who taught me to cook, and did most of the cooking,” he explained. “Um... you kind of pick this stuff up.”

“I’d always thought it was just food,” Ritsuko said, slowly. She had to confess, that was a side to the Third Child she hadn’t seen before. “You know, quite a lot of sauces, tendency to add spices, quite a lot of protein. That kind of food.”

Shinji rolled his eyes. “Yes,” he said carefully, “in the same way that all Japanese people eat is sushi.”

There was a snort from the woman, along with a shrug. “Okay, then. I get your point. But you’ll be fine with it?”

“Yes.” Well, as long as it’s well done, he thought, privately.

“In that case,” Ritsuko pulled out her PCPU, “... favourites... bookings... yes, they’ve got space for a party of three.” She tapped the screen a few times, before raising one finger to her lips, with a gesture for Shinji to be quiet, and selecting a call. “Hello, Misato,” she said, into the device. “Uh, huh.” A pause. “Oh, I got out of work a while ago, I’ve just got to your dome, so I’ll be with you in a few minutes. The bookings are for 18:30, so we should be able to make the reservation.” Another pause. “Wait, what? I thought we were going out. I was making the bookings, and we’d be meeting at your place... you’ve been cooking. Sorry, I wouldn’t have done it if I’d known, but... no, really, I insist. It is a really good place, I assure you... yes, it does have a good bar,” she added, with a glance down at Shinji. “Sorry, we should probably both have been clearer...” she laughed, “... yes, I know exactly what you mean. I’ll see you in a few minutes. Bye... bye.”

The PCPU was returned to a pocket. “And that, Shinji,” she said with a smile, “is how you handle Misato.” She winced. “Do me a favour, though. Next time she suggests one of these things, either make sure we’re going out, or don’t let her in the kitchen. I’m no longer a student, much as I hate to admit it, and I don’t think my stomach can cope with it anymore.”


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“... so I said, ‘yes, that is what I said’!” Misato leant back her head, and roared with laughter. Shinji and Ritsuko exchanged embarrassed looks with each other; a situation only made worse by the looks that the other patrons were giving them.

“I happen to like this restaurant,” the blond muttered, “and I’d prefer to not be banned.”

“Oh, lighten up, Rits!” The woman paused, as she took a mouthful of food. The particular dish she had, fermoja flakorpa, was a solid Traditionalist meal, meant to be eaten only with a knife and the pastry provided. Misato was wilfully ignoring that, and had obtained herself a fork, just as she was ignoring the fact that, technically, this meal was only meant to be eaten by men over the age of 27. Of course, that latter detail was ignored by all but the most Traditionalist, but the way that she then went to look for where they kept the condiments would have produced wider annoyance.

Ritsuko shook her head, with a hint of sorrow in the motion, as she watched her friend go.

“Thank you for doing this,” Shinji said, as he sliced the leaf-wrapped protein on his plate into thin slices.

The blond flapped a hand at him. “No problem.” She paused. “Of course... are you sure that you want to stay with her, though?” she asked. “I mean,” the woman blinked, “I know you were placed with her, but... after smelling that cooking, there’s no need you need to have your life ruined by a bad flatmate.”

Shinji sighed. “I don’t really get her,” he admitted. “Sometimes, when we’re talking... it’s like we’re not even in the same room. I just don’t get how she can be like she is.” He shrugged. “It’s fine; there’s no need to go to all that trouble. I’ll survive.”

“Well...”

“... if only because I’ve taken over cooking and cleaning duties,” he added, with dark humour.

Ritsuko laughed. “I did the same at university,” she admitted. “She’s always been, for as long as I’ve known her, a slob, and a useless chef, and... well, she can only have got worse.” The last words were said with a seriousness quite unlike the rest of the sentence.

Shinji frowned. “Huh?”

The scientist’s eyes widened, fractionally. “Oh,” she mouthed, silently. “You don’t know?”

“Know what?”

Ritsuko frowned. “This is awkward. I don’t know how much I should really say, as her friend, but...” she licked her lips. “Misato was with the Army... one of the best mecha pilots of her generation,” she explained, picking her words carefully. “She made Captain after keeping the remnants of a brigade together and fighting for 23 days after they’d been cut off in the Fall of China, behind Storm lines, with only enough state-nullifiers to keep away state-sickness for fourteen... and even those weren’t designed for how high the states were getting as the Leng POLLEN expanded. State-sickness does... funny things to your brain... random excitation of the atoms into higher r-states, and there’s only so much that arcanotherapy can do. And then it happens again, when you leave, as they decay back down, and radiate out the energy. She came out lightly. Only the loss of most of her sense of smell and taste.” Yes, that would do for an explanation. It wouldn’t do to mention everything. For one, they were eating. For two, it was... private.

The boy paled, and poked at his food, suddenly much less hungry. “So,” he said, glancing over at Misato, who was leaning over the buffet table, picking up bottles of brightly coloured flavourings, “the reason she puts so much stuff on everything she eats...”

Ritsuko nodded, gravely. “Yes.”

“That’s horrible.” And Shinji now felt terrible for finding it amusing.

“Of course, she still can’t cook,” Ritsuko pointed out. “But now... she can’t even really taste or smell it. She probably couldn’t even smell the apartment, and because she has implanted Eyes, they wouldn’t have been watering as much. So she does this just to taste anything.”

“Oh.” There was an uncomfortable silence, which was only broken when Misato put the bottles of red, blue, clear, and red-with-what-looked-like-chilli-seeds-in-it down on the table, and began to liberally apply them.

“Ah, that’s better,” she said with a grin. “Want to try a bite?” the dark-haired woman said to Shinji, with a grin, proffering her fork forwards.

Shinji shook his head mutely, and poked at the slices on his plate.

“Wimp,” she said, with a grin. “A real man should always be willing to try something once.”

Ritsuko rolled her eyes. “What, you mean like Pola? As I recall, he let you drive for him once. And then left you.”

Misato pouted. “He was terrible in be... being a good passenger,” she said, with a sideways glance at Shinji.

“Misato. He was in training to be a fighter pilot.”

“So?”

“He’d had the Grade One implants. He shouldn’t even have been physically capable of getting motion sick.”

“So? He said the real issue was being that low, which just goes to show that he wasn’t all that good.”

The blond raised her hands. “I’m just saying, there are some things you shouldn’t try.”

Just then, both womens’ PCPUs chimed. “If this is an emergency, I’m going to kill someone,” the black-haired woman growled. “Oh, good,” she added, after checking, in a lighter tone.

“Yes, I was a little worried, but it seems to have gone smoothly. And not a moment too soon.”

“Hmm?” Shinji asked, or at least made a quizzical noise.

“We were having Zero-Two moved from where it was, to another place,” Ritsuko said carefully, choosing her words because they were in a public place. Well, she happened to know that a non-negligible fraction of the clients here were Armacham Internal Security guards, but the point still remained. “And that’s all I’m going to say... and Misato will say, too.” She snapped her fingers, and reached for her handbag, rummaging through it. “Although... that reminds me. She handed him a black sealed tablet, about the size of his hand.

“What is it?”

“Turn it over.” He did; the other side was emblazoned with ‘Secure Biometric Data package’. There was a transparent window on the front. Through it, he could see a picture of Rei Ayanami. “It’s her new Ashcroft Ident Card; her only one expired. Some of her access rights are dependent on this.”

“Why me?”

“Maybe because you’ll see her at school tomorrow, while I’m working,” the woman said, a hint of irritation in her voice.

Shinji could accept that this was a fair point. He glanced back at the picture. It was even taken against a black background; it had been found that sidoci ended up overexposed and bleached when taken against a normal white one. Tilting the sealed package, the familiar face shifted as the angle he was looking at it changed. Idly, he ran one hand along his jaw, squinting at the hologram of the girl.

He looked up to find both women staring at him, smiling faintly. Well, Ritsuko was smiling faintly. Misato had a look on her face which would probably have run afoul of pre-NEG decency laws in some parts of the world.

“What’s the matter?” asked the dark-haired woman, a slight lilt in her voice. “You seem to be looking at Rei’s face very intently.”

“What? Um...”

“Oh, come on, it’s sweet,” she continued. “This way, you have a nice little excuse to talk to her. And then, maybe...”

“It’s not...”

“You might even get to see her house,” Misato added, a salacious grin on her face.

Ritsuko blinked suddenly, her face rigid. “There’s no need to tease him quite so much,” she told her friend, mock-sternness in her voice.

“Yes! Thank you! A sane...”

“... of course, you still need to tease him a little,” Ritsuko continued, the grin creeping back in.

Crossing his arms, Shinji slumped back down, his face taking on the caste of a martyr.

“Make sure you remember, Shinji,” the blond said. She sighed. “She tries, you know.”

“Who?”

“Rei. But... well,” she ran one hand over her face, “much like your father, sometimes I think her problem is that she can’t see the little things in front of her. She can’t see the trees for the forest... and, yes, I mean it that way around. And she’s not very good at it.”

“At what?”

“Ignorance.”


~’/|\’~


Her handbag made a solid thump on the floor, as Ritsuko dropped it, and turned to check that the security systems had turned back on properly. Satisfied that they had, she slipped her shoes off, and, socks squeaking on the hard material, stepped into her kitchen.

Twelve eyes reflected the light from the hallways back at her, an inhuman yellowish-golden glint. The blond sighed.

“What are you doing in here, sitting around in the dark?” she asked, flicking the light on.

There was a mewing, as the cats protested at the sudden change in their conditions. The woman glanced over at their bowls. Ah. Yes, that made sense. She’d forgotten to fill up the dispenser robot; the football-like unit waiting at its charging point. They had drunk all their water, and would be wanting food. Stepping over to the bowls, she reached down to pick up the dishes, only for her fingers to be batted away by one of the cats.

“Major Zero? What are you doing?” she asked the cat, a handsome Havana Blue tom. Quite unlike their ancestor breed, the Persian Blue, the Havana Blue was actually, blatantly blue. The genetics labs of Cuba had been busy with genetically modified pets even before the First Arcanotech War; the specific breed was one of the oldest ones, an experiment into pet colouration which had tweaked the genes which decided coat colouration, carried on the X-chromosomes. Its fur was an almost-synthetic blue, never encountered in nature, and it had been rather pricy as a result. The Havana Blue was always provided with full geneline history, and the numbers were highly restricted, with a long waiting list.

It had been Ritsuko’s little act of rebellion to let the Sergeant breed with Kiko, a perfectly normal mongrel tabby. She didn’t care about the genelines, or the fact that she was diluting the stock. Their kittens would thank her, for one, because the cat breeders, even with the aid of genetic modification, tended to keep the lines too closed-in for her liking. Plus, the tortoiseshell from the litter had been adorable, its spiky fur a mottled grey, orange, black and blue.

The cat mewed at her, staring at her with its red eyes, and batted at her hand again. The human sighed. “Do you want foot or not?” she said, as she straightened up. The cat trotted out of the kitchen, waiting for her at the door. “Okay then,” she said to the cat, “be that way.”

A series of splashes of water was followed by the rattling sound of her filling up the dispenser robot. Shortly afterwards, she emerged from the kitchen, carrying a cat under each arm, because they had insisted at batting at the ball-like robot which was trying to fill their feeding bowls, rather than actually let it give them it. For all that she liked her cats, they could be rather stupid.

Making her way through to her box-like study, she found the large blue cat occupying her chair. She’d left the door open again, obviously, and they always found their way through, to the most comfortable chair in the house. Booting up the machine, her Grid workspace appeared, followed by the sound of its internal processor whirring to life. She picked up the tom from the seat, and sat back down, keeping the cat on her lap. Major Zero didn’t protest; in fact, he flopped over her knees, stretching, a fair purr vibrating her legs.

Reactivating her harcontacts, Dr Ritsuko Akagi resumed work. The Unit 00 start-up test was this Wednesday, after all, and she wasn’t going to get work done by having meals in restaurants.


~’/|\’~


27th September, 2091

Without exception, everyone who passed the entrance examination to get into an Ashcroft Academy was a high achiever. The schools prided themselves on it; there was a reason that the global academic league tables were utterly dominated by these schools. They cherrypicked the brightest from mainstream education with generous scholarships, and were rumoured to conduct pre-admission genetic screening which was then taken into account in the acceptance process. The children there were disproportionately xenomixed and genofixed.

And despite this academic brilliance concentrated in one place, not one person had been able to deduce the logic behind how the Physical Education sessions migrated around the week. This week, they were Monday afternoon. Last week, they had been Tuesday morning. The week before that, Thursday morning. The general consensus was that the timetabling LAI was mad, with a minority report that the PE teachers were all a bunch of bloody-minded sadists who took too much pleasure in detentions issued for lack of the proper kit.

Up and down the pitches in front of the main buildings, a mass of boys thundered. Tight white T-shirts were covered by red or blue bibs, as they fought for primacy, and short shorts were splattered with mud as the studded boots tore up the natural turf. With a flick, a blue-bibbed player passed it to a tall, brown-haired boy who, pale legs flashing in the lightstrips in the dome ceiling, tore off up the field, outpacing or outwitting those reds who might have tried to obstruct him.

“Damn it, Dathan, pass the ball!” a boy, in a perfect position for a cross into the penalty box, yelled.

The taller boy ignored them, and, with a flick, sent it straight at the goal with a quite scary velocity, to barely be brushed aside by the fingers of the goalkeeper; fingers which were now in considerable pain. In the chaos around the goalmouth, the ball went out of play, and, luckily for the red-bibbed players, it was their goal kick.

Of course, the people on the pitch were predominantly the first team players from the six classes with PE scheduled at this time. The rest were sitting around at the sidelines, where they were meant to doing exercises. However, the teacher who had been covering them was currently escorting two boys, who’d managed to run head-first into each other, to the nurse’s office, and so they were currently being simultaneously apathetic, indolent, salacious and libidinous.

Whoever had decided to give the school swimming pool a glass front which was visible from the playing fields was worshiped as a minor god by much of the male population of the school, or at least the ones old enough, and inclined to find girls interesting. For one, they had single-handedly, in their pursuit of architectural aesthetics, managed to negate the work done in dividing the sexes when there was swimming, to avoid any possible problems with body issues imposed by social pressures.

With a synchronised splash, the five girls standing at the end of the pool dived in. At the other end, the previous set climbed out, dripping down onto the clean white tiles. One wrapped her arm around another, mouth moving in unheard laughter, and there were sighs from the male onlookers.

“I like the view,” Kensuke said, in a voice which was approaching sexual harassment merely in intonation, as he nudged Shinji in the ribs.

“I-I don’t know what you mean.”

“You cannot fool me!” declared Kensuke, with deliberate pomposity. “You, too, are looking for an answer to that eternal...”

“... well, since the 2060s...” Toja interjected, sitting on the other side of the boy.

“... eternal since the 2060s problem too, my friend. It has puzzled generations of men, driven them to madness... and stuff. But what is that problem, I hear you ask?”

Shinji squinted. “I feel you’re going to tell me.”

“Nazzadi or human! Which is hotter!”

“It’s a hard one,” a Nazzadi boy, his hair dyed white, said, as he leant back. “And if you say, ‘That’s what she said’, Ken, I will thump you.”

“Come on, Ala. Would I do...”

“Yes. And have.”

Shinji nodded. “It is true.”

“I hate you guys.”

“Don’t worry,” Enitan, the dark-skinned boy on the other side of Toja, said with a smirk. “We hate you too. But, back to the topic at hand,” he stroked his chin. “Difficult indeed. Humans are shorter, which is cuter...”

Toja snorted. “You only say that ‘cause you’re short and don’t want a girlfriend who’s taller than you. You know how much I’d have to bend down to kiss some of those people?” He paused. “Not that I’d mind, if they were hot, because that’s a sacrifice worth making, but still...”

“Ah, but we’re forgetting the big divide,” Ala pointed out. “More fat; yes or no? Nazzadi are thinner, but humans have bigger boobs, and are more curvy... which I just find...” he shook his head. “Well, look at Panary.” Gazes were indeed directed at the girl, her wet black hair tied back into a ponytail, as she stood at the end of the pool, waiting for her signal. “Sure, she might be tall and thin, but look! I mean, if I wanted someone tall, thin, muscled, and with no boobs, I’d go ask Dathan out.”

Enitan snorted. “Get ready to fight both Jony and Ferdina for him, then.”

“That wasn’t serioooous.”

“Even if he asked you out?”

“Yes! God, were you not listening to me? She’s gotta actually,” he made gestures in front of his chest, “be shaped like a girl, you know? That was the whole point of the comparison. Plus, you know, I’m a nazzada. So I know what my teeth are like. Like chisels, that’s what. And... well, that’s a real downside on a girl.”

There was collective male wincing from all but Shinji, who had tuned out the conversation a while ago. He couldn’t help but feel that the whole conversation was more than a little sordid. It was already a little dubious to stare; did they have to make commentary too? It made the whole thing rather uncomfortable. They really didn’t spend enough time around women... no, that didn’t make sense. It wasn’t as if all the other lessons were gender-segregated.

Shinji was of the rather smug opinion (which he would, of course, never mention to anyone) that he just had a healthier, which was to say, less objectifying, attitude to the fairer sex. Because when one is raised by two women, one of whom works for the FSB, one discovers that objectification is not strictly viable, unless one wants to have why it is wrong explained in detail.

Of course, that didn’t stop him staring over at the pool, too. Over at the pale figure, dark blue swimming costume a stark contrast to her chalk-coloured skin, who sat at the end of the pool, legs clutched up against her chest.

Rei Ayanami. Who was she, really? He didn’t know. Oh, they called the First Child, and sometimes, when they were talking to military people they referred to her as Invidia, but he didn’t know anything about her. He didn’t know where she lived, what she did in her free time, how she felt about having to pilot, what she was like as a person... in a purely professional sense, he hastened to reassure himself. Although, of course, she was very attractive, in a sort of special way; there was something about the way that snow-white skin just looked good on a girl, and from this viewpoint, he could see that she had an excellent figure. The thought had occurred that he would get to see her in a plug suit at some point in the very near future. It was a nice thought.

But of course, that wasn’t why he was interested in her. Honestly. This was a more professional (and the word felt strange to him) interest. Sure, it was possible that something more might be achievable, but that was only a distant prospect. This was just getting to know someone who, after all, also piloted a forty-metre giant robot; someone else who would understand the stress and the punishing training schedule they inflicted on him. He was... he was taking the initiative.

There were things, though, that he had picked up from the others in the class; they said she was asocial, cold, that she never chose to interact with people unless it was necessary and that she had been like this ever since she joined the class, back in first year. Some of the girls had apparently tried multiple times to get her more involved; he had heard mention of attempts by Hikary, Taly, that brown-haired bookish one who sat at the back... no success. Although it was admirable of them to try. She did look... isolated, sitting there, her legs raised up like a barrier to the world around her. Lonely, and yet there was something about her that left him ill at ease, a darker voice added. Maybe it was because she seemed to be able to make his father smile, when he couldn’t.

He really hoped it wasn’t some kind of unconscious bias against sidoci. He didn’t want to think of himself as the sort of person who had a problem with them.

Someone said his name. He switched his attention back to the conversation.

“Huh?”

There were mutual smirks all around. “I said,” Toja said, “I think Shinji agrees that xenomixed is best.”

He stared at them in confusion.

“You were staring,” the boy said.

“At Rei Ayanami,” Kensuke added, unnecessarily.

“N-n-no,” Shinji stammered.

Enitan rolled his eyes. “We’re not blind, you know. The world doesn’t shut down when you’re not paying attention.” He paused. “Well, if it does, it creates memories that make it the same as if it didn’t...”

“But what part were you staring at, hmm?” Toja interrupted, as he leant in. “Her breasts, perhaps?”

“I think you can definitely say she takes after her human side, if you know what I mean,” Kensuke said, waggling his eyebrows. “Or maybe her calves?”

“Or her thighs?”

“Like I said,” Shinji stammered, pushed off balance by both the interrogation, and the fact that they were leaning in from both sides, “that’s not it. Really.”

“... in that case,” someone muttered, “we should take away your man card. Because not staring at something like that...”

“Then what were you looking at, huh?” Toja said, drawing even closer.

“After all, we know you’re bad at lying,” the bespectacled boy added

“Your faces are too close,” muttered Shinji, through clenched teeth. “And... I was wondering why she’s always alone. Why she never does anything with anyone.”

“Because she’s... like that.”

“All sidoci are a bit like that. You can’t really get in their heads.”

“Always been like that.”

“Kinda creepy.”

“Don’t know why some of the girls keep on trying to get her to do stuff. She’s made it clear she’s not interested.”

“She’s Rei. That means she... she acts like Rei.”

The chorus of advice and answers was as useless as everything else had been.

“Plus, you know, by the way?” Toja nodded, face serious. “The whole ‘Why are you so lonely’, and wanting to be the one who does stuff with her? Doesn’t work. At all.”

“Which is a shame,” Kensuke added, “‘cause she’s a solid AA+ on my list of girls.”

“Well, yeah, you know there’s a study, right,” Enitan said, “and... I read it, and it turns out, that xenomixes all have that sex factor... don’t look at me like that, that’s what they called it, and the study found that, whether they’re amlati or sidoci, they’re like ten percent hotter than other people.”

“Yeah, because anything which uses the word ‘sex factor’ is totally a reliable study,” Ala said, rolling his eyes. “Mind you,” he said, eyes searching for a certain amlaty, and not finding her, “it’s true. They do just get the balance right, you know.”

Shinji tuned out again, only for the teacher to get back and start shouting that they should be on their feet, that this was ‘physical education’, not ‘sitting around education’, and other such witticisms beloved of the PE teacher. Who was wearing a lab coat, for some reason.

The boy blinked. Oh yeah, he thought, as he pulled himself to his feet. We were sitting around because he had to take people to the nurse’s office. Shinji had sort of forgotten that.

He also had a feeling he was forgetting something else. Oh well. It probably wasn’t that important.


~’/|\’~


“The time is 18:04. Shinji has mail. There is one new voice message from Dr Ritsuko Akagi. Begin voice message. ‘Shinji, did you remember to give Rei her card? It’s important. If you have already, thanks.’ End message. There is an attached file. Do you wish to add this to your reminders?”

Shinji groaned. That was it. Flicking through the attachment, he noted that, yes, Dr Akagi had sent him the girl’s address. He looked up at the wall, looking for a clock which wasn’t there; a pointless endeavour, since he did already know the time. Idly, he highlighted the physical address.

“Ari,” he instructed the muse, “get directions.”

The instructions flowed up onto the screen. Shinji frowned. She lived pretty high up, in one of the shallow domes feeding off from one of the older clusters. Maybe forty-five minutes in rush hour, as the estimate stated. He didn’t really want to do this.

But he probably had to. He had been asked, yesterday, and Rei would probably have problems without a valid card. And... well, he had wondered where she lived. This was an excuse, right? Well, not an excuse, it was a duty. In fact, he was helping her out by sacrificing his time, which made it acceptable.

Confirmed in his self-righteousness, which was still failing to drown out his nerves, Shinji headed off. Then he stepped back in, and left a note for Misato on the table, telling her where he had gone. And then decided that she’d probably knock it off when she dumped stuff on the table, or just not see it, and sent an email as well. Then he left, only to return to grab something to eat on the way; it wasn’t as if there was a paucity of junk food in the apartment. Places where she lived seemed to generate it in the same way that dishes left in the sink generated mould. In fact, there were some dishes in the sink, left to soak from the abortive cooking attempt the night before. Maybe if he just cleaned them first...

No. He wasn’t delaying, but he should just go and do it.

If only he could convince himself that the squirming in his stomach was a completely irrational response to an errand which would take him to a pretty girl’s house.


~’/|\’~
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[Extract removed due to change in chapter structure; what was once here has now become Chapter 9, to break it down into more manageable sections.]
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Excellent work as always EarthScorpion. A question but where do you get your references on the physics?I like to occasionally read up on it as a hobby and to gestate ideas for use in my personal worldbuilding and fiction projects. And what is an r-state?Is there some physics site where I can get this info?
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Manthor wrote:Excellent work as always EarthScorpion. A question but where do you get your references on the physics?I like to occasionally read up on it as a hobby and to gestate ideas for use in my personal worldbuilding and fiction projects. And what is an r-state?Is there some physics site where I can get this info?
The physics? Well, I'm a physics undergraduate myself, so I have textbooks and own knowledge (and Atomic Rockets, that's always useful) to call upon. That's largely it, although I also call on quite a bit of hard-sci-fi for things that are beyond the level I've got to.

And the concept of r-states? An "r-state" is completely my own invention; it's bullshit in actual physical, realistic terms. But it's plausible-sounding bullshit, which draws upon knowledge of how real life physics and science works to produce something which sounds right. The basic principle is that, in the Mythos, the laws of physics as we know them are not fully representative. Not "wrong", per se, but merely lacking in data; quantum physics is to arcane physics as classical physics is to quantum physics.

Naturally, scientists being scientists, they then proceed to try to quantify and qualify how much the laws of physics are unlike "classical", so-called 1-state physics. They found that the variance is quantised, and so each "level" of variance is one r-value. And creatures evolve for life in their own r-state, and so get sick if they leave their own r-valued state (or region of r-values), and die (or perhaps eternal lie) if they leave it. That's what "The Stars are Right" literally means in this fic; it means that local r-state is of such a value that Cthulhu can actually live, rather than be forced into hibernation. And that's the reason that Shoggoths are terrifying; they're hypertech which shut down their higher functionalities rather than hibernate. In a 1-state, they might only be able to be a big black mess of gloop which crushes you, but at higher r-states... yeah, you know the Inhibitors, from RevSpace? Well, my beta readers says the way I write the Migou reminds him of the Conjoiners, and the Elder Things are therefore the Inhibitors.

Of course, I just found, having finally got around to reading that copy of Terminal World I got signed, that Alastair Reynolds had managed to pre-empt a lot of my thoughts on r-states with his concept of "zones", so I've also gone and integrated that in. And Misato has just ended up with a bit of Merkova in her, which... well, they weren't dissimilar anyway.
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After consulting with my beta, I've split the chapter into two. Just to make it more manageable and readable, because... well, over 25,000 words, with no action scenes? That's a bit much, and, yes, I know it's a flaw with how I write.



Chapter 9

Rei 01, Something Black / The other upon Saturn's bended neck she laid

EVANGELION



~'/|\'~


"Trust no friend without faults, and love a maiden, but no angel."

Gotthold Ephraim Lessing
~’/|\’~


27th September, 2091

Without exception, everyone who passed the entrance examination to get into an Ashcroft Academy was a high achiever. The schools prided themselves on it; there was a reason that the global academic league tables were utterly dominated by these schools. They cherrypicked the brightest from mainstream education with generous scholarships, and were rumoured to conduct pre-admission genetic screening which was then taken into account in the acceptance process. The children there were disproportionately xenomixed and genofixed.

And despite this academic brilliance concentrated in one place, not one person had been able to deduce the logic behind how the Physical Education sessions migrated around the week. This week, they were Monday afternoon. Last week, they had been Tuesday morning. The week before that, Thursday morning. The general consensus was that the timetabling LAI was mad, with a minority report that the PE teachers were all a bunch of bloody-minded sadists who took too much pleasure in detentions issued for lack of the proper kit.

