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Blood Angels novel series analysis thread

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Well I'm still not quite as caught up as I want to be, so we're going to start and dump out yet another series now that Dawn of War is finished. This one is the Blood Angels novels. I figured I'd cover this to parallel Soul Drinkers and the others since Lost Soal mentions it. It's an.. interesting series. It's different in alot of ways to other 40K novels in theme and style. It's not too different, but it just has a different atmospherea nd flavor. I acutally kind of like it for that reason even though story wise it's just okay. I do like Swallow's work I find, which maybe sets me apart from other people.

In any case, we start with the first novel, Deus Encarmine.


Page 8
In those hallowed grounds, men bred from Brother Rafen’s own bloodline were buried as a measure of respect for the planet and the great memorial that it represented to the Imperium. The moon of a vast gas giant, Cybele was a war-grave world, one of hundreds of planets declared Mausoleum Valorum throughout the Ultima Segmentum. Rafen kept his statue-like aspect as a flicker of movement danced on the edge of his auspex’s sensors.
- Blood Angel battle helments seem not only to have auto-senses, but auspex sensors built in as well. These seem to encompass specific kinds of sensors (motion sensors?) as well as binocular/optical senses.

This also vaguely implies Cybele, and possibly the other places these events are taking place may be in the Ultima segmentum.

Page 9
He dropped down into a shallow valley. A day earlier, this sheltered place had been a devotional garden dedicated to naval pilots lost in the war for Rocene, but now it was a ruined bowl of broken earth. A stray round from the enemy’s opening sub-orbital bombardment had landed here and carved out a hemisphere of ground, fusing the dirt into patches of glassy fulgurites. Brown puddles gathered where ornate caskets were
torn open and their contents scattered around Rafen’s metal-shod feet: bones and decayed, aged
medals crunched into the dirt where he walked. The Space Marine picked his way through the
skeletons and traversed the opposite lip of the crater, pausing to check his bearings.
Not sure what kind of weapon caused it. Plasma maybe, they mention (IIRC) FAEs and atomics later on.

Page 10
But every single one of the pathfinder squad in Rafen’s detachment had been killed in the first assault, when a fusillade of krak shells had torn through their ranks. He had been standing in the lee of a Rhino’s hull when the shriek of superheated air signalled the incoming salvo....
- krak "shells" - implied in a orbital bombardment, but artillery bombardments (by Word bearers) was also mentioned (although this could also apply to orbitla bombardment as well.). Presumably they have krak shells for tanks too, which could also be what it is.

Page 11
He closed his ears to the pestilent shouts of the enemy demagogues as they wandered about the edges of the encampment,spitting their vile prayers and chants over the cries of the slave-servitors, and the incessant cracks of neuro-whips against the backs of the helots.
slave servitors (probably more "servants" tahn "mindless cyborg machines") also neuro whips.

Page 11
In his other hand, the torturer held a vibra-stave that he used like a sculptor, lopping off slips of flesh with infinite care.
Vibra-save.. vibro weapons.


Page 11
Training his auspex on the assembled force, he picked out assault units and the massive bulks of Terminators, but only a handful of vehicles.
Rafen's analysis of the strength of the enemy forces. The Krak shells may have been from the vehicles. Otherwise it would have to be from bombardment.

Page 12
From out of the open hatch of a deformed Razorback transport strode a figure that came a full two heads higher than every other man in the Traitor camp. His armour was chased around its edges with sullen gold
plating and traceries of infernal runes that smudged and merged as Rafen’s auspex struggled to read
them. Wrappings of steel chain ending in flaming, skull-shaped braziers dangled from his arms and
waist, while his shoulder plates mounted a fan of necrotic spines that appeared to be venting thin
streams of venom into the air. Rafen had seen the champions of the archenemy before and so he was
in no doubt that the being he looked upon was the master of the war force at Cybele.
Dark Apostle.

Page 13
In that moment of choice, Rafen’s life was almost forfeit. A fierce rune blinked into being on the
Space Marine’s visor, warning him too late of movement to his flank. With speed that belied the
huge weight of his battle armour, Rafen spun on his heel, reversing his grip on the bolter as he did.
He came face to face with a Word Bearer, the Chaos Marine’s hideous countenance a series of
ruined holes and jagged teeth.
Motion sensor provides warning of enemy appraoching.


Page 14-15
Rafen registered a flashing bone dagger at the edges of his vision, then the sudden bloom of pain
on his left thigh; he ignored it and squeezed tighter, compacting the Word Bearer’s throat into a
ruined tube of bloody meat and broken cartilage. Voiceless and empty, the Traitor Marine died and
slipped from his ichor-stained fingers to the ground. Rafen staggered back a step, the thunder of
adrenaline making him giddy. As his foot came down, fresh streams of agony surged out of his leg
and he saw where the Traitor’s tusk blade had cleanly pierced his armour. Shock gel and coagulants
bubbled up around the wound, and turned dark as they struggled to combat the after-effects of the
cut. Rafen grimaced; the daemon knives of the adversary always carried venom and he did not wish
to be cut down by the dying blow of such an unworthy foe.

The Blood Angel gripped the haft of the Chaos blade and he felt it writhe and flex in his grip,
quivering like a creature seeking escape. He could feel the movement of bladders inside it, fleshy
organs pulsing as they sucked in his blood like a parasite. With a snarl, Rafen tore the serrated
weapon from his thigh and held it up before his eyes. The blade was a living thing, each ridge of its
saw-tooth edge a yellowed chevron of enamel crested by a tiny black eye spot. It hissed and
chattered at Rafen with impotent hate, contorting in on itself. Before the Space Marine could react,
the blade puffed up its air sacs and spat out a cloud of his siphoned blood, scattering it in a fine pink
vapour.
- Chaos "bone" knife seems to have properties of being as much an organic creature as a psychic weapon, with "blood sucking" properties. As we know from the omnibus definitions it is a warp creature of some kind.

Page 15
“A mewling whelp,” he pronounced at last, rolling the faint flavour of
Rafen’s spilt blood around his mouth. “A little over a hundred years, by the taste of him.”
- Rafen seems to be a little over "a hundred years" old, though this is the conjecture of the Dark Apostle, not of Rafen himself. Neat trick to figure that otu from blood.

Page 17
Bennek was less fortunate, and Koris growled in anger as the Marine lost his leg from the near
miss of a plasma gun. Bennek’s armoured form tumbled and dropped, and the Word Bearers rolled
over him without stopping.
Plasma bolt takes out an Astartes armoured leg.

Page 19
The captain's words were cut short as a tiny supernova engulfed him, and wreaths of hot plasma turned the stone to slag around his feet. Rafen had a single, momentary vision of brilliant white, then Simeons ammuniton packs deotnated all at once and threw him aside in the shock wave.
Rafen is standing next to the captain when this happens. The Captain is baiscally obliterated in the plasma blast. How many megajoules (for simply exploding him, or vaporizing him) is up to individual interpretation.

Page 19
The weapon sighed, pleased that its master was near, excited by the prospect of what was to come
next. Murmuring a litany of un-blessing beneath his breath, the Dark Apostle dipped the disk of blades at the staff's head into the catch-bucket beneath Tancred's torture rack. He stirred the thick, fresh blood. The liquid flashed into steam, boiling around the accursed weapon.
The Dark Apostles mace thingy can boil blood. hundreds of kj easily... depending on how much blood there is and how much like water we can treat it.

Page 21
Rafen himself had almost been killed on Ixion by a mole-mine that Simeon had spotted a
moment before it emerged. And now, as the Blood Angel considered the patch of scorched ground
that marked the spot where the captain had died, he found the memory of that moment slipping
away from him, as if it too had been lost in the plasma burst.
Chaos or enegade mole miners, I guess.

Page 21
His gun clattered, the barrel spitting hot as rounds big as fists tore into the foe
Boltes firing fist-sized rounds? not likely!

Page 23
Those crrtainties were now ashes in the mouth of Tancred, who watched as his soldiers became screaming torches of flame under the punishing beam saloves form the Blood Angel's Thunderhawks.

The torturer had poaused as the entire forward phalanx of his most celebrated warriors vanished in a plume of blazing hellgun fire.
Earlier noted to be the Thunderhawk's lascannon. Not sure why they call them hellguns. Severla megajoules to ignite an astartes size target (via flash burns)

PAge 26
Blackened darts of poison were strewn where the warheads had fallen, and the toxins and manufactured taints had been worked into the metal of the shells so that they spread corruption on everything they touched.
Virus/toxin weapons deployed by the Word Bearers.

Page 26
"Binder fungus," said one of the other Marines, without looking. "The enemy lace their engine fuel with it, so it is cast adrift in the air from their exhaust fumes.

"What does it do?"

"Whatever they want it to," sanpped Koris. "The Chaos biologians impose patterns on the spores with their rituals. When the fungus takes root and grows, it forms the shape of their vile symbols."
Turcio’s nose wrinkled, as if he smelled something foul. He could see where the mould was
already taking on the shape of an eight-armed star.
Rather interesting means of deployment. I wonder if it can immobilize - that would qualify as "whatever they want."

Page 27
The younger Blood Angel considered the men aboard the Celaeno, imagining them unprepared and alone before the ferocity of a Chaos strike vessel more than twice their tonnage.
- The Murder-class cruiser Dirge Eterna is stated to be "more than twice the tonnage" of a Imperium frigate.


Page 28
Nearby, servitors were assembling the remains of the Guardsmen
that had been garrisoned at the port’s orbital defence guns; each of the men had died in horrific pain
from the nerve toxins dropped by the Word Bearers. Their bodies were twisted and gnarled by the
muscle spasms that killed them. The faint bouquet of the poison, far too weak to give a Space
Marine anything more than a mild headache, still lingered in the air.
- Word Bearer orbital bombardment had included nerve toxins (that caused horrible muscle spasms) that killed the Imperial Guards stationed at the spaceport. The toxin is also too weak to harm a Space Marine (beyond a mild headache.)


Page 29
Crewed with a hand-picked force of men on an assignment to trace an
artefact that dated back to the Horus Heresy, the Bellus’s quest was to recover the archeotech device
known as the Spear of Telesto, an object thought lost in the confusion of those dark times. It was
only the chance discovery of a storehouse of documents on Evangelion that had led to the founding
of the ship’s mission, and under the command of Ramius Stele—an inquisitor of most rigid nature
trusted by both the Chapter and the highest levels of the ecclesiarchy—Dante had sent the Bellus to
the ork-held worlds on the borders of the Segmentum Obscurus.
- First mention of the "Spear of Telesto" - an "archeotech" devicec.

Page 34
The true story of the debt was known to a select few, and even a seasoned warrior like the
sergeant understood it only in the broadest strokes; there had been an incident when the inquisitor
was travelling aboard a navy ship with the great Brother-Captain Erasmus Tycho of the Third
Company. Allegedly, a daemon had manifested inside the ship’s engine core and Stele had killed it
single-handedly when the beast had battered Tycho into unconsciousness.
- A daemon had manifested "inside" a navy ship's engine core. (which engine is nto specified) Covered in the Blood DEbt short story.


Page 38
“Captain Ideon,” the inquisitor addressed the Blood Angel’s officer wired into Bellus’s command throne. “Status?”
“Under way, lord.” The Space Marine’s voice was a guttural snarl that issued not from his lips, but from a bulbous voxcoder implanted in his neck. “We will reach the orbit of the gas giant in moments.”

Stele examined the view ahead in the vast holosphere that dominated the wide control deck. The Cybele moon was depicted as a small, featureless ball to one side, dwarfed by the mass of the supergiant planet that forever held it locked in a tidal embrace. “Contact,” said a servitor to his right. “Capital ship, deceleration curve evident.”
Inside the sphere, the image remained static. “Where?” Stele demanded, gesturing at the space ahead. “Where is it?”
“Astern.” The display flickered before resolving into a larger-scale view, which showed the planet far behind them. A blinking glyph formed in close orbit.
“It’s the Ogre Lord,” Ideon noted. “A grand cruiser, Repulsive-class. They must have been hiding out above the pole, waiting for us to break orbit.”
“Then where is the Dirge Eternal,” Stele snapped, even as new detections bloomed into life on the holosphere.
- Ogre Lord a Repulsive-class Grand Cruiser.

The battle barge detects the grand cruiser when it comes out of hiding from behind the moon Cybele (where hte Blood angels and Word Bearers fight.) The moon IS habitable (it has an atmosphere, and humans/space marines have inhatibted it prior to the attack., which suggests that the moon is within the range of "habitability", which in turn suggests it is indeed some distance from the gas giant itself (the gas giant must also be very close to the habitable zone as well.)

This detection occurs in (apparent) realtime, given the context of the debate, so this may defintely be an argument for FTL scanners of some kind.


Page 38
The cruiser they had been pursuing was now emerging from behind the gas giant with two more ships in line formation.

“Confirm, Dirge Eterna and unidentified Idolator-class raiders on intercept course,” droned the sense-servitor. “Advise condition on battle stations.”

...

About the bridge, gun-helots began a litany of prayers as they sought firing solutions for the battle barges' missile batteries.
Ships coming around from behind a gas giant in orbit, missible batteries being prepared. Implied range of tens of thousands of km at least.


Page 39
From the thin grey morass of Cybele’s clouds came a myriad of iron teardrops, each one glowing cherry-red with the displaced heat of re-entry. Rafen heard Koris curse under his breath, as the skies above turned black with enemy landers.
- Drop pods glowing "cherry red" from heat of re-entry.


Page 41
The Ogre Lord spat murder and flame across the surface of Cybele, raining destruction over the
grasslands and shallow mountain ranges. To the far north-west, where the great Valkyrie towers
climbed skyward, it sent atomic warheads and fuel-air explosives laced with poison. The minarets
were the glory of generations of memorial artisans, commissioned by the Adepta Sororitas to
venerate those lost in the savage Phaedra Campaign; each one was hollow, their innards a network
of acoustic channels cut from raw marble. In the high season, the wind would sing through them in
perfect tones of mourning. But no pilgrims stood before the towers as the archenemy’s nuclear
retribution bloomed overhead, and no human ears heard the final, awful screams that were forced
from within them, in the seconds before the shock wave of super-heated air scoured them from the
face of the planetoid.
- the Ogre-Lord drops atomic warheads and Fuel-air explosives onto structures on the moon Cybele. Oddly the "fuel air explosiveS" were stated to be laced with poison. Then again considering hwo you can drop viral warheads on a highly thermal exterminatus bobmardment, why not? Chaos works weird that way.


Page 42
Closer to the starport, low-yield munitions and finely targeted lance strikes fell on the Imperium forces. Rafen was dazzled as a discharge ate into the ferrocrete apron; in an instant, the rock flashed into toxic vapour and air molecules crashed as heat split them into atoms. A skirmish line of Blood Angels tanks caught in the weapons' footprint became blackened lumps of slag, featureless and smouldering.
The Chaos forces deploy "low yield" munitions and lance attacks that turns rock into vapour)


Page 44
“Those grotesques will overrun us!” Turcio snapped angrily, “Where is our armour?”
Rafen remembered the boiled pools of metal that had once been tanks and said nothing. He
ignored Turcio’s words and watched the defilers shirting into position: the walkers were preparing
to break the Blood Angel’s line. If they had still had armour, the Marines might have stood a chance
at blunting it, but with these light arms… The endless rain of Word Bearer troops was tipping the
odds ever further against the Blood Angels, even with the men left behind by the Bellus.


Earlier Word bearers bombardment reduced Blood Raven tanks to "boiled metal.,"

Page 44-45
A chain-reaction of short-circuits sent sparks ripping across the portside gun console, and frying the synapses of the cannon-servitor connected there. Stele wafted a hand in front of his face to dispel the burnt meat stink that assailed his nostrils. The other gripped the brass rail that bordered the warship’s giant glasteel porthole. They were close enough to one of the idolator raiders to actually see it with the naked eye, the tumbling darrt of metal stark against the emerald hue of the gas giant. The quick application of a tactic refined by Ideon's anti-ork sorties had granted the Bellus first blood against the Chaos flotilla.
A high-gravity turn, more akin to the manoeuvres of Thunderbolt fighters than capital ships, ,had allowed the battle barge to rake Dirge Eterna with her bow guns, although the nearest of the small raiders had surged forward to protect the large ship, as if its crew would receive some cryptic honour for accepting the hell storm intended for the cruiser.

The wounded raider was bleeding gases into the void and Stele’s servo-skulls relayed scans of a cracked fusion bottle. He pressed one finger on the glass, blotting out the shape of the vessel. The ship was a cripple, and so the inquisitor had already dismissed it from the complex game board
arrayed in his mind.
- Chaos raider's powerplant apparently includes a "fusion" reactor (a "cracked fusion bottle" is mentioned.)

One of the raiders (at this distance) is no bigger than finger-sized (normal human) implying distances of at least thousands of kilometers.

Also note the Bellus makes Thunderbolt liek turn


Page 45
Stele noted, dipping his hand into the holosphere. “Instead, we will draw away,
toward the gas giant.” He indicated the huge green orb streaked with white cloud. “Take us into the
upper atmosphere. The vapour will conceal us long enough to return the ship to full readiness.”
- the upper atmosphere of a gas giant ("green" atmosphere with white clouds.") conceals the Bellus from Chaos scans long enough to effect repairs (the "vapour" particularily)


Page 46-47
Streams of energy hotter than a sun’s core issued from the pistols in their mailed fists. The plasma
guns carved blackened streaks across dirt, stone and flesh alike. Other men close to him were
already opening fire, stitching tracer into the sky in lazy red threads. The Word Bearers’ assault
cadre wove in and out of the lines of shot, with grace that belied their obdurate mass. Rafen held
back. It was better to wait until the jump-packs slowed the Traitors for a landing, he reasoned; it was
better to hesitate and pick that instant when the enemy hovered like a hawk about to swoop.
- plasma pistols (chaos Space MArine assault troops) fire plasma bursts "hotter than the sun's core"

- Blood angels target the CSM assault troops as they brace for "landing" from a jump.


