The Orange Star: A More Powerful Version of The Death Star I

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The Orange Star: A More Powerful Version of The Death Star I

Postby Youngla0450 » 2010-07-10 03:40pm

This is a story about the Orange Star, a more advanced version of the Death Star. Since the original topic on Fanfics was locked, I am posting it here, and the content will be posted in the second one.
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Re: The Orange Star: A More Powerful Version of The Death St

Postby Youngla0450 » 2010-07-10 03:41pm

Never mind. Will a moderator please lock this thread?
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Re: The Orange Star: A More Powerful Version of The Death St

Postby Youngla0450 » 2010-07-10 04:32pm

I revoke my previous comment. The content is arriving, now:



The OS-1 Orbital Space Station, also known informally and unofficially as the Orange Star or as The Star, is the most powerful space-station and super-weapon in the Universe, even more so then the evil Galactic Empire's Death Star.

It began life as the Separatist Ultimate Weapon before becoming the Expeditionary Space Planetoid Development Initiative after it ceased to be a Separatist project and became a Imperial one in 19 BMY. The station is only used to destroy evil planets, create new ones, and to preserve peace and justice.

Production Information

Name: Orange Star

Picture: Image

Manufacturers:

Imperial Department of Scientific and Military Research (steel and quadanium, coating of the station surface, defenses, barracks, supervision of construction)
Federation Fleet Systems (hypermatter reactor, computer systems, emergency life modules, security systems, holodecks)
Skywalker Industries (sublight engines, navigational matrix, hyperspace generators, navigational systems, holographic systems, tractor beam generators)
Youngian Industries (exterior, shuttle and elevator system, communications and internet system)
Model: OS-1 Orbital Space Station

Class: Deep space mobile space-station

Technical Specifications

Length: 160 kilometers

Width: 160 kilometers

Height/Depth: 160 kilometers

Mega-light: 10

Engine units: Falcon Sepima 40-1 sublight engines (2)

Hyperdrive rating: 0.1 (Warp 11)

Hyperdrive system: Isu-Sim SP494 hyperspace generators (986)

Power plant: Federation Fleet Systems SFS-CR3099000 hypermatter reactor (1)

Armament:

Concave Dish Composite Beam Superlaser (1)
Range 80,477,900 kilometers into deep space
Falcon and Bak super-blaster batteries (15,600)
Falcon and Bak turbo-laser batteries (20,100)
Federation and Tam heavy turbo-laser batteries (15,600)
SFS LS-9 laser cannons (12,500)
Borstel I-LOM-90 ion cannons (9,100)
SB regular torpedo cannons(4,500)
Enterprise D photon torpedo armories (19,700)
Phylon tractor beam generators (768)
Charged-particle blaster (9,100)
Magnetic rail-guns (1,400)
Proton torpedo banks(1,300)
Surface cannons (900)
Bank guns (400)
Complement:

Galactic carriers (10)
Strike cruisers (400)
Star-fighters (700,800)
Assault shuttles (8,700)
Destroyers (1,400)
Dreadnoughts (3,000)
Imperial Walkers (1,000)
Merchant ships (10,100)
Supply ships (2,000)
Soldier drop-ships (1,860)
Star-ships (14,000)
Crew:

Regular crew-members (343,160)
Officers (827,000)
Aides (600,000)
Sub-officers (1,200,000)
Support and maintenance crew (3,400,000)
Troopers (1,343,000)
Pilots (15,246,600)
Ship support crew (20,140,500)
Support robots, droids, and androids (41,467,000)
Guards (25,470, depending)
Gunners (2,468,300)
Passengers (896,182,900)
Children (433,158,988)
Other systems:

High speed turbolift and elevator system
Communications, television, holodecks, and internet system
Emergency use life-support modules
Orange Star computer system
Orange Star security system
Usage

Roles:

Battle-station
Space-station
Carrier
Cruiser
Era: Present-day era (Imperial Era)

Affiliation:

Galactic Empire

Earliest sighting: 19 BM

Completed: 0 BM

Commanders:

Regional Governor Willhuff Tarkin (Main Commander)
Fleet Admiral Conan Motti (Naval Commander and Operations Officer)
Army General Cassie Tagge (Army Commander)
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Re: The Orange Star: A More Powerful Version of The Death St

Postby Youngla0450 » 2010-07-10 04:36pm

Description:

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The Orange Star firing on the Borg home-world.

The basic structure of the station is a sphere the size of a average moon, with a kilometer-wide trench with a length of 503 kilometers, containing the majority of the station's training centers, docking bays, supply posts, storage bays, drive thrusters, sensor arrays, and tractor beam systems along the equator. Halfway between the equator and north pole are two supplementary trenches, which hold emergency docking bays, secondary storage posts, and some emergency tractor beam systems.

The station is roughly 160 km (99 miles) in diameter. It was originally intended to be 120 km (75 miles) in diameter, but this was modified before the first stages of construction began.