Up and down the pitches in front of the main buildings, a mass of boys thundered. Tight white T-shirts were covered by red or blue bibs, as they fought for primacy, and short shorts were splattered with mud as the studded boots tore up the natural turf. With a flick, a blue-bibbed player passed it to a tall, brown-haired boy who, pale legs flashing in the lightstrips in the dome ceiling, tore off up the field, outpacing or outwitting those reds who might have tried to obstruct him.

“Damn it, Dathan, pass the ball!” a boy, in a perfect position for a cross into the penalty box, yelled.

The taller boy ignored them, and, with a flick, sent it straight at the goal with a quite scary velocity, to barely be brushed aside by the fingers of the goalkeeper; fingers which were now in considerable pain. In the chaos around the goalmouth, the ball went out of play, and, luckily for the red-bibbed players, it was their goal kick.

Of course, the people on the pitch were predominantly the first team players from the six classes with PE scheduled at this time. The rest were sitting around at the sidelines, where they were meant to doing exercises. However, the teacher who had been covering them was currently escorting two boys, who’d managed to run head-first into each other, to the nurse’s office, and so they were currently being simultaneously apathetic, indolent, salacious and libidinous.

Whoever had decided to give the school swimming pool a glass front which was visible from the playing fields was worshiped as a minor god by much of the male population of the school, or at least the ones old enough, and inclined to find girls interesting. For one, they had single-handedly, in their pursuit of architectural aesthetics, managed to negate the work done in dividing the sexes when there was swimming, to avoid any possible problems with body issues imposed by social pressures.

With a synchronised splash, the five girls standing at the end of the pool dived in. At the other end, the previous set climbed out, dripping down onto the clean white tiles. One wrapped her arm around another, mouth moving in unheard laughter, and there were sighs from the male onlookers.

“I like the view,” Kensuke said, in a voice which was approaching sexual harassment merely in intonation, as he nudged Shinji in the ribs.

“I-I don’t know what you mean.”

“You cannot fool me!” declared Kensuke, with deliberate pomposity. “You, too, are looking for an answer to that eternal...”

“... well, since the 2060s...” Toja interjected, sitting on the other side of the boy.

“... eternal since the 2060s problem too, my friend. It has puzzled generations of men, driven them to madness... and stuff. But what is that problem, I hear you ask?”

Shinji squinted. “I feel you’re going to tell me.”

“Nazzadi or human! Which is hotter!”

“It’s a hard one,” a Nazzadi boy, his hair dyed white, said, as he leant back. “And if you say, ‘That’s what she said’, Ken, I will thump you.”

“Come on, Ala. Would I do...”

“Yes. And have.”

Shinji nodded. “It is true.”

“I hate you guys.”

“Don’t worry,” Enitan, the dark-skinned boy on the other side of Toja, said with a smirk. “We hate you too. But, back to the topic at hand,” he stroked his chin. “Difficult indeed. Humans are shorter, which is cuter...”

Toja snorted. “You only say that ‘cause you’re short and don’t want a girlfriend who’s taller than you. You know how much I’d have to bend down to kiss some of those people?” He paused. “Not that I’d mind, if they were hot, because that’s a sacrifice worth making, but still...”

“Ah, but we’re forgetting the big divide,” Ala pointed out. “More fat; yes or no? Nazzadi are thinner, but humans have bigger boobs, and are more curvy... which I just find...” he shook his head. “Well, look at Panary.” Gazes were indeed directed at the girl, her wet black hair tied back into a ponytail, as she stood at the end of the pool, waiting for her signal. “Sure, she might be tall and thin, but look! I mean, if I wanted someone tall, thin, muscled, and with no boobs, I’d go ask Dathan out.”

Enitan snorted. “Get ready to fight both Jony and Ferdina for him, then.”

“That wasn’t serioooous.”

“Even if he asked you out?”

“Yes! God, were you not listening to me? She’s gotta actually,” he made gestures in front of his chest, “be shaped like a girl, you know? That was the whole point of the comparison. Plus, you know, I’m a nazzada. So I know what my teeth are like. Like chisels, that’s what. And... well, that’s a real downside on a girl.”

There was collective male wincing from all but Shinji, who had tuned out the conversation a while ago. He couldn’t help but feel that the whole conversation was more than a little sordid. It was already a little dubious to stare; did they have to make commentary too? It made the whole thing rather uncomfortable. They really didn’t spend enough time around women... no, that didn’t make sense. It wasn’t as if all the other lessons were gender-segregated.

Shinji was of the rather smug opinion (which he would, of course, never mention to anyone) that he just had a healthier, which was to say, less objectifying, attitude to the fairer sex. Because when one is raised by two women, one of whom works for the FSB, one discovers that objectification is not strictly viable, unless one wants to have why it is wrong explained in detail.

Of course, that didn’t stop him staring over at the pool, too. Over at the pale figure, dark blue swimming costume a stark contrast to her chalk-coloured skin, who sat at the end of the pool, legs clutched up against her chest.

Rei Ayanami. Who was she, really? He didn’t know. Oh, they called the First Child, and sometimes, when they were talking to military people they referred to her as Invidia, but he didn’t know anything about her. He didn’t know where she lived, what she did in her free time, how she felt about having to pilot, what she was like as a person... in a purely professional sense, he hastened to reassure himself. Although, of course, she was very attractive, in a sort of special way; there was something about the way that snow-white skin just looked good on a girl, and from this viewpoint, he could see that she had an excellent figure. The thought had occurred that he would get to see her in a plug suit at some point in the very near future. It was a nice thought.

But of course, that wasn’t why he was interested in her. Honestly. This was a more professional (and the word felt strange to him) interest. Sure, it was possible that something more might be achievable, but that was only a distant prospect. This was just getting to know someone who, after all, also piloted a forty-metre giant robot; someone else who would understand the stress and the punishing training schedule they inflicted on him. He was... he was taking the initiative.

There were things, though, that he had picked up from the others in the class; they said she was asocial, cold, that she never chose to interact with people unless it was necessary and that she had been like this ever since she joined the class, back in first year. Some of the girls had apparently tried multiple times to get her more involved; he had heard mention of attempts by Hikary, Taly, that brown-haired bookish one who sat at the back... no success. Although it was admirable of them to try. She did look... isolated, sitting there, her legs raised up like a barrier to the world around her. Lonely, and yet there was something about her that left him ill at ease, a darker voice added. Maybe it was because she seemed to be able to make his father smile, when he couldn’t.

He really hoped it wasn’t some kind of unconscious bias against sidoci. He didn’t want to think of himself as the sort of person who had a problem with them.

Someone said his name. He switched his attention back to the conversation.

“Huh?”

There were mutual smirks all around. “I said,” Toja said, “I think Shinji agrees that xenomixed is best.”

He stared at them in confusion.

“You were staring,” the boy said.

“At Rei Ayanami,” Kensuke added, unnecessarily.

“N-n-no,” Shinji stammered.

Enitan rolled his eyes. “We’re not blind, you know. The world doesn’t shut down when you’re not paying attention.” He paused. “Well, if it does, it creates memories that make it the same as if it didn’t...”

“But what part were you staring at, hmm?” Toja interrupted, as he leant in. “Her breasts, perhaps?”

“I think you can definitely say she takes after her human side, if you know what I mean,” Kensuke said, waggling his eyebrows. “Or maybe her calves?”

“Or her thighs?”

“Like I said,” Shinji stammered, pushed off balance by both the interrogation, and the fact that they were leaning in from both sides, “that’s not it. Really.”

“... in that case,” someone muttered, “we should take away your man card. Because not staring at something like that...”

“Then what were you looking at, huh?” Toja said, drawing even closer.

“After all, we know you’re bad at lying,” the bespectacled boy added

“Your faces are too close,” muttered Shinji, through clenched teeth. “And... I was wondering why she’s always alone. Why she never does anything with anyone.”

“Because she’s... like that.”

“All sidoci are a bit like that. You can’t really get in their heads.”

“Always been like that.”

“Kinda creepy.”

“Don’t know why some of the girls keep on trying to get her to do stuff. She’s made it clear she’s not interested.”

“She’s Rei. That means she... she acts like Rei.”

The chorus of advice and answers was as useless as everything else had been.

“Plus, you know, by the way?” Toja nodded, face serious. “The whole ‘Why are you so lonely’, and wanting to be the one who does stuff with her? Doesn’t work. At all.”

“Which is a shame,” Kensuke added, “‘cause she’s a solid AA+ on my list of girls.”

“Well, yeah, you know there’s a study, right,” Enitan said, “and... I read it, and it turns out, that xenomixes all have that sex factor... don’t look at me like that, that’s what they called it, and the study found that, whether they’re amlati or sidoci, they’re like ten percent hotter than other people.”

“Yeah, because anything which uses the word ‘sex factor’ is totally a reliable study,” Ala said, rolling his eyes. “Mind you,” he said, eyes searching for a certain amlaty, and not finding her, “it’s true. They do just get the balance right, you know.”

Shinji tuned out again, only for the teacher to get back and start shouting that they should be on their feet, that this was ‘physical education’, not ‘sitting around education’, and other such witticisms beloved of the PE teacher. Who was wearing a lab coat, for some reason.

The boy blinked. Oh yeah, he thought, as he pulled himself to his feet. We were sitting around because he had to take people to the nurse’s office. Shinji had sort of forgotten that.

He also had a feeling he was forgetting something else. Oh well. It probably wasn’t that important.


~’/|\’~


“The time is 18:04. Shinji has mail. There is one new voice message from Dr Ritsuko Akagi. Begin voice message. ‘Shinji, did you remember to give Rei her card? It’s important. If you have already, thanks.’ End message. There is an attached file. Do you wish to add this to your reminders?”

Shinji groaned. That was it. Flicking through the attachment, he noted that, yes, Dr Akagi had sent him the girl’s address. He looked up at the wall, looking for a clock which wasn’t there; a pointless endeavour, since he did already know the time. Idly, he highlighted the physical address.

“Ari,” he instructed the muse, “get directions.”

The instructions flowed up onto the screen. Shinji frowned. She lived pretty high up, in one of the shallow domes feeding off from one of the older clusters. Maybe forty-five minutes in rush hour, as the estimate stated. He didn’t really want to do this.

But he probably had to. He had been asked, yesterday, and Rei would probably have problems without a valid card. And... well, he had wondered where she lived. This was an excuse, right? Well, not an excuse, it was a duty. In fact, he was helping her out by sacrificing his time, which made it acceptable.

Confirmed in his self-righteousness, which was still failing to drown out his nerves, Shinji headed off. Then he stepped back in, and left a note for Misato on the table, telling her where he had gone. And then decided that she’d probably knock it off when she dumped stuff on the table, or just not see it, and sent an email as well. Then he left, only to return to grab something to eat on the way; it wasn’t as if there was a paucity of junk food in the apartment. Places where she lived seemed to generate it in the same way that dishes left in the sink generated mould. In fact, there were some dishes in the sink, left to soak from the abortive cooking attempt the night before. Maybe if he just cleaned them first...

No. He wasn’t delaying, but he should just go and do it.

If only he could convince himself that the squirming in his stomach was a completely irrational response to an errand which would take him to a pretty girl’s house.


~’/|\’~


In retrospect, Shinji felt, as he stared around the dome, he probably should have started to get, if not suspicious, a little wary when the warning signs started to pop up, his muse alerting him that the entire dome was private property and that he would not be admitted unless he had a valid reason. Still, that had been within the bounds of possibility. The Geocity had similar warnings, although he hadn’t suspected them from a place like this, so high up. Likewise, if it was like that, then it would make sense that there wouldn’t be much traffic heading in from the larger domes in the cluster. Even the enhanced security at the dome access point was logical; it made sense that the place would be protected, if it was a private dome, although he hadn’t expected to see quite so many powered armours, or the slight nooks in the wall which, by his reckoning, concealed turrets. Still, he had passed the brain scans, the blood checks, and the phone-call down to the Geocity to check that he had a legitimate reason to be here, and he was into the dome where Rei Ayanami lived.

But it was so quiet in here. The only noise was the faint buzz of power cables, and the near silent movement of air from the life support units. Above, the top of the dome was sky-blue, the light strips imperfectly imitating natural sunlight, despite the fact that, outside, it was probably already notably evening. Shinji didn’t really know; he had never lived outside the regular twelve hour day-night cycle of an underground arcology, had not ever even been a surface resident, or one of the inhabitants of the very shallow domes, lit by transmitted sunlight from the surface. The place seemed hollow, empty, even more so than the Geocity, which was at least alive in its vastness. This dome was not; stark white buildings forming a circular canyon around the edges, looking down onto the smaller buildings in the centre, and the recreational area. If one could call this a recreational area, Shinji thought. It was maybe ten metres by ten metres, a small square of grass, with a single tree planted (or, from the looks of it, transplanted, given its age) in the centre.

Someone had hung a swing on the tree; a crude construct of two lengths of rope, and a plastic pseudowood plank. The brown-haired boy gave the swing a push, and watched as the pendular motion exhausted itself. He shivered, a motion which flowed into a retrieval of his PCPU from his pocket, to check the address on the map he had generated.

Where was everyone? He almost snorted, at the realisation of another horror film cliché. Where were the cats, too? If films taught you anything, it’s that when the cats, colonies of which were kept in every dome for their innate sensitivity to extra-normal entities as well as for more mundane, anti-pest issues, disappeared, something odd was happening. Maybe this whole thing was a trap, maybe it hadn’t been Dr Akagi at the dinner, but instead some sinister, evil shapeshifter, which stole the forms of its victims, and was merely luring him here to consume him too...

Shinji shook his head. He was being silly. Obviously, this was an Ashcroft owned-dome, which they leased out to younger employees, who’d still be at work at this time. He was being silly, and letting his imagination creep him out. He should be rational about this.

The problem was that his imagination was both very productive, and somewhat disobedient. And his rationality would have been pleased if it could have just seen someone else. Just for reassurance. No, he was being silly. This was just nerves from going around to an unfamiliar girl’s apartment. So what if it was quiet? That was a good thing in a residential dome, especially considering how lively the areas he had been through to get here had been. It was the change which was putting him off, not anything rational.

Rei’s apartment was one of the ones on the outer loop, the vertical wall of buildings that encircled the inner space, and which the access tunnel had led through. Naturally, things being as they were, she lived on the opposite side to the one which he had taken. Stepping up to the entrance to her block, the door sliding open as it detected the visitor ID they had given him at the checkpoint, Shinji glanced at the occupancy list, just to check that he was really at the right place.

Yes, there it was. ‘Flat 402: Ayanami, Rei’.

And that was it. All the other name spaces, blank. There were ten or so flats per floor on the list; the last one listed was 609. And of that, the only one occupied was 402.

Fortunately, the inside of the apartment building was clean, well lit, and in good condition. It was just as well. Shinji was beginning to get jumpy, and, to name a completely arbitrary example, if there had been a mysterious leaking stain on the ceiling, just above the entrance, he would probably have decided that enough was enough, and just given Rei the card tomorrow at school. Still, despite that, as he got into the lift, his finger hovered over the ‘400’ button for a few seconds, before he pressed it. And, it had to be said, the slight flicker in the light in the lift really did not help matters. Still, he arrived at his destination entirely safe.

“401... 403... huh?” Shinji was getting a little disturbed by now. There didn’t actually appear to be a room 402. This was... oh, wait. Yes, there it was. All the odd numbers ran along one side, all the even along another. That... that made a lot more sense. A short burst of nervous laughter escaped his lips, and echoed along the white-painted corridor. He really had to get his imagination under control. Stepping forwards, he swallowed, and knocked on the door.

“Hello?” he called out. Maybe there was a hidden microphone or something, because I can’t see a panel next to the door.

The door swung inwards silently. Through the gap, he could see a stark white hallway, a door at the other end, which suddenly seemed a lot longer than it... Shinji put one hand to his forehead, suddenly feeling lightheaded. He shook his head, eyes screwed shut, and looked up again, leaning into the door, which opened fully, a slight ‘clunk’ marking when the handle hit the wall. No, it was just a hallway. His stomach growled; most days, he would have eaten by now. It would probably make sense to grab something on the way back, he thought, before looking closer at the scene before him. There was a pair of shoes sitting just inside the door, next to an empty bin, and a pair of socks. That was somewhat reassuring.

“Hello? Rei? It’s... um, it’s me. Shinji Ikari.” He blinked, heavily. “The Third Child,” he ventured, in case she didn’t remember the name. She might not. It wasn’t as if they’d talked.

No response. Well, in that case he should probably find somewhere to leave it for her, and then leave. Should he shut the door properly behind him? She might be around at someone else’s house, and forgotten her key, but on the other hand, it wasn’t safe to leave the door open. Slipping off his shoes, he stepped inside, walking on tiptoes. He was just going to find a place to leave the card, and... well, maybe he was a little curious.

To his left, he poked his head into what turned out to be the kitchen. It was approaching Misatoan levels of untidiness. What it lacked in empty cans of beer, it made up for in discarded pizza boxes and food wrappings. Shinji frowned, the cook in him subtly disappointed that she appeared to live off fast-food and nanofactory meals, rather than actually cooking. It wasn’t that hard, despite the fact that everybody else seemed to find it too much effort. And this wasn’t a place to leave the card, certainly, not with all the junk around. He stepped back into the hallway, and pushed the door to the main room open.

His first thought was What’s with the colour scheme?

His second thought was Yuck, it’s messy in here. Are those... bloodstained bandages? And blood on the pillow, too?

His third thought was largely incoherent, because he realised that three of the four walls were not painted with a sort of black pattern. They were painted white, just like the fourth wall, to his left, which looked fresh. No, the patterning was writing.

It wasn’t scrawled, scribbled writing. No, it was the precise and methodical writing of someone who had taken a great deal of care over what they did. He couldn’t recognise all of the characters; there were the phonetic and phonemic symbols of Reformed English, though even then the words were not all familiar, there were kanji, hiragana and katakana, and there were sections in what looked like Greek; at the very least, he recognised the symbols from science lessons.

Uneasily, he was pretty sure that some of it was like the sorcery-related stuff in his father’s office. Those bits were typically labelling the diagrams and sketches, interruptions in the flow where turbulence rained, and characters wrapped and swirled around the new shapes, warped from their neat lines.

With a sick fascination, Shinji leant in. It really was very pretty, in an aesthetic sense, each linguistic transition seemingly chosen for some sense of elegance. He traced his finger along one line; the writing felt smooth, and slightly oily on the white paint. Some kind of pen, he suspected; a suspicion which was confirmed as his fingertip smudged the elegance. Hastily he withdrew it, leaving a grey streak on the sharply delineated divide.

Watching the sun rise he read, the Queen of Μάτια and the Blinded Prince wait for us at the end of everything. There was then an section he couldn’t understand, in an alphabet he couldn’t even recognise, before it resumed in kanji. It has always been an inevitability that unity and oblivion will conflict, for they are the same thing, and they are both born of the soul. Our ties and it switched back to RE, connect us all to one another. Our ties make us σκλάβοι and that is how it must be, for who would chose to be wild and free, beyond καλό και το κακό? It is the final decision we all must take. If we chose to be so, we cease to be us.

Shinji shivered, and with an act of will, looked away. Three of the four walls were like that. The last was freshly white. No, no it wasn’t, he realised. There were the first creeping signs of a new diagram snaking around onto the blank canvas, over by the bed.

The bed. Yes. The bed. Stop looking at the walls. Compared to them, the rest of the room was as messy as the kitchen. There were bloodstains on the bed, and the covers were yellowed. And these defects were made worse by how bare, and how bright the rest of the room was. If it had been ill-lit, these sins could have been concealed. Shinji sniffed. And there was a scent to the air, a scent of metal and blood and... something else.

The room stunk of LCL.

Gritting his teeth, that familiar smell rolling off his nostrils and onto his tongue, he stepped further into the room, walking on tiptoes. He swallowed his mouthful of saliva, which tasted as everything did, of LCL, and looked around for somewhere to leave the card. There. There was a chest of drawers over by the bed, which seemed to have a few personal possessions on it. That would be a good place. And then he could get out of here.

He reached into his bag, and took out the card, still sealed in the protective, anti-tamper wrapping that Dr Akagi had given it to him in, and, hand hovering, looked for the most obvious place. There were books, actual, physical books, not readers, stacked neatly. The dust-jackets were dull, pictureless; the font on the spines was that sharp golden writing that Shinji had always thought of as an academic typeface. There was a medicinal box with a scrapelock on it, merely labelled MEDICATION TYPE-4A. Peering through the transparent front, he could see layer after layer of syringe. Some of them had been used; he could tell from the red safety cap covering the tip, compared to the unused whites.

That was a good place, he decided, before frowning. He should probably leave a note, too, to explain it showing up. It would be rather odd for it to suddenly just appear. Leaning on the surface, he took a piece of paper from his bag, and wrote;

Rei,

I was told by Dr Akagi to bring you this. It’s a new Ashcroft Ident card; she said your old one had expired. I did knock, and call, but you didn’t answer, and the door was open. You might want to keep it closed.

I’m sorry if this is rude.


He paused, then continued, rather than signing it off immediately.

Good luck on the upcoming Synchronisation Test. I hope it goes well, and look forwards to training with you

Shinji Ikari


He reread the note. Yes, the ‘I’m sorry if this is rude bit’ was certainly in the wrong place. It looked like he was apologising for wishing her luck. He amended it to read, ‘I’m sorry if this is rude. to let myself in like this,’ and then put his pen back in his bag, which left the final thing on the chest of drawers. A pair of deactivated arglasses rested on their side. One of the sides hung uselessly, the hinge obviously broken; a weakpoint, compared to the composite-diamond display.

“Are these Ayanami’s?” Shinji said to himself, staring at his own brightly lit reflection in the surface. He couldn’t really see her wearing a model like this; something small and oval-shaped, maybe, or one of the circular full-eye ones, but not this older, and expensive model, which looked exactly like a pair of corrective lenses.

Actually, they looked like a very good quality model. They’d certainly still work, despite the broken frame...

Shinji fought with temptation for a moment, and lost.

The arglasses, despite the broken hinge, still fit as well as they would have normally, which was to say that they were perhaps a size or two too large. Reaching up, he felt around the frame until he found the activation button, and they turned opaque, the lens whiting out, the three rotated triangles of the Ashcroft Foundation showing exactly who had made them, and programmed their OS. Blinking, he noted the small black test in the bottom right of both lens.

Property of Gendo Ikari. Invalid Retina.

Frowning, he turned around, noting that the lenses had whited out again. What was Rei Ayanami doing with a pair of his father’s arglasses?

Oh, wait, no. They weren’t opaque anymore; he could see the way they highlighted objects in the room in red and green. No, the white opacity directly in front of him, almost toe to toe, was a dripping wet, naked Rei Ayanami, a white towel draped over her shoulders. She was staring at him

The next few seconds were... confused.

There was certainly a bit when Rei reached out and tried to take the glasses back.

There was certainly a bit when Shinji instinctively recoiled, and screamed in a manner not dissimilar to a little girl, before bouncing off the furniture and straight back into Rei.

There was most certainly a bit where her knee ended up going into his crotch as they fell together. Because that bit hurt.

But no matter what happened, it ended with the drenched Rei on her back on the ground, her hair spread around her like a bridal veil, Shinji leaning on top of her, one hand on something rather warm and one on the cold floor, and one pair of blue eyes locked on one grey pair.

The two stared at each other, unmoving.

Shinji mental processes were largely incoherent with terror at this point, because he’d just been caught in someone’s house and they’re her glasses andohGodshe’s naked and I’montopof her... Oh, and he was in pain, which was not helping with matters,

Motion still failed to occur.

“Why are you not moving?” Rei asked, her tone no different than she might use if someone were blocking her way at school.

With a yelp, Shinji recoiled up, as he realised that the wet warmness beneath his left hand was her breast. His motion carried him back into the wall, both hands raised in an instinctive protective gesture. What had just happened? What did he think he had been doing? Oh, why hadn’t he moved earlier?

Rei lay there, arms still spread, her only movement to tilt her head towards him. With a horribly guilty feeling, the boy could see the pink creep over her right breast, in a rough hand-shape; paler than it would be in a human, because her skin was actually pigmented white, but still there. And still those black pupils stared at him, the only real contrast on a body of whites and greys, with only hints of pink around her eyes, lips, and... down below.

“Do not smudge the wall,” she said. With a second yelp, Shinji sprung away from the wall, the black markings on the back of his white shirt and the smudges on the wall proof that the instruction had come too late, only to knock back into the chest of drawers.

With a series of thuds, the pile of books and the box of syringes cascaded off, onto the bare floor.

“Sorry!” gasped Shinji through clenched teeth, face screwed up into a mask of contrition. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry sorry sorry,” he sucked in a breath, “really really sorry.”

Slowly, her unclad state apparently unimportant to her, Rei pulled herself to her feet. Stepping up to Shinji, still trailing water in a path he could now see led back through another door in the room, she bent over, to pick up the sealed medical box, and place it back on the chest of drawers. Next to it, she placed the arglasses, fingers reaching around the edge to turn them back off.

“Pick up the books,” she instructed him. “My hands are wet.”

Shinji nodded frantically, realised that the act of looking down might be misinterpreted, and tried to find a safe place in the room to look. This was remarkably hard. Eventually, he settled his gaze on the white wall, over by the head of the bed. “Okay, right away,” he babbled. “I’m really sorry, by the way. Sorry. Um. Sorry.”

The girl ignored him, as, out of the corner of his eye, he saw her bend down again, to pick up the towel phew, and wrap it around her hair, which hung down to her shoulders when wet, suddenly a lot longer, and making her look peculiarly un-Rei like to him.

The boy crouched, and started picking up the books; thick, heavy tomes. German Poetry 1910-1925, Volume II, he read. The Pnakotic Manuscripts: Vol. IV. The Pnakotic Manuscripts: Vol. V. Die Verborgenen Geheimnisse: Die Grundlagen der arkanen Technologie. Shinji frowned. He only knew a little bit of German, a necessity when living with a sorceress, because the Lorenzian School made use of it, and so he had been expected to know enough to know what not to touch, but he was pretty sure that this was one of the foundational books of modern arcane physics. Straightening out its dust jacket, he glanced at the pages it had landed open at.

There was a diagram taking up one page, with that certain quality which suggested it had originally been hand-drawn. It was... odd; he squinted, trying to understand exactly what he was looking at. It looked vaguely like a mesh of cogs, but some of the cogs were sharing teeth with other cogs, intermeshing and yet discrete and unconnected, depending on how he looked at it. The mass of text on the other page, printed in a very small font... well, he could maybe understand one word in every ten. He suspected that even if it had been in English, Japanese or Nazzadi, he wouldn’t have got much more than one in three.

And then there were the annotations. In the same hand as the writing on the walls. Some entire sections had been crossed out in red, and replacement text crammed into the margins.

Shinji didn’t dare look any further, because this looked like something extra-normal related, or at the very least sorcerous, and when living with a sorceress, he had had it drummed into his head that you do not read books lying around which look like that. Instead, he put it back on the pile, and glanced over to see a Rei Ayanami, now, mercifully, at least in a bra and wearing underwear, staring at him, hair still wrapped up in the towel. It would probably have helped more if the undergarments hadn’t been white, skin-coloured for her, and she hadn’t still been wet, which was already inducing translucency.