Page 47
The Chaos Marine barely had time to recognize the shape of a godwyn-pattern bolter pressed ot its head, before Rafen fired point-blank and turned its skull into a grimy mist of filthy blood and brain matter.[
Rafen's bolter explodes CSM head.

PAge 48
Rafen could see shapes moving out there, but even the enhanced sensory capacities of his auspex could not give him anything more than the most basic information. Metallic fumes thrown into the amtosphere by the fighting baffled the scanner and roughened every breath the marine took. It would have cut an ordinary man's lungs like broken glass, but there were no ordinary men left alive on Cybele.
Metal vapour a side effect of the battle, messing up breathiung and sensors. Space Marine lungs ar durable enough not to be lacerated by the fumes.

Page 48
He [Rafen] handed him [Turcio] a laser pistol, an Imperial Guard-issue weapon he'd found discarded by the gates.
Interesting that the dude can hold th efricking pistol in his hands, much less fire it.

Page 48
Lasers carved down great curls of razor-chain fence where they melted through the links.
Implies both thermal damage mechanism as well as a sustained, cutting beam.

Page 53
Linked together since birth and imprinted by Iskaven's psyche-mages, the eight channelled all their metnal energy into one unstoppable release that was the sole purpose of their lives. They were apsionic munition with a war-shot of pure, violent intensity..

Their power arced thorugh every one of the injured Marines, and then they died, ,turning to ash; but none of this mattered to the men their discharge had touched.

The minds of the surrounding Blood Angels - more than three-quarters of the survivors of the two Word Bearer attacks - were shredded instantly; their higher reasoning and intelligence wiped cleam . All that remained was naked, primal aggrgession, and the very darkest core of unchained bloodlust.
Psionic bomb.

Page 54
Rafen sat by Turcio as he worked to patch his armour with glutinous sealant. Nearby, a
watchful Arkio cleaned his bolter.
Armor sealant. we've seen Space Wolves use something similar called repair cement.

Page 62
"Brother-Sergeant Koris will correct me if I err, but I believe that only one is required to operate the port’s defence batteries, yes?”
“The anti-ship guns?” Koris nodded, and looked to a surviving Techmarine from his company.
“If you took Lucion here, it could be accomplished.
..
“But once you have the guns, what then?” asked Sachiel. “They cannot depress low enough to
strike at the Word Bearers.”
Rafen felt a rush of excitement as he saw the plan unfold in his mind. “We will not use the guns
on the ground troops. We target the Ogre Lord overhead.”
“The command ship?” said Lucion. “It orbits directly above us… If it fell from the skies, it
would be like a storm of meteors…”
Discussion of the anti ship guns.

Page 63
The container had the same shape and form as the most sacred and ancient of the Chapter’s artefacts, the red grail that contained the blood of every Sanguinary High Priest. So the Chapter’s scripture said, these men—of which Sachiel was one—shared an iota of the primarch’s blood; it was injected into their veins in a
sacred ritual. Now the priest took a draught from the cup.
Pretty much as other Blood Angel fluff indicates.

Page 64
Rafen let his helmet visor adjust to the darkness, rendering the channel in a monochrome grey.
Night vision mode.

Page 65
Rafen realised that he had been holding his breath, even though the sealed
Adeptus Astartes power armour had its own internal oxygen supply. Toggling a vent in his gear..
RAfens armour has its own oxygen supply, although he can open vents to the outside.


Page 68
The edge of the Chaos encampment seemed close enough to touch through the optics of the gun's target scope. "I have a target, sergeant," Turcio sub-vocalised, the sensor pickups in his throat relaying the words as clearly as a shout. The Marine held his aim steady on the Word Bearer
guard post; he was still carrying the laser that Rafen had pressed into his grip...

...

Turcio watched the Traitor Marine pause at the door of the ruined hut. One squeeze of the trigger plate and its head would pop like an overripe fruit.
Guard issue laspistol can blow apart a Traitor marine head (Remember traitor marines are many times larger than a person, and have considerably more massive and tougher heads) That would be at least several times more impressive than blowing apart a human skull.

Page 69
Just as suddenly the guns of every Space Marine converged on him and Xanger’s millennia of service to Chaos ended in a screeching whirlwind of agony. The warrior’s corrupted form came apart in chunks of decayed flesh and ceramite.
CSM blown apart by multiple Space Marine gunshots.

Page 70
Just as they had planned, Alactus had led them to the shadwo of the four great defence cannons that loomed over the starport in stubby, sharp-edged ziggurates. THick tubes emerged from the capstones of each construction, tilted at steep angles toward the sky. Inside those imposing structures were mechanisms and conveyors that fed shells as big as thunderhawks into gaping, hungry breeches.
Defence cannons. Automated feeding mechanisms and shells "as big as thunderhawks" either in size/volume, or mass (the last of which suggests they are over 100 tonnes)

PAge 73
Word Bearer fired his bolt pistol, but the rounds never seemed to even get close, skipping away as if
the human had some charm about him. Noro cried out in Lorgar’s name and rushed forward to bury
his knife in the furious face of the whelp, if nothing else, but he was met by a horrific storm of
metal-shattering bullets.
[/quote]

- bolters firing "metal shattering" bullets. I suspect the "charm" was Inquisitor Stele deflecting fire




Page 74
Bellus burst from the gas giant on the shock wave of a nuclear firestorm, volatile elements in the
planet’s air combusting around her. Although he had no firing solutions, Captain Ideon ordered
every gun to fire blindly, sending up a wall of destruction.
The atmosphere "combusts" into something nuclear.. for some reason. This doesnt seem to harm the Battle barge much.

Page 74 -
“This was an error.” Ideon grated, “We will be caught between the ships.”

Inquisitor Stele shook his head. “Study the aft monitors and tell me, captain, would we have not been destroyed if we had remained?” View-plates aimed astern showed the flaming patch spreading to ignite pockets of gas all across the massive planet. “Those corrupted scum would see the entire world put to the torch just to end us.”

Ideon’s impassive face twitched slightly. “You may have only delayed our fate, my lord, and not for long.”

“Contact,” droned one of the servitors. “The Ogre Lord has seen us. She is bringing all weapons to bear. Dirge Eterna is also turning for broadside.”

“Not for long.” Ideon repeated.
-Ogre Lord and Dirge Eterna are both preparing to fire on Bellus as it returns towards the -moon (Presumably with Dirge Eterna in pursuit.) Also implication they would burn the planet just to destroy Bellus.
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Re: Blood Angels novel series analysis thread

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Part 2 of the Blood Angels update. I effing forgot to do the short story prequelling this, which explains how Stele got involved with the Blood Angels and went on his little crusade. As well as his true alleigances. I'll have to put that out at some point as an update as well. Dangit.

Anyhow, enjoy the chaos ship blowing up from a surface-to air boltgun and the events leading up to the invasion of a Forge world surrounded by nuclear mines, including the tension filled sneaking through the minefield.

Page 75
The guns discharged so close together that the report from the muzzles came as a single thunderous howl of noise. The Shockwave compacted rings of air into dense hoops of vapour around the barrels, and an earth tremor took ill-prepared Word Bearers and Blood Angels alike off their feet.
Four huge rocket-assisted proteus-class anti-starship munitions screamed skyward with a sound like tearing flesh. The Ogre Lord did not see them coming until it was too late. The enemy warship, still turning to face Bellus, had put all power to her lances and dorsal void shields, leaving the belly she bared to the moon utterly unprotected.

Each of the shells found purchase in the hull metal of Ogre Lord, the staged fusing in their adamantium-sheathed warheads pushing them through the plates of ablative armour and into the soft meat of the ship's interior. There, the main fusion cores that were the poison hearts of the proteus missiles went critical and detonatd.

Ogre Lord rippled from within, and shattered.
The four defence guns fire. Interesting that they seem to be giant, glorified bolter rounds - rocket assited munitions - or maybe they're missiles or torpedoes. The bottom most shields are uttelry unprotected. The Ogre lord has ablative armor, and the fusion warheads detonate internally.

4 120 ton shells (assuming the 5-10 kt/kg figure for modern nuclear weapons) could yield between 2-5 gigatons, not including however fast the projectiles travel to reach the target (tens, if not hundreds of km/s?) If they have more advanced fusion (like what the sun outputs) the yield could easily be an order of magnitude greater.

The key thing of course is that ships are not inert targets anyhow, and an internal detonation can be quite dangerous for that reason.


Page 77
Wired as he was into every sensor output from the detectors that lined the Bellus, the ship's commander viewed the death of the Ogre Lord with a thousand eyes. He was witnessing the killing of the Chaos cruiser in ranges of vision beyond ordinary sight. In the higher frequencies of infra-red, Ideon saw plumes of hot atmosphere gush out into the black void; under warp-scan, he saw the twinkles of abberant daemon-life as they tore asudner in explosive decompression and through the lenses of the rho-field trackers he watched the bright flood of liberated mesons and neutrinos as the enemy vessel's fusion bottle cracked. Even at this distance, waves of hot enerrgy from tehj blast licked the Bellus' void shields.
The sensors on board the Bellus, including the warp sensors. Again note that the ship seems to run on a fusion plant here.


Page 77-78
Ogre Lord came apart like rotten wormwood struck by a hammer. Great chunks of the craft span
away propelled by the monstrous detonations of the proteus missiles. Chain-fire licked across the
upper quarter of the ship as it distended and broke, and munitions blocks of shells all exploded at
once.
Like I said, with the muntiions going up and the fusion plant going up, amongst other things.. the ship is not an inert target.


Page 79
“Your will,” nodded his adjutant, and the junior officer repeated the command to the cannonservitors.

The raider rotated to present its prow to the Bellus. The idolator ship was distinctive: the broken red tooth of the bowsprit was dominated by a huge brass-plated dome in the shape of a human skull. The eyeless shape was tipped backward, as if it was screaming, and from the open jaws a blunt gun muzzle emerged. Ideon had once been told that the figurehead skulls of these vessels were made from metals recovered from the bodies of the dead. They were forged with the iron recovered from the blood furnaces of slaughterhouse worlds in the Eye of Terror. He did not care if the rumour was true; the archenemy’s, ships could be made from the bones of the Chaos gods themselves, for all that it mattered to him. They would die like all the other traitors that ever dared to cross the Blood Angels.
Spinal mount weapon of some kind.

Page 80
The battle barge's hammer-shaped bow sported four massive gun tubes, each the length of a Cobra-class Imperial destroyer, and in a glare of violent discharge, all but one spat their death-loads at the raider. Each cannon was powerful enough to deal a shattering blow to void shields or hull armour, and to use them against a lighter ship like the Chaos raider was complete overkill. Shots from the first, second, and fourth guns - the third was still inoperable - savaged the vessel and opened it to vacuum. Unlike the Ogre Lord, whose crew had moments of screaming fear to understand what was happening to them, the raider simply ceased to exist.

In one murderous detonation of energy, steel and twisted bone-metals flashed to atoms and became gas; it was as if the ship had been flung into the heart of a star. Under Ideon's command, Bellus pushed on through the expanding wave front of the ship's vaporous remains and bore down on Dirge Eterna.
Cobra destroyers are at least 1.5 km long. I'm guessing these are bombardment cannon. I'm not sure if this implies just the hammerhead is 1.5 km long or what. The hammerhead could eaisly be 1/5 to 1/6th the entire ship's elngth, suggesting the bEllus is 8-9 km.

Page 80
The very air itself was aflame on Cybele as Rafen and the rest of the strike team stumbled from the defence battery bunker. The night sky was no longer dark: wide trails of hot orange fire crisscrossed it in a web of glittering colour. Wreckage screamed through the ragged remains of clouds
overhead. Vast slabs of metal as big as islands threw themselves from horizon to horizon, scattering rains of dirty, molten droplets behind them.

Arkio’s face was lit with savage fury, and he stooped to drag a leg’s-length of iron bar from a shallow impact crater.

It was a fragment from the Chaos cruiser after the fall. The rod went slack, the heat of re-entry making it distend.
Debris from the Ogre-lord making reentry and impacting. It seems softend by reentry (or at least some parts are)b ut it looks like it also arrives (and impacts) mostly intact.

Page 81
Rafen’s brow furrowed. The ceaseless screeching of the Word Bearer demagogues and the noise of weapons fire had been such a constant companion over the past day that changes to the cacophony were not immediately apparent to him. But then he caught it too, and strained the
sensitive lyman organs in his ears to separate the sound from the hypersonic shrieks of falling debris.
Hypersonic falling debrsis... reentry speeds. Againthe debris from the Ogre Lord sems to handle this wel.
Page 83
The unexpected side-effect from the Blood Angels’ sneak attack now changed the Word Bearers’ forces from precise, mechanical formations into a raging, uncontrollable rabble. Iskavan roared with inchoate anger as a dozen gun-servitors dared—they dared!—to attack him in their maddened fury. Slug-throwers burped fat discs of serrated metal at him and blunderbuss horns vomited rains of lead shot, every pitiful round rebounding off his ruby armour.
Gun servitor ammo vs Dakr Aposle armour.
Pages 83-84
Inside each enclosure a minor daemon beast was held. They were throwing themselves against the bars in bloody madness, and beating their skulls and limbs against the confinement. These were not the towering princes of the warp that the followers of the eight-blade star lived in fear of; they were smaller, bestial life forms, the empyrean’s equivalent of animal predators. They possessed a savagery that nothing from the mortal realm could match, and in conflict they would sow fear and disruption in enemy ranks, provided they were directed properly.
Now they were spoiled and crazed, worthless in battle for anything other than cannon fodder.
Daemonic cannon fodder.

PAge 85
As it swallowed him, Koris gave the command to fix bayonets, snapping his combat knife into the magnetic mount on the bolter’s foregrip.
- Bolters have magnetic "bayonet mounts" on the bolter's foregrip. BAyonets seem too IG'ish though.

Page 86
He swooped to snare Sachiel’s fallen chainsword. He brought the buzzing blade around in a flickering arc and cut cleanly through a knee joint. A leg as thick as two men fell away in a gout of thick blood, and the creature let out a thunderous shriek.
Mind you, as things spin out Arkio is not a "normal" Astartes, so the value of this may be more as an upper limit than anything. (Especially since Rafen expresses surprise Arkio wsa able to defeat the daemon)


Page 90-91
A hooded form was walking through the unkempt lines, glittering
with dark witch-fire.
“Iskavan, my servant. Hear me.” The voice it spoke with was a breath from a rotted tomb.
“Warmaster Garand…” For the briefest of instants, the Chaos champion’s face twisted in a
sneer, but then he dropped to one knee and made the sign of the eightfold star. Without hesitation,
the remainder of the Word Bearers mimicked his actions. The only sound was the thin keening of
the accursed crozius. The weapon was nervous and afraid at the outpouring of ebon psi-energy that
lapped about the hooded one’s body.
“I would know your mind. Your intentions.” Breathy and disordered, the speech seemed to come
from the hazed air itself.
...
Then as suddenly as it had appeared, the figure dissolved into the dark, leaving a psyker-helot quivering in its place. The twisted slave had briefly hosted a fragment of the warmaster’s essence. But that fleeting contact had been enough to warp it into a mess of singed flesh.
Chaos, or at least the Word Bearers, seem to have duplicated astorpathic abilities to some degree, although with much greater realtime speed and relaibility (if you dont mind the recipient dying) - My speculation would be that this form of communication is more akin to a form of possession.

Page 96
Once or twice in the past few hours, Tancred’s thoughts had drifted towards plotting an escape or some other scheme to hold off the end he had glimpsed on the planet, but each feeble idea flickered out against the inexorable certainty of it all.
...
The cruiser was beyond the gravity shadow of Cybele's gas-giant world now, in the free space between the inner orbit zone and the system's asteroid belt.
Implies at least one or two AU away from cybele, but this isn't definite (and so could be argued.) But even if they were only a few million km away, acceleration would be at least 10-25 gees. at 15 million km or so it is 100+ gees. Obviously, if we get into the AU ranges the calcs get to 1000+ gees :P

Page 97-98
As he approached, Iskavan was crouching next to one of the drone’s bodies, picking at it. The
Word Bearers’ commander snagged something fat and grey from the body and ate it. He chewed
with a faraway look in his dark eyes. The drone sobbed weakly, barely clinging to its pathetic
semblance of life.
A Sevitor drone being tortured.

Page 99
On the gass, the words merged and shifted into a horned visage that was cut from nightmare cloth.
“Iskavan, and your little lie-spinner. Heed me.”
Tancred’s master dropped to one knee. “Warmaster. I had expected you to contact me via my
astropath—”
Garand’s sketch-face became a death mask with a crooked grin. “This manner of address
amuses me. It has so much more bearing than a mere proxy manifestation, yes?”
“By your will.” Iskavan said. “My flesh and my soul for Chaos, liege. What would you have us
do?”
There was laughter, hollowed by the distance it had travelled across the Immaterium. “Oh, I
taste your anger from here, Iskavan. Your rage is barely contained at the indignity I have forced
upon you.”
The conversation goes on but its basicalyl a real time communication (non astropathic but psychic) over long (multi LY quite probably ) distances. Again the powerful Chaos types have their own (reliable) means of FTL communication.

Page 101
Brother Lucion detected the energy patterns of multiple teleport signatures just after dawn.
Given the teleporters are probably warp based, this measn they had some sensory means of detecting the warp signatures.. either by machine or psychic sense.

Page 102
Sachiel’s face creased in concern. “Comrade inquisitor? What is wrong?”
“Heed Rafen’s words,” Stele intoned. “I sense the archenemy’s taint nearby.”
His Bastard Sense is tingling.