The Orange Star is divided into two hemispheres, each subdivided into 12 bridge-controlled zones. Each zone is led by a zone captain. To further organize the station's immense activity, sectors for certain activities have been designated within each zone. The sectors are Command, Military and Security, Technical and Ship Service, and Civilian Service. Each sector is led by a local officer, who answers to his respectful zone captain. The northern hemisphere holds the main armament of the station, which serves as both a offensive and defensive weapon, a fearsome superlaser. This weapon has the external appearance of a bowl several kilometers wide. When activated, eight separate beams are each intiated by a crystal through the Particle accelerator tubes, amplified through rings, and conjoined to form one of eight separate beams that will focus outside the dish, focusing into a point to form a single incredibly powerful superlaser beam. The superlaser has adjustable power settings, with different levels allowing the destruction and creation of all types of moons, planets, and suns, and the destruction of all types of ships and other spacecraft. Blasts with the power to destroy all types of ships and smaller spacecraft and destroy/create all types of moons require a recharge rate of 5 minutes, 30 minutes of recharge time to destroy and create all types of planets, and 1 hour of recharge time to destroy and create all types of suns.

The Orange Star comprises eighty-four separate internal levels, stacked south to north. A level is led by a level captain. Each level is divided into 257 sub-levels, each led by a local captain. A nominal number of levels are then stacked around the surface of the sphere, encompassing the inner stacked levels and sub-levels. Levels closest to the surface are oriented towards the Orange Star core, with inner levels oriented towards the South Pole.

Facilities include parks, spas, shops, holodecks, barracks, restaurants and liquor bars, and other amenities for the Human/Alien crew, as well as numerous maintenance necessities such as trash compactors, like Garbage Compactor 3263827, or air conditioning vents, such as Vent 18728. The entire hull of the planetoid is covered in quadanium steel, painted with nearly impenetrable dark orange. This steel alone is strong enough to resist phasers, quantum torpedoes, photon torpedoes, and proton torpedoes.

The station also bears two sub-light engines in the core, which allow regular space travel, as well a formidable hyper-drive system. Driven by 986 gigantic individual generators tied to one navigational matrix, the Class 0 hyper-drive is more then fast enough to allow the Orange Star to travel from Earth to Coruscant (a distance of over 100 dimensions, each dimension at least 130,000 light years wide) in only twenty minutes. It can cross whole galaxies in only two minutes. The incredible power harnessed by the station, as well it's great size, grants the Orange Star a series of magnetic and artificial gravitational fields similar to those of Jupiter's. All engineers working near the highly radioactive engines are forced to wear radiation suits in order to keep harmful exposure to a minimum.

Near the northern pole, a hundred meter tower was constructed and is shielded to near impenetrability for the Emperor to use as personal quarters while on board. Operational command of the space station takes place from the over-bridge, which includes the conference room.

At any given time, around 1.4 billion personnel and passengers (excluding visitors, androids, and children) are on the station.
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Re: The Orange Star: A More Powerful Version of The Death St

Postby Norade » 2010-07-10 04:38pm

Are you just going to run from thread to thread spamming us with your useless shit?

Here's a hint, NOBODY GIVES A SHIT ABOUT YOUR STORY! The only reason people post in your threads is to see what random collection of simpering, insults, or confused ramblings will spew from you.
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Re: The Orange Star: A More Powerful Version of The Death St

Postby Youngla0450 » 2010-07-10 04:39pm

IGNORING...NORADE (Borg talk)

Star Wars and Star Trek beginnings:

The initial technical design of the Orange Star, originally referred to as the Secret Weapon, was created by Geonosian Industries in conjunction with the Klingon and Romulan Empires, as well the Confederacy of Independent Systems, calling for a spherical-like battle-station capable of destroying Galactic Republic forces and planets using a massive "power-laser".

In 21 BM, the Confederacy began construction on their Secret Weapon, under orders from Count Dooku, the Leader of the Confederacy Council and Public Head of State. Hundreds of thousands of workers were busy building the Weapon throughout the war. However, by 20 BM, only half of the steel frame had been completed, due to financial problems (the station cost $150 billion dollars a month to construct) and occurring sabotages or infiltrations by pirates, space rogues, vampires, and bounty hunters (including Pirate Mudd, Dracula, the Mandalorians, the Cullen vampires). Each sabotage, set back work on the station at least five months. The Confederacy and Geonosian Industries never did complete the Weapon. As the Separatists lost more battles, they continually had to move the unfinished Weapon else-where, setting back completion another two years. Construction was set back more as the Confederacy fell into bankruptcy.

In 19 BM, the Galactic Republic discovered the existence of the incomplete "Grand Weapon", through the use of secret agents, and decided to capture it for their own uses. As the Wars came to a close, a regiment of Republic troopers (the specialized 190th unit) captured a small sample of what would become the Orange Star superlaser. During the last weeks of the war, the Separatist Council debated on creative practices to prolong the war to complete the Weapon.
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Re: The Orange Star: A More Powerful Version of The Death St

Postby The Vortex Empire » 2010-07-10 04:39pm

Don't feed the troll Norade, the mods have been notified.

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Re: The Orange Star: A More Powerful Version of The Death St

Postby Edi » 2010-07-10 04:40pm

Youngla0450 wrote:I revoke my previous comment. The content is arriving, now:


Wrong answer, motherfucker. The correct observation is that you're leaving right the fuck now. I've had enough of your trolling. Goodbye.


Youngla0450 has been banned for continuous trolling of the board. He was told by a moderator not to try to post this wankery he calls a fanfic in the fanfics forum. Twice. A corollary is that if it's not acceptable for Fanfics, it sure as hell won't be acceptable elsewhere either, yet here he goes.

And so he goes out the door.
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Re: The Orange Star: A More Powerful Version of The Death St

Postby Dalton » 2010-07-11 01:22am

Good riddance.

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