“What is it?” she asked.

Shinji stared over at the safe wall again. “Um... uh.” He swallowed, tasting the scent of the LCL in the air. “I... uh, that is, yesterday Dr Akagi asked me... that is, told me... um, asked me to give you this new Ident Card but I forgot at school. So I came around. And...” he trailed off.

Rei moved in front of his safe line of vision, to sit down on the bed. He shifted his gaze to the floor, noting the trails of wet footprints that crisscrossed the room. That, and the large damp patch where she had fallen. He could feel the dampness... the warm dampness on his clothing.

“I had an examination with Dr Akagi yesterday,” Rei said, from somewhere outside his line of vision. “Why did she not give it to me then?”

“I-I-I guess she forgot,” Shinji hazarded.

“Forgot?” Rei asked, her tone dead.

“Probably.” Shinji swallowed. “And then... um, I knocked, and the door was open, and I called but you didn’t answer so I came in and I thought you might be out or having dinner with neighbours and I left you a note and it was with the card which I put on top of the white box thing,” he sucked in a much-needed breath, “um... and I’m sorry.” He swept his eyes onto the floor around his feet. Where was it? It had been there, and then the box had fallen off... had been knocked off.

“I have no neighbours.” She paused. “I was in the bath,” she said, the words somehow utterly disconnected from the previous sentence.

“Oh... um.” Yes, that made sense. He’d have heard a shower, after all, but... yes, head under water, it made sense. Oh, there it was. He stooped down, and picked up the card, still sealed in its packaging, and the slightly damp note. Then, eyes squinting, biting his lip, he walked over to Rei, staring at the towel wrapped around her hair, which seemed the safest place, and thrust both in front of him. “So here they are!” he said, in a voice which seemed far too loud in this quiet place.

Silently, Rei took them from him, and then stood up, stepping around him, to put them back on the chest of drawers, on top of the pile of books.

“So...I’ll be off then,” he added, rapidly. “Silently... I mean, I’m sorry for everything.”

There was the sound of a lid being removed from a pen. “Why?” Rei asked.

“I didn’t ask before I came in. I should have... just put it through the door or something,” Shinji said, backing away towards the door, arms briefly pinwheeling as he almost slipped on a discarded shirt, leaving a footprint in the middle of it. “And... um, I just... never mind.”

There was no response. The pale girl was hunched up against the wall, black pen in hand, correcting the damage done to the markings on the wall by his clumsiness. Slowly, the towel slithered down off her head, letting her damp hair hang loose over her face. She didn’t seem to care.

“Sorry again,” Shinji said, by means of farewell, as he closed the door slowly. His steps out of the flat were careful, measured.

Then he slumped down against the wall in the corridor, fist in mouth, and started whimpering, as all the suppressed nervous tension unleashed itself.

What the hell just happened?


~’/|\’~
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~’/|\’~


The process of rationalisation had already begun by the time that Shinji got home.

Well... she might have the Nazzadi attitude to nudity, he thought. Yeah, that makes sense. I’m just being insensitive by objecting to it. I should try to be more open-minded. And I was distracted and didn’t hear her... no wonder I freaked out, just a little bit well, more than a little bit, he had to admit, when I saw her behind me like that.

Now... how to deal with the writing on the walls and the fact that she’s reading arcane texts?


It was fighting an uphill battle.

Misato was seated at the table, still in her uniform, poring over printed out documents and dataslates alike. Her Eyes were twitching at unseen images, scanning from left to right. An empty plate, the remains of one of the meals that Shinji had prepared and left in the fridge, was on her left, a pair of grease-covered chopsticks resting on top.

With a small noise, the Major made a few small notes in the margin of one dataslate, and then returned to work, her eyes flicking across nothingness. She blinked once, and then her eyes focussed on the boy in front of her. She seemed tired as she rubbed her eyes.

“Heya, Shinji,” Misato said, with a weak smile. “I got the note, by the way, and the email.”

“Good.”

“Did you give her the card?”

Shinji swallowed, and nodded. “Uh huh.”

Misato grinned wider. “You know, it was pretty silly of you to forget to do it at school, huh? Guess you wanted to have an excuse to go around to her house early?”

The boy shook his head mutely. Misato began to respond, but then focussed, properly focussed on his expression.

“What’s wrong?” she asked, more gently.

“Did you know she reads arcane books?” he blurted out.

Misato frowned, looking for one of the documents in front of her. “Yes... here it is... yes. It’s been tagged to her file; she’s been allowed access to the censored versions of... well, there’s a long list here.” She glanced back up at Shinji, her face warm. “It probably was quite disturbing to find it out that way.”

“And that she writes on the walls?” The boy’s tone was almost pleading, although he didn’t know which way he preferred it. That they did not know about it, and Rei was secretly disturbed, or they did, and they had deemed it acceptable.

Misato nodded once, her face stony. “I’ve seen the pictures. That... that must have been a shock. If it helps, the psychiatrists say that it’s harmless, and she’s never shown any other harmful tendencies, violent or otherwise. And, of course... I was a little disturbed when I first saw the pictures, but Ritsuko pointed out that she can’t, physically, do sorcery. She’s a White. They’re parapsychics so they can’t be sorcerers. It’s safe.” Standing up, she put one arm around Shinji’s shoulders, slightly awkwardly. “We probably should have thought it through better, or at least got you to interact before now, huh?”

“I’m... I’m sorry. It’s... I should have given it to her at school,” Shinji explained, not moving closer to the one-armed hug, but not recoiling, either.

“We’re all flawed, Shinji,” Misato said, staring at him. “We all forget stuff.” She paused. “And how did you get all the black stuff on your back?” she asked, as glanced around his shoulder.

He looked back. “Oh... um, I backed into a wall, and it was dirty.”

“You might want to get changed, then... probably should, anyway. I think the bathroom’s free, if you want a shower... I cleaned it up.” At Shinji’s confused expression, she wrinkled her nose. “Pen-Pen was sick. And you smell of sweat... did you have sports today?”

The boy frowned. “Can birds even be sick?” he asked, ignoring the comment at his personal odour.

“Evidently, this one can,” the woman said drily.

And, indeed, the bathroom smelt slightly of sick, and even more of the... concoction that Misato had brewed up yesterday, even when the rest of the apartment had largely been ventilated. Shinji could make some educated reasons for exactly why the albino penguin had been sick, but he was not going to, after the revelations at the meal.

Although it seemed that Pen-Pen was not as smart as some people would have had him believe, if he had willingly consumed that substance; Shinji hesitated to call it food.

Being very careful to lock the door behind him, after ensuring that the room was penguin-less, Shinji stripped off, running the shower to let it warm up as he folded up his trousers, and saw the full state of the shirt. Yes, the white back was completely covered in the smudged black pen markings. If he’d been wearing the coat from the uniform, the markings wouldn’t have been noticeable, but he’d have to have been an idiot to wear his uniform like that, out of school hours, up to such a high elevation. Academy students had a certain reputation which worked against them in poorer areas, as a bunch of rich, stuck-up, genofixed children of Ashcroft technocrats. Shinji would like to try to argue that wasn’t the case, but as he objectively filled three of the four criteria by any standards, he was not the best representative for their case.

He suddenly realised why Toja must be so insistent at not following the school uniform policy. Hadn’t he said that he lived in one of the surface arcologies? It must be unpleasant for him, having to make that commute every day.

Checking the temperature with his hand, he withdrew it instantly, and added more cold to the blend, until it wasn’t actively painful. Stepping under the shower, he let the warm water roll down his head, darkening his hair which hung limp over his face, running in rivulets down his shoulders and over the small of his back, the warm feel of her breast under his hand.

Shinji looked down. “Damn it,” he muttered. He shouldn’t be turned on by that; he should be disturbed. And yet he had most physical evidence that he was.

That went horrifically, horribly, inutterably wrong, was Shinji’s foremost conclusion from that little escapade.


~’/|\’~


29th September, 2091

Rei was not at school on Tuesday. Shinji considered this a blessing; it might be better to get the explanations and more apologies out, before things could fester, but he didn’t want to confront her at all. If he could never see her again, it would have been perfectly acceptable to him in his current mindset. Neither was she there on Wednesday morning, which was a relief for Shinji, and he spent the classes feeling rather more cheerful than he might otherwise have been. This state of affairs was only aided by Toja’s sense of impending doom, and wailed protests of ‘What did I do to deserve a bunch of nine-year girls crushing on me?’ He and Kensuke did do their best to ‘reassure’ him by pointing out that he could apply for a different Social Work Programme for the Spring Term, which only bought further groans.

However, such a thing could never last, for the Unit 00 Synchronisation Test was scheduled for Wednesday afternoon, when he had to be down in the Geocity. And when Rei Ayanami stepped into his otherwise-empty lift, both of them on their way down to the areas assigned to the Evangelion Group, his luck ran out.

The trip down was filled with awkward silence, the two figures in the black overcoats of the Academy standing at opposite corners of the box. Perhaps foolishly, the boy tried to break the quiet.

“I’m... I’m really sorry for Monday,” he said. “I-I-I just want you to know, it was all an accident, especially the... the touching.” He blushed bright red, as he realised just how that comment sounded.

She did not turn to look at him. “You have already expressed such sentiments.”

“Yes... well, I want you to know that I’m sorry.”

“Why are you sorry?”

Shinji screwed up his eyes. “Because it was all my fault... and...” he trailed off.

“Will your sorrow change anything?”

“... no, but...”

“Then why be sorry?”

“Because I’d be a bad person if I didn’t!” he snapped, before instinctively recoiling. “Oh... I’m sorry.”

“You have already expressed that sentiment. Today.”

Shinji fell paused, and tried to change the subject. “I know you’re going to be trying the reactivation experiment today,” he said.

Rei said nothing, still not making eye contact with him.

“I hope it’s successful this time,” he added.

The silence at her end of the conversation continued.

“Aren’t you... scared of getting into Unit 00 again?” he asked. “I would be. Terrified. I’m scared of Unit 01 as it is, and nothing that bad... as bad as what happened to you, has happened to me in it.”

“Why?” The word was soft.

“Excuse me?”

A pause. Then, “Why should I be scared of Unit 00?”

“Because... um... well, I saw how injured you were on that first day. Aren’t you scared that it will happen again?”

“No.” He saw her eyelashes flicker up and down, as she blinked slowly. “Fear would increase the chance of a synchronicity accident. So I am not scared.”

The boy couldn’t help but marvel at the self-control shown there. And be a little scared at the fact that she had just said that fear could cause synchronisation accidents, of course. Because if that was true, and considering his first time... Shinji suddenly got the feeling that there was a universe’s worth of razor blades just a hair’s breadth from his skin, which were just waiting to fall.

With a feeling of deceleration, and a ping, the lift came to a halt, far down in the guts of the Geocity. The area here was one of the vast hallways, the ones which an Evangelion could probably crawl through. Shinji mentally paused. In fact, that was almost certainly their purpose; transporting the things around. Stepping out of the lift, he followed Rei, the sounds of their footsteps utterly lost in the immensity of the space, having to job every few steps to keep up. She walked quickly.

And for once, Rei initiated the conversation.

“You are Representative Ikari’s son,” she said, her tone not a question.

Shinji nodded. “Yes.”

“You must trust your father’s work.”

The boy blinked heavily. “Why?” he retorted. “He never gives me any reason to trust him! He never cares; only uses me! I certainly won’t trust him because he happens to be related to me!”

Rei Ayanami’s footsteps ceased, and she turned, no, flowed around, suddenly facing him. “Do not speak about Representative Ikari that way,” she said, the corners of her eyes narrowing fractionally.

“Why not? He’s my fath...”

The blow was not so much a slap as a full-on punch, her knuckles impacting with the soft tissue of his cheek. Blinking hard, mouth hanging open, Shinji slowly raised his hand to his face. He hadn’t even seen her move. And that really hurt. Fall on her when she was naked; no response. Make negative comments about his own, useless, child-soldier-using father, and...

“Mnghui,” he managed, to the figure that was already striding off. “Oww. Um... I’m sorry?”

There was no response from the pale girl.


~’/|\’~


Compared to the first activation test, the air in the control centre was buzzing with nervous tension. Only Gendo Ikari, alone, seemed proof against the concern, his gloved hands folded behind his back.

“Inform me when the Operators are prepared,” he ordered Dr Akagi, not looking her way.

“Yes,” she nodded. Inwardly, she winced. The Operators... well, they had done their best to reassure the heavily cyberised computer technicians, but, to be honest, they were scared. Two of them had died in the last test; three more were in a vegetative state. Only one of the ones who had not disconnected before the Evangelion had broken through their defence barriers was back on duty, and, for obvious reasons, he was not permitted to assist today. Running one hand down her spine, she shook her head slightly. The Operators all seemed so young to her. Not as young as the girl in the Evangelion, though.

Ritsuko resumed her preparatory work. The conditions for this test were quite unlike the ones which had prevailed last time. While before it may have been merely been secured to the wall, this time it was sunk to its waist in a variant of the dark RCL fluid used in the Evangelion bays. This time, if it tried to break free, it would be treated as Dante’s Satan, its legs immobilised in flash-frozen memomorph. Its arms were spread out wide, to minimise the leverage it could gain, but they were under no illusions that it would stop the beast. Not now. No, they would begin with the restraint fluid, and move up to, should it prove insufficient, detonating the shaped charges placed on the Units limbs, to sever key muscles.

The Representative opened a communications channel to the white Evangelion.

“Rei.”

A quiet response. “Yes, Representative Ikari.”

“We will begin by inserting the LCL. Are you prepared?”

“Yes. There will be no synchronicity accident this time. It is necessary that I successfully synchronise with Unit 00, therefore I will.”

“Good.” He closed the connection. “Flood the plug,” he ordered. “Monitor her mental state at all times, even before the experiment begins. If there are any signs of recurrence, abort immediately.”

“Yes sir.”

Shinji was standing away from the workfloor, on the raised observer’s platform. Beside him, Misato stood, her face pensive, a cup of coffee clutched in her hand. She took a long, slow sip, staring intently at the screen. Although this was being carried out in one of the test chambers, it wasn’t being carried out in the same test chamber as the one which the room overlooked. What if the Evangelion had gone for the exposed window, it had been asked? What if it had turned on its surroundings, rather than itself?

The consequences would have been catastrophic.

“We should never think of the Evangelion as just another war machine,” Misato said to herself, softly, almost unheard of over the babble. “It’s not. I’ve seen Engels out of control. But last time... this was a wholly different thing.” She snorted. “Or maybe an unholy different thing.”

Shinji narrowed his eyes at her. “Thanks a lot for your reassurance,” he said, his tone bitter. “Given that, you know, we’re watching someone who’s already lost control once before...” he paused, “... and come to think of it, so have I!”

“No, that’s what I mean,” Misato said, raising her voice. “The rampant Engels... they acted like Unit 01 did. They attacked things... anything that wasn’t from their Species... that’s a base-organism, by the way, in the same way that all the Evangelions use the same base. But Unit 00... it hurt itself. It was really trying to get the Entry Plug out.”

“Yes, my father really did a wonderful job when he... did whatever he does with them, I’m not quite sure,” said Shinji, his rousing condemnation somewhat ruined by the uncertainty at the end. “Why should I trust his work, when I don’t even know what they are or what he did?” he added to himself, staring down at the man. A thought struck him.

“What?” asked Misato, who had missed the last part.

“When did my father start wearing gloves?” he asked.

Misato leant against the railing, and took another drink. “The Unit 00 start-up test,” she explained. “The Evangelion... it tried to crush its own entry plug. Partially succeeded, too.”

“But... the Entry Plug is covered in armour,” Shinji protested.

“Yes.” The word was said with a dreadful finality.

“You mean...”

“It slammed into the wall until it managed to crack the plating enough to get a finger under it, and then it started ripping its own back apart,” Misato said, a distant look in her eyes. “It just managed to expose the plug, and crush the end, when it finally deactivated. And then it fell over backwards, because its knees didn’t lock up.” She shook her head, staring at the boy. “Your father was the first one down, with the rescue team. He managed to get up onto the Evangelion, crawled out onto the plug and levered it open, around one of the tears. His hands... they got horribly cut up on the edges, and his back too, when he crawled through. And the Evangelion was bleeding too, so the blood got into the wounds, and... well, they managed to save his hands. Or I heard he did, managed to pull out some sorcery to cleanse the wounds.” Misato took a sip. “There’s a lot of tales about him. I’m sure he has people spread some of them, because I can’t believe that they’re all true.”

“He... did all that?” Shinji asked, feeling slightly numb. “But wasn’t that only a few days...”

“Before Asherah showed up, yes. Everything that first day, he was doing it on just enough painkillers to allow him to think clearly.”

Shinji leant his chin on his arms, resting on the balcony, and stared again at his father.

The bearded man spoke. “We’re going to try reactivating Unit 00,” he ordered. “Start the first connection.”

“Connect the external power supply.”

“Voltage has passed the critical point.”

“Understood,” reported Penny Epouvantable, the red-haired civilian Operator who was heading up this dive. “Subject has passed Phase II. We’re getting a stable EFCS Type-1 Attunement. Animaneural waveform is... stable.”

“Start Phase III,” ordered Dr Akagi, her stomach a tight little ball of acid and fear.

“Plug is set to level 2. Beginning test sequence.”

“LITAN feed is clear... reports from in-Unit correlate with external feeds. Maintaining monitoring.”

“The series of pulses and harmonics are normal.”

“Feeding external power to non-vital systems. Right arm... left arm... all limbs are powered.”

“Releasing limited motor controls. D-Brakes are operating at full capacity.”

There was a terrible moment of silence, as everyone’s eyes were locked on the bar. Rising, rising, falling, rising, nearing the point of absolute borderline.

With an almost cheerful bleep, the bar passed the given value.

“Stable connection formed!” the message came from the Operators.

There was a pause, a moment of silence.

And then everyone relaxed, as the bar did not retreat.

“Unit 00 has activated.”

A window opened from in Unit, to display Rei’s face, an even paler heart shape within the cowl. “Activation is successful,” she announced. “I am waiting for your permission to begin the interlocking test.”

“Roger. Go ahead, Test Pilot Ayanami.”

Shaking her head slightly, an adrenaline-smile in her exhausted face, Ritsuko made her way up to the observation balcony.

“Congratulations,” the Major said, with a professional nod, and then Misato smiled. “Well, you did it, Rits.”

“Well... we’ll see, but it looks hopeful. The tests are probably going to go on for...” Ritsuko tapped a button on her PCPU, to bring up the schedule, “... well, let’s put it this way, I’m not getting any sleep tonight, and Shinji, you won’t be seeing Rei at school tomorrow.” The blond sighed. “You can go home... and you too, Misato. It’s just, as you’d put it, ‘boring technical stuff’, and as I’d put it, ‘vital test work to ensure that pilot synchronisation is calibrated correctly’.”

“I thought you just dumped people in the Eva and hoped for the best,” said Shinji, a slightly bitter note in his voice. He couldn’t have stopped himself for free access to every IP database on the pla... okay, he could have stopped himself for that. But he couldn’t have stopped himself for some very large, but not too large, prize.

Ritsuko did not snap back. It would have been easier had she done so. “It’s okay, Shinji,” she said, in a quiet, almost dead voice. “We can just delete all your pilot data we spent weeks building up, and let you go in a default, guessed setting every time, because we got lucky with you on the first time. And then you’ll be lucky if you only get hurt as badly as Pilot Ayanami did on the activation test on the sixteenth of August. We can do that, if you like.”

Shinji winced. “Sorry,” he said, already cringing inside. “I didn’t think...”

“No,” the scientist said. “You didn’t. Off you go. Some of us have work to do.”

“Lay off him, Rits.” Misato’s words were calm, controlled, and quiet. “That’s not needed.”

The scientist blinked. “I’m sorry,” she said, shaking her head. “I’m just... I’m just relieved that this didn’t go wrong like last time. And still might go wrong.” She sighed. “I sometimes forget that you’re not like Rei,” she explained. “You’re not used to it. This. Everything. And you have the right to object.”

Shinji nodded silently.

“But... yes, you should both get some rest,” she said in a quieter voice. “Someone might as well, and this place is going to be humming with stressed-out scientists, engineers and technicians for the next... God knows how long. Aeon, probably. So... like usual, but even more stress.”


~’/|\’~


30th September, 2091

Shinji was shaken awake, by a Misato with a jacket thrown on over her nightclothes. “Shinji, wake up!” she shouted at him, her face deadly serious. “Get out of bed now!”

The boy squinted in the light. “Gah.” He shook his head. “What’s happening?” he asked, sitting up, as Misato yanked off his covers, dumping an armful of clothes onto his lap. “What time is it?”

“Get up, get dressed. We’re needed down in the Geocity now. Emergency call. And it’s about half-three in the morning.”

With a groan he swung his legs out of bed. “Why?” He blinked, as something struck him. “Did something go wrong with Rei’s test?”

Misato shook her tousled hair. “No. But they’ve found Harbinger-5. Or rather, it’s shown up. In Eastern Europe.”

Shinji was suddenly wide awake, and fumbling at his top. “Is it... coming this way?” he asked. “And... um, can you look away, please?”

“Yes and yes,” Misato said, turning around to leave the room, to get dressed properly herself. “There’s security in the living room, and they’ve put some coffee on. We can drink it in the IFV, right?” she added, a slight lilt in her voice.

Shinji couldn’t help but smile slightly. It was a weak, trembling and rather tired expression, true, but a smile nonetheless.


~’/|\’~


Above, the night sky was filled with stars. They did not twinkle, and they did not shine; they were cold, distant points of light. If there were children’s tales told of these stars, they were the kind which were censored and bowdlerised, all to keep from infant minds from the terrible truths of the cosmos. The darkness of the void reached from horizon to horizon with no hint of dawn; terrible, unreachable, anathematical to light, which died in its Stygian majesty.

And the land below was the same. Black, glassy crystal covered every surface, was every surface. The stars below reflected the stars above, distorted and warped them until not one familiar constellation could be seen, and an onlooker could not tell what was up, and what was down.

But, slowly, the eyes adjusted to the darkness, to the lack of contrast, to the dead beauty of this place. And that was when the true horror crept in. Because in among the monoliths of black crystal, resplendent in their five-fold symmetry, the other shapes could be seen. Buildings of opaque black crystal. Trees of black crystal which blossomed into leaves of black crystal. The scattered chess-pieces of the army of the gods, all without White to oppose them. The eye adjusted, and then it did not believe, for to believe that this alien landscape was one which had so recently been just another battlefield in the Aeon War was too much to accept.

And in the precise centre of this darkness, something hung. It was only visible through omission, for it did not reflect, and it did not glisten and gleam and shimmer in the cold light of the stars. Slowly it span, as if observing what it had wrought here. There were ten faces to this being; ten vast conguent kites that interlocked to form one pentagonal trapezohedron.

Slowly it span. All too slowly.

It was here.

It was time.


~’/|\’~
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Thank you for the reply.My understanding of physics goes only as far as university foundation levels.I'm a psychology student just starting on statistics. Anyway I'm trying to do some worldbuilding and the r-state concept sounds like something I'd want to adopt.Same goes with the idea of zones which comes from Vernor Vinge's Fire Upon the Deep which is something I have heard of but cannot read yet. Though perhaps I'd count that as more along the lines of science fantasy or soft science fiction. I haven't toched any of the Revelation Space series but plan to.

I'm more a fan of the cyberpunk of Masamune Shirow.

Anyway do you know of any sources on the Net I can refer to that can give me a basic working knowledge of physics to craft a plausible system like the r-state idea of yours?
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I do have one quick question. Was there any intended hidden significance by giving the name Ouranos to the LITAN system of the EVAs? Ouranos, of course, being the original Greek name for the god Uranus... which literally means "sky" or "heavens".
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Crayz9000 wrote:I do have one quick question. Was there any intended hidden significance by giving the name Ouranos to the LITAN system of the EVAs? Ouranos, of course, being the original Greek name for the god Uranus... which literally means "sky" or "heavens".
Yes, actually. Although that's more to do with its origins. It's a LITAN; a Limited Information Tactical Analysis Network. And, since it's called Ouranos, that's a sign that it's the "father" (ie, a predecessor technology) to the TITANs, the Total Information Tactical Analysis Networks (and, naturally, they chose to play it up by naming each TITAN after a Titan). Basically... the original Project Evangelion was exceptionally productive for technological development, but less good at actually making them usable/affordable. Project Achtzig, lead by our dear Dr Sylveste, has about the same relationship to the MAGI as the Engels do to the Evangelions.
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Chapter 10

Rei 02, In Ice And Dust / and to the level of his hollow ear, leaning with parted lips

EVANGELION



~’/|\’~


But if some mind very different from ours were to look upon some property of some curved line as we do on the evenness of a straight line, he would not recognize as such the evenness of a straight line; nor would he arrange the elements of his geometry according to that very different system, and would investigate quite other relationships as I have suggested in my notes.

We fashion our geometry on the properties of a straight line because that seems to us to be the simplest of all. But really all lines that are continuous and of a uniform nature are just as simple as one another. Another kind of mind which might form an equally clear mental perception of some property of any one of these curves, as we do of the congruence of a straight line, might believe these curves to be the simplest of all, and from that property of these curves build up the elements of a very different geometry, referring all other curves to that one, just as we compare them to a straight line. Indeed, these minds, if they noticed and formed an extremely clear perception of some property of, say, the parabola, would not seek, as our geometers do, to
rectify the parabola, they would endeavour, if one may coin the expression, to parabolify the straight line.

Ruđer Bošković


~’/|\’~


The hands of the rather old, and exceptionally expensive clock ticked their way close to half-past nine, accompanied by the clink of cutlery. The restaurant was rather emptier than might have been expected, though, even for this time on a Thursday. In fact, only one table was filled, right in the centre, under the chandelier.

And even if this hadn’t been done for security reasons, the party eating now could have afforded to have booked the entire restaurant, which was one of the most expensive in Chicago-2, the capital of the New Earth Government. And had done so.

It was an annoyance to the reddish-blond girl sitting on one side of the table that the meal was somewhat hindered by the fact that one arm was in a cast.

“... and the most annoying thing about it,” Asuka Langely Soryu said, a slight scowl marring her features, “was that I had previously told them that they were over-stressing the right arm.” A wry grin twisted her features. “It’s only thanks to me that I noticed that, and so wasn’t using that arm to the full. Otherwise, it might have actually damaged Unit 02. You know, rather than merely lingering sympathetic pain causing me to slip as I climbed out of the plug.” The scowl returned. “And it shouldn’t have been an issue, if they’d allowed me to use my proper plug suit.”

The man looked puzzled. “I’m sorry... what? Not using a proper plug suit?”

“There’s a lighter, thinner one they use for PR and component testing,” Asuka explained. “It’s an older model. It gives a slightly higher average synch ratio, but it’s slippery, and totally unsuitable for real combat. It doesn’t even act to absorb an impact.” She frowned. “Plus, you feel like you’re almost naked in it.”

The older man nodded sympathetically, his rust-coloured hair now shot through with hints of grey at the temples. “I see,” Dr Calvin Sylveste, head of the Achtzig Group, and formerly of the original Evangelion Project, said. He sighed. “Such sloppiness from your technical team is not easily forgivable.”