PAge 102
It [Land Raider wreckage] was less than six hundred metres from the spot where the lander had put down.
Range setting scene.

Page 103
Every last muscle flexion sent darts of pain from his bloated gut, where the cold, leaden weight of a dozen bolter rounds lay lodged in him. In the firefight that took place at the defence battery, Noro took a spread of bullets at close range, and by rights he should have died, but his sheer bad luck and the layers of fat on his corrupted hide had prevented death from taking him
easily.
Took a spread of bullets (a dozen bolter rounds, unexploded unfragmented) in the gut.

Page 103
When his winding blood trail brought him to the debris of the land raider, he discovered a bolter, undamaged and fully loaded, still gripped in the hands of a blood angel. Noro took the gun and made himself a hide within the wreck.

...
Stele closed his eyes, and the air seemed to turn greasy and cold. In the next second he looked up
and the sensation vanished. “There!” he snapped, dodging to the right.
Rafen saw the discahrage of the bolter before he heard it. The shell cut through the air where Stele had been standing and into the chest of an unlucky servitor behind him.
Bolter fire from 600 metres, implies the bolter struck in maybe 1-2 seconds, suggesting velocity (obviously) between 300-600 m/s at least.

Page 104
..but Rafen could see the glitter of light on the weapon’s scope as the gun bore
down.

Stele looked directly into the unblinking lens of the targeter and Rafen felt the peculiar thickness
in the air once again.
gunsight/targeter.

Page 104
And likewise, no matter how hard he tried, he could not will the finger about the
gun’s trigger to contract. The Word Bearer was locked in place, unable to do anything but stare into
the face of the bald human at the other end of his target sight.
Stele paralyzes the Word Bearer.


Page 106
Arkio and Alactus stripped the Traitor of his wargear and torched it with a plasma burst. Unlike
the hard ceramite armour of the Blood Angels, the Word Bearer’s mail was a curious amalgam of
metals and tough, rubbery flesh. It bled profusely when they cut it from him, trailing nerve fibres
and veins across the stone floor. When they set it alight, it squealed as it crisped into ash.
- Plasma burst incinerates (to ash) the partly organic power armour of a CSM (parrtly organic, parrtly metal) given the temps involved for creamtion, we might infer melting point (possibly vaporization) given the lack of slag. The problem however is, its chaos mutation, organic, and may have combusted from ignition by the plasma burst.

Page 106-107
Sachiel’s pale face turned to Rafen. “Your company is more familiar with this sector than the
Bellus crew. What do you know of this planet?”
..

“A forge world, honoured priest. Until very
recently, one of ours.”
..

“Shenlong is… was one of many munition manufactories for the Ultima Segmentum. The world
became isolated by a warp-storm several months ago, and under cover of the turbulence the planet
was invaded by the archenemy.
..

Where is this blighted place?”
“Coreward, perhaps a week’s travel in the empyrean.”
The forge world, Shenlong, is in the same sector as Cybele, and takes a week of warp travel to reach. This may be due to the Warp storm., or for som eother reason, but it comes out to between 500 and 10,000c or so, depending on exact location in the sector

Page 108
The kitchen vassals of the Bellus had provided a rich spread of protein-heavy meats and broth for the survivors of the battle for Cybele, but Rafen’s appetite had been lost to him. He ate cured steaks cut from dried fire scorpion, but the taste of home brought him no succour.
Mealtime in the Bellus

Page 116
The blade itself, an elongated tear cut with a hollow in the centre, represented the single drop of
blood that Sanguinius shed when he swore fealty to the Emperor. Glittering with an inner light, it
rested atop a sculpted haft that showed the angel of blood, clad in the monastic vestments of a
Sanguinary High Priest. His perfect face was lost in a voluminous hood and his mighty angel wings
spread against the air; and below that, a single purity seal that bore the personal mark of the
Emperor himself.
..

The gene-template of the spear’s ancient technology could sense his closeness and the fragmentary
elements of the Sanguinius’ stock that sang though his veins. Unbidden, Arkio broke protocol and
touched the ageless lance.

..

The spear vibrated in his grip like a live thing, a streak of amber lightning frozen
into physical form. Uncanny energy lit the teardrop blade from within and, like a supernova, a pulse
of white light flared.
Our magical plot device doomspear.


Page 123
AFter a moment, the inquisitor began the careful task of cleaning the stiletto molly-knife he had used to dispatch it. The weapon's fractal blade was so sharp that the task of wiping blood frorm it took slow and careful deliberate movement.
Fractal molly knife thingy.

Page 124
"Shenlong sits amid an ocean of nuclear void mines that an Imperial grand fleet would have
difficulty in destroying!"
A place not unlike the Ring of Steel aorund Badab it sounds like.


Page 128
He mumbled a short prayer of petition to the hololithic display tank in his quarters, and the
device obeyed. It projected an image of Shenlong from the ship’s long-range sensor pits. Hazy and
indistinct, the unremarkable planet drifted with vast bands of tiny spheres girdled about it. Stele extended a finger into the hologram and ran it over the floating dots. Each one was a compact thermonuclear charge, a city-killer warhead riding a thruster nest with a simple logic engine to command it. AS the planet turned, they communicated with one another to form a perfect, impenetrable net about the manufactory world.
"city killing" thermonuclear warheads on each mine. How we actually define "city killer" will probably be endlessly debated and probably will go up and down the scale.

Page 129
Shenlong had been a weapons fabricator since the Dark Age of Technology, here they built shells and bombs for a billion little wars in continent-sized production plants. The secrets of the minefield that shrouded it were, like so much in the Imperial era, lost to terra's tech-magi.
Does this mean they lost the secret to thermonuclear bombs? :lol:

Page 131-132
The Marines needed no further prompting. They tore Horin apart with snap-fire bursts from their
bolters. Shells ripped exotic metals and bionics from age-spotted skin and brittle bone.
Two marines killing an Astropath.

PAge 133
"Do you recall the lessons when Koris told us of the Emperor’s divine weapons? Did we ever dare to dream we would one day see such a thing?”

Rafen gave a slow nod. The legendary armaments from the rise of the Imperium were spoken of
in hushed reverence. Weapons like the Spear of Telesto and its cousins the Frostblade Mjalnar and
the Soul Spear, the great Blade Encarmine and the Black Sword of the Templars, all of them forged in the fires of the Emperor’s righteous fury. Any one of the blades would elevate a man to glory, if
he had the will to wield it.
- The Spear of Telesto, along with the Frostblad Mjalnar, the Soul Spear, and the "Blade Encarmine" (probably others like the Spear of Russ and the Black Sword of the Black Templars) are all considered to be similar kinds of weapons - "legendary armeanet from the rise of the Imperium" and "forged in the fires of the Emperor's righteous fury."

Page 140
The Sanguinary Priests in their armour of white and crimson came for the aspirants, and took the fifty to the great chapel where they were locked in for three days and nights. They stood vigil without sleep, without food or water.

...

The handful of men who remained drank from the sacred cup, and Rafen’s weary mind came
alive as the fluid touched his lips. Rich and coppery, the liquid in the chalice flowed from the veins
of the most senior of the Sanguinary Priests—and through their bodies flowed an iota of the very
blood of the angel lord himself. Energies and thoughts at once alien and familiar to Rafen coursed
through his body, the touch of the fluid laying his soul bare to scrutiny by the Chapter’s brethren.
- Training to become a space marine whittle down fify or so "worthy" recruits to just a handful becoming actual Marines. If 4-5 a year become Marines (IIRC the SArcophagus process takes a year) they might have yet another company's worth of marines each generation.

Is that enough to replace losses? Dunno. Probably not. I'd be willing ot take "handful" a bit more broadly, so they might have variable numbers (just much fewer than 50, typically)

Page 141 -
Rafen remembered with absolute clarity the moment the sarcophagus was opened and his altered,
enhanced eyes took in their first sight. Perhaps fittingly, it had been of Arkio. His brother was
standing in mute shock at the changes wrought on him, and studying his fingers and his hands as if
they belonged to someone else. Rafen saw the face of the Marine before him—for he was no longer
a mere man—and knew it to be his kinsman, even though this new Arkio stood twice as tail, was
broad with muscle and crowned with a face that by turns mirrored his countenance, his father’s, and
that of Sanguinius.
The transmutation process. Arkio (Rafen's brother) as a space amrine is "twice as tall" as he was before (when a child, presumably.)

PAge 141
Rafen could not be sure how much time had passed. Later he learned that they had been taken
from the chapel after the vigil and locked in the hall of sarcophagi under the chants of the credo
vitae. There [in the hall of sarcophagi] they lain for a year in the sleep as a potent cocktail of nutrients, modificational potions and blood from the red grail coursed through their systems. In those months, the serivtors had implanted the hallowed gene-seed of the Chapter and watched it remake them.
A year long process for the Blood Angels, which is probably the shortest among Marines. Which is good as it compensates for the small numbers.

Page 141
No human would have been able to withstand the training they endured, the impossible hardships and extremes of physicality that the instructors forced upon them.
To train and adjust them to their new bodies, I imagine, as wlel as to demonstrate/test the limits.


Page 143
The mines were complex and intricate devices, so his Techmarines had explained to him; they
possessed a logic brain capable of determining the difference between an inert form like an asteroid
and an active craft like a manned warship.
The guidance systems of the nuke mines. This might be the reason they are "lost-tech"

Page 144
The Bellus was solely his responsibility now, and he extended himself into the ship’s systems.
His mind embraced the warship’s machine ghost like a trusted comrade-at-arms.

The rudimentary spirit of Bellus knew Ideon well and it welcomed him in, letting the Blood Angel move his consciousness from the fleshy form connected to the bridge throne deep into the barge’s command pathways. Ideon’s psyche sent out impulses that might normally have made fingers or toes flex gently; instead, they made etheric rudders twitch and retro-rockets spit in readiness.
- metnion of "etheric rudders" as well as retro rockets for manuvering the ship, all controlled by mind impulse. Like the MAgos in Relentless, Ideon is basically able to merge his consciousness with the ship's machine spirit, and become one with the ship (again, not unlike a Princeps with his Titan.)

Page 144
But here, in a sacred symbiosis with the Bellus, Ideon still knew the delirious, giddy rage of bloodlust—only now, his hands were energy lances and his fangs the fusion torpedoes eager in their launch tubes.

When Bellus killed an enemy vessel, Ideon knew it as if it were he that cracked open the hull and sucked
the adversary’s life into the void.
- mention of "fusion torpedoes." Feel free whether it is nuclear fusion or "melta fusion" (and whether there is a difference between the two!)

Page 145
The mines were never still. As one, the huge flock of spheres rotated with Shenlong's day and ngiht cycle, gradually moving to mremain equidistant to one another. An elaborate cognitive engine not he planet below monoitored the weapons constantly, so Stele had said, and it randomly generated tubes of open space within the field to allow ships safe passage form orbit to surface, in order that Shenlong’s contribution to the Imperial war effort be maintained
More on the guidance/control systems of the super duper lost tech asteroid field. Yet another indication that the guidance/control system may be what makes it lost-tech.

Page 145
But the carrgo lighters that carreid the tonnage of krak missiles, fusion charges, and the giant atlas- and proteus- class warheads were either grounded or destroyed, and the manufactory’s mighty engines of creation were silent down there.
Warious weapons. Atlas and Proteus class warheads are nukes, and we see fusion charges as well. Does this mean shenlong specializes in nuclear/thermonuclear weaponry? Does this mean the krak missiles are some kind of nuke too?

Page 145
“Horin?” Solus grated. “He has served this ship for three centuries!”
Horin is the astropath Stele had killed. Yet another astropath living centuries long. Extending the lifespan of astropaths makes some sense givne their rarity.

PAge 146
As large as it was, and even with full reverse thrust the battle barge would take long minutes to negate its forward speed and come to a halt - and such an action would register like a flare on the sensor webs of the other mines.
It takes minutes for the retros to kill its forward speed. This may be due to low acceleration on the retros (relative to the forward thrusters, or just low acceleraiton in general, or both. I'd guess they're making single digit or double digit km/s, so if they take oh 5 minutes (300 seconds) and around 2-20 km/s we get between 7 and 70 m/s^2 worth of deceleration - so in general we might call it single or double digit gees, which is roughly consistent with the turning aceleration mentioned in the next novel.

Page 146
“I served aboard the strike cruiser Fidelis at Armageddon. She was a mine-layer, among other things, and in
my duties I learnt the limitations of that weapon.” He activated the holosphere, displaying the schematic of a mine. “It is my understanding that Shenlong-pattern warheads have a delayed fusing mechanism. I closed the distance to ensure that the mine did not have time to arm itself before it struck the ship, so it did not explode.”
...
" It did not disintegrate when it struck us. The device remains lodged in the outer hull.”
- Shenlong-pattern fusion mines are used elswhere (such as armageddon, from minelayers.) We learn the mines need to contact the ship before detonating (or actually, penetrate the hull it seems, althought hat may be a simple result from the velocity of impact)
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The rest of Deus Encarmine. Next time we start the other Blood Angel novel.



Page 148
With careful deliberation, Rafen placed his metal-shod feet on the exterior hull of the battle barge,
one step after another. He was alert for the hollow thump as the magnetic adhesion pads in his
armour held fast. A few feet ahead of him, Techmarine Lucion ambled easily across the ship’s
fuselage as if it were second nature to him.
- marine armour has magnetic adhesion pads on its feet, for remaining affixed to the hull when EVA (zero-g)

Page 148
While his power armour was no more powerful, Lucion seemed to be able to move more easily in it, and Rafen found himself wondering if the Techmarines used their superior skills with such things to enhance and alter their own wargear.

Indeed, Lucion’s armour was already heavily modified as that of all his kindred were; from the
backpack power unit that supplied energy to the sealed suit, the tech-brother sported the folded
metal sculpture of a servo-arm. Collapsed now, the additional limb ended in a deceptively large
gripper, which the adept could operate like an extension of his body. Rafen had seen Techmarines
use the devices to tear bolts from a stuck land raider hatch or to manipulate eggshell thin circuit
plates.
- Techmarine servo-arms can "tear bolts" from a stuck land raider hatch, and the tech-marines generally are not different from regular marine armour, save their modifications and the fact Techmarine knowledge seems to benefit them in terms of wearing it.

Page 149
Some said that during their apprenticeship to the Adeptus Mechanicus they were altered in some
fashion, their loyalties split from their mother Chapter. Did the quiet, affable Lucion conceal some
other agenda?
Maybe it just varies from Chapter to Chapter? Some Techmarines vary in their affiliation - some are more loyal to the AdMech, and others are more loyal to the Chapter.

Page 150
Badelt, the forge world’s actual moon, was invisible from this angle. The vessel’s orbit had been carefully plotted by Ideon’s navigators to ensure that sunlight reflected by the lone natural satellite would not illuminate Bellus in any planetside optical telescopes.
stealth concerns.

Page 150
The Blood Angel studied the darkening world and saw the glows of cities engulfed in flames, and the
curls of cloud lit from within where tactical nuclear bombs had cut radioactive scars in the earth.
tactical nuclear weapons usage, at least by Chaos.


Page 153
Bellus hung in low orbit and waited. No stray energies or signatures radiated from her, no action on board was taken without careful deliberation and pace. To the machine eyes on the surface, the warship appeared as one of a thousand pieces of space debris, a drift in the night sky on a slow course toward a fiery death in reenetry.
Wonder what the human eyes, if they bother to pay attnetion, think.


Page 154
In the shadows at the edge of the room, one of Stele’s helots cowered behind a plinth and he shot the slave-servitor a brief, venomous look. The pathetic creature would pay for failing to alert him to the arrival of the Marines.
"slave-servitor" showing emotion. Is it maybe just an augmented servent?

Page 159
As the song ended, he ran a bare hand over his bolter, to touch the inscriptions that he had painstakingly etched there over the decades of his obligation. No two weapons in the service of the Chapter were alike; every Marine turned his own into a combination of gun and prayer icon. Rafen’s firearm carried the listing of each battle he had fought, as well as passages from his favoured Chapters in the book of the lords. He knew them all by heart, but the presence of the words was a comfort that strengthened his resolve.
Rafen's unique bolter.

Page 161
Space Marine scholars and the historians on Baal would often speak of the genetic legacy of great Sanguinius in reverent tones. So strong was the potency of the pure one’s gene-seed that even ten millennia after his death at the hand of the traitorous Warmaster Horus, the psychic echoes of that last horrific confrontation were indelibly imprinted on the cells of every Blood Angel. At moments of great stress, the power of that trauma rekindled itself in them...
Suggesting a rather strong psychic link may exist in and with gene-seed and primarchs. Given alot of their supernatural biowank I'd be unsurprised if we could classify the Sapce Marines as an extrmeely specialized set of psykers.

Page 165
It was not true that Space Marines know no fear. All the warriors understood the stark power of that
raw emotion, but unlike common men who served in other armies, the Adeptus Astartes were the
masters of their fear. They took it, moulded it, and turned it against their enemies. They assumed its
mantle; they became fear incarnate.
Space marines and fear.

Page 167-168
Rafen’s mouth formed the words of the litergius sanguinius as the hold of Shenlong’s gravity pulled his pod
down toward the surface. Above his head in the array of thruster jets, a simplistic logic engine
shifted the descent of the capsule and aimed it squarely at the heart of the enemy stronghold. He felt
the aspect change as the pod altered course and he gripped his bolter in anticipation.

..

He was in command of their squad now, Sachiel had decreed it.
Blood angel's drop pod logic engine guided, holds 10 marines.

Page 168
A glyph illuminated on the lander’s inner wall. “Prepare for deployment!” he ordered. The squad
secured their weapons and chanted the prayer of engagement. Rafen made the sign of the aquila as
the capsule’s descent rockets flared. Rich chemical foam gushed in to fill the interior, forming a
glutinous cushion about them. It was to be a hard landing.

Shedding waves of re-entry heat, Rafen’s pod joined a hundred others as they crashed into the
barrage-ravaged walls of the fortress. Some of the craft touched down in the plaza below, settling
amid chattering defilers and legions of tanks. Others used the velocity of their passage to pierce the
castle bulwarks, slamming through rock like the fists of an enraged god.

Rafen blacked out for a moment as they hit. The shock-gel around him had absorbed most of the
g-forces, but still the impact rang the drop-pod like a cloister bell. Then the foam was sinking away,
and the spitting hiss of displaced air signalled the opening of the hatches. He was on his feet, the
awesome energy of his Astartes physiology shrugging off the effects of the concussion.
Drop pod impact. Note that some of the pods actualyl crash through "castle bulwarks" to impact inside the buildings in question. Also note the "chemical foam/shock gel" deployed as a means to help counter accelerations.

Page 168
The capsule had blown through a gunport and spent its kinetic energy forcing a channel down through
two levels of the fortress.
Rafen's drop pod punched completely unharmed through a gunport and tow levels of the fortress.

Page 170
The Word Bearers had taken the building in a day, thanks to the perfidy of a cadre of Nurgle cultists that had infiltrated the tower. These deathworshippers had spread a fast-acting plague that indiscriminately killed the defenders, opening the way for the invasion.
sneaky Chaos tactics.

Page 173
Thus, without name and without epitaph, the dreadnought died flailing as the reactor in his heart overloaded. The blast threw everyone to the ground, enemy and ally alike. Seeking the path of least resistance, the shock blew along the central shaft, immolating a handful of loitering furies and making ash of the bloodletters. And then, with a lowing moan of tortured metal, the elevator came apart in molten leaves. Aflame, great axe-heads of decking cut away and tumbled down toward the lower levels, sending up storms of sparks where they collided with the stone walls.
Self destruct of a deadnought's reactor.

Page 177
Ideon did not trouble himself with concerns about civilians or loyalists down there; the Word Bearers had taken the forge world only recently, and it was likely that Imperial patriots, perhaps planetary defence force troopers or even Guardsmen, were still resisting the Chaos invaders. Those men and women would die tonight. They would be erased from existence in the same crushing fists of fire that tore apart the Traitor Marine divisions. But such collateral damage was the manner of orbital bombardment and those who went to the Emperor tonight would be counted as heroes.
Ideon is an asshole, even by Space Marine standards, for considering mere humans "acceptable losses" for orbital bombardment (but hey its 40K. GRIMDARK). Ideon also thinks Shenlong might have PDF/Guardsmen defending the place.

Page 178
He was waiting for the sign that would begin the next phase in his battle plan, and as if on cue, a shape
emerged over the curve of Shenlong, rising up from an extremely low orbit.

“New contact,” sang one of the sense-servitors. “Murder-class cruiser on intercept vector,
closing at high speed.”
...
Stele stood behind them, and answered first. “Ideon understands the behaviour of these Chaos filth. Their paranoia would never let them hold in geostationary position—they fear attack from all sides at all times, and so they circle the world like a jackal guarding a carcass.”
I assume "geostationary" is a fixed orbit, but this one is changing orbit to fight the Bellus, already in orbit itself. Velociites will likely be very low (single double digit KM/s)



Page 178-179
Although there were hundreds of kilometers of vaccuum between them, Bellus and Dirge Eterna had little room to manoeuvre. They were sandwiched beween the wall of mines in high orbit over Shenlong and the planet's atmospheric envelope below. The orbital corridor they fought in had barely enough room for a ship the size of Bellus to turn about at maximum thrust, and Ideon's plan to engage the Chaos cruiser wass dangerous. The smallest delay or a mistake in orders would send the battle barge into the ionosphere and burn her to the keel. It was like two men conducting a knifefight
in a coffin.
Mines in high orbit, planet in low orbit - tens of thousands of km is "barely enough room" for ships to manuver at maximum thrust, even though they are a mere "hundreds" of km apart (this literally is knife fight range by 40K space combat standards.)

Page 179
The Murder-class ship presented its port side to Bellus as the two vessels came alongside one
another in a deadly jousting pass. In a tactic dating back to the birth of mankind’s naval wars, both
starships unleashed a punishing broadside, and for a second the space between them was threaded
with hot lances of light and the thin trails of missile salvoes. Bellus rocked with the impact and lost
pressure on a dozen decks. Huge petals of hull metal shredded from her flank along with fountains
of breathing gas and water ice. Vacuum-bloated corpses followed them.
Obligatory age of sail space batlte tacitcs. Broadside occurs over a second or so roughly (suggesting that they're moving at single digit km/s) If they remain "hundreds" of km apart the velocity of the missiles and projectiles would be hundreds of km/s, although if the range is greater (which it could be) or the time is less (if the speeds increased) we might get thousands of km/s, which would be better since weapons batteries are faster than torpedoes, and torpedoes typically travel in the tens/hundreds of km/s velocities.

Page 180
"On the word, emergency turn, maximum displacement!"

Solus blinked. "Engineers reporrt that optimal power is not available lord.

“Damn the thing!” Ideon grated. “The word is given! Turn the ship!”

Ideon’s aide nodded again and sent the command, gripping the closest stanchion for dear life.

Arkio felt a shift in the gravity in the pit of his gut and the deck threw him into the guardrail.

Bellus moaned like wounded animal as she suddenly bled out the acceleration force of a dozen gravities. Massive thrust jets fired along her port flank as one to bodily ram the ship around. THe barge bowed under the stresses, losing more air and men.
Dozen gravities exerted by the manuvering jets turning the ship. Based on other novels (like First Heretic) we know that rear engines are usually stronger than manuvering/retro thrusters.

This alos may or may not be a maximum-power turn either, given the whole "optimal power not available"

Page 181
“Too slow, Dirge Eternal I have
you!”
The Word Bearer ship was also coming about, but with none of the wild daring that Ideon had
demanded of his vessel. Slowly, inexorably, Bellus brought her bow to aim at the cruiser. Now the
positions were reversed, and it was the Dirge trapped between the minefield and their enemy.
- the Dirge Eterna turned too slowly to bring its weapons to bear on the BEllus, which suggests the combat accelerations have been less than 12 gees or so. Not surprising considering this is combat and not-insigifniciant portions of power will be devoted to weapons and shields (CF: ATlas Infernal)


Page 181
Where standard warheads had just an explosive charge, the torpedoes that Bellus had fired
carried jury-rigged cases of metallic chaff and heat flares—and on the artificial sensors of the silent
mines behind the cruiser, the colour of their blasts registered like the eruption of a dozen suns.
- the Bellus carries chaff and heat flares. I'm sure someone will comment how I'm liable to take the "like a suns" comment literally in this case simply because it mentions suns, but of course context is important there, and in this case there is no mention of power or energy being similar to a sun of any kind. Simply saying "Like a sun" could refer to anything: intensity, brightness, temperature, etc.

Whereas saying something has the "power or energy of suns" is a completely different context. Or if they say "literally vaporized" :lol:

Page 181-182
As if they were a swarm of wasps brought to sudden anger, the docile mines nearest Dirge Eterna fired their thrusters and dived into the craft. Each detonation attracted another, and then another, until the enemy ship was smothered in bursts of nuclear fire.
This implies it took a great many mines to actually destroy the Dirge Eterna, far more than a handful (smothered in bursts) and it is quite likely (as ordnance) they ignore void shields on top of that. And if THAT wasn't enough? This is towards the end of the battle, where the Dirge Eterna would have taken an unknown degree of damage from the Bellus as well.

Page 184-185
These were no longer beings that could be called man or daemon, but some otherworldly union of the two. They came in a slow and purposeful march; the thick stocks of their limbs were as wide as tree trunks. It was difficult to see where the lustreless corpse flesh of their heads and arms ended and the bruise-coloured metals of their power armour began. Great pipes of horn or hollow cartilage undulated up from their spines
and knotty ropes of sinew fat as telegraph cables webbed their arms. Perhaps at one point they might
have had hands and fingers as Iskavan knew them, but now the great clubs of meat that were their
forearms sprouted hooked blades and an organ-pipe profusion of gun barrels.

“Obliterators!” Tancred breathed. “By the eye, they are magnificent!”
And.. the obliterators show up.

Page 185
Rafen poured rounds into the torso of the nearest obliterator and growled with frustration. The
thing’s head retreated into the muddy pool of flesh-metal between its shoulders and howled back at
him. He spat out an order and Turcio answered it with return fire from a missile launcher. Rockets
looped and struck the Chaos puppet with bright orange impacts. The Word Bearer fell, and was
ground underfoot by its inexorable brethren.
..
Alactus poured plasma flame at Tancred’s force. “We’ll end them, then!”
“Aye!” Rafen joined him, and another obliterator sank to its knees.
Bolters don't do much to the Obliterators, but the rockets do.

Page 186
Rafen instinctively knew what it was; the crawl of his skin and the sudden sympathetic lurch of his gut warned him of an imminent teleport arrival. The pinprick of light expanded and shuddered as the laws of matter and space were briefly circumvented in the halls of the Ikari fortress. A flat crash of displaced atmosphere echoed and sent a bow wave of spent energy across the decking. It scattered the Word Bearers in a perfect circle, and there, stood atop the bodies of a dozen Traitors twisted into warped slag, were ten
figures.

Seven of them were Blood Angels, and all but one of those wore the jump packs and polished
gold helmets of the honour guard. Rafen saw Stele there among them, he held a vicious force axe in
his right hand and his ornate las-gun in the left. Two gun-servitors, their forms not unlike the Chaos
obliterators, flanked him and began to fire at anything wearing magenta.
Physiologicla changes accompany teleport arrivals. Stele has his lasgun and a nasty pair of combat servitors.

Page 187
Turcio rammed the mouth of his missile gun into the chest of a towering
obliterator and blew it apart in a flaming discharge, spattering Rafen and Alactus with hot globules
of daemon-flesh.
Missile launcher blows apart another Obliterator, at point blank range.

Page 188
Tancred had his vibra-stave gripped in his nest of tentacles and a lasgun in the near-human
talons of his other limb. A panicked beam shot scored a finger-wide gouge in Rafen’s vambrace but
it did not stop the Blood Angel.
Tancred's Lasgun (laspistol) cuts a finger wide gouge in Rafen's armour. Depending on dimensions (say 5 cm by 2 cm, a few mm deep, would affect about 4-5 grams asusming silicon (ceramite). If they melted their way through it might be between 6 and 12.5 kilojoules. IF vaporized it might be 60 kj, 17.5 kilojoules for boiling point. If iron mass goes up to 15-16 grams and it might take between 15 and 20 kilojoules (about double the energy of silicon or so)

Of course if it is a blaster-style laser assuming granite might require 4-8 kj per pulse (roughly, depending on number of pulses, whether it is micro or nanonsecond pulse duration, etc.)

Either way we seem to be looking at very high single digit kj to double digit kjs for the pistol shot, roughly.


Page 189 -
And yet, every second the
weapon sang in his grip, and the teardrop blade brought ruin to hundreds of Traitor Marines, he felt
himself changing
...
Arkio counted the Word Bearers in an eye-blink. There were too many, the spear told him. Their
numbers must be thinned, and not at the sluggish pace of gun and chainsword.
Arkio's appearancee with the Spear of Telesto brings ruin to "hundreds" of Word Bearers, puttinga lower limt on the number of enemy there (doesn't include daemonic entities like aforementioend flesh ohunds or furies, or other minions such as helots/soldiers.)

PAge 189 -
Arkio swung the spear about him and drew in energies untouched since the heresy. He
gathered them effortlessly at the tip of the teardrop blade.
..

Mellifluent flame spilled forth from the holy lance in a wide fan and washed over the
battle like a flood. Every Word Bearer it touched caught fire and burned alive, and ahead of the
wave rode a psychic storm of absolute terror. Those Chaos Marines not kindled into powder ran
screaming in fear. Iskavan himself pitched his own men into the fire’s path and broke, all sign of his
unstoppable resolve shattered before the might of the spear.
The firestorm lapped over the corpses of the dead and engulfed the Blood Angels. Rafen saw it
coming. His body froze at the sight of it; he was unable even to throw up his hands and cover his
face. He saw himself dying along with the rest of his brethren as his sibling’s uncontrolled release of
the lance’s power killed enemy and ally alike. But the gold flames crashed over them leaving
nothing but a surge of adrenaline as their primarch’s legacy brushed past. The uncanny
sophistication of the Telesto weapon saw the markers of Sanguinius’ own bloodline in all the Blood
Angels and turned its power from them.
Magic Doomspear deus ex machina is burning the fuck out of all the Chaos forces but not touching the Blood Angels.


Page 190
Winds of ash blew across the plaza before the fortress, billowing in great, silent wreathes. The
atomised remnants of Word Bearers, the cinder gathered in drifts of grey snow, pooling in the lee of
revetments and towers. Rafen left boot-prints in the matter of the dead as he crossed the broken
square, to wind a course around the wrecks of burnt-out Blood Angels’ Razorbacks and Chaos
defilers; the latter were surrounded by wards made from tapes of parchment shot through with holy
text, in order that the unhallowed influence be held at bay, even in death.
- confirmation that the Word bearers were "atomised", or "reduced to cinders. Its worth noting that the Blood Angels weren't touched by this - which suggests the spear is probably warp-based or magical like many other "Legendary" Primarch weapons (or force weapons). Hundreds if not thousands of Word Bearers have been decimated in this attack, nevermind the daemons, cutlists, etc. It's really hard not to argue this would be hundreds of gigajoules if not terajoules of energy spread over howlong Arkio was waving the damn magic spear around (and I'm trying to avoid making "spear and magic helmet" jokes


Page 191-192
In that moment, Rafen saw the head of the sergeant’s vox transmitter,
sheared away from his neck ring. The youth bent down and carefully pulled the wire-thin apparatus
free. It was a command-level contact rig, capable of sending messages directly to upper echelon
units and to ships in orbit. Unlike the unit in Rafen’s armour, Koris’ gear was encrypted with codes
and machine keys that gave him access to all facets of the Blood Angels’ command structure—and
in an emergency, even to the homeworld itself.

...
The Marine spoke into the transmitter.
“Bellus, respond. Telepathic duct protocol required, expedite immediate.” The device tingled in
his fingers as it sampled his genetic imprint, attempting to verify his identity as a Blood Angel. It
would be a gamble, but it was likely that the Bellus crew did not yet have a full accounting of those
killed in battle and so the dead man’s cipher clearances would not have been cancelled.
He heard the dull rattle of a servitor voice in the veteran’s helmet.
...
Perhaps the astropath who carried his message was truly ignorant of Rafen’s deception, or
perhaps he chose to send it anyway in some small act of defiance for the killing of Horin. Whatever
the motive, the Marine’s imperative issued forth unchallenged into the void and raced away along
invisible lines of telepathic force, leaping from beacon-mind to relay-psyker, and crossing the
galaxy toward the Blood Angels’ monastery holdfast on Baal.
Use of astropathic FTL as a telepathic relay for vox transmission. This shows it is quite possible to transmit signals FTL remotely after a fashion.

Also note again the mention of "relay-psykers" and "beacon minds" suggesting some sort of astropathic network covering the Imperium for communication and navigation purposes.

Page 199
The discreet hatch was a fixture on all Imperial ships above a certain tonnage, regardless of their shipyard or force of origin. Uniquely coded to protein-chain code strings implanted in the skin of inquisitors and their agents, the so-called secret gates could only be opened by those sanctioned by the ordos—or those with a plasma torch and several days to waste. The secure hatch allowed men like Stele to come and go at
will, without clearance from a vessel’s main docking pulpit.
Inquisitorial feature aboard all warships - even, it seems, Space Marine ones.

Page 199
Ulan was a failed experiment that Stele had rescued from an ordos laboratory. She was a psyker tool with a strong, if erratic, ability. The ornate device about her head held her power at bay until he had need of it.
She's both a psyker and seems to have some facility as a Pariah-like being.

Page 200
There before him were the three surviving astropath adepts who until recently had served Bellus under the guidance of the late Master Horin.
Bellus carried at least 3 Astropaths.

Page 200 -
He reached out a hand and pulled down her hood, revealing dead eyes cut from black crystal. The inquisitor touched a sequence of jewelled controls on the mechanical crown about her skull, releasing her to unleash her null gift. She closed her eyes and opened the place inside her psyche that held the mindcloak. Ulan fell to the floor in a heap, twitching and weeping, dying by inches as her aberrant power flooded the room. She would perish if Stele used her in this fashion for too long, but he had brought her close to the brink before and she had always survived it.

The astropaths all reacted in the same way—with utter shock. Ulan’s ability cast a bubble of
void about the chamber, suffocating the application of any metapsychic phenomenon. The duration
of the effect would only last as long as poor Ulan could stand it, but in Stele’s experience most
psykers folded like decks of tarot cards within moments of being struck psi-blind by her.
Ulan, ,Inquisitorial psyker-slave to Inquisitor Ramius Stele - has the "null gift" - can block/dampen psychic abilities of other people. Not an untouchable/pariah, she has her own psyker abilities.

Page 201

- Stele's laspistol expends fifteen blasts into astropaths (one shot each for the three, plus a dozen mroe in rage after.) and may not be expended (yet)

Page 207
“A signal came to us, relayed across the segementum from the Shenlong star system. Our astropaths confirm that the message originated aboard the battle barge Bellus.”
Too bad we don't know how long it took, implies thousands/tens of thousands of light years.


Page 212
Rafen tore his arm away from the man and drew his combat knife in a bright arc of
fractal-edged steel.
- Rafen's knife has a blade of "Fractal-edged steel.