Asuka rolled her eyes. “Oh, believe me, I don’t intend to.”

“Good.”

Cutlery clinked again, in the silence.

“Still,” the man said, “at least it gives them an opportunity to run a full maintenance cycle on the Unit.” He smiled, over the top of a still-immaculately trimmed beard. “And you’ll just have to spend time with your old Uncle Cal while the medichines knit everything back together.”

The girl smiled. “It is an ill wind...” she said. She shook her head. “I’m sorry, Uncle, I’ve been talking about myself pretty much since I arrived. And...” she glanced at him, “it’s not like you don’t hear what I’ve been doing from COEUS, anyway.” She shifted slightly, resting her injured arm on her lap, and her chin on her other palm. “You know your work at Achtzig is just as interesting as anything I get up to.”

“There’s never a need for false modesty, Asuka,” the man remarked.

“Yes, I know, but people seem to expect it for some reason.”

“Oh, very much.” The man took a sip of wine. “We’ve been doing fascinating work on the animaneural boundary. Specifically what happens if you throw cybernetics, sorcery, and high end AI systems into the mix.”

“But of course.” Asuka smirked. “It’s best if you can get your hobbies into the work.”

“Hah! Yes! There’s nothing sacred about the mind, body or the soul as they stand.”

“‘Everything can always be improved; perfection is asymptotic ’,” the reddish-blond girl replied, quoting something that he had told her many times, both back when he had been looking after her, and later, once she had joined the ‘Children’ Test Pilot programme, on his frequent visits. As a result, she had known what ‘asymptotic’ had meant, when she was five.

But then again, she was a prodigy; something that Calvin Sylveste had only encouraged.

“Exactly. We’ve begun a,” he reflexively glanced around, “... well, we’ve started work on the next generation of TITANs.”

“Ah!” Asuka exclaimed, as she sipped at the soup.

“Hot?”

“Well... yes, but that must have been what you were hinting about last time we talked! You were being rather secretive about what you were doing then.”

“Exactly! It wasn’t sure then, but now I’m certain we’ve got stable black-box seed-cultures for the AIs. Fourteen of them. If we have similar wastage rates as last time, we should have nine or ten finalised products.”

“That’s really awesome!”

Calvin looked smug. “It is, isn’t it?”

Asuka paused, and, putting on her prettiest smile, began to...

“Asuka, you don’t need to do that,” the older man said, running his hand through his rust-coloured hair.

Her lips twisted into a miniscule pout, which, to her annoyance, produced a smile on his face, before she continued. “Do what, Uncle?” she asked, innocently.

He fixed her with a level gaze. “Asuka, I’ve known you all your life. And, not only that, but Kyo... your mother used to do exactly that, too. Present the facts about what you want to me, and then I’ll decide. I’m remarkably proof against beautiful smiles.”

“Ah, but then, by your own words, you are not immune,” the girl said, leaning back slightly, with a much more genuine smile. “Therefore, if I should so happen to want something, surely the rational choice is to do so, as a small benefit is better than none at all.”

“True, true. That’s the sound first-order result. But we’re not dealing with a first order situation, are we?”

“I suppose not.”

“You suppose not?” The tone was questioning, testing.

“I’m sure not, then,” she said, with unblinking Eyes.

His own ocular implants locked with hers. “Then speak.”

“Can you upgrade Gehirn, my LITAN, to full TITAN status, then?

The man raised one hand. “I’d love to,” he said, his voice with a tint of remorse. “But I’m no longer involved with Project Evangelion. Achtzig is a separate Group, after all. I don’t have the authority to do so, and...” he narrowed his Eyes, “... I severely doubt that Gendo would let me... or Miyakame, if we come down to it, anywhere near an Evangelion.”

“Gendo?” Asuka asked. “Oh. Gendo Ikari? The Representative for Europe?”

“Yes. That’s the man.”

“Why does he have anything to do with it?” the red-haired girl asked. “The Evangelion Group is a Group, and thus isn’t directly under the control of any one Representative... and shouldn’t it be Research who has more say, too, rather than one of the Regional ones? Now, I can understand how his opposition might make things difficult, but... come on! The Ouranos LITANs are the inspiration for the TITANs. They’re practically proto-TITANs. Can’t people be less petty about things like that, and just let the best person do things?”

Calvin sighed. “I wish it were that easy. But he was a supervisor, the supervisor... not the first, but the last, for the original Project. He owns Evangelion, whatever the formal delineations of authority are. And he’ll say ‘No’.”

Asuka raised her eyebrows. It was a comparatively rare event that Uncle Cal talked about the original Project. “So he worked with you and my Mama?” she asked.

The man nodded. “Yes. More in an administrative role, but he did some of the important theoretical work on AT-Fields; he’s a pure sorcerer, and a very, very good one at that, as good as your mother was, and she was...” he trailed off.

“She was?”

Calvin shook his head, shaken out of his reverie. “... amazing. Better than me, and I’m no slouch.” A faint smile crept over his lips. “I can still remember some of their arguments on particularly esoteric bits of theory. Not understand them, but remember them. Both primarily practitioners in the Salaamian school, although I heard Ikari trained as a Horakian.”

The girl smiled. She liked hearing these tales from the man, when she could get him to talk about it. It was always fascinating to hear a little bit about what had gone into the technological marvel which she piloted... and hear how amazing her mother had been. Because she just knew that she was going to be able to do all of that someday, live up to the potential her mother had given her. “Did anything... happen between them?” she asked with a wicked smirk on her face.

The older man looked shocked. “Oh, no. God, no. Ikari was married, for one, and you... Asuka, you do know that men and women can be friends... friends slash competitive rivals,” he corrected himself, “without wanting to have sex? Right?”

She rolled her eyes. “I was just... never mind. But... from this, you got on, yes? Shouldn’t he be willing to accept help? I mean, Unit 02 is the best unit, after all, and so if it had a TITAN...”

He shook his head. “It couldn’t last,” he said, his tone final. “We... didn’t part well. But as for how he’s the authority... well, he’s the protégé of Asha Rosaiah... she’s the Representative for Asia, now; he used to be her Deputy Representative. He’s got enough clout to hold it, and,” the man gave a bitter laugh, “certainly the intent. And, more generally, people... the world always gets in the way. Whether it’s internal politics obstructing pure science, or those bioconservatives and neuroconservatives in the Senate,” the words were said with an identical intonation to ‘scum’, “well...”

“I know what you mean,” Asuka said, Eyes narrowed. “They keep on turning my requests for more enhancements, even though I know I can be even better.”

A sudden chuckle broke the silence. “Well, we’re getting bitter over things we can’t help, and I don’t know about you, but I’ve had enough of that for one lifetime.”

“I’m still sixteen, as people just love to remind me,” the girl pointed out, “and I don’t feel I have. In fact, I think it’s a teenager’s prerogative.”

“Yes, well...” the man said, and paused, a look of distant pain in his Eyes, or, more accurately, written in the muscles around them. “I was going to give this to you later,” he said, “but... well.” He shook his head. “I believe you could do with more cheering up. Consider it a ‘get well soon’ present, if you must,” he added, pulling a small box, made of some dark wood, out from a compartment under the table.

“Really, you don’t need...”

“Remember what I said about false modesty.”

“... to give it right now, it can wait until after dinner, is what I was going to say,” Asuka finished, noting the small smile that the remark produced.

“That’s my girl,” Calvin Sylveste said. “As a wise man once said, ‘‘‘Hubris is a coward’s word,’’’ and I think we could all do to listen to him.”

“Uncle, that was you. At my seventh birthday party, I think... maybe eighth. Of course, it’s true.”

“Exactly. And it was the eighth, because it was the last year that...” the man fell silent.

Asuka nodded, her face solemn. “Yes,” she said. “It was the eighth.”

Just then, her PCPU chimed. “Asuka,” a mechanical voice said, only audible over the implants in her ear.

“What is it, Jeff?” she asked.

“Urgent recall, highest priority. You are to report to Captain Martello immediately, for possible deployment,” her muse stated.

Asuka blinked, and glanced over at her ‘uncle’, who had one eye lit up harcontact-style, reading something.

“I’m really sorry,” they both said simultaneously, “but... oh.”

“Some kind of recall message,” Cal asked, one eyebrow raised.

Asuka nodded. “Something like that,” she said, cautiously, wary of the security protocols.

The man sighed. “Well, that’s this meal ruined,” he said, “and we hadn’t even got past the starters. I’m needed back at... a place.” One eyebrow raised, as he added, “And they’re calling you back, even with a sprained wrist.”

“And a hairline fracture, too,” the girl pointed out. “It’s not just a sprained wrist... at least not in the dismissively sense that people too frequently use.”

“Oh, certainly.” The Director of Science for the Achtzig Group sighed. “I wonder what’s going on,” he said, standing up to help her.

The clock read half-past nine, on the twenty-ninth of September.


~’/|\’~


30th September, 2091


In the eternal chthonic darkness that the Harbinger bought with it, a constellation was born. Its light reflected off the black glass that covered the landscape for a tiny fraction of a second, before the blast wave hit, and the covering shattered, tiny shards of night dancing like macabre fairies at the front of the wave, spreading far and wide. A second wave of impacts happened, and a third, as from beyond the horizon, tiny bird-spires, which approached bio-organic from the far side, emptied their racks of ordinance, and rolled away to return to reload.

The Fifth Harbinger, Mot, cared not. The blasts of the missiles, specialist anti-armour ones designed to send a needle-thin jet of plasma through the armour of a human tank, bent and warped, as if they were afraid to touch the entity. The spectral fire of its AT-Field was a bitter radiance which crystallised spacetime itself, locking projectiles in mid-air. And from this trapped amber, fragments of black crystal rained down upon the earth, transmuted by the unreality of the will of Mot into something befitting of the world-view it desired.

Already, void-black spires, reflecting the lights of the impacts and the AT-Field of their progenitor, were growing up from the earth from where the discarded crystal pooled; fractal geometries with five-fold symmetry. It was beautiful, elegant. The profane implements of that which would try to harm the Harbinger were sculpted into geometrical perfection.

What higher good was there than that?

Well, certainly, both the Migou and the New Earth Government disagreed with such changes. Violently. From the east came vast ships, hundreds of metres long, outmassing the bombers and fighters which swarmed around them in the same way that a gas-giant outmassed its orbiting moons. The ranges here were nothing by stellar standards, but on the surface of a planet, a hundred kilometres suddenly became a long way, when the atmosphere dispersed lasers, claimed the kinetic energy of missiles, and forced the engines to maximum to maintain the arcanomagnetic containment fields of relativistic charged weapons. Despite that, the ventral plasma cannon on the first fired as soon as it had line of sight, stellar-intensity plasma of a kind which could be used to cut through a battleship hull or layers of arcology armour spewing forth coherently.

And bounced off, the containment field lines warped such that its own constraints meant that it was not permitted near the corpus of its superior.

Retaliation was near instantaneous for that affront.

White light illuminated the vertices of the Harbinger, shining along the edges as if from cracks within, only to pool at the points. The brilliance of the beam lanced out, and a sun was born on the eastern horizon, within the darkness which the thing carried with it. The beam from the Migou ship was snuffed out, without a care, as the ship was torn apart. Fragments of once-hull crystal were carried on the front of the blast wave, scything outwards through the night. Then came another glow, another sun, before the fireball from the last had faded. And another. As soon as any of the Migou ships came into line of sight, there was another newborn sun on the horizon, each one massively outshining the constant rain of fire which descended upon Mot.

To some, it might have appeared that the Harbinger was fleeing the Migou that, like wolves, harried the vast trapezohedron. In truth, the wolves were no more than flies, and that was quite apt as a comparison, for they were an annoyance, but one which did distract the god-thing from its chosen task, and which, given sufficient numbers, could injure and maim it. It was not immune to a death of ten-thousand cuts. The larger ships were hanging back now, shielded by the curvature of the Earth, and they were emptying their missile racks, even deploying the antimatter tactical sterilisation weapons. The beams of white light from Mot’s intersections were constant now, the light marring its dark world, but as they cut through the air, the transmuted missiles were rendered harmless.

At these distances, measured in the tens of kilometres, both parties were but tiny specks to each other. The Migou missiles were operating at the edge of their range, their paths forced into predictable lines by lack of the fuel that they would usually use, and the low-flying missile carriers. Simply, the Harbinger outgunned anything the Migou had, and so the fungoid beings were hiding until they could get into a more useful range. Merely by flying at ground height, rather than their normal combat elevation, they could reduce Mot’s line of sight considerably, even before the cover of hills was taken into account. Jumping from safe place to safe place, each move planned in unison by the genius minds of a species which had been in space before the synapsids had split from the other amniotes, they moved assets into position to launch perfectly coordinate attacks, each shot designed to account for transit time, gravity and the Coriolis effect of this spinning planet.

Another glowing, radiant wall. Another series of retaliatory strikes.

And then something large slammed into the Harbinger, and the impact birthed its own sun, centred on the blackness, consuming the shape of the god-thing. The starless dome flickered, white, luminescent cracks painted on its surface, just for a second, before it returned, seemingly unchanged.

A second was enough. For that short while, the strange stars and void-like scar which shone in the altered space around the Harbinger had gone, the power that bought them into this world released. A spire of darkness, an absence against the mundane night’s sky, had licked up, to puncture the orbit-to-surface kinetic platform and swat the rest of the salvo of high-velocity rods which were already tearing a path through Earth’s atmosphere.

And the screaming thunder of an angry god filled the air, tearing trees and knocking lesser missiles out of the way like toys.

Almost unnoticed in the conflict were multiple squadrons of concealed NEG scout drones. The autonomous fliers were almost invisible to anything but a dedicated x-ray frequency scanner, designed to catch back-scatter from metallic objects. They were here on a mission, in pursuit of information on the Migou and the Harbinger alike. But they were only ‘almost’ unnoticed, because as fire rained down through the darkness, and the bitter radiance of the vengeance of Mot lashed out, one lance swept through the drones, unerringly, yet casually seeking them out, and ending them.



~’/|\’~


“... and that is when the last feed cuts out,” the Marshal said, the worry lines heavy around her Eyes obvious even when she was only an ARvatar. “Now, if we take what data we do have, especially from the OTH radar grids, and track its course-vector...”

The evidence was obvious to the collection of Admirals, Marshals and other senior military figures. The line, curved on a two-dimensional map, took the most direct route of London-2. Just like the previous two Harbingers had.

“That’s far from the only problem we have on our hands, however,” Field Marshall Jameson said, his cold blue eyes staring at the map. “Look at this. From what we’ve been able to track of Migou movements...” his words were accompanied by a fine mesh of red arrows, all heading towards the hole in the green line of the NEG defences torn by the dark mass of the Harbinger. “It seems that they’re using the damage it did to the Eastern Front to push on through.”

“Could it be possible that they summoned it?” asked another floating head. “The way it’s breaking the lines, their own movements to follow it...”

“The analysts are looking at it.”

Misato ground her teeth as covertly as she could, as her eyes flicked from one high ranking officer, all with ‘Marshal’ somewhere in their rank, to the next. Of course, not everyone was a much, much more higher-ranking officer than her lowly status as a Major. There was the senior figure from the GIA. And a civilian advisor from one of the NEG-run occult research institutes. And the Minister of War. Yes, technically she was here as an Ashcroft Advisor, specialising in combating Harbinger-level threats, but everyone would look at her, and see the insignia of an O-4. She just knew it. Maybe she needed some kind of special ‘Advisor’ uniform for this kind of event. Or maybe just some kind of promotion, given that she was now responsible for two capital units.

Certainly, it would make what she was about to say go down better.

“With respect, sir,” Major Katsuragi said, “no, it is extremely unlikely. All studies indicate that the Migou are hostile to all other extranormal entities...”

The occult expert leaned forwards. “Explain the Wilmarth papers, then,” he said. “They’re quite clear; the Migou... or Mi-go, as Wilmarth romanised the Tibetan word... have been known to consort with extranormal entities.”

The Major nodded, in a way which made it clear that she disagreed with him. “We have to look at both the unreliability of men like Albert Wilmarth, who,” she sighed, “you have to remember, was a academic in the 1920s and, well... the simple fact that the Migou do not act exactly like the Mi-go described in that man’s records.”

Inwardly, she cursed. She’d got dragged down into this, and this man could probably out-academic her, given that was his profession, while she’d only studied the occult for its use in operational planning. As a result, her knowledge could be described as focussed, lacking broader context.

“... but that wasn’t the main thing,” she hastily added. “We saw Migou attacking it, so, even if they did summon it, they’ve lost control of it, and want it gone.” She forced herself not to swallow. “The main foe here is the Harbinger... Harbinger-5, Mot. We know what the Migou can do. We don’t know exactly what the Harbinger can do, but we do know it can do that.” She pointed at the darkened screen, which had been showing the autocensored feed. “Did you see that... what it did to the crust? Imagine if a city had been in the way!”

There was silence in the room.

“With respect, Major,” the Minister of War, a thin-faced woman with mid-length brown hair, said, “the past evidence doesn’t support you. Both Harbingers Three and Four were eliminated by your Group’s mecha, supported by a single city’s defence forces.” Her eyes were slightly wild, as she added, “We’re looking at a catastrophic breach in the Eastern Front, here! This could be worse than Alaska!”

“Yes, it could,” Misato conceded, “but if we can’t stop the Harbinger here...”

“... then, what?” an olive-skinned Vice Admiral asked, through gritted teeth. “What will happen that can be worse that what the Migou can do? Let’s make this clear. There is a chance that, if we don’t stop them here, Europe could fall! And you know what happened when we lost Russia. Millions will be Blanked and turned into weapons against us, both Infiltrators and Combat Blank armies, the Migou will tighten their chokehold, they’ll have a path down into Africa... and, more simply, we don’t have much more we can lose. North America’s in the same state as Europe... Australia’s barely holding out... only Africa and South America are anywhere near safe. We can’t afford any more widescale losses. Morale will be crushed, too; it’s only holding out because there haven’t been any major losses since ’86. And even if it doesn’t, and we stop them after... what, a few hundred kilometres, we’ll lose territory that we’ll have to spend too scarce resources to reclaim. So what can be worse?”

“... then we’ll miss the best chance we have of stopping it before it gets into more densely populated areas, sir,” the Major said, her face held rigid. “When we consider the force concentrations available to us at the moment, this is the best place. Otherwise, it’ll get away from the immediate frontlines, and into less expendable territory.”

There were nods from the other people at the conference. It was a valid point, certainly.

The man shook his head. “No, Major,” he said. “I disagree. Obviously, we can all see that our priority here is to hold back the Migou, and prevent them from turning this one hole in a front to a widespread rout. And, fortunately, letting the Harbinger pass without trying to attack it until we’re ready is better. Because... TETHYS? Has the analysis of the projected path of Harbinger-5 been completed?”

The ARvatar of the TITAN appeared, a blue-green sphere, floating silently. “Yes, sir,” it reported, its voice female, with a faint Spanish accent. “The entity designated Mot is moving at approximately fifty metres per second, along a constant spheroid vector for fastest intersection with London-2. ETA: Approximately 17:00, BST. However, considering its elevation and the height of the above-ground arcology superstructure, it will be in range approximately 2300 seconds before that theoretical time. Also, note that this assumes constant velocity, and that the beam-like weapon which displayed crust-penetrating capacity is not used.”

Misato swallowed. Less than thirteen hours. The previous two, and whatever the anomaly had been, may have just appeared, but now they had time to at least prepare.

“Thank you, TETHYS,” the naval officer said. “Note that projected path. Note how it takes it through largely uninhabited territory. Ladies, gentlemen, I propose that we concentrate the frontline forces at holding off the Migou incursion, because we know how much of a threat that it, and pull forces away from the path of Harbinger-5. By prior precedent,” he nodded at Misato, a twist on his lips, “we know that firepower can slow down a Harbinger, and... well, remember that Harbinger-4 was crippled by a coordinated assault, even before it was killed. Hence, I propose that we move up the Atlantic Reserve Fleet,” the TITAN showed projections of estimated time of arrival at the man’s words, “and scramble the asset of the Evangelion Group.”

“The assets,” Misato interrupted. “Two now. Unit 00 has had a successful start-up test. We would prefer to have more time, but subject to final approval, it is frontline capable.”

“Even better, even if it’s a little light for the firepower we’ll be using.” The Vice Admiral smiled lazily; a smile which did not reach his narrowed eyes. “Because we’re not just going to wait and shoot at it. Ladies, gentlemen, I propose that we only assault after we... soften up the target.”

“Isn’t that what the Migou are doing?” asked a woman in a naval uniform.

“Well, they didn’t hit it hard enough,” was the cold response. “And let the Migou have their go at it. I’m sure they won’t mind terrible if we can take our own little advantages, from their distraction...”


~’/|\’~


The air in the room was chill, and the hot-metal scent of micrologically enforced cleanliness grated at the nostrils and ran along the tongue. In the centre of the room, lit in a bright white spotlight, was a clear, coffin-like arrangement. And in the coffin was eighty-three kilogrammes of meat and bone, with all sorts of cunning wires and feedtrubes stuck into it, which was being examined for information. At least, that was all what the example of Homo sapiens nazzadi undergoing the trawl was, in the eyes of the law.

Genetics did not determine personhood, in the domain of the New Earth Government. It was easy to be born as a member of an approved human subspecies. To be a person... that was a state which was considerably easier to lose.

Agent Mary Anderson of the Office of Internal Security checked the screen, noted that the LAI had already corrected for the hormonal imbalance, and, after further examination, noted in the record that the change was approved. Sitting back down, she sighed. She hated working late like this. She should be home right now, sleeping (and sadly only that, because she should have work tomorrow) with her boyfriend. But in the Office of Internal Security, as with all the civilian police agencies, you tended to work to the job, not to the clock. Especially when you were a trained neurobiologist, and thus your skills were not exactly in massive surplus. She’d just drawn the short straw by the dehumanisation forms for this subject coming through towards the end of her shift, and she’d been told by her superior that this was high priority. Even if this was almost just make-work which could have been handled by LAIs, you needed a trained individual there, to take legal responsibility for what happened. Dehumanisation forms weren’t just thrown around, after all; you needed a court order to get them, in all but emergency cases.

“Correction performed; although higher brain functions remain paralysed, it proved necessary to increase serotonin levels, due to a fall. Mapping of base limbic core functions is, by given reading, eighty three percent complete,” she said out loud, to the recording equipment. “Noise from activity in the mesencephalon has been accounted for. At current rate,” she glanced over at the screen, “LAI gives an estimated time for start of metencephalon examination as 04:09.”

She shook her head, rubbing one blue-gloved hand against her grey-brown forehead, and picked her occult textbook back up. She was having to study for the extra classes the OIS were getting her to take (and considering that it counted for job training, it meant that she was actually being paid for doing so), but she couldn’t concentrate on that, not right now. God damn all filmmakers and anyone who encouraged people to think that you could just stick some wires in someone’s head and read their mind. A trawl, especially on a living subject like this, was hard work, trying to read a dynamic, emergent system with relatively crude tools, and compare it to known effects. It certainly wasn’t ‘mind-reading’; it was psychosurgery, reading associations and responses to triggers, which it was then necessary to try to pin together as thoughts in the blank, cloned brains wired up to computers down in the basement.

This wouldn’t even be necessary if the basta... subject wasn’t warded against parapsychic intrusion. Of course, that was in most cases basically a mark of guilt for something, because all civilian-legal defences should have had a key which allowed due authority to unravel the sorcerous procedure more easily. They already had enough to put it away for twenty years, after reassignment of human rights, for ‘consorting with illegal sorcerers’ and ‘use of illegal sorcery to hinder a judicial investigation’. But the question was; what was the subject hiding?

The machinery bleeped. Agent Anderson checked it, and squinted slightly, before inputting a series of new commands.

“Slight raise in core cerebral temperature of 0.3 K noted. The rate of flow of blood-substitute was checked; it remains constant, and...” she scrolled down, “... temperature of substitute remains constant. To inhibit neural activity, rather than increase the flow, which might risk damaging capillaries, levels of neural inhibition compound Pharmant-67 were increased by four parts per million. Dosage remains within green zone.”

Quite a lot, was the answer. Because in the raid that had bought it in, the subject had opened fire on the SPAAT team, and the CATSEYE sensors had detected several signatures which matched known extranormal familiar breeds. And that was before the fact that one of the people that they had been meeting with had turned into a monsterous... thing which had torn out the guts of one of the officers in the semi-powered armour through her suit, and then jumped out a window, and through the floor, like some kind of mist.

The amlaty shook her head, as she lowered her head back down to her occult textbook, and the meat and bone and machine twitched. People like that were just sick, she thought, before mentally chiding herself. No. Not people like that. Things like that. Personhood excluded that kind of activity.

An alarm, student, urgent, but not dangerous sounded from the machinery, and she spun on her chair.

“Unregulated movement in limbs,” she barked out loud, training taking over. “Checking status... spinal cord remains severed! I repeat, spinal cord remains severed, no nerve regeneration! Administering Red dose of muscle relaxants directly to active zones,” silently, she blessed the sense of paranoia which meant that those injectors were always there, even when you had installed a bypass in the nerves, “... muscle activity has diminished, but remains present.” She took a breath. “I shall now proceed to halt the main procedure, until the source of these anomalies has been determined. I shall begin by...”

Suddenly, in her harcontacts, an exploded image of the subject’s brain appeared, lines sketched in the air in red, apart from one section of white and bilious green. There was... something in the brain. Something that she was sure hadn’t been there before.

[Warning! Irregular brain growth!] reported the LAI in the machine, as the bilious green shape in the Augmented Reality projection spread and grew, in an almost vein-like profusion.

She worked her mouth silently. “Major anomaly in the subject’s cerebellum... it’s moving. Growing. I’m going to terminate.” Tossing the book away, she jumped to her feet, and slammed her palm into the big, bright red button on the side of the vivisection tube, before she began to back away, pistol already drawn, her eyes wild. Alarms began to sound, suddenly much more panicked, and, in the back of her consciousness, she registered that they were not her alarms.

[Termination One activated. Stand clear. Physical isolation activating in three... two... one... physical isolation complete,] announced the LAI, as diamond blast-shields slammed down from the ceiling, locking the abandoned workstation within an adamant cage. [Warning. Do not cross red line. Wards activating in three... two... one... emergency containment wards activated,] it added.

Within the machine, the blood-replacement flowing through the subject’s veins, arteries and capillaries suddenly solidified, molecular level structures cross-linking and bonding to form a secondary skeleton. In fact, that statement was not true; the hardened synthetic blood was more rigid than the real skeleton, although brittle, and prone to shatter in a way which only caused more damage, should the... the entity continue to move.

“I... I’m back at the safe distance, by the secondary controls,” Agent Anderson announced to the recording devices, panting. “Th-the subject is not displaying any further movement, which suggests that,” her hands began to fly over the solid, overengineered buttons, “that Termination One was successful. The El... the LAI containment protocols activated successfully, and the subject is now physically and sorcerously conta...”

Her monologue was interrupted by the arrival of a security detachment of officers, suited up in containment gear. One had a flamethrower, and the other three wide-bore sharders.

“Is it contained?” the lead figure snapped, weapon pointed at her.