Page 218
“Our fealty to Guilliman’s ancient treatise has never been the strongest, as we all can agree. We are Blood Angels and what suits us is anathema to the stolid Ultramarines and their kindred…” Several of the
seasoned troopers murmured an accord. The Space Marine warbook of sacred battle doctrines had
been crafted by the authoritarian primarch of the Ultramarines Chapter, Robute Guilliman, but his
suspicion of the Blood Angels had been well documented and, even ten millennia past his death, the
warriors from Macragge were still antagonistic toward them.
In other words they're not a Codex Chapter. They also don't seem to regret not being Ultramarines.

PAge 222-223
Falkir’s men used chains stolen from the factory zones above to hold the nine offerings in place.

..

Iskavan began to read aloud from the book. The words were sounds that did not fit in the
material world. They resembled inhuman ululations and strange cadences that made the air shiver
with their passage. As he spoke, the Apostle reversed the grip on the crozius and used the sicklesharp
blade on the lower end to slit the offering’s throat. A fan of blood tore out of him, but instead
of falling to the floor, it whirled into the air, each droplet hardening into a ruby bullet.
..

They pulled fruitlessly at
the chains, only to stumble and fall as the bloodstorm ripped into them and cut them to ribbons. The
globules spun about in a swarm of red.
Flesh and crimson fluid began to coalesce in the middle of the remains of the sacrificial victims,
organs and meat tearing out of the corpses to come together in a purplish mass of matter. Iskavan
waited patiently for the shape of a Khornate bloodthirster to form, but no daemon emerged.
Gradually a formless blob of protoplasm congealed into something barely recognisable as a face.
The wet orb of gore spun in the scarlet rain.
“Not enough!” it screamed. “Need more! More! More! More!” Iskavan studied it with a frown.
This was not supposed to happen. The summoning should have been sated and allowed the chosen
of the skull throne to manifest, not beg for more.

...

The Word
Bearer swore as he fell face-first into the bloodstorm.
With a gust of coppery vapour, the rain of liquid engulfed Falkir and filled him up like a vessel.
Iskavan watched intently, waiting for the telltale horns, tail and batwings of a bloodthirster to burst
from the seams of his armour. The Khornate creature would corrupt Falkir’s body still further and it
would emerge from his mortal form armed with a hellfire whip, a heartseeker axe and a desperate
desire to kill.


...

Whatever possessed Falkir slowly got to its feet and confronted him. Where the Word Bearer’s
ruined face had been there was now an ever-shifting mass of warped flesh.
..

“Show respect to the servant of Tzeentch, beastling!” it cackled. “No bloodthirster for you! The
Warmaster Garand has forbidden it!”

..

Iskavan’s black heart hammered in his malformed ribcage. The Warmaster’s powers were potent
indeed to have reached across the Immaterium and turned aside the daemonic invocation.
- the Word Bearer Iskavan attempts to summon a daemon bloodthirster using nine human sacrifices (plus another CSM) - the beast's body forms out of the flesh and bone of the sacrifices, merging and moulded together. (This suggests the Bloodhtirster would have the mass of around 10-11 humans, roughly.) Not exactly Titan scale is it? :P

Page 224
Before the eyes of the Word Bearers, the daemon’s chimera face took on the terrible aspect of
the High Warmaster Garand, battle commander of a thousand hosts and the Dread Witchprince of
Helica.
- the leader of the Word Bearers commands "a thousand hosts", one of which is Iskavana (ninth host.) This implies that they number many hundreds of thousands of Word Bearers, possibly millions.

Page 225
The Apostle's bellow shattered the spell Garand's voice had vast, and with a strike fo his crozius, Iskavan battered the messenger daemon across the chamber. The flesh-form cracked across the far wall and shivered.
The word bearer remnants are undeground in a sewere system, currently occupying a flood chamber. Iskavan later "storms" across the chamber over it, implying that he made at least several strides (6-10 meters, based on prior examples of Space Marine stride length.)

PAge 229
The rapacious pace of conflict in the 41st millennium was fed by myriad worlds, each churning out
megatons of military hardware by the freighter-load. Shenlong’s speciality was its shells: from tiny,
low-calibre bullets suitable for an assassin’s kissgun to the colossal ship-cracking torpedoes fired
from battleships. Munitions rolled out of the forge world’s manufactoriums to stoke the unending
inferno of the Emperor’s wars. Every inch of the rusty planet’s surface was thick with factory
complexes, worker-towns and warehouses. There was nothing that did not orbit around the needs of
the mills: schools and cathedrals, agri-domes and heat sinks, water plants and sewerage works were
all squeezed into the gaps between the looming walls of the weapons shops.
- "every inch" of the factory/forge world Shenlong's planetary surface is covered with factory complexes, worker owns and warehouses, with other things like schools and cathedrals, agri-domes, heat sinks, water plants and sewerage works nestled in between the factories.

Page 230
Built atop a cavernous factory, the clinic dealt mostly with the outbreaks of military-grade viruses that regularly affected the workers.

These men and women fell foul of the toxins they were forced to load into planetary-denial bombs
and other scorched earth munitions.
- "planetary denial bombs" and other "scorched earth" munitions (some involving virus weapons) and apparently nukes (since that is what Shenlong also uses.)

Page 231
The Space Marine saw the shape of a Word Bearer warped to slag by a melta blast and grinned.
Word bearer (or his armour at least) melted by melta blast. triple digit MJs at least.

Page 233
Without warning, Arkio projected himself off the balcony and dropped, plummeting downwards.
Sachiel reached for him, too late to stop the young Blood Angel. The priest saw Arkio’s fall,
convinced that he would witness the blessed broken apart by the impact of his landing. The blazing
rod of the spear glinted as he descended.

Men in the plaza saw him coming and parted like a breaking wave. Arkio struck the stone with a
concussion that cut a shallow bowl in the square. Without a scratch or an injury upon him, Arkio
rose from the crouch where he landed and crossed to the ranks of a bike squadron.
Our "reborn" Primarch jumps from the balcony and lands unharmed.


Page 236
The impact of Iskavan’s crozius threw Rafen at one of the vent tubes
and he bounced off it. Bones fractured inside his armour. Before he could even stop his fall, Rafen’s
injured legs lost purchase and he slipped into the rent in the ground, the breach in the stone flooring
swallowed him up, bolter and all.
- Rafen is hit by Iskavans's Crozius and is sent flying against some machinery (vent tubes) which he bouncese off of. Armour does not appear to be significantly damaged, but bones inside him crack with the impact.

Page 236
The black disc of the bolt’s entry wound steamed as the flattened bullet head slowly eased itself out of the bloody hole. The Apostle dug his nails into the skin and tore the round out of his skull, flicking it away with
a growl.
Once again non explosive bolter round that flattens on impact.

Page 237
Rafen fired again. He was rewarded with a shriek from the creature as hot rounds tore off a
chitinous limb.
RAfen's bolter fire ampuates limb.

Page 238
Rafen let his helmet optics bring the sight closer. There was the Apostle, advancing from a rail carriage with his men and the captive adept.
Helmet optics.

Page 239
The vent levers before him were the emergency shunts that would open the bio-toxin
tanks to the air. They were protected by hundreds of wards and purity seals glued to their faces.
These immense containers held the gaseous forms of a hundred different poisons. NeoZyklona. Rotbane.
Agent Magenta. The Fell Breath. Their names were a litany of the death-dealer’s art; weapons
kept for those whose crimes had been particularly offensive to the Emperor.
VArious WMD virus or chemical weapons.

Page 240
Hundreds of worker-helots and servitors huddled around the shadows of the noisy fabricators, looking up at him with masks of utter fear. These were the lowest of the Shenlongi, the broken and the mind-wiped, and he would get no support from them.

Rafen suspected that these pitiful wretches had been slaving away down here
since before the Word Bearers’ arrival on the planet, turning out shell after shell, and never knowing
if the master they served reigned from the Golden Throne or the Eye of Terror.
Mind wiped worker helots working on some osrt of shells.. delivery devices for the chem/viral weapons?

Page 240-241
As he descended, the Marine ignored the fat sparks that fountained from the brakes and drew a bead on the huge pot. His old mentor’s training returned to him and saw the target through Koris’ eyes. Yes. There!
Rafen’s weapon rattled as he let the rounds spark off the sides of the cup, licking at the bolts that
held it upright. He ignored the approach of the ground, seeing only the void between his weapon and
his mark. The bullets demolished the couplings, and the cup fell, tumbling to the floor like a goblet
falling from the fingers of some drunken giant.

bolter fire obliterates the coupling/linkages holding the "cup" of some molten metal.

Page 241
The canister threw a tidal wave of molten metal at the Word Bearers, and they broke apart like a flock of startled birds. Rafen never saw the liquefied steel engulf them, the crane grab struck the ground and threw him into a mess of pipes—but he heard it. Rough screaming. The sickening crackles as incredible heat
embrittled their ceramite armour and flash-burned their flesh
Word Bearer armour doesnt stand up to the molten metal very well it seems.

Page 243
... Rafen emptied the gun into the Traitor's free hand. At so close a range, the blaze of bullets ripped away everything from the middle of his forearm, shredding bone, muscle, and blood into a mess of gelatinous fragments.
Bolter's entire (remaining) clip of bullets obliterates forearm and hand of a Word Bearer (probably Iskavaan.. too lazy to check.)

PAge 243
"Bastard!" The Apostle poured centuries of hate into the curse and slammed his crozius into Rafen. The blow was imperfect, borne from fury and without any semblance of control, otherwise it would have killed him instantly. Instead, the Space Marine was thrown thirty meters to slam into the side of a cargo unit. Most of Rafen's torso armour was gone, the ceramite ripped away. Bundles of artificial muscle twitched beneath. He felt the full weight of his wargear as the thermal dissapators in his backpack clogged and shut down. The Blood Angel's head lolled. He had lost his helmet somewhere, and a wound over his brow gummed his right eye closed. Rafen tried to move, and felt broken ribs spearing his lungs from within.
This time when Rafen gets hit by Iskavana's crozius, he really goes flying and suffers damage over a distance of 30 meters.
Page 244
Iskavan roared a battle cry and sent rods of lightning at the youth. Arkio knocked them away with the Spear of Telesto and in a flash he was at the Word Bearer’s throat, the lance slamming into
the crozius with shrieks of tortured metal.
Iskavan sends off lightning attack.

Page 244
The compact fusion reactor and the back plate of his armour, ,all went away in a flood of hurt.
Blood Angel power armour (at least, if no other) can make use of fusion power plants.
Page 245
He threw the spear like a thunderbolt and it pierced Iskavan’s black heart. Rafen watched a flash of gold light envelop the
Word Bearer lord. When it faded there was nothing but the lance and ashes.
Impact of the lance cremates the apostle and (presumably?) vaporizes the armor. If it isnt technobabble disintegration it would easily fall into the high MJ/low GJ range depending on efficiency.

Page 247
The lesser daemons that Iskavan had released were culled and their bodies were burnt in the huge fusion smelters that made the biggest of the Empire's bombs.
Fusion smelters.

Page 249
“In the telepathic ducts I spied a remnant of the unauthorised signal that was sent from our
vessel to Baal. It required several days of meditation to unfurl it, but I had some success.”
Telepathic ducts yet again. apparently psychic traces can be left in them indicating a message has been sent.
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Re: Blood Angels novel series analysis thread

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From the Blood Angels omnibus.... Blood Debt short story. Tells the previous story of Stele and how he ended up where he was. Its ok. also attached was the 'notes' appendix Swallow added to the Blood Angels omnibus.


Page 293
Atop the ramp was a planetary lighter, an orbital shuttle of a crude but quite speedy type. Similar ships were employed across the Imperium and she knew that if circumstances required, she would be able to pilot the craft herself. The lighter wore the logo of a freight haulage agency that carried cargo and passengers from platforms in the orbital rings, to the surface of the planet and back again. She estimated that with enough reaction mass and a good course, the ship might get them to Orilan’s outermost moon.
Some sort of sublight, in-system hauler. The pattern seems common enough, or the systems aboard it are common enough, that a person may be confident of piloting it even if they never flew that particular model before.
Page 294
....the woman’s hand dipped ainto the slit in the folds of her cloak, fingers touching the careworn butt of an old but steadfast stubber pistol.
See in the novels stubbers can be useful sometimes even if in game they're low tech low quality weapons.

Page 294
He was springing forward, the ornate shape of a master-crafted lasgun filling his fist.
He's holding it in one hand, so its technically a laspistol. Some writers in this context use "lasgun" in teh context a "gun" can refer to a pistol or rifle (EG a lasgun can be a laspistol or lasrifle.) whereas others (and in the games) lasgun = rifle.

Page 295
The two of them raised their guns and shot the gentleman and lady through the backs of their skulls, blowing brain matter and bone across the servitor’s carapace.
Laspistol and stubber pistol both appare to blow apart (partly or wholly) normal human skulls. Single digit kj easily, posibly double digit kj (about equal to a full power round or a AMR round)

Interestingly the servitor can speak and seems to have some rudimentary intelligence.


Page 296
As the vessel rose into Orilan’s upper atmosphere, the inky shroud at last found a microscopic flaw in the hull. And with a controlled, fierce will, it poured itself in through the gap.
Daemonic, Tzeentchian creature, part of the infestation on the planet that is being quarantined.

Page 297
Vonorof felt a peculiar tension around the thick brass sockets in the base of his neck, where the sinuous mechadendrites of the lighter’s command chair connected directly to his brain.
...
Direct machine code feeds from the lighter’s cogitators told Vonorof that it was a Gladius-class frigate...
the pilot has a MIU interface with the ship and can receive direct input from the ship's computers.

Page 303
The cloak fell about his ankles, revealing the ceramite-plate battle jacket beneath, the vest of fine Phaedran silks.
Flak armor perhaps with hard inserts?

Page 304-305
"It would appear that an Inquisitor of the Imperial Church is aboard. A man of some import and rank among the Ordo Hereticus, so it would seem.”
..
“Captain, this is a direct command from a member of the Ecclesiarchy. We cannot simply ignore it.”
Rather old, archaic view on things, when the Church and the Adeptus Terra were the same thing.

Page 310
As the years passed, as he grew more disenchanted with the decrepitude of the Ecclesiarchy and the lackwits among his superiors..
Again conflating the Adeptus Terra with the Ecclesiarchy.

Page 314
Down through the deck shunting and flickering dodging through barricades and the hastily erected psyker wards of Tycho’s librarians, it fell through microscopic cracks in the metal and ceramite tasting power in the air, moving toward it.

In the beating heart of the ship, past the locks made of heavy, poisonous phase-iron and the pitiful spirit deflectors, the shadow at last entered the holy chamber of the frigate’s stardrives.
Our little Tzeentchian daemon friend again is infiltrating the ship thorugh tiny cracks. Also note the psychic ward defenses (phase iron and spirit defelctors.)

Interesting also that warp drives seem to attrack daemons (nesting?) although its unsurprising.

Page 314
Beneath the casings of the mighty drives, technologies almost akin to magic seethed and roiled, great powers capable of remaking the laws of the universe barely held in check by weakling organic men with little comprehension of their true potential. The creature smiled and spread itself thin, touching the matter of the engines and changing them by degrees. Slowly it gathered in flesh and metal, and began to build itself a nest.
Like I said the chaos creature is nesting in the warp engines.

Page 318
Tycho led the way through them, rending their warped forms with flares of killing fire from his combi-weapon, the melta gun flashing, catching the ones that got too close with ruby threads cast by lasers in his gauntlets. They screamed and died, boiling to death as they cried out for mercy.
Tycho has a meltagun/bolter combi-weapon, as well as digital lasers in his gauntlets for close combat. It's not certain whether the meltagun alone is boiling them, or the melta plus the lasers.

Page 320
He saw Tycho’s combi-weapon lying on the floor and took a half-step toward it. The idea of taking it up himself died in this mind; the gun was so massive he would never have been able to lift
it.
As we now know, Astartes weapons are vastly vastly larger than normal human versions.

Page 323
...her only reply was a face of rage and a storm of gunfire. “End you!” the spat throwing herself at him, stitching a line of incendiary bullets across his torso. Stele howled and tore his silken vest from him as it burst into flame. Shots that would have ripped him open before warped and deflected about him, the black power of the mutation inside him charging his psyche with monstrous force.
The stubber pistol had incendiary bullets, and would have "ripped" the inquisitor open despite his body armor. Of course his enhanced psychic power deflects them now.

Page 324
Conjured from the warp itself, a haze of pure purple-white fire blazed from
Ramius’ fingers and enveloped the woman’s shrieking body. It was over in a split second. Marain twisted, became a charcoal sketch against the glare, then ashes.
...
..the hellbolt that killed Marain magnified a thousandfold; for one brief instant the inquisitor became a tornado of psychic force, and with it he ripped the shade-daemon from existence.
Implied that our enhanced Inquisitor friend incinerated stubbr-girl.




Appendix Angelus

Page 601
Agent Magenta: A virulent bio-toxin created by the magos biologis of the Imperiumof Man. Extremely lethal, it is deployed only against targets that have earned the Emperor's most serious displeasure. Among other biological and germ warfare chemicals. Agent Magenta was manufactured on the forge-world of Shenlong.
One of the toys mentioned in the Blood Angels duology. Not sure if it is an exterminatus weapon or is meant for tactical/strategic use.


Page 602
Amasec: A rich and potent alcoholic liquor popular across the Impreium. Many worlds produce a drink that goes by this name, and quality can vary widely.
This implies Amasec is a category of alcoholic drinks rather than one specific type - worlds may have their own brands or variations.

Page 604
Atlas-class warhead: a heavy thruster-powered bomb of Imperial manufacture, designed to function in an air-to-ground capacity. Typically deployed against large ground targets like hardened bunkers, citadels, Titans or land leviathans.
a nuke basically. we'll learn more about this in the duology over time. simply remember the nature of the targets it is meant to take out. :P

Page 606
Binder Fungus: A curious form of biological weapon created by scientists in service ot the Chaos Gods. When spread on fertile ground, binder fungus grows in the shape of arcane symbols that pay homage to the daemons of the warp.
Th efruits of Chaos research and development. What purpsoe it serves, toher than as a form of Chaos Worship, we don't know.

Page 606-607
Biolume: a device for illumination, typically a clear case filled with a bioluminescent liquid stimulated by electrical charges. Biolumes can operate for millenia, under the right conditions.
A form of lumination technology in the Imperium. SEems like their style - cheap, simple, but effective.

Page 607
bio-web: Gene-engineered weapons system. Bio-web resembles barbed wire, with a synthetic mechanism based on the funciton of lethal binding vine plants used to ensnare unwary victims into the web's clutches.
Genetically engineered weapon for immobilization or constriction/crushing. Possibly a variation on tangle grenades.

Page 613
Fell Breath, The : a Nerve gas created by the magos biologis of the Imperium of Man. Victims suffer an extremely painful and lingering death. It is deployed only against targets have have earned the Emperor's most serious displeasure. Among other biological and germ warfare chemicals, the Fell Breath was manufactured on the forge-world of Shenlong.
Again, we're not sure whether this WMD is meant specifically for Exterminatus, or if it might be used in other applications.

Page 613
Ferrocrete: A synthetic compound mixing metallic alloys, polymers, and stone. Many structures throughout the Imperium are made from ferrocrete, and once poured and set, it is extremely dense, and capable of standing for thousands of years.
composition of one sort of building mateiral in the Imperium. The use of "polymers" might be interesting depending on the kind of polymers and its use (is it a binding agent, for example, or something else.) It doesnt really sound like reinforced concrete though.

Page 615
Ghost-metal: A psychoactive alloy commonly used in the construction of force weapons and other psyker-based technologies.
Psychic magic metal in other words.

Page 617
Kissgun: An assassination weapon, small enough to be placed in the mouth of the user. Typically, the kissgun fires needle-rounds of an extremely fine diameter.
We never see these used until Nemesis sadly :P

Page 620
Melta Mines: Combat munition, typically deployed as an area-denial weapon. Buried beneath the surface of the ground, melta mines use a one-shot microwave energy discharger triggered by vibration, odour or psi-wave sensors.
A throwback to the days when meltaguns weren't high tech flamethrowers but actually microwave guns.

Page 621
Mole-Mine: a compelx burrowing torpedo weapon, usually deployed against infantry target.s Fired into the ground, a mole-mine digs through the earth beneath the feet of an enemy and surfaces amnong them before detonating. Swift and deadly, mole-mines are difficult to defend against.
Aniother throwback - these

Page 621
Molly-Knife: Colloquial name for a fractal-edged blade; the name refers to the monomolecular cutting edge, which is capable of slicing through all but the most resilient of materials.
Molly - monomolecular, although it seems like its not just a really really narrow/sharp edge, it's an edge designed to increase the cutting surface of the blade (may also be a vague sci fi reference)


Page 622
NeoZyklona: A bio-toxin created by the magos biologis of the Imperium of Man. Extremely lethal, it is deployed only against targets that have earned the Emperor's most serious displeasure. Among other biological and germ warfare chemicals, NeoZyklona was manufactured on the forge world of shenlong.
Another possible exterminatus weapon or just general weapon of battlefield nastiness.

Page 623
Pellis was a magos biologis adept serving the Imperium on the forge-world of Shenlong, administering the construction and testing of biological warfare weapons for the Imperial Guard.
If they were making it for the Guard, it can't be for exterminatus-grade stuff alone. Although its rare (unheard of) for the Guard to rampantly use biologicla or chemical weapons.

Page 623-624
Phase-iron: a rare and uncommon metal that has been psychically 'treated', making it poisonous to psykers, creatures of the warp and mind-witches. Phase-iron is sometimes used in the construction of cages for beings iwth high psychic abilities or daemonic natures.
Magic iron psychically "treated" to be harmful to psykers.


Page 624
Proteus-class Warhead: A large-diameter boost-assisted missile of Imperial manufacture, designed to function in a surface-to-space capacity. Typically deployed against orbital targets like warships and sky-artillery platforms.
Either a glorified torpedo, or someone scaled up a bolter round to capital ship dimensions.

Page 624
Also known as Psi-bombs or Eightmen. A perverse form of Chaos weapon, binding eight bond-slave psykers together by a form of psychic imprinting. When 'detonated' by a command phrase or a trigger event, the bonded psykers release a wave of mental disruption that sends a shockwave of insanity through the minds of any living beings inside the blast radius,
Chaos weapon. Word bearers love using psyker weapons.

Page 626
Rot-Bane: An artificial disease created by the magos biologis of the Imperium of Man, Rot-Bane, as the name suggests, causes living flesh to disintegrate while the victim is still alive. Among other biological and germ warfare chemicals, Rot-Bane was manufactured on the forge-world of Shenlong.
"artificial disease" and yet another in the long list of bio/chem weapons nmade on Shenlong.

Page 630
Spear of Telesto, The: Also known as the Holy Lance, the Spear, the Hasta Fatalis. An arcane weapon of incredible power, legend says that the Spear of Telesto was a number of weapons forged by the Emperor of Mankind himself. The spear's blade is an elongated tear with a hollow in the centre, representing the single drop of blood that Sanguinius shed when he swore fealty to the Emperor; the blade rests atop a sculpted haft that shows Sanguinius clad in the monastic vestments of a sanguinary high priest, with a single purity seal that bares the personal mark of the Emperor himself.

Gene-sensor technology in the weapon keys the spear's use only to those who have the blood of Sanguinius in their veins. By unknown means the weapon is capable of discharging a stream of lethal energy that will leave those with the genetic marker untouched by damage. The weapon was lost in the aftermath of the Horus Heresy, only to be rediscovered millenia later in the hands of an Ork warlord who was unaware of the spear's true power.
The magic Fire spear weapon.

Page 633
Tusk Blade: also known as a Bone Dagger. A living knife, this weapon is actually a very minor phylum of warp creature that lives by ingesting the blood from its stab victims. Commonly used by Traitor Marines and other servants of the Chaos gods.
Well this is better than daemons shot out of guns.

Page 634
Ulan: Personal astropath to the inquisitor lord Ramius Stele, Ulan was the failed result of a clandestine experiment by the Adeptus Telepathica to control the psionic potential of a human being. Stele liberated Ulan from the laboratories where she had spent her life and turned her to his use. Among her abilities, Ulan could cast a zone of psionic nullification that would affect all but the mos tpowerful of psykers.
An intersting case of psyker experiments. That she has abilities to nullify psychic powers like a paraiah is also interesting.

Page 634-635
Valkyrie Towers, The:
A large memorial constructed on the cemetary world Cybele by the Adepta Sororitas...
...
..the towers were obliterated in a final scream when the Word Bearers destroyed them with a nuclear air strike.
Word bearers use a nuclear bombardment on Cybele.

Page 635
Vibra-stave: a hand weapon with a long, bladed point, a favourite of torturers. A power cell in the handle of the stave oscillates the crystal-matrix blade at the frequency of orgnaic matter, making it perfect for cutting into living flesh.
Vibro weapons.
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Re: Blood Angels novel series analysis thread

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Deus Sanguinius next. I'm just going to blow through this one because really a.) The first two Blood Angels novels are kinda 'meh', The second set are better, but still kinda meh story wise, and I just want to get them out there and move onto other stuff.

so Part 1:


Page 8
He ran his fingers over the old, careworn idol; it had been made from brass off-cuts, from a factory that forged shells for the Leman Russ tanks of the Imperial Guard.
Shenlong seems to make Battle cannon ammo, and they use brass casings (at least in Ultima Segmentum or the surrounding areas of Shenlong, they do.)

Page 8
He folded his arms over his chest, hands like flat blades, wrists crossed; the fingers and thumb taking on the shape of the doubleheaded Imperial aquila, one eye looking to the past, the other staring into the future, unblinking.
Symbolism of Aquila.

Page 9
Here, where the screaming souls of the brutalised dead had etched their pain into the stone and
mortar, the inquisitor found the membrane between the world and the warp to be thinner.
Pain and torment can thin the barrier between dimensions.

Page 10
At the junction of the corridor, Stele’s lexmechanic stood waiting, lurch-a-backed. Its head
bobbed by way of a greeting. “Your meditation is concluded?” The servitor became nervous in the
confines of the room and it had elected to remain outside for the duration.
..
Was there wounded pride in the servitor’s voice? Stele doubted it; his helot’s mentality had been
so thoroughly expunged in its service that there was little vestige in it that could be considered to be
a personality.
Lexmachanic defined as servitor.

Page 11

Stele decided that
they were most likely from Shenlong’s mercantile class, dispossessed land-owners still clinging to
the courtly ways of life from before the Word Bearers invasion.
A forge world with a merchant class?

Page 13
Neither could Rafen visit one of the churches that the commoners and citizens used, down in the
city-sprawls crammed into the gaps between Shenlong’s kilometres-high factory cathedrals. The
sight of a Space Marine, even one without his hallowed armour, would never pass unnoticed among
the populace
- the Fortress world of Shenlong had "kilometres high" factory cathedrals that produced the munitions they exported. City sprawls (including churches) crammed in between the immense factories.

Page 15
" A ship is on its way. I have intercepted the shadows of signals from the depths of the
immaterium. It will arrive soon."
Detected tjhe ship via its signals, but we knew psykers could detect ships arriving.

Page 15
"there is but one Blood Angels ship matching the tonnage of the Bellus within operational range of Shenlong, and that is the Europae, the Lord Mephiston's personal command.
I wonder how we define "operational range" - are we talking within the sphere of activity of the Blood Angels, or what parts of the galaxy they can reach? Blood Angels have served all over the galaxy (such as at Armageddon) many times, they can reach quite far. Typcially though its noted that Space Marines operate in an area thousands of light years across, which is in my mind what this might be suggesting.

Page 16
The spear of Telesto, one of a handful of battle weapons and hallowed objects fored - so the myths would have it- by the very hand of the God Emperor himself.
GEoM is reputed to have made the Spear. Then again it's quite possible it was just found on some alien or conquered human world.

Page 17
His voice trailed off, the memory as fresh now weeks later as it had been the moment it happened.
For a brief instant, Rafen felt the divine radiance of the spear on his face again, the golden light
shining off the teardrop blade as Arkio held the haft high in the Great Chapel of the Bellus. Try as
he might, Rafen could not explain what he had seen that day.
"Weeks" seem to have passed since the events in the first novel. This implies it took far less than "weeks" for the astorpathic signal to travel from Shenlong to Baal (tens if not hundreds of thousands of c, at a minimum.)

Page 23
“Your counsel has meant much to me in these past few weeks,” Arkio began, “and your guidance has helped me to understand the path Sanguinius has laid before me.”
again "past few weeks" have passed.

Page 28
Rafen did his best to keep to the edges of the highway, head bowed and hood up; but there was
little he could do to avoid towering over the civilians, the tallest of whom could barely reach the
Marine’s shoulder.
- the tallest Shenlongi citizens he passes "barely" reached Rafen (Blood Angels Marine's) shoulder, suggesting they might be some 2-2.2 metres tall (assuming a 30 cm skull and a 2.5 m tall Marine). This odesnt mean they are the tallest all around, but still. Or maybe Rafen is just very short for his age :P

Page 30
Without ceremony, Rafen disrobed, discarding his common cloth and sandals, revealing the
glistening ebony sheath of his black carapace.

A living compound of plastics and alloys, the dark material had been implanted under the skin of his upper torso in his seventeeth year, as the final part of his initiation and transformation from Baalite tribesman into Blood Angels Space Marine.

The neural sensors and transfusion shunts that bloomed from the surface of the carapace opened like
the yawning mouths of tiny birds, ready to accept the interface jacks of his new armour.
Rafen's Black Carapace. A "living compound of plastics and alloys." which tends to lend credence to the idea it is a backup layer of armor for the front of the body.

Page 30
Lucion gave a burst-command in chattering machine code, and as one the servitors went to work,
fitting the components of the Mark VII codex power armour to Rafen’s body.
- Techmarines seem to know of the AdMech "machine code" used to communicate with each toher and with their machine servants (like servitors) - or, at least a version of it.

Page 31
Thermonic garments slid across him; flexible myomer muscle encircled the meat of his limbs, arranging itself to enhance and augment his physical strength; over this came the outer layer of bonded ceramite and plasteel weave, tough enough to turn a glancing bolt shell at twenty paces. Rafen slid his bare feet into the hollows of his greaves, the gyroscopic stabilizers in the broad boots humming into life.
The various parts of Rafen's new power armour -- no adamantium used (bonded ceramite and "plasteel weave") cna turn a glancing bolter shell at close range but presumably not a direct hit. This may mean bolter fire that typically fails to penetrate does not qualifty as direct hits, since Rafen is supposed to be getting some pretty fancy gear. Not sure what "Thermonic" is - either some sort of enviromental protection or maybe it has something to do with how the armour is used.

Also the gyroscopic stabiliziers (to keep balance and probably for bracing)

Page 31
The power armour he had worn since his initiation had been destroyed in combat with the Chaos champion Iskavan, the centuries-old hardware ruined by the claws and blades of the Word Bearer. Perhaps some elements of his old gear might remain among the components he now donned, but for the most part he was clothing himself in the armour of dead men.
..
The gear that Rafen would now call his own had been in service to the Chapter for
half a millennium or more.
They recycle and reuse alot of it of course, although I suspect this is purely for traditional/religions reasons, as in practical terms rebuilding a demolished suit is little different from building a fresh one (except maybe they can't fabricate the ancient materials to completely repair the suit with.)


Page 31
Rafen shook his head, remembering Bennek’s death on Cybele. His comrade had been struck by
enemy plasma fire and crushed beneath a horde of Word Bearers.
This implies the power armor's former recipient, but it may also be that Rafen's armor was assembled from pieces of old Marines armour, both of which are known to occur in 40K.


Page 33
The display inside Rafen’s helmet told him the comparative positions of the nearest Blood
Angels. There were four honour guards outside the chamber, along with Delos and Lucion; even the
swiftest of them was a full ten seconds away. Arkio stood within arm’s length of Rafen, his mood
relaxed and his guard apparently lowered.
Some sort of locator beacon, or sensor system (bio-sensor?) Whatever it is it seems omnidirectional and can work through walls.

Page 34
It would not take much; just a jerk of the wrist to bring the muzzle of the gun to press against Arkio’s chest, one squeeze of the trigger to discharge a point-blank burst of fire.

Even the hallowed gold artificer armour would not be able to withstand such a strike. In that
moment, Rafen imagined the look of shock and pain on Arkio’s face as the bolt shells tore into his
torso, punching his organs through his back in a riot of fluid and matter.
- Arkio's artificer armour would not be able to stand up to a point blank (less than a foot) discharge of a (full magazine?) burst of bolter shells into the armour. Arkio's torso would more or less be blown out through his back by the discharge as well. The burst would be at least 3-4 bolts though.
Rafen’s bolter felt like it was as dense as neutronium, too heavy to move.
Neutronium (whatever that means in the context of 40K) implied to exist in 40K, but it is not neccesarily building material or even present in a stabilized form or anything like that. We know from the third space wolf novel it can be used in ramming beaks, though.

Page 35
And Dante did not!” He turned away, presenting his folded wings to his brother. “In eleven hundred
years at the head of the greatest Chapter of the Legion Astartes, what progress has he made toward
the mastery of our gene-curse? None!”
- Dante has been Chapter Master of the Blood angels for at least eleven hundred years, according to Arkio.

Page 36-37
The psyker’s mind was spread as thinly as she dared, the energy of it dispersed
into a wide net. Her concentration was paramount; if she were to let her thoughts drift further for
even an eye-blink, what little there was to call her personality would be picked apart on the winds of
the empyrean. She was a spider now, settled at the nexus of a web she wove from her own psy-stuff.
Ulan lurked there, sensitive to any perturbation in the rolling non-matter of the warp, looking and
watching for patterns.

...

And there was her target. Very distant but approaching quickly now, cutting through the
immaterium like a sword blade. A man-made object, swift and deadly in aspect.


Ulan seems to require spreading her.. spirit, soul, astral form or whatever.. out through the warp to detect the approach of the Blood Angels Delegation from baal.

Page 37
He loaded a fresh sickle magazine into the bolter and took aim with the naked eye,
releasing a series of three-round bursts into the rotating target stands.
...
His weapon had been knocked off true when it fell from his hands in
the manufactory. With care, Rafen adjusted the pitch of the foresight.
Rafens bolter has fore (and presumably) back sights, and three round burst capability.

Page 40
The transport was taking advantage of the forge-world’s full stocks of shells to rearm the warship, ferrying case after case of missiles where it might normally have loaded Rhinos and Marines for ground assault. The warheads filled the hull spaces, leaving scant room for anything else.
The thunderhawk is carrying the shells, but we don't know what the shells are for. Curiously this implies thunderhawks routinely carry transports as well as Marines, although it may simply refer to the two variants (the Thunderhawk and the vehicle transport variant.) Then again, maybe it refers to an older, larger variant of the Thunderhawk - the existence of which has been alluded to in earlier sources (and which basically looks like a flying brick with turrets)

Given Shenlong's specialisation seemingly in nuclear/fusion warheads, thats probably what they are stocking up with (the first novel does mention "fusion torpedoes.")


Page 42
There was a shock-ward attached to the inside of the hatch, primed and ready to deliver a massive electric charge into anyone foolish enough to try to open it from the outside.
Security measure on a hatch.