She nodded, quite deliberately trying to force herself to not move or flinch. “Termination One activated... physical and sorcerous. It’s... I don’t think it’s moving anymore. No vital signs but then the... it wasn’t the human tissue that was the issue.”

“Can you set off Termination Two!” the androgynous figure, made sexless by the ANaMiNBC gear, ordered, in a way which wasn’t a question despite the wording.

“That’ll ruin the implants... but, yes... yes I can,” Agent Anderson answered, after accessing the command functions. “I don’t think it’s necessary... it... whatever it was... it isn’t moving, and it’s contained, but...”

“Do it,” the figure ordered her. “Every single active trawl subject... and some dead ones too... are showing signs of extranormal cellular activity. We’re pulling everyone out, ‘till we sweep the place.”

The amlaty swallowed. “Let me just prime... okay... Authorisation, Anderson, Mary,” she swallowed, mouth dry, “Personal TSEAP Termination code Alpha-Gamma...” she began to rattle off a series of numbers and Greek letters before the LAI chimed, and a bright orange-whiteness lit the sealed unit. She sighed a breath of relief, something which was almost knocked out of her by the almost-shove from the containment officer.

“What the hell is going on?” she asked, as they bustled her along the corridor.

“I don’t know,” the figure said, voice tinny through the filters. Standing this close, she could see the panic in the other woman’s (and it was a woman, under the tinted faceplate) eyes. “I don’t harangojy know.”


~’/|\’~

The eastern horizon was just beginning to pick up a hint of light, the blackness taking on hints of dark, almost velvety blue. To the south, the Harbinger may have punched through the lines, to unleash a torrent of Migou forces who dashed themselves against its geometrical shape, but the war did not revolve around such things.

Certainly, for Second Lieutenant Salou Danda, he had more to care about than whatever was going on to the south. Largely because he, and his wing of three other Dawn scout mecha, or Inevaturadski, to give the Nazzadi name, were trying to navigate the local Migou sensor grid without all dying horribly. Or worse.

The term ‘scout mecha’ was actually a singularly inaccurate term. Mecha, quite simply, did not scout. They combined a high profile with a noisy means of locomotion. Even in cities, the bane of ground pressure and hidden traps was enough that they didn’t go in first. It was the drones which used the mecha and their support pointer as a mobile control base who did the scouting. The mecha were the units which acted on the information in areas too covered for air support to come in, the human minds on the ground who reduced the information separation for the drones, and were the ones who called in the tanks.

“Hold,” he sent over the tightbeam laser link with the rest of his squad. Barely breathing, he stared at the images in his Eyes from the drones, the movements of the Loyalist patrol. It was simply the will of Allah that kept him and his men alive, he thought, with a hint of fatalism, but at least they were only Loyalists, not Elite or Migou, and thus they were probably blind to the drones. Not that the Nazzadi Elite or the Migou were used for scouting and reconnaissance duties, for the most part; they were less expendable. “Standard Whiskey-Eyes scout cluster,” he muttered to himself, making sure that he wasn’t accidentally broadcasting the signal.

The squad remained motionless for almost ten long minutes, waiting for the Loyalist group; a solid trio of mecha squadrons, with air support and dedicated surveillance equipment, to pass.

“Okay, move,” he ordered, once the threat had passed. “Dancing Boy, how are the drones?” he asked the specialist in his wing.

“Drones still ghosting, Thirteen,” noted Second Lieutenant Santiago. “Green-Seven is within possible detection range for Whiskey-Eyes One, but Green-One, Green-Three, Green-Four and Green-Five are all safed.”

“Good. Current route clear?” he asked his own legionnaire LAI.

[Affirmative. No targets detected. No mines detected. Active hostile detection methods are within safe levels.]

“’Kay.” The man bit his lip. “Move to Waypoint Echo then, Bounding Overwatch, rotate teams. Me and Jazzman are Charlie, Teacher and Dancing Boy, you’re Delta.”

“Understood,” the sole woman in his wing, and the heavy weapons specialist, replied, her tone laconic. “I’ll hold Dancing Boy’s hands, and make sure he doesn’t get too distracted by the drones.”

In the darkness, the lead two mecha were blurs of barely seen motion, their stealth equipment blending in to the background, A-Pods reducing their ground pressure to less than an infantryman. They did not so much run as bound, in short leaps which reduced the tracks they left. These conditions were nearly optimal for them; they would not be able to get away with this speed, and remain undetected, in daylight.

“Thirteen, I’m running hot,” noted Lieutenant Owenusari, his surname clue enough to his mixed heritage. “Still safe, but it’s building up faster than it should.”

“Understood.” And he did; stealthed units had to try to balance heat unlike any other unit, because it didn’t matter if one was optically invisible, if one stuck out like a flare on IR. Add that to the fact that they were small enough that there was an imbalance between their D-In/D-Out levels, and it could get touchy.

The two mecha landed, the blurs fading into nothingness, as they began to cover the movement of the other two. And, slowly, alternating, they advanced through the hostile territory, moving towards their target, a Migou airbase. Above, the crack of supersonic craft could be heard, and the slight pulse in the earth spoke of explosions and high-recoil weaponry in the distance.

And just for a fraction of a second, one who was watching the south might have seen a shower of meteors, which was interrupted when a black lance, its width negligible compared to its length, pierced the heavens, as Mot swatted another Migou weapons platform which dared fire upon it.


~’/|\’~


Ritsuko cleared her throat, and inwardly cursed herself for the habit. Of course Gendo knew she was there.

“Report.” His words were curt, perfunctory; he did not even turn to face her, instead staring out over the Geocity, lit by false stars.

"Following the successful reactivation of Evangelion Unit 00, Representative, we have uploaded the final calibration data to the MAGI" Ritsuko said, keeping her voice objective. "Given that the First Child is holding her synchronisation ratio at a steady fifty three, plus or minus three, percent, and that there has not been a recurrence of the... of the previous incident..." she paused, “...it is my opinion, as Director of Science for Project Evangelion, that we can use it for DELTA.”

The man partially turned, his arglasses glinting in the lights of his office. “Are you sure, Doctor?” he asked.

You could maybe use my name, Ritsuko thought, with a hint of annoyance that she hoped didn’t show on her face. “Yes,” she said, confidently.

Gendo Ikari gave a single, curt nod. “We shall see,” he said. “And the upcoming operation?”

“Although Unit 00 is still utilising the Type-A armour, while both Units 01 and 02 have been upgraded to variants of the Type B, it is still combat ready. We will have to use a cargo-transport for the Evangelion, though, as the Type-A lacks drop-compatibility.”

He stared at her for what she felt to be a second too long. “Good,” he said, eventually. “That will need to be fixed, of course.” His eyes flicked across the display on his glasses. “You are deploying the Type-9 charge beam and the auxiliary capacitors, I note,” the man remarked.

“Yes, sir.” Ritsuko swallowed. “Major Katsuragi believes... is of the opinion that, with access to the power supply of the troopship that we are using to move Unit 00, we can set up an increased refire rate, by using the ship’s D-Engine to charge the capacitors. The MAGI agree with her.”

The man nodded. “A satisfactory solution. You should task some of your subordinates with ensuring that we can perform this as a standard operation, rather than as a field project.”

Ritsuko nodded. “Yes, Representative. I’ll look into it.” She paused. “Will that be all?”

“No,” Gendo said. In a few steps, he closed the distance between them, and pulled one gloved hand from a pocket. In it, there were two diamond cylinders, about the size of a man’s thumb. “I have secured authorisation from the Council, after consulting the Minister of War, for the use of the Harlequin systems on the Evangelions. These unlock keys permit one firing per Unit, and have a,” he glanced to the left slightly, “twenty-three hours and fifty-four minutes active lifespan. Task your engineering teams to load the weapons.”

They hung from Ritsuko’s fingers, gleaming in the light. There was a certain gleam to them, as if they had been dipped in oil, and then dried off. It was probably deliberate.

“I understand, sir,” she said.


~’/|\’~


“Far Shores Actual, this is Fire Eagle One. Releasing drones... drones are go. Monitoring status.”

It should have been so easy. The drones were LAI platforms, consisting of an A-Pod, a D-Fridge, and a D-Engine, with massive amounts of stealth-technology applied. They had almost no radar signature, were background temperature, thanks to the careful heat balance, and, when still, were almost invisible in the visible and UV spectra, too. Even the Migou had problems finding them, if conditions were clear. Dropped off by a stealthed plane, lurking behind the curve of the Earth, they should have been able to lurk, hanging in the air, to gather data from Mot and its activities.

Harbinger-5 unerringly picked them off, as soon as they entered its line of sight.

And as a massive pentagonal trapezohedron, hundreds of metres high, that was not a short distance. What perhaps made it worse was that it was not engaging the missiles fired at it until they got closer, a few tens of kilometres away. It was like it was aware that the warheads on those things could not scratch it, but it did not wish for them to get information.

“Far Shores Actual, all drones are fubar. Retreating as per orders.”

At least we’re getting to see what its beams do to stuff,” Misato said, morosely, as another wave of drones blinked out of existence, the second line giving quite adequate evidence as to the effects.

“The weapon has been noted to propagate at c. It takes the form of a linear beam, which is unaffected by gravity, electromagnetism, or, to the best of our knowledge, any other forces. Yield is <UNKNOWN>; weapon does not inflict damage by conventional mechanisms. Penetrative capacity is <UNKNOWN>. As it is, the target is capable of manifesting one beam from each intersection-point; these beams can be sustained for, at minimum, 11.2 seconds. Maximum duration is <UNKNOWN>.”

The Major listened to the report from the naval TITAN with a frown. Technically, it was reassuring to know that at least these were known unknowns, compared to the capacities exhibited by previous Harbingers, when they hadn’t even known what they could do. Like the odd, physics-defying condensation wave of Harbinger-3. It was less reassuring to continually receive proof that Harbinger-5 was exceptionally good at targeting and destroying anything which came into range, no matter how hidden it was. Because she was in charge of trying to find a good attack position for two 40 metre tall robots, when even a car-sized, steathed, radar-neutral, D-Fridge-cooled...

Oh, God. It was that simple, wasn’t it? She’d studied this. Well, not exactly this, but it was all too familiar, she realised, as her brain put it together.

“TETHYS,” the Major snapped, “get me all the files on the Harbinger-1 incident!”

“Major Misato Katsuragi, you only have a...”

“All the files that I’m cleared for, stupid!” she corrected herself. “That should be obvious!”

Yes... she would need to check. But if she was correct, then there might just be a way. And, oddly, an Evangelion might be able to do something that the Navy’s capital ships couldn’t, because an Evangelion was flawed.


~’/|\’~


The woman’s face was pressed up against the transparent material, a thin line of drool running down the surface from where her mouth touched it. Her white garments, padded and thick, but permitting her free movement, had the yellow stripes of a dabbler into illegal sorceries. She tried to raise one hand to bang against the diamond, but the smart materials in the clothing suddenly went solid, and she lost balance, tumbling backwards onto the padded floor, rocking slightly.

She was yelling something, but whatever it was, it was inaudible to the guards outside, flicking through channel after channel of footage from the cells, flagged by the sentinel LAI systems for a human’s attention.

“Something has them on edge,” one muttered nervously. “Allah, but I hate it when it’s like this.”

“Too true,” her colleague muttered. “I swear, it’s days like this, when they all start acting up...”

[Subject displays distress. From her vitals, she has a heavily elevated heartrate, and high levels of neurotransmitters associated with fear. Recommend neurosedation.]

The first woman nodded. “Makes sense, I’d say. Agreed?”

The nazzady nodded. “Agreed.” On the monitor, the woman’s struggles diminished, and she slowly sank to her knees, before lying down, resting her head on her arms. “Get her straightjacket to administer a muscle relaxant, and to move her body to the bed when we know she’s asleep.”

“Sure.” The first guard shook her head. “What were you saying?”

“Yep. Let’s see, next one...” The dark-skinned woman shook her head. “Days like this are just so depressing. I just have to remind myself that once I get the degree, I can go get another job.”

“I know what you mean. This supervision duty... it grinds you down.”

“The worst bit’s probably how Sentry could probably do all our jobs. It’s not like...”

[Subject displays distress. From her vitals, she has a heavily elevated heartrate, and high levels of neurotransmitters associated with fear. Subject has attempted to draw on floor in own saliva. Strongly recommend neurosedation.]

Both women glanced at the woman held rigid on the floor by her straightjacket exosuit, pinned down in a cruciform shape. The fingers on the suit had flowed, bonding together to prevent any precision.

“Agreed? We’ll need to manually note this in her file, too, as a secondary. She’s,” she glanced at the screen, “... yeah, she’s in for summoning. I don’t want to release her jacket from lockdown until everyone else calms down, hmm?”

“Agreed. I hate these haranojy summoners.” The nazzady shook her head. “As I was saying, it’s not like we don’t take its recommendations like nine times out of ten.”

“Well, you know, you gotta have humans in the loop. It’s only a dumb LAI, after all. It’s just triggering things if the stuff in their brains or blood changes too much. Or if their motions aren’t permitted. It doesn’t actually know what they’re doing, like we do.”

Her colleague glanced over at her. “Yeah, I know. It’s... I’ll be glad to be out of here.”

“I know what you mean.”


~’/|\’~
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Shinji Ikari ran his hands down his face, squeezing his eyes shut. He could feel the subtle shift and sway of the superheavy lifter underneath them; luckily, the anti-airsickness medication seemed to be holding out. The boy tried opening his eyes again. The scene before him had not changed.

“Let me get this straight,” he said. “We’re going to be deployed to an open mine, which is just next to the path the Harbinger is taking?”

The Major nodded. “Yes. So should it go wrong, it will be easier to evacuate.”

“And then they’re going to nuke it. With... really big ones.” Shinji shuddered; he still remembered the grey, crumbling facade of the Victoria Arcology. How much worse would it be at the scales they were talking about?

“It’s a conventional weapon,” Misato pointed out, accurately reading his expression and slight look of nausea. “You don’t want to use an a-chrom one that big.”

“Oh, okay.” The boy nodded. “I understand that bit. It makes sense.” A certain twist entered his voice. “But the bit you just mentioned. The bit where you shut down almost all our engines and coolant systems. And then don’t even turn them back on when the attack begins. That makes less sense.”

“We realised that the target is attacking anything with D-Rift technology. Things just running off batteries, or with fuel propellants don’t get hit, until it decides that they’re a threat. But it sees all kinds of D-Rifts as a threat, we think.”

Shinji bit down on his lip. “Um... I hate to be obvious, but don’t we need the D-Engines to, you know, power the weapons and the Eva, and generally do anything?”

The black-haired woman, her hair pinned back, blinked. “Yes. For weapons and movement, we’ll be running power to the Evangelions from elsewhere; cables are already being set up, and the Navy is lending two frigates, because they’re too light against this enemy. Life support will be running off batteries.”

Rei had barely moved since the briefing began, only the slight sway from the motion of the transport. Now, she raised a hand.

“Yes, Rei?”

“Without the effective increase in inertial mass given by the D-Brake, both the Babylon and the Type-13 are non-viable. The stress will shear them apart.”

The Major leant back slightly. “Yes. That’s right. So we have to keep some running. Which means you’re still going to be targets, just... smaller ones. Now... to continue the briefing...”



~’/|\’~



A female Nazzadi sat in a chair, unaugmented eyes flicking over the profusion of hexagonal screens before her, her bland, unlined features profoundly lacking in contrast in this light. Black-gloved hands flicked over the keyboard, and she leant forwards, tilting her head slightly, before leaning back. Unconsciously, she adjusted the set of her black frock coat, before standing up.

Against the lit screens, she was a figure of night, surrounded by a babbling in the background, the susurration of whispering communications systems.

“Widespread civil disturbance all across Europe and Northern Africa,” she said, her words characteristic of the rigidly precise English learned by first-generation Nazzadi. “Lesser anomalous behaviour in sensitives globally, induced by nightmares of endless darkness. Stand-alone spontaneous public disturbances. Reports from the OIS that subjects under trawl or otherwise undergoing extreme physical and mental stress are exhibiting Budapest Syndrome. The presence of Harbinger-5. Widespread conflict all along the Eastern European front.” She shook her head, once.

“Yes, Director,” one of the voices said, as the rest fell quiet, only a buzz at the edge of hearing.

“Should an evacuation be ordered of any major arcology, the Society will use the chance to strike at Chyrsalis facilities. And, at the same time, Chrysalis will use the chance to further its own objectives in the chaos. What a mess.”

“That is what the reports state, Director.”

“Watch,” she said, tone considered. “We will not act, but instead observe. We need to know the pathways both factions use. Neither faction will wish to have their...” she coughed, “...special agents linked to concrete identities. We have to secure those weak spots.” She paused, tilting her head again. “I did not receive any reports of the existence of confirmed organised cult activity in the service of Harbinger-5,” she added, her fingers curling slightly.

“No, Director,” a second voice stated. “Although some disturbances match the known metrics of Harbinger-5, we have not established any pattern of human organisation. As you yourself said, from available evidence, such things are stand-alone, and lack the cohesion that, say, cults associated with the Melqart-entity typically exhibit.”

She wiped one hand against her forehead. “That, at least, is somewhat fortunate,” the nazzady said, a hint of relief creeping into her voice, before it settled again. “We must not weaken, though. Absence of evidence is not evidence of absence.”

“We can take no actions against the physical manifestation of the entity identified under the Geneva Protocols as Mot.”

The woman nodded. “Yes. We lack the resources. But we shall try to cauterise the wounds that deluded idiots will try to open in the chaos.” She paused. “It will be necessary to aid the Office of Internal Security in preventing the spread of Budapest Syndrome. It must not be permitted to get out of hand, or we will be forced to deploy the Watch for containment. And that will be... messy.”

“Understood, Director. I will task the deployment of Amici units to support the OIS’s containment efforts in all areas where it has been noted... that is, Europe, the Middle East, and North Africa. Standard cover procedures will be in place, and force will be appropriate.”

“Good. And... Andersdóttir?”

“Yes, Director?”

“... it does not matter. Carry out your duties, Andersdóttir.”

And with that said, Director Khoury Vuilumiri oy Jenufabrikati oy Chicago-Twi vy Teoranazy vy Minugijy sat back down. She was named for parents who had never been real, and she had been created as a biological twenty-five year-old, out in the Oort cloud, as a soldier in a fleet with no history. And, turning back to the screens, she resumed her vigil as the Director of the Office of Special Services, which did not exist.


~’/|\’~


The dark-haired woman sighed, and glanced at her flatma... at the Third Child.

No, she thought, staring at him. I can’t think of him like that. Not now. Rei may have vanished off somewhere, when she wasn’t looking, but Shinji was still sat here in the briefing room, a decidedly green cast to his features. His face was pale, and whitened knuckles gripped the arm of the seat and a sick-bag equally tightly. The boy’s blue eyes were closed.

“How are you feeling, Shinji?” she asked, unsure if that was how to start with him.

“I’m... I’m scared,” Shinji whispered after a pause, his voice thick with stress. “Just... terrified.” He glanced up at Misato. “I d-don’t know if I can do this. I... I...” there was a thin burst of nervous laughter, “I don’t even know if I can stand up, let alone get my Eva to do so.”

“Well, you know, you don’t need to. You get to lie down for the entire operation,” Misato said with a smile, which vanished almost instantly. “No, that’s not helpful,” she said, before he could say anything. “I’m sorry, it sounded better in my head.” Slowly, she lowered herself into the chair next to him. “It might help to talk. I find... I used to find that it helped. Actually... that comment was how I kinda deal with it.” She winced. “I’m nervous too.”

The boy glared at her. “You get to be in the nice safe command vehicle,” he said bluntly. “I don’t. I get to be lying there, h-h-hoping that it doesn’t blow me up.”

Misato nodded solemnly. “I know,” she said, gently, not mentioning that the command vehicle wasn’t exactly safe. Not when there were capital units, let alone a Harbinger, anywhere nearby. “It’s not fair. And if I could, I’d take your place, but I can’t. No-one else can. There’s just you, and Rei, and As... Test Pilot Soryu, and she’s over in Chicago-2 and managed to fracture her wrist yesterday, at the worst possible time.”

There was a sick-sounding bubble of laughter from the boy. “I bet my father would still force me to do it if I broke my wrist, you know.”

“Well...” Yes, he would. If it was needed, Misato thought, but didn’t say.

It was enough. “He would. I mean, look at the state Rei was in when he forced me in the first time, and she was going to do it, too.” He wiped at his arms with his sleeve. “I w-wonder if there’s some other kid out there not knowing that he’s going to be dragged in if both of us get k...” he grabbed for the sick-bag, and retched into it.

“Easy, there,” Misato said, feeling horribly ineffectual. “You’re not going to be killed. We’ll get you out. And, come on, if the Harbinger targets D-Rifts... and it does,” she added, not liking the tone of uncertainty, “then you two will be some of the smallest targets on the battlefield. We’re shutting down your engines and stuff for a reason.”

“I know... I mean, I know intellectually,” the boy managed. “But the idea of being out there, the idea that I could run out of power.” He shook his head. “It’s scary. Everything’s scary.” He shivered, which turned into a gagging noise, and the bag was raised again.

“Don’t try too hard to stop yourself being sick. It feels better once it happens,” Misato advised, speaking from experience. “And,” she raised one finger, as she rummaged around in a pocket, before tossing a packet of slightly warm juice onto his lap, “here. You’ll probably want something to wash the taste out, afterwards.”

Face clammy, he raised his head slightly. “Now, once you say it, it’s not going to happen,” he muttered. “But... thanks.”

The black-haired woman sighed. “Think about it,” she tried. “I mean, this time, you are not alone. You’ve got Rei supporting you, and, come to be clear, the Atlantic Reserve Fleet is going to be attacking at the same time, plus all the local forces we could scramble, plus several brigades we pulled from Paris-2 and Ostberlin-2. It’s not just you.”

“It’s... it’s just so big,” Shinji muttered, feeling pathetic. “You know, at least with Harbinger-4, it was about my size, and... well, I knew that other things could hurt it. And... and it may have had laser whip-things, but this is just...” his eyes were distant, “... just too much.” He shook his head, an sighed, a deep, shuddery breath. “How does she stay so calm?” he said, under his breath.

Unfortunately for him, Misato had very, very good hearing. “Who, me?”

“No,” the boy said, reluctantly. “Rei.”

The woman blinked, heavily. That was something she couldn’t explain herself. Come to think of it, back when she’d been a pilot, she’d have been freaked out if one of her squad hadn’t been showing nerves before something big. She had been freaked out, back in ’86, when one of her squad hadn’t shown any nerves, but hadn’t said anything, and then, the next day... she forced those memories, and dead faces, back down. No wonder Shinji was getting more worried; it was uncanny, and he wasn’t prepared to deal with this kind of thing.

“I don’t know,” she said, hating herself for not having a better answer. “It’s just the way she is, I think.” Slowly, she slipped her hand over his, feeling the cold clamminess of his flesh, and squeezed reassuringly. “But... Shinji,” she said, staring at him, “... it’s all right to be terrified. That’s just the way you are. It’s all right to be sick. I just want to know that you feel all right, and that you think you’ll be able to follow the plan. Because if you don’t think you can, we’ll all be in trouble; you, Rei, us in the command vehicle...” She left it hanging, left all the other people who might die if they didn’t stop the Harbinger unmentioned.

She saw his jaw work, his eyes squeezed shut, and teeth grit together. But his hand squirmed under hers, and turned over, to grip hers tightly. “I can do it,” he managed, weakly. “Don’t worry about me.”

The hand was released, as he grabbed the sick-bag and was nosily ill in it. She reached out, and tucked an errant lock of hair back, to avoid it getting in the way of the contents of his stomach. “Oh Shinji,” she said, softly, “you won’t mind if I worry about you. Just a little bit?”

The hand was retracted

“Misato?”

“Yes?” she asked, as she got up, slowly, to check over the plans again and see how the deployment of the naval forces was going.

“Thank you.”


~’/|\’~



The blue-and-grey of ArcSec, and the darker vehicles of the OIS were clustered around the office building. The hulking figures of men and women in power armour were spaced along the cordon, behind deployed armour shielding, watching the exits. The other buildings, around this place, had already been commandeered by sniper teams, and they were watching, in vain, for any movement within the facility. The sound of police sirens, chatter, and the movement of armoured feet was a flowing river of background noise to all activities.

“Right... what we got?” asked the stocky woman, leaning into the command van. They had already cordoned off the building, and the evacuation process was beginning, made easier by the fact that this was not a residential district. “Sorry for the delay,” she explained. “Checkpoints, and they ran a neural scan on the way in.”

Agent Hikara sighed slightly, and turned to glance at his superior. “Captain,” he said, by way of greeting. “Hostage situation... you know Clarity Arcanopharm?”

Captain Joyeuse nodded, after a moment’s pause. “Grigori-A’s looking into them, aren’t we? IPcorp?”

“Yes. They’re licensed to conduct sorcerous and variant-matter experimentation... mostly medicinal, but there’s oddities in the in/out flow of variant r-state materials.” Red eyes glanced down at the screen before him. “Mostly low-state organic molecules... they’re only allowed up to carb-8-on, and hydro-6-gen.”

“They’ve been audited recently, and they came up clean,” added Agent Gjorgji Mile, “but they’re still on the watchlist.”

There was a shudder from the agents, because this had the potential to get messy.

Agent Junira groaned, his milk-coloured hand colliding with his forehead. “Great. So they’ve snapped and gone crazy in all the funny stuff that’s happening tonight.”

“No... this is the corporate HQ,” Gjorgji said. “There shouldn’t be anything here. Anything dangerous here, that is.”

“And they’re the ones who hit the panic button,” Hikara added, running a hand through his hair. “We’re only here because they’re under investigation.” He cleared his throat. “Anyway, display personnel details on screen,” he ordered an LAI.

[Yes, sir.]

The agents of the State Secuity Task Force on Non-Governmental Organisations (A) stared up at the details, the list of registered occupants of the building drawing most of the attention.

“What the hell are so many people doing in at the moment?” asked an agent.

“Says here they work to a 48-hour day,” Gjorgji said, through narrowed eyes. “Check if they’re fully licensed for that, Hikara,” he told the nazzada, and got a nod in response. “Oh, yay.” He shook his head. “I hate corps that do that. You just know that they’ve got those dosage contracts you gotta sign if you want to work there. Exploitative bastards.”

Captain Joyeuse shot a glance in his direction. “Have we got the IPcorp to hand over internal systems-link yet?” she asked, her voice distracted.

“Yes, but... whoever’s done this is good enough to have cut the hardline, and well...”

The woman sighed. “Don’t tell me...”

“Yes. Someone from the inside activated the ArcSec kill-switch on all wireless devices. So... yeah.”

Ori Joyeuse tapped her front teeth with a gloved finger. “How long until we’ve got the area clear, Watcher?” she asked the LAI.

[The adjoining buildings have been cleared. It is estimated that it will take seventeen minutes until the dome has been cleared to the minimum safe distance.]

“And have we got drones in place yet?”

[They are not in position. The control team and their equipment are still en route.]

“Damn.” The woman sighed. “Well, we hold, then. We are not going in blind.”