Page 42
He reached into one of dozens of secret pockets in the coat and retrieved two vials of bright,
fresh blood. Stele had drawn the fluid himself, from the necks of the merchant’s wife and daughter
as they had lain spent at his feet, compelling them into death so that the liquid might teem with the
vital essence of their brutal, potent murder.
Stele prepared vials of blood charged with psychic essence, probably to bolster his own abilities.

Stele is an asshole, incidentally, did I mention that?

Page 42
To the layman and the untrained, Ramius Stele appeared to possess formidable
pskyer talents, but in truth he was a man of only middling mental power in comparison to many of
the Imperium’s telepathic agents. Stele’s talents lay not in the brute force application of his psychic
ability, like those of his servant Ulan, but in his subtle use of them. Stele’s mind was less a sword,
more a scalpel, but still utterly lethal when used correctly.
- as a psyker Ramius Stele (inquisitor) considers himself to be only "middling" power compared to many of the Imperium's telepathic agents. His main gift/ability seems to be one of subtlety and stealth application of his powers, manipulating or nudging an enemy when they least expect it,. and infiltrating their minds (and past their defenses) without them knowlging. As he describes it, he is less a sword and more a scalpel.

On the other hand, we know he's serving a minion of Tzeentch, and given what happens in blood Debt he is almost certainly "soul bound" to some daemonic entity, and has his powers bolstered by sorcery.

Still whatever he can do currently, a Librairan (at least of the Blood Angels) is far more powreful than he is.. and Stele can do alot of fancy shit.

Page 43
His resolve firm, Stele let his abhuman senses map the space around Shenlong in shades of psionic force. Up above, where Bellus lay, was the faint ember glow of the latent minds aboard her. Flickering and wavering among them was Ulan’s bright and dangerous psychic imprint. She was a firefly in a bottle, her power bouncing off the walls of the inhibitor coronet he forced her to wear.

...

He passed further out, ignoring the dots of light on a small craft suspended mid-way between
Bellus and the new arrival, letting his spirit-self approach the Amareo
Stele spirit-walking, able to see/detect the minds aboard starships as well as the ship itself.. a sort of FTL detection I suppose.

Page 44
In his hand, the psyker held a formidable-looking force axe, a full half of Gallio’s height and
forged from bright steel made in the foundries of Luna. The axe head quivered in the light, the
crystalline blade flickering with the witch-fire of psionic energy.
A fucking huge force axe.

Page 45
Vode’s face twitched slightly and something moved inside the neck ring of his battle armour. From thick bulges about his head, panels made of fine circuitry and crystal matrices extended in a tripartite cowl. Gallio watched with slight distaste as the pieces of Vode’s psychic hood connected themselves to brass sockets in the Marine’s skull.
Psychic/Aegis hood.

Page 46
The drop ramp of the Thunderhawk opened like a yawning mouth and Rafen followed Solus down
it. Glancing around the hangar bay of the Amareo, he saw a dozen more ships of the same class in
launch cradles, armed and set for attack.
A dozen thunderhawks on the Amareo.

Page 51
"The strictures are clear, only a Techmarine may handle the wargear of the deceased in anything other than the most desperate of circumstancecs."
What do you want to be tthis is the AdMech's meddling?

Page 52
"It is still Arkio’s soul that lives behind those eyes, brother, if that it what you truly wish to know… But for all the changes wrought upon him in these passing weeks, it is his manner that is most altered.”
Again "passing weeks" implies less than a Month.. and it must have taken only a few weeks tops for the Amareo to arrive at Shenlong over hundreds, if not thousands of light years. Many thousands, if not tens of thousands of c, at a bare ass minimum

Page 55
" You will release this world and Inquisitor Stele will return governorship of Shenlong to the Imperium.”
Technically Shenlong has been called a Forge World, so wouldn't it actually be AdMech property, and not the Imperium proper? Like Abnett, James Swallow seems to get confused about what a Forge World actually is sometimes.


Page 61
High above them, the battle barge's starboard side rippled with activity as cnanon hatches irised open and guns ran out on firing cradles. Missile batteries, lances, and lascannon twisted in cupolas and turrets, finding the blade-like profile of the rapid strike cruiser Amareo in their sights. In allied space, with no threat to be determined, the cruiser's commanding officer had placed no power to the ship's void shields and so Amareo was naked to the unleashed fire of a ship that dwarfed her by fifty magnitudes of tonnage.[
[

The Bellus uses both energy and projectile turrets as well as broadside gunports

I also interpret "fifty magnitudes" to mean fifty times more massive, otherwise the disparity would be truly ludcirous. (If a Strike cruiser is "multi-megaton, as implied by novels like "Iron Hands") this means that the Bellus masses at LEAST 100 million ton, probably more like billions of tons since Strike cruisers tend to be as large or larger than light cruisers.)

Page 61
They died without knowing where the blow had come from, lives snuffed out in an instant. Amareo
exploded beneath a hellstorm of energy, and once again the battle barge was alone in the skies over
Shenlong.
- asingle starboard broadside from the Bellus destroys the unshielded strike cruiser "in an instant."


Page 62
Here and now, with the stink of spent cordite and spilled blood still lingering in the air, he felt
that sensation all over again.
Implied propellant of bolt weapons.

Page 67
While he conjured sheets of invisible force to
protect the young Space Marine, Sachiel and the others had followed the patterns laid out for them
and taken things to their conclusion.
- Stele had generated telekinetic force to protect Arkio from a Blood Angels Librarian's Force Axe.

Page 69
" It is no dishonour to be awed by events such as those that have taken place in recent weeks. Your brother’s rise to ascendancy on Cybele, the Emergence that you were witness to in the manufactorium… Lesser men would be broken under the weight of such things."
Yet again reference to "weeks" rather than months.

Page 71
Stele’s vision tunnelled and he gasped for breath. The rush of his blood and the thumping of his
heart sounded in his ears as he struggled to the chair. The effort of pushing Rafen had left him dry,
his psionic will draining the very life force from him to maintain the pressure.
Stele used his psychic powers to implant a psychic imperative into Rafen to kill himself.

Page 73
Simeon, boiled alive by plasma.
Implies significant thermal damage to the poor captain.. double digit MJs maybe, especially if we take it as literally being boiled.

Page 74
The Marine's hand closed around the hilt of his combat knife, drawing the bright steel of its fractal-edged blade from its sheath.
Rafen's combat knife is a molly knife too.

PAge 75
He glimpsed a halo of honeyed illumination glitter about the brass icon in the seconds before the
light overwhelmed him. Radiance touched his bare skin with delicate warmth, like the kiss of a
perfect summer day. Rafen’s heart swelled, the pain, the blood, the misery all swept away from him.
His vision collapsed to a single point: a face, a figure, a shape opening there in the void before
him, coalescing from the fines of dust in the air itself. It towered over him, made him childlike in
comparison; it filled the room even though the chamber could never have contained it. The golden
form accreted and took on features—eyes, nose, mouth. Rafen gasped, the thought of it thrilling at
his lips.

“Sanguinius…”
This was no pretender, no Reborn Angel, no mere changed man before him. The mellifluent,
achingly perfect face of the Blood Angels primarch bore down on Rafen, a vision of the Great
Progenitor of his Chapter invoked from the very matter of the blood surging in his veins.
...
The Crimson Angel ran a hand over Rafen’s face and, with infinite tenderness, drew
away the bloody knife. Suddenly the blade seemed his again, his body responding to his commands
once more and not the suggestions of another.
..
The violence within, the clawing feral might of the red thirst ebbed as he
drank, receding—and with it went the vision, the gold aura about him disintegrating.

- Rafen believes himself to have seen (and been saveD) from the psychically-ordered suicide by Stele by a vision/visitation by Sanguinius. It is an interesting possibility, and perhaps one might be willing to dismiss it as hallucination, but a more likely probability is that its an act of the Emperor assisting him. Or, it may actually have been Sanguinius. Nothing prevents him from having had his soul placed back into the Warp once he died, and now he (like the other "dead" Primarchs) may very well be "daemon-like" entities, but rather than serving Chaos they assist the Emperor in their own way. Perhaps these are like the "angels" you h ear spoken of in other sources, like Ghostmaker.

Page 78
An ephemeral, potent splinter of monstrous psionic will was now inhabiting the helot, turning it into
a mouthpiece for his hellish cohort full light years distant from Shenlong. “Warmaster Garand. So
nice to see you again.”

The tiny piece of the Chaos warlord’s essence examined itself, the molten skin and mealy matter
of the messenger. “A poor frame for such a force as I. It will not last for long.” Even as Garand
spoke through a broken throat, the Witch Prince’s energy was burning up the life of the slave
woman. “Perhaps for the better.”
- the Word Bearers leader is able to communicate psychically realtime (or nearly so) across many light years distance, through a prepared sacrifice/vessel. We're easily talking millions/tens of millions times c at least. An astropath should be at LEAST capable of this, as well as capable of all the other previous examples (they just wouldnt' have the favor of Chaos to give them clearer signal reception.)

Page 78
“It means we can forgo your usual tedious prattle.” Garand bubbled blood. “You have been on
this blighted sphere for over a solar month, and yet you seem to have made little progress.”
A nerve in Stele’s jaw jumped. “What do you know of it?”
If we needed further confirmation of things, yes, they've only been on Shenlong a month, and this includes events in the previous novel.

Page 79
Stele’s breath caught in his throat as something dark and cold fell across the room like a psychic
eclipse. A foetor that could only exist in the unreality of the warp entered the chamber; for miles
around, plates of food suddenly spoiled, wine turned to vinegar in corked bottles, births came
stillborn. In high orbit aboard the Bellus, Ulan’s blind eyes wept tears of thin blood.
effects of Garand's presence communicating iwth Stele.

Page 80
From every dark corner came insects, not in mad swarms or crazed armies, but in careful, quiet
and orderly ranks. There were flies of every size and colour, spiders and beetles by their hundreds of
thousands. They came together into a formless mass, and in moments they became an unholy
daemon-shape, united by a single hideous intent.
- the Daemon calls forth a myriad horde of insects to form its tangible body during this manifestation. Once more, we see Daemons do not just "create" a physical body from themselves out of thin air - they must have realspace matter present, or there must be a warp portal open to continually spill in the warp for them to draw on to fashion one (The former being generlaly omre stable than the latter, barring mutation.)

Page 81
Once, lush forests and oceans rich with life had covered the world, but those were forgotten
myths now. Their legacy remained in fossil records as the planet moved on, catastrophic forces
scouring the surface until it was a fierce sphere of blood-red rock and sand.
Implies that the devastation that happened to bAal was so severe over whatever timeframe had happened that even its oceans are gone, which is tremendous in terms of energy requirements if it were brute force in any way. And yet, humanity survived :) As tempted as IO am to say brute force, I'm hard pressed to believe that Baal was literally reduced to a Primordial molten planet in order to do so. Something more likely is that they suffered combined virus and nuclear bombardment (although Virus weapons are supposed to be more recent things as I recall.)

Page 81-82
Dante passed through an ornate airlock made of brass and synthetic diamond plates, and into the
arboretum.
..
From soft soil of dun-coloured earth, trees and plants grew toward a domed ceiling made of oval lenses. Each pane was as large as a leviathan’s eye, forged by some process lost to the depths of history. Perhaps, in the beginning, the diamond windows had been clear, but now they were scarred white by untold centuries of scouring sand, shedding only a milky, indistinct light across the vast garden.
Diamond windows.


Page 82
The Chief Librarian of the Blood Angels gazed at Dante with hooded eyes, the burning gaze
that so transfixed the minds of his enemies at rest. “I have not been Brother Calistarius for an age.”
Mephisto's old name.

Page 83
A cold, sickening familiarity touched Dante, one he had known a million times over since his first command as a Blood angel warrior. He felt the death of each battle brother as keenly as he had the very first to die under his stewardship.
This implies that since becoming Chapter Master he's lost over a million blood Angels.. although this assumes he is speaking literally, since a million

Page 84
A spindly messenger servitor ambled over on clanking mechanical feet. Once it had been a human being; now it was a device in service to the Imperium, mind wiped of any personality, a featureless automaton made of flesh and implanted steel. Its blank face swung left and right, finally locating the Blood Angels commander. “With your permission, Lord Dante. A message from Shenlong arrives. Your attention only.”
Messenger servitor that speaks. Probably relaying messages from the Astropaths. This being on the tail of the Amaro stuff - probably taking hours, or at most a couple days, for messages back and forth across the Segmentum.

Page 85
“The Sanguinary High Priest Brother Sachiel, chosen of the Blessed Arkio, requests an audience with the Lord Commander Dante on the shrine world of Sabien in nine solar days, on behalf of the Reborn Angel.”
Message must logically take 9 days to return if they sent one. Over several tens or several hundreds of LY for Sabien (say between sectors) would be something like high thousands/low tens of thousands of c.

Page 86
Dante went red with annoyance. “In eleven hundred years I have led my men from the front!"
He must be referring to his Chapter Mastership, rather than his actual age.

PAge 90
A few of the applicants had projectile weapons, flamers, even lasers, the guns looted from the corpses of war dead and brought here to turn against one another.

As Turcio watched, the Blood Angel could see a firefight in progress between two men, one
barely able to carry the heavy stubber in his hand, the other snapping shots back with some sort of
small-bore lasgun. The figure with the stubber gave out a war cry and tried to rush his enemy, but
the weapon was too bulky, too heavy for an unarmoured human to manage. He stumbled, and the figure with the laser stitched him with hot fire. HE sank to the ground, his corpse catching alight.
The man killed wielded (Barely) a heavy stubber, implying he was quite large and strong. The other man was wielding a "small bore lasgun". The interesting thing about this is that it means lasers are either superior to flamers/projectile weapons, or they are inferior.

It's likely by "alight" it means clothes caught alight. If we assume he simply was badly burnt, we might figure between 50-100 J per square cm, 500-1000 kj at least. If the clothing on his body caught fire, it would be in excess of one MJ or so (1.2-1.5 MJ at least.) so multi megajoule ouptut over a relatively short period of time (sustained fire of seconds maybe) seems likely/reasonable, especially since being able to light a human on fire (without accounting for clothing) would involve boiling off the flesh (which is going to be single digit MJ even if only part of the flesh is affected anyhow)



Page 92
“Let me give you a gift,” began Sachiel, and he drew his reductor from his belt.
...
Tbe blunt-headed titanium bolt was designed to punch through the hardened ceramite and plasteel of a Space Marine's power armour and pierce the bone cage protecting the organs within, it was the final, honourable solution for a battle borther too close to death for recovery. Against normal, unenhanced flesh it blew a cavity in the teacher's chest as big as Sachiel's fist.
A Priest's reductor (Sachiel, Sanguinary priest.) Note that a Space Marine's fist is bound to be quite a bit larger than a normal humans, even outside of the armour. It roughly hits at an approximately 15 cm diameter or so I would guess.


Page 100
The Techmarine carefully removed a ring of prayer beads from a rotary lock and powered open
a series of thick steel hatches. Inside, there were consoles and panels of such diversity and intricate
workings that Rafen was instantly reminded of the Bellus’s bridge deck.
I only included this cuz I thought it was pretty amusing, what with the prayer beads and all.

Page 100
“Which one of these does the machine-spirit for the power core inhabit?”
Lucion frowned, then pointed at a large, ornate module. “Here. Although the spirit-programme
extends itself out through the entire reactor system, tending to the fusion heart, the cooling factors,
the regulatarium…”
..

"What you ask is madness, brother. Even if I could, such a deed would enrage the fusion core. It would reach critical potentiality in moments and detonate with enough force to punch a hole in this planet. We would all be destroyed.
The fortress reactor, like every reactor in this novel it seems, is a fusion reactor. Nuclear fusion or "melta" fusion, I dont know.

I'm also not sure if "we would all be destroyed" and "punch a hole in the planet" simply means blowing up the fortress, or rendering the planet uninhabitable.

Page 100
Without waiting for confirmation, Rafen raised his gun and unloaded a full clip of bolt-rounds into the device. Lucion screamed, his voice lost in a sudden
clarion of whooping sirens.
- Rafen unleashes a full clip of bolter rounds into an instrument panel before his brother Techmarine can start and finish screaming (or try to stop him.) - matter of seconds.

Page 101-102
With a sullen flicker, the lights inside the fortress winked out as Lucion cut off the fusion reaction before it could become critical.


Again fusion.

Page 103
. “Were it not for the selfless courage and sacrifice of Brother Lucion, the machine-spirit would have become turbulent, perhaps to unleash the fire of the atom from its heart.” He took a calculated pause.
"The Ikari fortress and all living things for six kilometres in every direction would have been immolated in a nuclear firestorm."
That answers both my questions. It seems to be nuclear fusion and would have created a 12+ km area of dveastation. whether that is fireball or whatever, I dont know.

Page 105
There would have been a time when would have relished the chance to
fight against the elite of the Blood Angels, testing his skills against them in a wargame—but this
was no exercise, and the battle-brothers who dogged him did not bear harmless marker shells in
their guns.
Marker shells for training purposes.


Page 105
The Blood Angel took his last smoke grenade and flicked off the pin with his thumb. Dropping the metal egg, he launched himself from cover and into a full-tilt run. He heard shots cracking after him, and then
the hollow crump of displaced air as the grenade exploded. A thick veil of metallic haze full of
complex chemical strings emerged and filled the canyon of the street. The honour guard came on,
moving slowly through the smoke, the visibility of their helmet optics curtailed sharply by the
discharge. Their heads bobbed in silent conversation, messages flickering between them on an
encoded frequency that Rafen’s vox could not read.
Smoke (blind?) grenades intefering with the helmet optics.