~’/|\’~


The night air was chill. Beneath the chill light of the almost-full moon, the landscape was barren, rocky and almost dead. Only the water pooled at the bottom of the chasms that pock-marked the landscape, and the lichen and mosses that covered the bare rock like tattered skin, made it different from the moon. But this was not some forgotten battlefield from the Arcanotech Wars or the post-Unification conflicts. This was relatively recent, and this was the work of man, and man alone.

The economic logic was undeniable. Arcologies were hungry, even with the D-Engine permitting a recycling efficiency which defied conventional thermodynamics. The human war machine devoured all the resources which were fed to it. So, it had been decided that open-cast strip mining was a valid form of resource extraction. This had been a region with notable seams of rare earths, and the rare earths had been taken, along with everything else.

Where had the soil gone? To Warsaw-A, the munitorium of the Eastern European front? No, more likely to Lviv-B, the closest arcology, a pure geocity cluster built under the slagged remains of the original city. It was not relevant. All that mattered was that man had killed the land here, devoured it and left only rock and lichen. And that made it a good place for the assault on the Harbinger. It was expendable; there was no real biome to harm, and there was cover, as mine-shafts plummeted down into the crust, refitted into launch silos once their seams had been exhausted.

In the darkness, floodlights were tiny islands of light, patches which revealed sections of the prone Evangelions, covered in technicians which swarmed and crawled over their surfaces. Unit 00 was a pale bulk in the shade, because, when the fact that the Harbinger seemed to ‘see’ through the dimensional distortion of D-Rifts was taken into account, repainting it from its white test paint was not the best use of the limited time they had. Slowly, the Evangelion was moved out from inside the hold of the transport ship, as unlike Unit 01, the Prototype could not be carried on the standard superheavy flier. The place where it was going to be sited was already prepared; one of the hardened platform once used by heavy mining equipment was reinforced enough to bear the weight of the Evangelion, even when its A-Pods were turned off. Unit 01 was already prepared, set up with the Type-9 charge beam, connected up to its superconducting cables snaking back into safety.

Time was running short. Because, although the first hints of dawn should have been tinting the eastern horizon red, they did not do so. Visible in the night was a streak of black-beyond-black. Across the east, sharply delineated against the natural deep blues, was terrible, sudden void, slowly creeping up to consume the world, for Harbinger-5 would not tolerate the sun, nor the stars of man, and bore the world it chose with it, as a veil and cloak in this place.

Shinji Ikari rubbed his gloved hands against his face, trying to bring heat to chilled cheeks. The rest of the suit may have been heated, but that just made the exposed face feel even colder. Even extruding the cowl didn’t help much, although at least it kept his ears warm. Misato had left them here, as they set up the Evangelions, and she went to consult with the people in charge of this operation. Shaking his head, he glanced over at Rei. She was just standing there, cowl down, eyes locked on the blackness painted like tar across the eastern horizon. He was sure that her plug suit looked thinner, and more form-fitting than his, too. Although that may have been something to do with the fact that it was largely skin-coloured for her.

“Hey, move it!” someone yelled at them. Shinji glanced around, and hastily stepped out of the way of the lifter, the four metre biped sprouting multiple fine manipulator arms. It took him several moments to find where Rei was; she had moved outside the pool of flood-lit brightness, a pale shape barely visible to light-blinded eyes.

“You do not approve of the operation,” she said without prompting, as he joined her, outside of the light.

The boy stared at his feet. “It’s a stupid plan,” he muttered. It was only after he said the words that he recalled that their last individual conversation had ended with her hitting him. And the one before that had involved nudity in a really-not-good-way.

Going by my luck, she’ll probably stand on me in her Eva at the end of this one, he thought morosely.

She ignored his comment, and squatted down, perched above cold tarmac. Suddenly, in a blur, one hand shot out, to return, something clutched between thumb and index finger. Shinji squinted; it looked vaguely rock-like. No, it wasn’t a rock, he realised.

“A snail?” he asked.

“Correct.” Two grey eyes stared down at the small gastropod.

“What are you doing with it?”

There was no answer. The muscular, slime-covered flesh of the creature writhed, as it tried to escape from the thing which held it, but the shell which was meant to defend it had been compromised, and it could do nothing to escape.

“Are you interested in snails?” Shinji asked, trying to make conversation.

“No.” All her attention seemed devoted to the singular animal.

There was an uncomfortable silence, only broken when the boy let out an uncomfortable chuckle. “I had some as pets when I was very small,” he said, in an embarrassed tone. “Yuki and... my foster mothers said that they were easy starter pets, and a lot less... um... hard to look after than a hamster or anything. They’d leave these funny slime trails on the inside of their tank, but sometimes they’d stare at me, when I was giving them food, and I used to wonder what they thought of me, although...”

“No.” Her tone was flat. “They did not think of you. They lacked even the limited sapience of mammals. They simply crawled on their stomach-foot, uncaring of the world around them, blind, ruled by instincts. Unthinking, unable to contemplate that they only existed at your sufferance. They understood nothing.”

“... well, I know that, but...” Shinji shook his head, slightly annoyed. He had just been trying to make conversation. “They were just pets, you know? For a ... six year old, I think. For a small child.”

Rei did not turn to face him. “You were five. And you told your foster mothers that you did not want stupid snails, you wanted a guinea pig. That request was rejected, even when you threw a tantrum. And so as a form of retribution, after a while you ignored the stupid snails, and so they starved to death. And it worked; you were bought a guinea pig when you were six.”

Shinji was silent, shocked. “How do.... why... I did not!” he finally managed. Because there was an echo in his head, of words risen from the depths of the river Lethe that runs through the memory to speak of things that had once happened, and the phrasing, though not the intonation, was familiar.

“Such behaviour has been deemed acceptable by society, for children of that age. You were by no means unique in your actions.”

“So... how do you know? Who told you?” he said, the blush fighting with anger for dominance on his already cold-reddened face.

“You are inappropriately defensive,” she told him, still staring at the writhing snail, its motions starting to slow, as it exhausted itself. “It is the concept of a pet which is the oddity, not a human killing another creature.”

“I don’t care about the snail!” Shinji snapped. “It’s just... don’t... people don’t do... argh.” He sucked in a breath, and tried to rebalance his thoughts. “You can’t just talk about things like that like you do!”

Rei was silent. He honestly couldn’t tell if she was paying attention to him or not.

“It’s my past!” he finally managed. “Not yours!”

“It is my present,” she said, simply. “Because you are here.”

The boy worked his jaw a few times, before there was a short, sharp, wet-sounding snap, and Rei wiped her hand on the cold material. Straightening up, she turned to face him, for the first time in the conversation. The moon, so distant and small and cold, was just a few days past full, and though her head blocked it, the light gave her a halo of silvery hair.

“Don’t do it,” he said, face uneasy. “Just... don’t, okay?”

She stared at him, unblinking.

“Please. It’s...” he flapped a hand in the air, trying to find a way of putting it, because neither language nor society had adapted properly to the existence of parapsychics, “...weird. You’re a postcognitive, right?”

Mutely, she nodded.

“Just... don’t say it out loud, please.”

“But it happened.” There might have been the faintest hints of confusion in her voice. “I know.”

“Try to... try to pretend that you don’t know.” He winced, looking for a response. “Please?”

“Test Pilots, please report to the station point for last checks. I repeat, Test Pilots, please report to the station point.”

“We are needed,” she said. And without a word, she turned on her heel, and strode off.


~’/|\’~


Above, the night sky was filled with stars. They did not twinkle, and they did not shine; they were cold, distant points of light. If there were children's tales told of these stars, they were the kind which were censored and bowdlerised, all to keep from infant minds from the terrible truths of the cosmos. The darkness of the void reached from horizon to horizon with no hint of dawn; terrible, unreachable, anathematical to light, which died in its Stygian majesty.

With the debatable safety of the command vehicle, relocated far from the site of the ambush, out of the sight of the Harbinger, Misato shivered. This was not purely a response to the abomination which devoured all light, though that was an influence. A dark dome, running from sky to sky, blocking out all light and leav... that was not something that the woman wished to think about. But if it had been chilly in the night air, it was freezing now. The pentagonal trapezohedron of Mot was a force of palpable cold. The water was freezing out of the air, microscopic hailstones pattering down in a blizzard blown by the thermal imbalance, and underneath, in the areas of the open mine which had flooded, the scream of flash-frozen ice was still audible. Even with the heaters turned up to maximum, there was still a decided nip to the air. She wished she was wearing heated armour.

“It wasn’t doing this before,” she said, worry in her voice. “Do we know when it started?”

Back in London-2, Ritsuko shook her head. “Not exactly,” she replied, “but it seems to have coincided with some of the Migou kinetic strikes on it. We... think it might be something to do with some kind of regeneration-based effect, but...” she shrugged. “For all we know, it might just like the dark and cold.” She licked her lips. “Are the Evangelions secured?”

[Unit 01 is braced for impact. Position is stable.]

[Unit 00 is braced for impact. Position is stable.]

“Yes, they are,” the Major said, her tone distracted. “As they were thirty seconds ago.” She was distracted, because all eyes were watching the timer count down until the start of the operation.

{00:01:01}

The passage of the Harbinger had bought it almost to the target point. It was precisely on schedule; its velocity had not wavered, even when under heavy assault from Migou forces. The vast dark shape, almost invisible in the shade it created, was an overlay in all the target systems locked on it, a wireframe in the autocensors.

{00:00:37}

In the entry plug of Unit 01, Shinji Ikari worked his fingers around the controls, taking deep breaths of LCL. The plug suit felt too tight; he could feel the slight stiffness where the inner suit and the outer suit meshed. Trying to put it out of his mind, he ran over the instructions in his head again and again, and tried to put the strange sense of disorientation from the feeling of the Eva being prone out of his mind. His job was to hit the Harbinger with a relativistic beam of charged particles. The LITAN would do the aiming for him; all he had to do was to follow its instructions, and authorise the fire. Hidden behind a blast shield, a safe distance away from the red projected line that Mot would take, he waited.

{00:00:31}

Rei Ayanami waited, hands locked tightly around the butterfly control yokes. Grey eyes stared, unblinking, at the interior walls of her plug, at the mass of overlays and read-outs. She was stationed along the line, on the same side as Unit 01. It had been worked out that if the number of vertices limited the number of independent beams that Mot could manifest, it was best to make it split its fire. Unit 00 was marginally closer, too, because the damage output of her Babylon, already aimed at the point where the Harbinger would be when she needed to fire, was less than that of the charge beam, and thus the hostile’s fire should be prioritised towards her.

That was an acceptable outcome. She had an inferior synch ratio. It was a tactically sound decision.

{00:00:20}

“Final green light from Evangelion Group, Vice Admiral.”

[NEGS Romulus is green. Alpha Detachment is green.]

[NEGS New Mubai is green. Bravo Detatchment Detachment is green.]

[NEGS Stefugladisi is green. Charlie Detachment is green.]

“We have green from EuroHighCom, too. They reaffirm consent for use of Happy Birthday.”

The man smiled. “Good.”

{00:00:00}

It was time.

Directly underneath Harbinger-5, at the bottom of a now-frozen pool of muddy, residue-contaminated water, lay a little surprise for the incarnate god-thing that would render the world its plaything. Hardened and engineered so that it remained viable at elevated r-state, it waited. Even the sudden, unexpected coldness was nothing; it had been overengineered to such a degree that it could cope.

And when the timer hit zero, it detonated.

A new dawn rose under the dome of eternal night.


~’/|\’~


Hundreds of kilometres to the north-east, the Migou airbase was an unobtrusive area of flattened ground and low, clustered buildings. The Loyalist defence forces were stationed up-top, in buildings and hangars which looked uncannily like standard, New Earth Government facilities. It was not exactly surprising; form followed function for both the NEG and the Migou, and there were only so many ways that an armoured, camouflaged above-ground facility for a human-proportioned individual could look.

Of course, this staging ground was, in itself, only camouflage for the airbase underneath. It was only with the aid of their sensory equipment that the four Dawn-class reconnaissance mecha even knew it was there; the vehicles launched by magnetic accelerator, as the fungoid beings were capable of handling accelerations that would have squished even a highly modified fighter pilot, and the landing areas only revealed themselves when they were needed.

Lieutenant Danda momentarily deactivated his nerve bypasses, and stretched, before returning to the AR-enhanced cockpit. Hypothetically, this was an easy engagement. Dawns were not heavy assault units; they were built around the principle that if they were getting into a fight which wasn’t an ambush, they were doing it wrong. The two backpack vECF missiles on the heavy weapons specialist in the squad were of the same yield as the specialist ammo issued as standard to a main battle tank.

No, they just had to hang back, feed drone data to the two Engel squadrons who had tracked them to this position, and flag hostile units for fire support. The ACXB organisms were the heavy hitters, even a comparatively light Species like the Aral, and they would be the ones who braved the defences, not the diminutive Dawns.

They just had to wait for their cue to act.

When light flared to the south, a fireball rising up into the higher atmosphere right on schedule, they had that signal. All across the base, hidden chutes slammed open, as the Migou scrambled their air forces in response to such an action, hostile emwar and sensor systems flicking to active.

All they managed was to pinpoint their own location, as the Engels’ support drones emptied their racks of missiles at the Dawn-designated targets, while the armoured monsters began their own attack, plasma beams cutting through the armoured structures and seeking out the Loyalist defenders.

And all across the Eastern Front, this kind of scene repeated itself countless times. The forces of the New Earth Government had just happened to be in the right position to take advantage of the fact that the Migou were moving their own reinforcements to deal with the Harbinger threat, to attack the weakened lines, and Reclaim their own planet.

Almost as it had been planned.




The visible blast should have been near-perfectly hemispherical; a three kilometre wide fireball enveloping the monstrosity. That was not the case. The AT-Field of the hostile lasted just enough for a notable asymmetry to shape the effects, before it evaporated like ice in the height of summer. Instead of a dome, it formed an inverted skirt, a toroidal shape with the Harbinger at the centre before the AT-Field broke and the nuclear fire washed over it.

[Anomalous blast formation detected.], reported an LAI.

“Brace for impact!” the Major screamed into the communications link, as the visible distortion of the blast wave propagated outwards, tearing rock and shredding canyons alike. She tugged on her jumpbelt, and hoped that the oddness the LAIs had flagged wouldn’t ruin everything. The sudden shriek of the Gieger counter was her companion, as the technicians and LAI systems babbled their reports.

Shinji jumped backwards in his seat, the urge of his reflexes too much, at the sudden burst of light. A normal radiance, he noted; no trace of the Colour, for which he was thankful. Resettling, he squeezed the controls tight, behind the vast metal blast shield they had placed him. The Evangelion was fastened down, and the shield took the worst of the blast, but he was still buffeted by the gales, the pressure wave making the metal scream from overpressure.

Upwards, the twisted blast bloomed, punching through the dark dome that the Harbinger bore with it, and leaving a fracture of warped angles and colours unseen by mortal man propagating across the night. The strange, unfamiliar stars flared in intensity and shifted, as if they had only appeared as such from a certain angle, and the sudden shift in perspective given by the blast was restoring their true form.

[Do not engage until effects can be observed.]

It was fifteen long seconds from the detonation until the fireball had faded enough for Harbinger-5 to be visible, in the still-lit cloud that now blossomed around it towards the sky.

Once it had been an object of unnaturally precise geometry, its ten, kite-shaped faces perfect and immutable. Once, but no more. The near-contact detonation had slagged it in the same way that a golden idol might be melted when thrown into a blast furnace. Its bottom had run like wax where it had not simply evaporated, fronds and tendrils of liquid crystal forming a funereal veil for the object. The top had fared better, but only comparatively. Even as the light around it dimmed, the nearest face cracked with a thunderous screech; shattering like suddenly-cooled glass. It no longer stood vertically, but now leaned, its axis no longer sidereal in inclination.

[Target remains operational. Begin Phase Two.]

Above the horizon, and up from wide boreshafts, appeared the Atlantic Reserve Fleet, each firing as soon as possible. Even before the light from the nuclear blast had faded, and as a twisted aura borealis rippled in unnatural light in the black dome, the stellar intensity of plasma weaponry, and the green afterglow of charge beams bought further light to the night. Each impact, though they might have been able to core an enemy ship, only gouged a small wound into the crystal or left another section warped, but the cumulative effects were lethal to the Harbinger, which appeared stunned, floating lopsided, without retaliation or its own AT-Field.

The swarms of drones and planes which were launched only added to the damage, wave after wave of missiles impacting in the unnatural light of the Colour.

With a series of muffled explosions, the blast shields in front of Unit 01 and Unit 00 broke apart, the sections protecting their vulnerable weaponry falling forwards. Rei was already firing, methodically placing vECF shells into the precise centre of the foe, the flare of the arcanochromatic weapons nothing compared to the twisted stars above. Shinji took a deep breath of LCL, and, arms no, it it’s the Evangelion’s arms sluggish due to reduced power, shifted the charge beam around to the precise location his LITAN requested. The Harbinger was so small from this distance, and the smallest movement moved the aim point so much, but slowly he guided the reticule into place.

In the core of the weapon, the central core of the ‘shell’ of ultradense hydrogen was suddenly ripped apart. A sudden series of magnetic spasms sent the protons forth at relativistic velocities, denuded of their neutralising electrons and constrained by an arcanomagnetic field, into the world to seek out their destiny. The electrons arced forth into the clouds of coolant that now surrounded the Unit, lighting the white fog in electric blue, but that had been taken account of in the firing solution, along with other things, such as the Earth’s magnetic field, its gravitational effect, the other such weapons in use, and the Coriolis effect.

Until they bent around their target. Along with everything else which was being thrown at it. Around the darkness of the maimed god was a shimmering, iridescent oil-slick of an AT-Field, diverting all attacks around the foe, without letting any near its sacrosanct body.

“Cease fire!” ordered Misato, suddenly afraid.

“Something’s happening!”

“The Shaws are going crazy!”

“Unrecognised energy build-up in target!”

An unnaturally pure note sounded out, a sound not entirely unlike a finger on a wine-glass, shifting and modulating as it jumped through the spectrum at random. And then the Harbinger tore itself apart.

“Is... it dead?” Ritsuko mouthed.

It was not dead. It was merely... changed. With an indescribable din, the dome shattered, suddenly solid crystal, rather than a zone of transition. And each piece, a diminutive version of the intact Harbinger, flowed inwards, to form a shell around their progenitor. Or, maybe, around their self. Were they children, a weapon of their parent, or were they merely an extension of the will of Mot? Was there really a difference?

That was no reason to stop firing, and these lesser construct were so fallible, so weak. The lesser missiles of the bombers were enough to shatter one, sending void-dark crystal shattering to reflect the war above them, and the capital grade weapons punched right through.

A critical point was reached, though, and suddenly the protective shell disintegrated. No, that wasn’t the right word. Was absorbed would be more accurate, except even that wasn’t true. What could be said was that the Harbinger was not restored to its former glory. It was not restored for, now, around it at each face, floated a lesser version of itself. And zooming in further, each orbital had ten orbitals itself. And one could look in further, and further, and further; layer upon layer, shell upon shell upon shell. If there was a final layer, the NEG could not see it in the fractal cloud of trapezohedrons that enveloped, that was the Harbinger.

[Target appears to have regenerated all damage. Target is emitting large numbers of high energy electrons.]

“We nuked it, it’s already regenerated, and now it’s radioactive?” Misato muttered in disbelief. “That’s just not fair.” Then her training took over. “Shinji, Rei! Get out of its...”

Whatever else she was about to say was lost in the noise. The dreadful, terrible noise, which screamed through the world like the cry of a penangal. It was a noise which ceased to be noise, and started to be a shock-wave, which buffeted everything and tore its way through the landscape. And it was not the attack.

It was merely the herald of their destruction.

Aircraft died. Escorts died. Capital ships died. Hills died. Mountains died. The white radiance of the beams which Harbinger-5 loosed upon its foes touched everything that it could see, and it had so many more faces from which to fire.

Moving even before the sound was released, Unit 00 threw itself back, over a cliff face, and fell, the shattering noise of its armour plates and the ice at the bottom of the canyon muted by the cry of the Habringer.

Unit 01 was not so luckily, as tens of beams from the lesser trapezohedrons bracketed it, dancing across its surface.

Shinji screamed, and Unit 01 screamed with him, the armour melting and burning into the unnatural flesh of the Evangelion even as one of the horrific beams tore through his lower gut and out the other side. The Evangelion screamed, the scream of a dying god even as it pawed and clawed at its armour, trying to tear off the sheets of ceramic that went far beyond the white-hot, so hot that they were invisible. The radiance of the AT-Field that shimmered over the wounds was the only thing keeping the Evangelion together, and compared to the terrible brightness of the beams, it was dim.

“Eject!” Misato barked, her face horrified, as the screens ran down the communications cable. “Get him out of there, before it destroys the Eva!”

[OVERRULED was the LITAN’s response, from inside the Unit 01. [Exterior environment will be lethal to the pilot.]

The Major swallowed, still hearing the screams. They were painful to listen to; how bad must they to be to experience? But the LITAN was right, prioritising pilot... Shinji’s safety like that.

“Engage morale filters,” she ordered, gritting her teeth, as LAI systems removed the screens from the audio feed. Biting her lip, she felt the coppery taste of blood, and winced in pain. “I want a barrage at this point!” she ordered, bringing up an AR display in her Eyes, and marking the location at the bottom of the elevated position. “Use vECF warheads, and I want it collapsed. Understood? Override proximity warnings!”

“What... sorry, yes. Requesting authorisation code.” It was given. “Understood.”

The barrage of missiles, arcing up and over from one of the fire positions, was partially intercepted by the Harbinger, but the thud and flash of Colour of the compact warheads that got through were enough to collapse the hillside, in a pile of rubble and dust and ice. For just a few moments, ghostly white beams shone through the clouds, and it rained black crystal and molten rock alike, before they vanished. And soon, the Harbinger was quiet, as it resumed its passage.

For a moment, there was silence in the command vehicle; the silence of the survivor.

“We... we have a signal from Unit 00,” one of the technician managed.

“I am alive,” Rei’s cold voice stated. “Unit 00 has suffered damage to its dermal plates, but will be operational once I am given power again.”

“Unit 01!” Misato yelled. “What happened to Unit 01?”


~’/|\’~


Pain. It hurt. He hurt all over.

There was a buzz of voices in the background. Everything... it looked so red. Redder than normal; hexagons and bars and shapes of crimson flashing across his vision. There was text of some sort, too, but it was blurred and out of focus, unreadable.

“Shinji, Shinji!”

[Test Pilot Ikari has been incapacitated. Autonomous Survival Mode engaged. Weapons and systems remain operational and autotargetting, until motive force is recovered through synchronisation. WARNING! Critical damage incurred. WARNING! Low power! Back-up batteries engaged to supplement power flow.]

“No! Get the LITAN to stand down!”

It was funny, really. They’d mentioned that the LITAN would keep firing even if he fell; it couldn’t use the held-weapons, but it would do what it could to keep the Unit safe, even if it couldn’t move. It was very advanced; a wonder of automation and AI design. They’d gone all that length to get it to do that, but that thing that the Evangelion had done in that first fight, had terrified them all. It had terrified him, because, in a sense, it had him doing it. It still gave him nightmares.

This pain-filled, red-lit world he found himself in, that feeling of another body barely there... it was better than going berserk.

“It’s... yes, it’s accepting the codes!”

Power levels critical.] There was a fractional pause, before the LAI network spoke again. [‘Play Dead’ Mode engaged. Unit 01 will deactivate all systems beyond life support and central control, until stable synchronisation is resumed or the Unit is salvaged.]

There was a small shift in the LCL, which produced a sagging, sinking feeling in the pit of the boy’s stomach.

“Prepare for possible use of Option Zero.”

“Ouranos, medical report! Try to stabilise him, until we can recover the plug!”

It hurt all over. And inside Shinji Ikari’s head, hate and exhaustion fought. It had just... he swallowed a mouthful of LCL, or at least tried; he couldn’t seem to be able to force it down, and gagged. Teeth gritted, he tried to force the Unit to stand.

And failed, because the Evangelion was locked down. Unseen tears running down his face, he whimpered incoherently.

[WARNING! Pilot is has severe sympathetic burns. WARNING! Pilot’s animaneural waveform is breaking down. Contamination detected in the three primary components of the waveform] The voice was getting softer. [WARNING! Vital signs fading. Cardiac rhythm destabilising...

He could no longer hear the mechanical, male voice of the LITAN. It was good. No-one was telling him what to do anymore. He could just rest. He was tired. So very tired. Something punched him in the chest, hard, but he was just too exhausted to do anything. To move, to try to get away from it, to even scream any more.

Shinji Ikari closed his eyes. He had already stopped breathing a while ago.


~’/|\’~
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Chapter 11

Rei 02, In Water And Darkness / some words she spake, in solemn tenor and deep organ tune

EVANGELION



~'/|\'~



Without sensibility no object would be given to us, without understanding no object would be thought. Thoughts without content are empty, intuitions without concepts are blind.
Immanuel Kant
"Critique of Pure Reason"







A heartbeat.

Just one lonely heartbeat.

Then silence again.


~'/|\'~



“At 07:25:00, Synchronised Military Time, Operation Ankou began with the initiation of a Mixcoatal-class 12 MT pure fusion device, buried at a depth of two metres, directly beneath Harbinger-5. Contrary to our best estimates, the AT-Field of the hostile was not, I repeat, was not immediately nullified, and thus destruction was not total. With recourse to the footage from Evangelion Unit 00, the closest friendly unit to transmit such data, we can see that the core-equivalent was not exposed by the blast, although the Harbinger suffered major damage.”

On the screen, the succession of slides tracked the progression of the blast, as the malformed toroidal plasma propagated upwards, until Mot’s AT-Field gave way, and the image was lost. In the corner, an extrapolated diagram showed the damage inflicted to the crystalline structure of the Harbinger.

“Nevertheless, Operation Ankou continued. As soon as valid firing solutions could be ascertained, local forces, with the addition of the North Atlantic Reserve Fleet, the battleships Romulus, New Mubai, and Stefugladisi, and the Titan-Class ACXB combat organisms, Evangelion Units 00 and 01, began the next phase.”

The projection flicked between autocensored images of the combat, and wireframe models covered in data readouts and estimated figures. Misato was reading the pre-prepared speech from the notes she had uploaded to her Eyes although Ritsuko had modified her first draft with additional technical details.

It showed.

“The damage inflicted on the Harbinger was light on a per-shot level. The crystal structure of the entity is estimated to be between twenty-five and a hundred and twenty five times more resilient to kinetic impact than the outer structure of a Migou Synergy-class battlecruiser, the toughest vessel we have managed to kill, and that is before its regenerative capacities, or the solid nature of it, are taken into account. The MAGI have noted that it took increased damage from arcanochromatic weaponry, compared to a conventional device of the same yield, and so recommend that all weapons which can be enhanced in that way are so.”

The woman licked her lips, as the screen changed to the trajectory of Unit 01’s charge beam shot.

“Fifty three seconds after the initiation of the operation, and thirty-eight seconds after the fireball had dissipated enough for visual contact with the entity to be re-established, Harbinger-5 responded. It amplified its AT-Field, to the extent that space-like paths around the target were visibly warped even before they contacted the discrete phase-space. This phenomenon was not displayed by Harbingers-1, -3, or -4, although the MAGI have noted similarities to the “wave” form of Harbinger-3, from the Shaw readings. It then began a process which ended with the reintegration of the dome of darkness into itself, and its regeneration into some kind of fractal thing.”

Casualty figures began to flash up.

“It then destroyed the Atlantic Reserve Fleet. Romulus, New Mubai, and Stefugladisi were lost with all hands. Evangelion Unit 01 took extreme damage, which left it combat-incapable; it en-route to Ostberlin-2 for emergency medical treatment for the pilot and repairs. Unit 00 took minor damage in the process of evading the hostile. It remains combat-ready, and is currently being moved ahead of the hostile’s path for a second intercept attempt.”

Misato swallowed hard, and hated herself for being here.

“Operation Ankou can thus be deemed to have been a failure.”

She hated herself for being in this conference chamber, giving a report which could have been given by a damned LAI, let alone a subordinate, answering questions about things that the questioners already knew the answers. She was here while it was Ritsuko, and the team of sorcerers and doctors that she’d bought with her, who were going to be with Shinji. It just didn’t seem right.

But rightness didn’t matter. She was the Director of Operations, and there were operations she needed to direct. She couldn’t allow herself to feel; she needed to think.

Even if she did feel.


~'/|\'~



He was floating in darkness. No sound, no sight. He could feel the fluid around him, chilling him to the bone.

And, despite the blindness, despite the sense that there is not only no sound, but there is no way that there can be sound, he saw that there are others in here with him in this darkness.

And they called to him. In total silence, and utter darkness, the figures called to him.


~'/|\'~



The endless hours of waiting had ticked by in Chicago-2, and it had long since passed that subtle point where ‘late’ because ‘early’. But the reddish-blond haired girl, who stood in the engineering control centre, staring over at the figure of her Evangelion attached to the transport, was wide awake. Wide awake, and getting very frustrated.

“Have they given us permission to move?” she snapped at the Deputy Director of Operations, the hints of tiredness only amplifying her boredom and annoyance. “One Evangelion is down, and the Prototype isn’t good enough. Can’t they see that they need me?” Some might have said that the catch in her voice was desperation.

“Still no chance,” Captain Martello said with a shrug that she felt was far too light-hearted for the scenario. “Hasn’t changed. The Migou have moved more than enough interdiction squadrons to the Atlantic that we can’t sneak by, and NorAmCom can’t spare the ships to make sure we’d get through... and we’d be too slow, too, if we had a proper battleship and carrier escort.”

Asuka gritted her teeth. She intellectually knew that he was right, that the cold logic of logistics was irrefutable, but this sensation of uselessness; she hated it. She was being kept here, being wasted, because other people hadn’t been competent. Especially when it could have been so different; if they’d kept her in Ostberlin-2, rather than moving her straight on to Chicago-2, if they’d dispatched her as soon as the warnings sounded, if the Migou hadn’t moved those forces to the Atlantic...

Millions could die because she hadn’t been used to her full potential.

Ten thousand could-have-beens filled the girl’s head, as she settled back down on her kitbag, over in the corner, waiting for an order which refused to come.


~'/|\'~



”Mama?”

The voice is far above him, distant. “Oh dear,” it says, sounding somewhat maternal. “He hasn’t...”

“No,” says a deeper voice. “He hasn’t grasped that she’s... well, you know.”

“And his father?” A second woman.

“He... can’t be here.” The deeper voice sounds uncomfortable. “He...” the two shadows far above lean together, and there is distant whispering. He doesn’t pay any attention to it; he’s too busy clinging to the suitcase they handed him, when they took him away from his home.

He hopes this holiday will be short. He doesn’t want to be away from Mummy and Daddy for too long.

“Oh. I see,” the second woman says, her tone leaden. “That’s not good. Oh no. I hope... well, he’ll have to, right?”

The first merely shakes her head, and squats down to give him a too tight hug. He squirms to get free, and fails.

And then the tears come.


No. That wasn’t it.


~'/|\'~



The low-flying cargo planes that tore through the early dawn sky were flying heavy, their vast, delta-shaped hulls crammed with equipment. On board, in the more-cramped-than-usual passenger space, a hastily set-up AR-dataspace was allowing the passengers to work. The cabin was more cramped than it should have been, because almost a third of the space had been commandeered in the name of sorcery, and the preparations for what they were about to do.

Ritsuko, paper robe tied tight over fresh pink skin, shivered in the slight chill that was present even in the sealed preparation hab, and wished that she hadn’t neglected her normal daily routine in the preparations for the Unit 00 start-up test, which was making this more uncomfortable than it should have been. She shook her head. That had been stupid, she thought, as she resumed her revision of the role in the procedure that she would be fulfilling.

“Rits?” the voice came over her implants, along with the attendant face in her harcontacts.

“Yes, Sarany?” she asked the head of the Unit 01 team who, damn her, was getting to sit in the warm. “Have you checked everything? Will it work?”

“Mmmhmm,” the woman replied, her tone somehow managing to sound perpetually gloomy. “Yes. It won’t be perfect, but, yes. Although... I do have to say, it might be better here than it would be back in L2. We depleted most of our stocks of parts after Harbinger-4. ‘Least the 02 team left an entire set of Type-B-2 spares back in Ostbe Two, which is more than I can say for us.”

Ritsuko nodded, biting on her lip, despite the fact that the other woman couldn’t actually see her. “That’s... well, it matched the inventory records, but I wanted a proper analysis. Thank you.”

“I can’t work miracles,” the nazzady remarked. “We may have parts, but they’re B-2s, not B-1s. They won’t fit quite perfectly. And that’s nothing to say of the tissue damage. Spare parts won’t fix the hole in Oh-One’s chest. Or the tissue trauma. And we’re going to have to fish the crystal bits out of the Ackersby, before o-necrosis sets in, and...”

“It doesn’t have to be perfect,” Ritsuko said, trying to keep her voice calm. “It just has to be enough to get it operational.” She cut the line.

The interior door of the sealed unit opened, and a round-faced man left, rubbing his right arm slightly. He stopped, as soon as he noticed Ritsuko’s glance, and frowned at her slight smirk. “Damn injections,” he muttered.

“Look, it’s necessary, Wei” the blond replied wearily. “We’ll need boosters for this... and you’re not telling me that you’d prefer to be out for a week instead?”

“I know that,” he paused, “and I know we’re just choiring; you’re primary in this.” He shifted uneasily, his paper robe falling open to reveal a surprisingly honed body. “It’s just... I guess I’m just too much of an old-school Horakian. Bet the students nowadays don’t have to learn to cast without implants first.”

Ritsuko sniffed. “No, they don’t. And the lack of tissue trauma is a wonderful thing,” she remarked.

“Quite.” The Chinese man rolled his eyes. “So, for this, we’ll be using a trimetric Eidesis-type feeder-channel to handle the ruach flows?” he asked, tone suddenly becoming serious.

The woman nodded, her view of his lean body entirely obscured by the diagrams displayed in front of her eyes. “Yes. The MAGI have sent the verification signal for the double-Czech to be used; the astronomical correspondences are such that we can also throw in a Yun-purity ward, and that should make Stage-6 considerably easier on us all.”

“I love full moons... or close enough that you can account for it in the rite,” Wei smiled. “And the Verstärker-support choir?”

“They’ve got one set up in the Herkunft Group facility in Ostberlin-2; the Representative pulled some strings and we’re going to be allowed to borrow it. I’ve checked... you, Dalton, Esmin and Afrir are all compatible with it.”

He winced. “That will mean more injections when we get there, won’t it?”

“Yes, it will.” She shook her head. “I don’t know why you don’t get an autoinjector, you know. Makes everything a lot less painful.”

“Same reason I don’t upgrade my implants, or get Eyes, or anything like that.” Wei narrowed his eyes. “I’ve made that clear to you before.”

Ritsuko nodded, hand unconsciously going to her back, where long-unused spinal ports rubbed against the thin material of the paper gown. “I know. I’m sorry.” Her thoughts flickered to the thing that they had in the hold, that none of the other sorcerers or the engineers knew about. “And do up your robe, for goodness sake,” she added, pointedly.


~'/|\'~



It was getting cold in the darkness, cold in the water that enveloped and surrounded him. His lungs screamed to breath, but they were useless, motionless.

And yet he did not drown. He sunk ever deeper into the black without ever succumbing to it.

Lungs filled with fluid, he remained conscious, aware, and yet immobile.


~'/|\'~



“What do you mean, you refuse to fully unlock the strategic arsenal!” the Vice-Admiral protested, his face reddening. “It took 12 megatonnes, point-blank! I hardly think we can fight this... this thing with piddly little tactical weapons!”

Misato quite agreed with him. He may have been an annoyance at the previous meeting, but in this case, both she and him were of one mind. Now, if he’d listened to her in the first place and they’d hit the Harbinger before it had passed the frontlines... well, that was past, now. And in retrospect, he had had a point. They were losing territory all across the Eastern front, but the losses were being minimised. Either way, the point was that he was right, now.

Others disagreed.

“That’s exactly what I mean,” said the President of the NEG, her eyes narrowed. “I am not going to let you throw around megatonne arcanochromatic weaponry. Conventional nuclear weapons, yes. But... I’ve been briefed on the risk that the Migou will take the use of such things as an excuse to start strategic orbital bombardment.” Her eyes flicked down for a moment. “And it’s too high to allow it. We’re walking a too-fine line here. Far too fine to allow that to happen.”

“Not to mention the risk of a Colour-stable mass forming,” added an advisor. “We don’t want another Berlin-2 Aftermath.” She shook her head, sadly. “Never again.”

“Yes, that too.” The President pursed her lips. “And Berlin-2 was contained. This... this wouldn’t be.”

The olive-skinned Vice Admiral grimaced, his image in the conference replicating the expression to the last detail. “But we saw that the Mixcoatal-class broke the AT-Field, but failed to kill it! We know we can get through, but it’s upped the defences, with the new fractal structure. And, no, we can’t just use larger conventional nuclear weapons from a distance,” he added, in an aggrieved tone, “because they’re A-Pod propelled!”

“Then bury them,” said the Minister of War, leaning forwards in her own window. “You used the nuke as a mine for the first attack; why not do it again?”

A man cleared his throat. “It’s not that simple, ma’am,” advised a nazzada in a dark grey uniform. “Deployment of strategic weapons is based around the assumption that they will be launched. Their placement is such as to minimise the chance that they’ll be detected at launch, which is the most risky time for a warhead, because that’s when they’re optimised for speed, rather than the stealthed final approach.”

There was silence, as people waited for the man from Strategic Missile Command to explain.

“So the majority of strategic launch sites are in Africa or South America; safe territory, not the frontlines of Europe and North America. There are plenty of tactical sites, but we won’t physically be able to move any launch-capable warhead into place for use as a mine. Even if we could convert them from Lauch-Type to Mine-Type in the time we have, which is unlikely. And the self-destructs for key strategic locations are designed exactly so you, or a hostile, can’t move them easily.” He cleared his throat again. “To put it simply... the time for that has passed. Current tactics are based around the deployment of nought point one-to-fifty kilotonne ordinance at a tactical to low-level strategic level. Against almost everything, use of megatonne weapons is overkill.”

“Well, look. One of the things not covered by ‘almost’,” snapped the Vice Admiral. “Your job was to foresee exactly this kind of problem. That you didn’t do so shows a lack of the proper planning from the Strategic Missile Command. I do hope you’re properly prepared should something happen with, say, Harbinger-2!

And, again, Misato couldn’t help but agree. The entire point of technical aides was to sit back, only to interject with large amounts of relevant data, but that didn’t make specialists like this any less annoying from the point of view of the people who were actually making the decisions. Mentally, she shrugged. Maybe it was just her. Maybe people who were in these high level military meetings through rank, rather than technically being a kind of aide herself, were trained to deal with smug specialists. But, still, shouldn’t the people behind the deployment of strategic weaponry have been prepared for the possibility that a Harbinger-level threat might require multiple such weapons to kill them? If they’d done it properly, she wouldn’t have to order two teenagers to fight against something that they didn’t have the weapons to kill.

“Ahem!” President Nyanda cleared her throat. “Vice Admiral Lípez! If we can avoid the acrimony...”

“Sorry, ma’am. In that case, we will have to consider what other options we have available to us, if we cannot,” the man gave a bitter chuckle, “rely on high-yield weaponry.”

Misato shuddered, overtly. Of all the people in the conference, she had the one who’d been closest to the actual failed operation; still safely over the horizon, but they’d been getting the feed from Units 00 and 01. That moment when the light of the newborn sun had washed into the AT-Field, and been rebuffed was going to haunt her.

The discussion resumed. But Major Katsuragi was distracted. There was now something squatting in the back of her mind, and on the tip of her tongue; something which she knew she had already subconsciously noticed, but which had not breached the waters of her awareness.


~'/|\'~



Shinji Ikari sat alone on a cold, barren landscape, hugging his knees, the chill wind piercing him to the bone. The air smelt vaguely like snow, with that almost-metallic taste, but the clear blue sky reached from horizon to horizon. It seemed so dead. The world seemed all too hollow, like it was painted on the sky. It was almost as if he could reach down, and pull the skin of bare earth and rock from the corpus of the world.

And above him, the birds sang. The tumultuous, swirling flocks of birds, all species and breeds flowing like water, writing words that he could not read in their flight. The chaotic, meaninglessly meaningful birds, free and wild and unconstrained, exulting in flight. The land may have been dead, but the sky was alive.

“You’re scared of freedom,” a young boy said, from somewhere behind him.

“I’m scared of being dead,” Shinji objected. “And of being hurt. Also, of Harbingers, monsters, the Migou...”

“... your father.”

“Yes!” Shinji swallowed. “No. I don’t know!”

“Are you scared of me?” a cold voice said, from in front of him.

He looked up to meet a pair of cold grey eyes. Yes!, he wanted to say. “Sort of,” was what he actually admitted.

“To you I am an object of fear,” Rei said.

“You are very scared. Of the world. Of everything,” the young boy said.

“Why shouldn’t I be?” Shinji protested, turning to stare at his younger self. “Why not?”

“We are small, in a too-large world.”

“Yes!”

“We are warm, in a too-cold world.”

“Yes!”

“We are sane, in a too-mad world.”

“Yes!”

And that was when the young girl behind him spoke, a piping, yet familiar voice.

“Why do you believe that to be true?”


~'/|\'~



Major Katsuragi sat back in the chair behind the desk she had commandeered. A glance down at the map before her showed the progression of Unit 00, as teams of workers scurried across its surface to fill in the cracks in the outer armour with memomorphic foam. Idly, her finger traced its way across the map, unconsciously doodling on the image of the new form of the Harbinger. Looking up, she stared at the milk-white girl who stood before her, posture rigid, still-wet hair hanging limp down to her shoulders. The utter passivity of that figure was made worse by the dead look in eyes which seemed to state that she could wait forever.

But she had to be the Major now, rather than Misato; she had to be professional.

“Okay, Rei,” the woman said. “I know that your Evangelion was damaged when you did what you had to do to stop the Harbinger from targeting you...”

“I am physically fine,” the girl stated. “I cut synchronisation before I impacted with the ground.”

The Major was fully aware of this, but nodded nonetheless. “Yes. And compared to Unit 01... well, that’s why we’re deploying you again. We need to slow it down; we need more time. I know you might not want to go up against it again, as you saw what Mot did to both Sh... to Unit 01 and the Fleet, but we don’t have a choice if we want to prevent it from getting through.”

“Yes.”

“Once the field-modifications are complete, Unit 00 is basically going to end up being used as a SRBM-launch platform. I’m sorry, but... well, we don’t have much of an option. You know about the reduced profile that the Evas can possess, if we run you off batteries? Well...”

“Yes.”

The Major blinked, as her rhetorical question was answered, and her flow interrupted. “Yes, well, that means you’re the largest unit that can carry the old-style fuel-propelled rockets, as the hostile can ‘see’ conventional missiles, and the ships that they’d normally launch from are too big targets.” She paused. “And we’ve got a bit of luck, too,” she added, jabbing one finger onto her desk as a smile crept across her lips. “After that change it did, from the dome to the smaller-crystals, it seems to be blinder. It’s ignoring our drones and planes at extreme-long range, when it used to target them as soon as it could see them. The change... well,” she shrugged. “Maybe it could only see in the dark. We don’t know, but this works for us.”

“Yes.”

“Your task will be to shadow the target, and move to pre-determined locations for launches.” Leaning forwards, the black-haired woman stared at her subordinate and charge, looking for any reaction at all. “Do you have any questions?”

“You are concerned about Test Pilot Ikari,” the pale-skinned girl said, tilting her head slightly. “You are afraid that it is harming your capacity to make rational decisions.”

A gasp of breath escaped from Misato’s lips, before the Major managed to get a hold of herself. “I am worried, yes,” she admitted, pursing her lips slightly. “However, the tactics are sound.” And that wasn’t actually a question, she added, mentally. She waited, to see if that prompted any response from the sidocy, before a sudden thought struck her. “Are you worried?” she asked, a hint of curiosity in her voice.

“Do not worry,” Rei said, face emotionless. “He is only clinically dead.” There was a pause, just enough for the black-haired woman to take a breath to respond, before Rei added, “He will get better. I will follow your orders without reservation, Major. I have been instructed to do so.”

“Good,” the woman said, gaze flicking down to the desk in front of her to break that unceasing grey stare. And then her eyes widened, and she stared down at what she’d been idly doodling.

“Rei,” she said, not looking up. “What does this look like to you? The drawing,” she added, after a moment’s thought.

“It resembles one of the training mnemonic-images used to aid Children in the shaping and generation of AT-Fields. But it is not accurate; if I or Test Pilot Ikari or Test Pilot Soryu attempted to use it as the basis, it would be weak and malformed.”

“That doesn’t matter,” Misato said, sitting back, the corners of her lips twitching up. “That’s what I thought. That looks a bit like the planar field image, though, doesn’t it?”

“A bit.”

The Major blinked. “Rei, report to your Unit for detailed briefing and plug insertion. I’m going to...no, Rits’ll be busy,” she said to herself. “LAI, get me a direct line to Representative Ikari!” she ordered the desk’s intelligence.

[Yes, ma’am. Please hold.]


~'/|\'~



“Shinji Ikari.”

The wind was colder. The sky was greyer. The plain was emptier, and he sat alone in the barren place.

“Welcome, child.”

The voices were still there.

“Shinji Ikari.”

“Welcome, Child.”

“Shinji Ikari.”

“Who are you?” he asked, shivering slightly.

“Who?

“Or what?”

“Or where?”

“Or when?”

“A-a-any would do,” he suggested.

“And they would all be wrong,” said the piping, too-familiar voice. “The question is always ‘Why?’.”


~'/|\'~



In the near-darkness, the sickly sweet stench of rotting pomegranates was a grating sensation against the nose. There may have been other smells woven into the all-devouring odour; hot metal, cold iron, the chill smell of fresh snow and the reek of faecal matter, but, in truth, all was subservient to the sour sweetness.

“Floor Four is clear, no sign of any tangos, echoes, or hotels. Moving up to Floor Five.”

And the sounds. There was still the faint hum from those computers which remained active, but that was a mere backing choir to the staccato drum of dripping fluid, and the strange harmonics that interlocked and sang, filling the space with unnaturally pure notes. The resonance hushed, a door on the far wall was slid open slightly, to reveal only more darkness beyond. But something passed through, eyes glinting in the light, its paws silent on the carpet of the office building, tail twitching. Its primary, organic eyes on biomechanical stalks scanned the area, as the chip in the cat’s brain guided it to cover, before the stalks poked out.

“Okay... wow. Captain, Felix Alpha has a contact. Something on visual, something on IR, nothing on UV, something on T-ray, and CATSEYE is going berserk. I’m... trying... clearing the image.”

There was something in the room. Something stepped and stacked, like a Mesopotamian pyramid, but on a vastly smaller scale. It was a pale shape in the emergency lighting, and oddly textured, almost scaled, but there was an inorganic rigidity of shape and form which made that not quite applicable.

And around it were bodies. Lots of bodies. Lots of bits of lots of bodies.

The walls and floor and ceiling were not merely red due to the emergency lighting.

“Shit.”

This was the sort of thing which was meant to happen in damp subbasements, in decadent boardrooms, or in doomed laboratories. Nice central points, full of narrative poignancy. This building even had examples of all three. Not in the corner of one of the office rooms, next to the toilets and the staircase. The mundanity which underlay the horror only made it worse. On a desk, partially subsumed by the sleek mass, was an overturned mug. The dark stains of the spilt coffee met and blended with the dark stain that had soaked into the seat and pooled on the floor, until the two were indistinguishable.

The mind paid attention to things like that. Not to the inorganically organic mound, or the dark-shape which seemed to float, like a solid shadow, above the peak, strange labelling and annotations glowing in the far ultraviolet around the tenebrous geometrical object.

It looked like technology. It looked like life. It looked wrong.

“Fall back!” barked Captain Joyeuse, at the head of the armoured figures who had been in position in the stairwell. Her brown eyes were wide under her helmet, staring at the image being streamed to her Eyes. “Fuck it, fall back! X-ray, X-ray, X-ray! We have an X-ray threat in here. Get me a line to Deputy Director Echo, immediately!” she snapped, at her armour’s LAI, her oversized weapon raised towards the door in exoskeletal hands. “Get the fuck out here!”

Running was their only chance. The gun wouldn’t do any good.

Not if that was what she thought it was.

In her Eyes, she watched as the cat-drone collapsed, its CATSEYE signal cutting out, along with its vitals. There was still a feed from the synthetic senses, though from the fibre optic cable. She stared in horror, trying not to fall down the stairs, as the remnants of the cat flowed, in a way which was not quite liquid mercury, and was not quite the decomposition of a long-dead corpse. The creeping mess, white lumps solidifying out of the organic viscosity, swept around the implants and cameras, and rolled up to the pyramid, digging their way into the superstructure, until it could not be seen that they had ever not been there.

It was what she thought it was.

“Mile, you get that?” she muttered, swallowing a mouthful of bile, calling out to the man who had operating the drone, outside in the relative safety of an armoured car. Her feet clattered down the staircase, and the concrete protested at the mass of her combat exoskeleton, but it did not give. “Mile... you hear me?”

There was no response.

The grey-haired drone operator had his knuckle in his mouth, and was biting down, hard. The red blood on his hand and lips was a sharp contrast to his skin, and his breaths were shallow and fast. His pupils were tiny pinpricks in his blue irises.

“Gjorgji?” Junira asked, from beside him, grey eyes widening as he slipped off his headphones. “What’s the matter? What are you doing?”

He only received a flurry of incoherent words, in a foreign language the sidoca didn’t understand or recognise.

“Hikara? Help! Something’s up with...”

“Agent Mile,” snapped Hikara, before he swallowed, and rested a hand on the older man’s shoulder. “Sorry... Gjorgji. Listen to me. Relax.” Slowly, he gestured for the White to be ready, if the older man was about to turn violent. It was never nice to have to use those hand gestures when dealing with a fellow officer, but sometimes too necessary, and Junira readied his stun baton. Then, movements careful and steady, Hikara reached out for the older man’s hand, and eased it out of his mouth.

“Careful... careful... okay.” The nazzada took a breath. “Drone Operator Mile is incapacitated; I need an immediate transfer of his responsibilities, and a replacement to take up the slack. I...”

[Yes, Agent. Duties of Drone Operator Mile have been delegated.]

The man paused, as the LAI responded, then continued. “Junira... get the first aid kit. We’ll want to get the hand done.” He rested the back of his hand against the man’s lined forehead. “No temperature or fever...”

“I’m f-f-fine,” Gjorgji snapped, his stammer putting lie to his statement. At the glances from the other two, he winced. “Okay, I’m n-not harangoja fine, okay. But,” he clenched his fist, rhythmically, “it’s not medical... well, it’s psychological, rather than sickness.” He glared. “And I could do without the crowd,” he added, to the others who were starting to gather around. The newcomers’ weapons were not raised, or even unholstered in many cases, but there was a definite implication in their posture that this could change.

Everyone was on edge after what had been found. But the problem, if one were to ask Gjorgji Mile, was that everyone was not on edge enough.

Shivering, arms clutched around himself, the man looked up at his immediate co-workers, and the other OIS agents who had gathered around in response to the silent alarm, and swallowed hard. “Look,” he managed, his accent thickening. “Something really bad is happening. Not here. Well... here. But not just here. Something big and bad and...” He trailed off, taking a shuddering breath. “It’ll be another Harbinger.” He shivered violently, and jabbed a shaking finger at the monitors, “But... because that... the thing-thing in there? That’s Budapest Syndrome. Trust me on this,” he said, with a brittle certainty.

“Budapest Syndrome?” one of the newer agents asked, before being shushed by their partner. There was a sudden, new, feeling in the air; the static crackle of nervous tension.

“Budapest Syndrome,” said Agent Runiry, with a leaden note in her voice. “Look... I’m not about to call you a liar or anything, but... are you sure?” The pleading note in her voice was obvious.

“I was in Budapest in ‘67,” Gjorgji Mile said, simply.







The sky was starting to fade to black, as the light dimmed and the shadows lengthened. The grey and brown of the earth was covered in dark scribbling as the land caught the light and cast it into sharp contrast. In those parts where the cold sun still caught the land, there was the gleam of twilight on rising waters.

“Why, then?” Shinji asked, hugging his knees, as he shifted slightly.

The child giggled. “‘Why?’ isn’t a question! Because there isn’t an answer! There isn’t a reason! None of this matters!”

“B-but you said...”

“‘Why?’ doesn’t matter. Neither does what! Or who, or where, or anything! Nothing matters! The universe won’t cry when you’re gone, or when Earth has gone, or when the sun has gone! We’re meaningless. We are all meaningless! And that is necessary.”

Shinji took a shuddering breath, hands rubbing unconsciously up and down his biceps. It reminded him that he was real, that he could feel himself, that he was alive and aware and awake. And it did help against the cold, too. “I’m not listening,” he muttered. “I matter. People matter.”

Just giggles, in the silence


~'/|\'~



“Major Katsuragi.”

Over the secure link, concealed behind the [VOICE ONLY] image, Gendo Ikari’s voice was calm, emotionless; almost mechanical.

“Sir.” Misato swallowed, and took a breath. “Have you examined the query I posed to the MAGI?”

“Yes.” There was a pause, which seemed to stretch out uncomfortably long. “It was immediately flagged as a curiosity, and the Operators bought it to my attention.” His eyes flicked along the read-outs on his glasses. “It is theoretically possible,” he remarked, with a little more vitality in his voice.

“It is?” Misato asked, a little surprised at herself. A part of her hadn’t been expecting for it to be a possibility; she had hoped so, but she had been running off gut instinct and logical deductions from what she had seen of this that she did not understand. It had probably been better that Ritsuko was still out of contact; that was exactly the sort of thing that the Director of Science would have rubbished, in her long experience of their association.

“We have a basis from the Second Child’s tests on AT-Field manipulation,” the sorcerer said. “The manifestation you enquired about can be produced through the superposition of other valid, simpler shapes.” Gendo leant forwards in his chair, the gesture entirely unconscious. “Now, what is your request?”

The dark-haired woman tightened, her hands at ease behind her gripping each other tightly. “I believe we have a plan to be able to breach the Harbinger’s AT-Field, and kill it. However, we will require authorisation from you, or another Representative to obtain the necessary resources. The key component comes from the Tonbogiri liaison group.”

“Tonbogiri?” echoed Fuyutsuki, his name lighting up on her screen. “Isn’t that the Navy liaison group that’s experimenting with spaceti...”

“... to use a Huitzilopochtli-class weapon for space-combat. Yes, sir, the LANCE system.” She paused. “And I’ve served as an observer for tests at Test 9, in the 0343 Facility... the one in Australia.”

“Yes, we are aware of that,” Fuyutsuki said. “The last test was that unsuccessful one on the 13th of September, wasn’t it?”

“Yes, sir,” the Major said, with a nod. “The warding was malformed for the primary charge; there was a successful initiation, but it failed to meet the necessary focal angle.” This was where the complications emerged, and she would have to do some explaining. “And that’s why I made the enquiry.”

“Explain.” The word was short, terse, perfunctory.

“There’s a partially complete test weapon in Ostberlin-2... not ready for field deployment. It’s still under construction; most of the physical parts are in place, but they’re only half done on the needed sorcery. As it is, it won’t work. But with reinforcement from an AT-Field, and the addition of one of the Harlequin devices that the Council of Representatives authorised us to use, it should be possible to jury-rig it for in-atmosphere use.”

“Have you checked this with Dr Akagi?” asked Gendo, raising an eyebrow.

Of course she hadn’t. The scientist was still busy with Shinji and Unit 01, and had sealed herself from contact, Misato thought, clamping down in her irritation. She suspected the man knew, too, and was just using this as a rhetorical device, to make sure that she had thought things through, rather than just running off gut instinct.

“No, sir. I did, however, get the Unit 02 science and engineering team to produce plans for the necessary set-up for both Oh-Two and Oh-Zero.”

And, luckily, she had been careful to make sure that such a thing was actually possible, from an engineering viewpoint before she bought it to the Representative. The only query had been about whether an AT-Field could actually do such a thing, and now she had such a confirmation. She relaxed slightly.

“However, your proposition is flawed,” the younger of the two men stated. “Simply, Rei does not have the necessary synchronisation ratio nor fine AT-Field control to be able to form the required field. And Harbinger-5 will reach London-2 before Unit 02 can be physically moved, even if there was not a Migou interdiction deployment in the Atlantic.”

The woman swallowed, and cringed slightly, inside. “Yes. I know.” This was hard to say. “However, Unit 01 is being repaired using the Unit 02 components which were not moved when that Evangelion was. I have consulted with the repair team; the schematics will be cross-compatible. The Test Model and the Mass Production Model are fairly similar, anyway. Hence, if it proves necessary, and Shinji is physically capable of carrying out the operation. Unit 01 will be the primary actor.”

She paused, to see if the boy’s father would protest about the use of his own son, who was still clinically dead, as a key part of an operation.

“Continue, Major,” the Representative said.

Evidently not.

“If he cannot, the secondary plan is for Rei to conduct an extreme close-range initiation, to compensate for the loss of focus. That will require a nearly point-blank detonation, and the MAGI only give a six plus-or-minus five percent chance that... Unit 00 will remain intact after such an option. The tertiary plan, should Unit 00 be rendered inoperative in current operations, is for an unconstrained mine-like blast; however, the MAGI estimate that such an attack will do approximately the same damage as Operation Ankou, and so will not kill the hostile in one shot.” She blinked once. “The plans for Unit 02 are if we fail, and the hostile survives the detonation of the London-2 Rapture contingency. Assuming High Command cannot eliminate the Harbinger with strategic missiles, due to the hostile’s point defence, Unit 02 will be with the counterattack force. They will seek to eliminate Harbinger-5 before it can target any other locations.”

Gendo stared at her silently, the seconds ticking their endless path from future to past. “Permission granted,” he stated at long last. “Carry on, Major Katsuragi.”

“Yes, sir. I shall give the necessary orders.” The Major saluted, and cut the link.

Back in the Representative’s office, there was awkward silence. Slowly, Gendo removed his glasses, and pinched his brow, letting out a deep and heartfelt sigh.

“Harbinger-5 is both earlier and more powerful than we expected,” Fuyutsuki said, in a voice which dripped of his seventy-two years. “This is... alarming.”

“That’s an understatement,” the younger man muttered, as he snapped open his glasses case, cleaning the screens and the bridge with the cloth. The cleaned arglasses went back on, along with the mask.

“I note that Major Katsuragi did not give us the MAGI estimates for the primary operation,” his former aide remarked.

“No. Because she was afraid that I would not approve if I knew that she was risking this on something the MAGI only gave a,” he paused, “a nineteen, plus-or-minus three percent, chance of success without losses.” He sat back, and cracked his knuckles. “Fuyutsuki, take over here. I am going down to Irkalla.”

“You are?” Fuyutsuki asked, shock in his tone. “At a time like this? You know how...”

“Yes,” Gendo said, calmly. “I know precisely how dangerous it is. But it will be necessary to tilt the odds in our favour.”


~'/|\'~



The sun was gone, and the land was gone, and all that was left was the water and the squalling of the birds. The earth was without form, and darkness covered the rising depths. And, below the surface, eyes staring blankly, floated Shinji, his face a reflection of a pale moon which was not there.

The water was real, in a way that the paper-thin depth of the land had not been, he concluded. It filled his world. It was his world; inchoate fluid hidden yet eternally present. And since it was always here, and it did not chance, he had no way of measuring time. He could not count his breaths, because he was not breathing. He could not listen to his heartbeats, because his heart did not beat. And the sequence of numbers that he tried to track in his head was tenuous and all too easily broken.

Just like he was. Just like he had been.


~'/|\'~



The giant’s foot came down on the road like the wrath of a titan, fracturing aged tarmac under the pressure, before it pushed off again. The white shape of Unit 00, lit by the red light of the early morning, looked wounded, drenched in blood. This illusion was only made worse by the very real scars of repaired ceramic which criss-crossed its torso, but it was fully functional. Nestling in its vast hands was the blocky shape of a cruise-missile launch battery, torn off a damaged corvette, and the fact that such a weapon was but jury-rigged to be carried by an Evangelion was obvious. More examples of the same weapon, although this time from missile vehicles, were bolted into the back of the pale shape. Against a technological foe, such a load-out would have been ridiculous, prone to just one well-aimed shot from a hostile.

They were not up against such a foe.

Inside the entry plug, Rei Ayanami worked the control yokes, and the mnemonic device was enough to clarify her will to the Unit. The overlap integral displaying the synchronisation ratio was holding steady, in the low fifties, ticking and pulsing with near-random neural activity. Her grey eyes flicked repeatedly over the morass of displays that covered the inside of the Prototype’s plug, always keeping her attention on the window that tracked the location of the Harbinger.

The floating leviathan was out of visible range, due to the morning mist, but its location was still marked as a wireframe shape from feeds from closer observers. The tiny black blot on her horizon, no longer as cleanly elegant as it once was thanks to the fractal iterations of lesser versions of itself, could once have swatted her from here. It did not now. The first attack had forced Mot to blind itself further to protect itself; in this strange, fixed cosmos, it could feel the tears in spacetime that dotted this planet, itself only painted to the Harbinger by gravitation, but the rifts seemed not to be the things that were directly attacking it. It was perplexed, and so had retreated its shade into itself, sacrificing comfort in this hostile set of physical laws for safety.

Objectively speaking, it had probably been the wrong choice.

With a slight lean to the side, Unit 00 stepped around a building, in which a pair of exosuited workers could be seen, checking manually that the locks on their missile vehicle were secure. One of them was staring at the Evangelion as it tore past, one hand raised to shield his optical sensors. Rei was aware that the watching woman’s mouth was wide open at the sight of her Unit, shock at the sight of the forty-metre titan. She simply did not care.

And with a thought and a smooth pull on the controls, she came to a stop, carefully placing the cruise missile battery down on the reinforced section of road which had been designated for her. Her colossal hands were still precise enough to slot the system into the pre-prepared slot, control cables snaking back into her Unit’s fingers like strings for a puppet. Which it was, in a real sense.

“LITAN, inform Operations Command that I am in position, and am awaiting further orders,” she instructed the LAI system.

[Yes, Test Pilot Ayanami.]

[Evangelion Unit 00, Invidia, is in position], stated a system in the command centre as it received the message from the LITAN, adding another green marker to the network of nodes that was beginning to envelope the Harbinger’s position on the map. [We have received a valid target confirmation signal.]

“Good,” the Admiral muttered to himself, his red eyes glinting. “This is a limited engagement,” he reminded his subcommanders. “We are not going to throw assets away. We can’t spare them, not after the loss of the Reserve Fleet. We have objectives, and when we fulfil them, or find that we cannot, we will pull back. Understood.”

The assent was near instant. No-one wanted to die, after all.

“Now, we wait,” the nazzada stated. “And may the Lord protect us,” he added, softly, to himself.

Rei Ayanami watched, as the new dawn was soon tainted by the Colour. Braced on all fours, Evangelion concealed behind a hill, she felt the kick of the thrusters, as the first of the cruise missiles hastily mounted on her back launched, scorching the white paint with the fury of their chemical exhausts. All around her, the low-hanging mist was pierced by hundreds of torches, the thin cloud torn asunder by the passage of the bombardment. The crack of artillery pieces could also be heard, the useless, too-weak shells merely a cover for the bombardment cannons.

She waited. She could feel the vengeance of the Harbinger, trying to fight off a foe that was almost invisible to it. There was an explosion a kilometre to her left, as a hillside was devoured by the hungry lance of Mot, the shockwave buffeting Unit 00 and wiping away the last of the mist around her.

Rei did not flinch. She did not move. She merely waited.

And then the first Colour-full blast lit the area in phosphorescent, luminescent flame. And another one. And another one. Some of the kilotonnes of ordinance thrown at Harbinger-5 had escaped the defence put up by its lesser fractal protrusions into reality, and now this creature of dark crystal and eternal night warred against the influence of the Colour From Outer Space.

With a detonation, one of the ten lesser crystals tore itself apart in the heart of an arcanochromatic fireball, the void-dark crystal turning grey and brittle even as it spread itself across the landscape. Tilting, the arcane monstrosity shrieked in a perfect note like breaking glass, and the land began to pulse, as it fired at random, punching glass-bottomed craters a hundred metres wide into the landscape of Northern Europe.

[Evangelion Unit 00, retreat to Point Alpha-Foxtrot-Xray-Niner-Niner. Prepare for second barrage]

Silently, Rei nodded, and the Evangelion strode into life, snatching the Babylon placed for her. She was performing her role in the operation to maximum efficiency, and the limited operational goal, to slow the entity designated as Harbinger-5, was likewise successful. Blinded, the beast was not moving, and each second it did not move was a second that it did not move fifty metres. Moreover, that first wave had taken out one of its fractal subentities. The girl was aware that each loss ruined both its firing arcs, and its numerological significance.

But she held no illusions that this was killing it. This was fundamentally a delaying action, nothing more. It was not yet time for Harbinger-5 to die. Not yet.


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But after seconds, minutes, hours, days, years of darkness, there was light.

Blinding, painful light, burning light through his closed eyelids.

Something stabbed him in the chest, and he screamed in an impulsive, convulsive spasm, forcing fluid out of his lungs in an action which was not purely his own. His bleary eyes opened, and beheld a world of unfocussed colours which blurred and ran like dilute watercolours. There was a heavy presence on his chest, on his stomach, which bound his legs and restrained his head. Thrashing, he tried to move, and could not.

But it was a different kind of inability to move than the one which had overcome him in the dark waters of his mind. That had been passiveness, and a refusal of his mind to tell his muscles to move. This was active constraint, and he could feel the bands enveloping his arms.

Already exhausted from such little motion, he relaxed, his fingers curling up, only to feel the pads protecting the palm of his hand.

“Shinji Ikari.” The voice over the intercom was distant and muffled, but familiar. And, unless his ears deceived him, more than a little weary itself. “Shinji. Can you hear me?”

[Response detected. Neural activity indicates consciousness.]

“Shinji?” the voice asked again, switching to Japanese, seemingly ignoring the mechanical voice. “Please, we need a response.” Every muscle in his body screaming from fatigue, he forced his eyes to focus upon the washed out world around him.

“...oran...ge...” he groaned, registering for the first time the presence of the thick liquid that filled his lungs and enveloped his body. “So... ti...red.”

On the other side of the transparent wall, Dr Akagi shrugged. “Well, technically that’s a response,” she muttered to herself. Reaching up, she wiped her sweat-slick brow on her sleeve, feeling her own muscles scream at her and the bruising localised around her implants in the soft tissue in her arms and legs. She was going to pay for this ritual in the morning, she could feel, and the medichines were going be an irritation for the next few days.

Shaking her head, she stared in at the boy, restrained in the LCL-filled tank, as the autodoc retracted its limbs. The preparatory black markings still covered his pale skin, and the intravenous cables snaked and wrapped around him like some kind of technological chrysalis. “Welcome back to the land of the living, Shinji Ikari,” she said, softly. “We’re not going to let you take the easy way out of this.”


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Nice work once again Scorpion.And to add on it seems that Terminal World by Alistair Reynolds who used the concept of zones was influenced by Vernor Vinge's "Zones of Thought" from A Fire Upon the Deep.

Excellent execution.Could you recommend any basic physics textbooks I should read as primer? I'm able to get a vast number of secondhand books due to Singapore being a transshipment point for India,which happens to be a book printing hub.If you ever happen to drop by Singapore on the way through Asia, I can easily recommend a few places to check out. Being an ex-tour guide helps a lot.
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[finishes reading]
[collapses from exhaustion]
[staggers to feet]

Hi. I'm a physics grad student, and I definitely like what you're doing, the attempt to push known science as far as it goes and posit a scientific model for what lies beyond it (the r-state, the casual references to "chromatic" effects from weaponization of The Colour Out of Space, the very organized and disciplined approach to sorcery). I know it's not entirely yours, since the basic concept comes from the Cthulhutech setting you're drawing on, but I generally like it whenever it appears.

To my perspective it's a much more engaging take on the Lovecraftian mythos than Lovecraft himself had. Most of his characters that I'm familiar with always struck me as too closely resembling the man himself: blessed with a keen imagination that allows them to picture very strange events, but cursed with a mind too small to accept the notion that reality wasn't exactly how he wanted it to be. To take a trivial example, his fear of non-Euclidean geometry strikes me as being closely analogous to his racism, and no more admirable.

I'm totally unfamiliar with the Evangelion setting, except in the vaguest possible terms, but it's still an interesting angle on the Cthulhutech environment.
EarthScorpion wrote:The floating leviathan was out of visible range, due to the morning mist, but its location was still marked as a wireframe shape from feeds from closer observers. The tiny black blot on her horizon, no longer as cleanly elegant as it once was thanks to the fractal iterations of lesser versions of itself, could once have swatted her from here. It did not now. The first attack had forced Mot to blind itself further to protect itself; in this strange, fixed cosmos, it could feel the tears in spacetime that dotted this planet, itself only painted to the Harbinger by gravitation, but the rifts seemed not to be the things that were directly attacking it. It was perplexed, and so had retreated its shade into itself, sacrificing comfort in this hostile set of physical laws for safety.

Objectively speaking, it had probably been the wrong choice.
On some level I find the notion of such an entity running into crises because its frame of reference only barely overlaps with the Standard Model, rendering it unable to comprehend things like nuclear warheads and chemical rocketry... well, darkly amusing.

If you will excuse one particular nitpick: unless I am very much mistaken, the unit of weapons yield is the "ton" and not the "tonne." "Tonne" is a specific British spelling of the metric unit that, if life were really consistent, we'd call the megagram; "ton" is "roughly equivalent to an Imperial-system ton of TNT, but only roughly."

But I could be wrong about that; I remember at least one other writer I respect doing the same thing, and I still can't be sure that the etymology doesn't support the use of "tonne."

Also, if I could take a crack at Manthor's question, physics textbooks aren't all that helpful since EarthScorpion is outright making a lot of stuff up. Arcanochromatic substances and r-states don't exist (which is arguably bad for physicists from a career standpoint because it would give us more to do, but good for the public interest).

The textbooks that would be helpful in understanding things like quantum mechanics are mostly incomprehensible if you don't already know how to do differential equations; they're not written to explain it to someone who isn't going into the field. I'm not sure what would be good for someone who isn't.

If you have specific questions about the known physics, or which parts of what EarthScorpion is talking about are real, I'll give it my best shot in the author's absence. If nothing else, to free up time for said author to do more writing. :mrgreen:
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Thanks Simon. With reference to "The Colour Out of Space", I found it surprising that it seems Lovecraft considered it the best of all his stories. I read "The Terror out of Innsmouth and it isn't what I would consider terribly horrific until one gets to the end. Is more of a creeping horror that strike from within - the terror that comes with knowledge. I found Aeon Natum Engel to be a very novel take on NGE because it is one of the fics that stands out there with Thousand Shinji, Shinji and Warhammer 40K and a few others that I tend to use as personal benchmarking.Like Eric Nylund who has a background as a chemistry undergraduate,perhaps he should look into writing his own original science fiction because he is talented.

Anyway,Which physics concepts are real?My knowledge lies more in the realm of cognition and mental processes as a psychology undergraduate rather than physical concepts of the universe.That being said,I am more than happy to explain psychology concepts to people should they need it. I know for certain that arcanochromatic weapons are in the realm of fiction as are r-states. But I do like the concept of r-states and the entire scientific paradigm being applied to sorcery.
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Manthor wrote:Thanks Simon. With reference to "The Colour Out of Space", I found it surprising that it seems Lovecraft considered it the best of all his stories. I read "The Terror out of Innsmouth and it isn't what I would consider terribly horrific until one gets to the end. Is more of a creeping horror that strike from within - the terror that comes with knowledge.
Well, you have to remember that while that's the great theme that comes to us from Lovecraft, the author's own view of his work was a little different. At least, that's my impression.
Anyway,Which physics concepts are real?My knowledge lies more in the realm of cognition and mental processes as a psychology undergraduate rather than physical concepts of the universe.That being said,I am more than happy to explain psychology concepts to people should they need it. I know for certain that arcanochromatic weapons are in the realm of fiction as are r-states. But I do like the concept of r-states and the entire scientific paradigm being applied to sorcery.
I'm... thinking about it, I think it's all broadly real except for the explicitly magic or made-up stuff: arcanochromatics and r-states, which he made up, D-Engines, which are part of the CthulhuTech setting... I can't think of anything that isn't basically real that doesn't explicitly invoke one of those.

Which is one reason I respect what he's doing: he knows when he needs technobabble and uses a small set of it consistently, rather than spraying it all over the place willy-nilly as so many writers do.
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Manthor wrote:Excellent execution.Could you recommend any basic physics textbooks I should read as primer? I'm able to get a vast number of secondhand books due to Singapore being a transshipment point for India,which happens to be a book printing hub.
I'm afraid that... well, yes, Simon Jester has broadly covered what I was going to say. However, if you're talking about a more general understanding of physics, I would have to say that it depends on your current level of physics-related knowledge. If you want a basic introduction, GCSE-level and A-Level-level textbooks should get you that, while if you did that at school, then a general, first-year undergraduate textbook might be doable. My assigned first year textbook was called "Introducing Physics", and as a 1000+ plus page brick, it was a acceptable coverage of basic concepts. The problem is that, yes, quite a lot of the more advanced physics texts are written with the assumption that you're already grounded in the subject, or are studying it to an advanced level, so assume a certain level of mathematical knowledge.

What's the saying? At university level, biology becomes chemistry, chemistry becomes physics, physics becomes maths, and maths becomes incomprehensible. :)
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If you will excuse one particular nitpick: unless I am very much mistaken, the unit of weapons yield is the "ton" and not the "tonne." "Tonne" is a specific British spelling of the metric unit that, if life were really consistent, we'd call the megagram; "ton" is "roughly equivalent to an Imperial-system ton of TNT, but only roughly."

But I could be wrong about that; I remember at least one other writer I respect doing the same thing, and I still can't be sure that the etymology doesn't support the use of "tonne."
Firstly, thank you. It's always nice to get lengthy reviews, and I'm just as familiar with that slightly achey feeling in the back of your eyes after having archive-binged on a length pre-existing fic.

In a specific answer to that point, though; I did check, and wikipedia at least thinks that the -ton in megaton is the metric ton. I'm British, so I'm used to distinguishing between the two, by writing the metric ton as a tonne, so that's what I did. So it's probably a valid thing to do.

Also;
Simon_Jester wrote:Hi. I'm a physics grad student, and I definitely like what you're doing, the attempt to push known science as far as it goes and posit a scientific model for what lies beyond it (the r-state, the casual references to "chromatic" effects from weaponization of The Colour Out of Space, the very organized and disciplined approach to sorcery). I know it's not entirely yours, since the basic concept comes from the Cthulhutech setting you're drawing on, but I generally like it whenever it appears.
*Pouts slightly*

It would be more accurate to say that the basic concept came from what I thought Cthulhutech was going to be like, from the Core Book and the Player's Handbook (Vade Mecum). As it turned out, once they started doing other books, what they wanted was something less precise. And more Idiot Ball filled.

Still, about the time that I fell out with where the Ctech line was going, I found Eclipse Phase, and all was right with the world.

As it stands, AEE owes a lot to the cosmic sweep and grandeur of ideas of modern hardish-scifi authors like Baxter and Reynolds, because... well, that kind of cosmic vastness, the strange beauty of the Xeelee and the Inhibitors, is much more Mythosy, IMO, than the constant remakes of the Shadow over Innsmouth than too much "Lovecraftian" horror is filled with. Something, actually, that both the Mythos and the Xeeleeverse have in common, is that they're packed with life. They may be cold, and uncaring universe, but they're also teeming with a fecund multitude of forms. They're not like us, no, but the cosmos thrives with life holding its own in the midst of the mind of a babbling idiot god.

Somehow, that's both wonderful, and depressing, because you're not even special because you're alive.
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EarthScorpion wrote:Firstly, thank you. It's always nice to get lengthy reviews, and I'm just as familiar with that slightly achey feeling in the back of your eyes after having archive-binged on a length pre-existing fic.
I at least managed to space it out over a good distance.
In a specific answer to that point, though; I did check, and wikipedia at least thinks that the -ton in megaton is the metric ton. I'm British, so I'm used to distinguishing between the two, by writing the metric ton as a tonne, so that's what I did. So it's probably a valid thing to do.
The difficulty there is that comparing the defined energy output of the kiloton (4.184 TJ, which sounds more like they arbitrarily designated it as one teracalorie than like they used the real value for TNT), I'm not so sure about that.

The actual yield of TNT on a per-gram basis is vague enough that the term is perfectly consistent with the word "kiloton" originating with the Americans who designed the first bomb using short 2000-pound tons instead of metric ones; at the time, the American science and engineering community used the English system more or less exclusively, as I recall.
It would be more accurate to say that the basic concept came from what I thought Cthulhutech was going to be like, from the Core Book and the Player's Handbook (Vade Mecum). As it turned out, once they started doing other books, what they wanted was something less precise. And more Idiot Ball filled.
Pity. Well, that's not uncommon; I've been trying to do something similar with X-COM: UFO Defense if I ever get round to it. It's fair to say in that situation that a substantial part of the creative inspiration comes from the original setting(s) that is (are) being fanficced; what the relevant highly trained amateur author puts in is the high-grade scientific thought needed to turn it into something that can pass for hard SF on a dark night.
As it stands, AEE owes a lot to the cosmic sweep and grandeur of ideas of modern hardish-scifi authors like Baxter and Reynolds, because... well, that kind of cosmic vastness, the strange beauty of the Xeelee and the Inhibitors, is much more Mythosy, IMO, than the constant remakes of the Shadow over Innsmouth than too much "Lovecraftian" horror is filled with.
It certainly works; a giant Evil Black Ten Sided Die that shoots death rays and thinks fivefold fractal geometries are a transcendant beauty, but is barely aware of the existence of the planet beneath its lower vertex because it can see spacetime curvature but not atoms... that's a much better Lovecraftian horror than some squamous and rugose monstrosity that bears more resemblance to a plate of calamari than it does to something you'd actually have to worry about.

Ditto with the Migou; they're scarier than your average alien invader precisely because it's obvious that they are, as you put it, better than humanity, that the best we can aspire to is match them in general competence and hope that our home court advantage trumps their superior technology.

It's reminiscent of some of the wars of the 19th century colonial period, where the Europeans won not only because they had better guns, but because they were fighting an entirely different kind of war, with a more sophisticated concept of logistics, less social infighting among their own forces than tribal leaders had to deal with, and so on. Cases like the British conquest of the Sudan (and it is British for all it was done in Egypt's name) really underscore how badly the natives might be outclassed by the system of their opponents, even if the technological advantage weren't in play.

And in ANE, that's the advantage the Migou have over us, more or less... [shudders]
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Simon_Jester wrote:To my perspective it's a much more engaging take on the Lovecraftian mythos than Lovecraft himself had.
I have been mildly scathing elsewhere on the matter of this story, but for all its weaknesses, the actual approach isn't really one of them (except the inclusion of the awful F.E.A.R.). To be honest It hink the story actually labours under its connection to Cthulhutech and Lovecraft, despite the fact that the story isl argely defined as a crossover with these elements. Specifically, I think the best parts have universally been the encounters with the Evangelions and the Angel equivalents, because they present a Image Lovecraftian Image image that is extremely divorced from typical Lovecraft. The premise is much stronger when it depicts these grand entities from cosmological backgrounds we cannot understand more than when it depicts the sanity-eroding jellyfish scrotums of unknowable blind idiot gods or whatever. I don't think it always really hits the mark, but it's a decent effort.
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Well, I'm sure there are valid criticisms of the writing, but as you say, there is a lot to be said for the premise. The Fifth Harbinger is particularly good in that respect because it's made clear how its Lovecraftian "physics works differently for me" status is both a strength and a weakness.

Since I don't really care much about the Evangelion setting itself, I view this as a story set in Cthulhutech... which I don't know all that much more about, to tell the truth. I'm interested in the setting for its own sake, which may distract from whatever subjects you find to merit criticism.
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I'm afraid that... well, yes, Simon Jester has broadly covered what I was going to say. However, if you're talking about a more general understanding of physics, I would have to say that it depends on your current level of physics-related knowledge. If you want a basic introduction, GCSE-level and A-Level-level textbooks should get you that, while if you did that at school, then a general, first-year undergraduate textbook might be doable. My assigned first year textbook was called "Introducing Physics", and as a 1000+ plus page brick, it was a acceptable coverage of basic concepts. The problem is that, yes, quite a lot of the more advanced physics texts are written with the assumption that you're already grounded in the subject, or are studying it to an advanced level, so assume a certain level of mathematical knowledge.

What's the saying? At university level, biology becomes chemistry, chemistry becomes physics, physics becomes maths, and maths becomes incomprehensible.
Thanks for the tips mate.Did it high school and covered all the basic topics. Haven't touched it since then but the maths should be manageable and within my capability.If I can handle statistics for psychology hopefully I can handle basic physics maths.... :mrgreen:
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