Page 106
Hellstrikes built for the wing roots of Lightning fighters and Marauder bombers were bound like cordwood. There were fat cigars of Manticore missiles mounted on wooden stays ready to be loade don firing platforms. The shells of incomplete Atlas-class megaton bombs stood vertically on their aerofoil fins, the unfinished warheads almost scraping the supports holding up the corrougated iron roof.
"Atlas class Megaton bombs" Bigger than Hellstrikes and Marauders, but not exactly capiltal ship ordnance either. REmember that from the Ominbus discussion they are dedicated ground attack and anti Titan/Superheavy weapons.

White Rabbit has told me as well that they can be carried onboard Marauders/Thunderbolts (I forget which) with modificaiton.

I'm also uncertain whether "megaton" means "single megaton" or "megaton range." either way it suggests that capital ship firepower is far, far in excess of mere megatons :)

Page 107
Like most of the other missiles in the store yard, the half-built Manticore munitions wer empty of their volatile promethium fuel and still lacked the dense explosive matrix that would give them their murderous power - but the detonator rods were in place, a nd those alone were the equal of a dozen krak shells.
detonator rods "equal to a dozen krak shells" of uknown type - but presumably megajoule range o fosme kind and more powerful than krak grenades. The Warhead of the manticore is presumably many times more powerful than the detonators as well.

i dont remember if Matnicores have solid or liquid core rockets, but they apparently can use promethium of some kind.

Page 107
The honour guard’s strike flashed past him with a blare of tungsten-alloy teeth, cleaving the wood of the cradle into a whirlwind of spitting splinters.
...
In the confines of the catwalk gantry, Rafen had little room to manoeuvre and the tip of
the chainsword blade cut into his armour, skittering off the chest plate and away. The blow left a
finger-wide channel in his wargear.

..

Rafen parried a third lunge with an ironwood rod he snatched from the cradle, but the shimmering chain-blade bisected his substitute weapon.
Tungsten-alloy chainblade teeth leaving a "finger wide" channel.

Page 108
The release opened a set of clamps holding a drum of Hellstrikes above them, and the canister fell the height of the warehouse, flattening the honour guard beneath it like the blow of a steam hammer.
Rafen shook off a dizzy, sick sensation as he watched the Space Marine twitch and die under the
tonnage.
- an unknown number of Hellstrike missiles in a bundle possibly weighing in the tons range, assuming its not being used figuratively.


Page 109
Rafen ducked behind one of the inert Atlas bombs and pressed his shoulder into it, rocking the
tubular fuselage on its pallet. The tall metal pipe wallowed and shifted dangerously. He threw
himself at it again and the weight of the Atlas shifted suddenly, tilting away from him. Rafen
staggered back along the gantry as the hollow tube fell against another of its kind, in turn knocking
another off its base. The Atlas hulls rang like bells as they impacted each other, and they tottered
like giant ninepins, ripping through stanchions and scattering Sachiel’s men beneath them.
- Rafen is able to push and tip over the upright (unfinished) casings of a Atlas-class missile.

Page 109
The explosives blew apart in a ball of orange thunder, catching the detonators inside the
Manticores in sympathetic annihilation. In a tenth of a second, the missiles detonated, rippling fire
into cases of battle-ready rockets. Flame set flame, fire birthed explosion, and the entire
manufactorum ripped itself to pieces in a blood-red hellstorm.
Kilometres away in the Ikari fortress, a wall of noise cracked the ancient glass of the chapel
window in a dozen places.
The munitions detonate.definitely less than high end nuclear.
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Part 2


Page 111
The explosion of the missile store yard had obliterated six square blocks around it. Some of the priest's most loyal men had been turned to ashes in the conflagration.
I'm not sure whether "six square blocks" means six blocks immediately aorund the building, or a "six block radius" - it could go either way, and makes it harder to calc (hundreds if not thousands of tons of TNT mayhap?) Pity we don't know the number of munitions there (either way might suggest tens if not hundreds of kg equivalent per shell on average if there were tens of thousands of munitions there..)

Cremating a fair number of space marines suggests considerable energies involved.

Page 114-
It looked like a pict-print of a hurricane, a frozen tower of wind and storm wreckage that had
somehow taken on the aspect of a living creature. His mouth agape, Sachiel understood all at once
that the shape was made of paper. All about the walls of Stele’s chamber, books lay open, spines
broken and covers discarded, their pages torn free to make up the matter of the daemonic creature
that rustled and crackled like dead leaves.
Malfallax, the daemon from before, incarnates again, this time using the paper from
books to form his body.

Page 114
The priest brought his gun to bear and his finger tightened on the trigger, but he made the
mistake of meeting Stele’s baleful gaze and abruptly all function in his muscles ceased.
..
Sachiel’s mind flashed to the moment on Cybele, when the inquisitor had held a Word Bearers
sniper in a similar mind-lock.
Stele's gaze paralyzes a Space Marine.

Page 120-121
The twin beats of the Blood Angel’s dual hearts were loud in his ears as the organs worked to supply additional oxygen to his bloodstream, counteracting the lingering side-effects of the trip through hard vacuum. Rafen’s armour had protected him well, but still the incredible cold of space had leached the heat from him, and the Marine’s muscles were tense. Typically, a Space Marine would have luxury of a chemical sacrament before venturing into the void. The philtre granted by the
Chapter priests stimulated the Astartes mucranoid gland, turning their sweat into a complex
compound to protect the skin against such punishing extremes of temperature. Rafen had no such
defence, however, and the kiss of the airless dark had touched him with its full force.
Rafen's void trip up on a ship -normal void activity for a Blood Angel seems to require some sort of preparation.

Page 121
Rafen used the magnification functions of his helmet optics
to watch the motion of the bondsmen; now and then a battle-brother would intervene, overseeing the
activity.
Helmet optics magnitifcation.

Page 122
Many of them wore armour fashioned from metal junk, although a few sported dark ballistic mesh
tunics. Planetary Defence Force hardware, Rafen noted;
- "ballistic mesh tunics" recognized by Rafen as Shenlong PDF gear Definitely not Skitarii.

Page 123
Why Sachiel had selected these men was beyond Rafen’s understanding; none of them would ever measure up to the standards of the Chapter.

All they were good for would be to die on the point of an enemy’s weapon and clog the muzzles of
guns with their corpses. He suppressed the urge to sneer. Such tactics were base and ignoble, better suited to the traitor-kin of Chaos than to the Sons of Sanguinius.
RAfen doesnt seem to like cannon fodder tactics.


Page 128
Shedding energy in sheaves of arcane power, the battleship fell from the empyrean realm and reverted to steady, obdurate reality. Engine maws, their exhaust bells as big as volcanoes, took on bloody glows as thrust spewed forth from ancient fusion drives, and with deadly purpose the warship Misericorde made speed toward its destination.

She was a horrific sight, an engine of torture almost a mile in length, and on Misericorde’s guns
many mewling human worlds had been broken just as men had been broken on the racks of her
dungeon decks. In aspect, the battleship was a broad dagger, a serrated arrowhead forming her prow,
a haft of razors growing backwards to present the dorsal castle of her bridge, and below the plunging
knives of skeletal stabiliser vanes. Guns protruded from every shadowed corner of the craft,
punching through the red skin of the hull like broken ribs.
- battleship (chaos flagship of Word Bearers) has engine bells "as big as volcanos") Quite hilariosuly, the Misercorde is stated to be "almost a mile in length" joining the rogue TRader novels for "miniature starships"

Page 132
Garand’s reverie fell away as he studied the thick ring of asteroids girdling Sabien in a wide
elliptical belt. He imagined they were all that remained of some moon, no doubt obliterated in the
conflict that made Sabien the blighted sphere it was today. Repeaters from the battleship’s machinespirit confirmed that the shaggy cloud of stones was rich in dense, sensor-opaque ores that would adequately mask the Misericorde’s presence.
"sensor opaque" ores.

Page 134
Arkio closed his eyes and let the dream unfold in his mind. For days now as the Bellus raced
through the warp, he had been holding it back, resisting the pull of it.
Prior to boarding the ship Rafen mentioned a "few days" passing since his supposed "death" in the ammunition warhouse explosion, so maybe no more half the nine day time time (or less) has passed since Arkio decided to meet Dante's representative at Sabien.


Page 139
There it was, clasping the bones of Arkio’s spinal column like a nesting spider. Thin lines of
liquid darkness issued out of the egg-form, thousands of feelers infiltrating every organ and element
of the Blood Angel’s body. So delicate, so subtle were they that only by flaying him open or ripping
up his mind on a psyker-rack would anyone discover the lurking poison inside Arkio. It was a black
heart of raw, undistilled Chaos. The object was glassy and hard, a piece of some decayed thoughtform
created by the Malfallax.

..

There was not a part of Arkio that was not touched by the mutations the egg created. Its cilia had infiltrated all of him, warping the youth’s flesh; it had been this that granted him the gift of his wings, his change, his Emergence.
Yes, the plot twist revealed! It must be some sort of semi-intelligent warp entitiy,

Page 141
His ministrations had been enough, and the mutations had been suppressed so that the Telesto weapon would not react to them—for the moment.
The Telesto weapon must not scan very deeply then.


Page 145
Bellus presented her hammerhead bow to her sister ship as she slowed. The vessels were almost
mirror images of one another, the huge slab-like hulls beweaponed with cannons and missile tubes.
...
Across the gulf of Sabien’s orbit, the crews of both ships eyed
one another with suspicion and doubt. It was a rare sight to see two ships of this class in the same
place. Such deployments were usually the prelude to war on a huge scale...
Battle Barges seem to be deployed indepednently, at least among the Blood Angels.

Page 151
The Librarian could sense the same thoughts on the surface of the minds of all the Blood Angels
in his guard. He set his jaw hard and lightly touched the psychic reservoir of his Quickening. Gently,
Mephiston used the power to reinforce the will of his men, erasing any germ of doubt before it could
grow larger.
Not sure whta the "quickening" he refers to is unless its his term for the Warp. Whatever it is he can use it to bolster willpower, and he can read surface thoughts.

Page 155
The Gaze was a lens that opened up the hidden world to Mephiston’s perception. The power burning
inside him shone through the gates of his vision like the beam of a devout searchlight, pinning the
weak and the unhallowed as it fell upon them. His sight-beyond-sight stripped away the illusions of
reality and bared souls so that the Lord of Death could examine their pale, naked truths. He saw
Arkio as if he were an anatomical sketch drawn from some textbook of the magus biologis, layers of
skin, bone, muscle and nerve visible to him. The boy was glass, and Mephiston’s gaze shone into
him, illuminating every corner of his spirit as searing sunlight falling through a prism.
I guess this is Mephiston's special power.

Page 158
There was some magick at work here, a bewitchery so subtle and insidious that even a weapon forged by Holy Terra could be deceived by it.
Just as planned.

Page 161
Mephiston sensed something else, remaining only in fragments and splinters throughout Rafen's spirit. The touch of something higher, the marks where a force of being with powers far beyond the Lord of Death's had briefly influenced Rafen.

A vision....
Possibly an indication that Sanguinius (or the Emperor) actually was blessing RAfen.

Page 164
Warrior-to-warrior battles like this were commonplace in the wars of the Imperium, where conflicts
were often fought with champions on either side engaging in single combat. Like every Adeptus
Astartes, Rafen and Arkio were trained to fight alone, as an army of one;
Because Champion battles are what always decide wars :P

Page 164
With his other arm, Rafen brought up the blunt, brutish ingot of his bolt pistol and followed through with a three round burst of shell fire.

Arkio recovered with frightening speed and turned the glowing lance like a propeller, the humming shaft making a gleaming disc in the air. The bolt rounds whined and scramed as they were shredded by the flickering shield.
Another three round bolter burst, Mutant Arkio manages to deflect it.


Page 166
As it engulfed Rafen, he felt his skin searing, he remembered the Word Bearers, their bodies reduced to ash in the depths of the Shenlong manufactory. For one heart-stopping moment, Rafen thought his world was at an end, but then the flames flicked away, leaving him injured but still alive. He pawed at his face, shaking off a fine layer of ash where his epidermis had been flash-burned.
Confirmation that the spear actually had cremated Word Bearers. Rafe however was barely touched.


Page 167
With a massive, viscious surge of motion, the winged Marine brought the spear about and slammed the blunt end into the centre of Rafen's torso with a thunderclap of force.

The impact struck the Blood Angel like a cannon shell and Rafen was blown backwards off his feet. He flew through the air, releasing snap fire shots from his bolter that went wild, deflecting off broken rock and keening away from indirect hits on Arkio's armour. Rafen landed with a crash of rubble, sending a roil of brick dust up into the air.
Once more Rafen is sent flying by a blow from a powerful Chaos Creature. Arkio's armor deflects glancing bolter hits.

Page 167
The spear buzzed and hummed in his hands, twitching like a distressed mount,
but he forced it to turn toward Rafen. The lance tried to face itself away from his target but in his ire
Arkio would not allow it.
The Spear does not ant to serve Arkio. Odd that it won't incinerate him.

Page 176
“Confirmed,” droned the servitor. “Multiple discharges on the planetary surface, evidence of smallarms
fire and medium-yield tactical detonations. Vox traffic intercepts concur.”
Bellus sensor servitors recognizing ground fire from the surface. I wonder what "medium yield tactical detonations" means.

Page 177
Dense with heavy ores, to the eyes of a starship’s machine-spirit the belt of asteroids was
a confused swathe of garbled, reflected sensor returns. On the surface it seemed like the ideal place
to hide a vessel, but no captain would ever have been so foolhardy to attempt such a thing. The
blanket of confusion that seeded the ring also made navigation inside its confines virtually
impossible.
more of the sensor distorting asteorids.

Page 177
Asteroids battered into the craft as it moved
from the debris ring, punching rents in the hull; the captain of the vessel was willing to allow men
on his outer decks to die so that the ship could complete its manoeuvre, weathering the damage.
Chaos Desolator class battleship moving through the asteroid field. Of course we dont know much about how fast it is going or the kinds of asteroids punching through it, or even the composition or nature of the Chaos warship, Chaos tends to have odd/unpredictable properties on its minions (I believe having quasi-organic hulls is not unusual as a form of corruption.)

Page 177
The crewmen aboard Mephiston’s flagship sounded alerts and charged their torpedo tubes, gangs of
Chapter serfs hoisting warheads as big as watch-towers into the open maws of launchers.
Torpedoes as "big as watch towers" - no idea how big that is supposed to be.

Page 180
Daggers and work implements turned into clubs rang noisily against Rafen’s power armour as a
cluster of Arkio’s warriors tried to surround him and beat the Marine to the ground. Rafen let out a
cruel laugh at their idiocy; he pitied these fools, willingly blinded by the dogma spouted by Sachiel.
Improvised melee weapons do squat to Astartes armour.

Page 181
On the battlefield, Rafen had seen other Blood Angels psykers use the skill
they called the Quickening, a blanket of power that could turn the user into a tornado of destruction,
but Mephiston was the master of another psionic force, one that dwarfed the talents of the Librarians
and codicers who served beneath him. The power of the Smite was unleashed, a blaze of insane
geometry cut from liquid light fanning out into a teardrop of pure and undiluted annihilation. The
witch-fire engulfed the Havocs and set them alight; ammunition packs detonated and armour split.
In this case I guess the Quickening is some sort of physical and mental augmentatio nof the body. Smite seems to be a variation of D-cannons or something.

Page 182

At point-blank range he unleashed the bolt pistol, popping heads like overripe fruits, punching holes as big as his mailed fist in cloaked bodies.
More bolt pistol head-popping, torso-fisting effect.

Page 182
"...if Arkio's loyalists tip the balance, then Sabien is to be targeted with cyclonic torpedoes. Better this shrine world become ashes then this shcism be allowed to spread further."
Cyclonics would reduce the shrine world to "ashes".

Page 184
The battle in the skies of Sabien changed from a delicate joust to a brutal, punishing fight as the three ships closed the distance between one another. In terms of tonnage the combatants were evenly matched: the Bellus and the Europae were sister ships, their keels laid down in the midst of the Heresy era, both of them cut from steel forged in teh furnaces of Enigma VI, both according to the sacred tenets of a standard template construct programme from the MEchanicus librariums on Mars. Misercorde was longer in the beam but slender, where the battle barges were blunt axe-heads in form.

...

It [Misercorde] was predator-fast compared with the slow, heavy hunters of the barges, but speed and firepower cancled each other out.
Ship comparisons. It's rather hilarious that the Battle bargers are actually shorter than the mile long Misericorde.


Page 184
Lance fire connected the ship [Misercorde], green and red threads of coherent parrticles stringing between them, then gone.
Lances that are some formo of particle beam weapon, it seems.

Page 185
The barge’s ephemeral energy screens flickered and deformed under the onslaught, shedding the might of her attackers like rain, but already the enigmatic field generators in the barge’s heart were reacting to the pressure, sending waves of sympathetic panic into the tech-priests that ministered to them.
Void shields overloading under abuse.

Page 185
In the depths of space, such fights took place at ranges that would swallow a star system, ships hitting ships beyond each other's visual ranges. The close in fighting of near-orbit engagements was an entirely different game. If one was a fencing match, full of elegant moves and pinpoint strikes, then the other was a dirty street brawl, ppunches being traded with ferocity and killer intent.
Different styles of spaceship combat. Implies that 40K ships can, through some form of weaponry, engage each other at multiple AU ranges (more or less) - likely we are talking missile batteries, guided shells, strike craft, and torpedoes, which isn't very common.

Page 185
Europae leapt forward without warning, a plume of fusion fire nova-bright and blinding erupting from her stern. She veered to port in a savage turn that stressed the hull beyond its tolerances, popping out thousands of ancient gieat rivets. THe brutal manoeuvre bled speed and gravity away, pushing Europae on to a differne tack, and ending the lives of dozens of luckless crew caught in the wrong sections of the hull spaces.
Yes. rivted mile long starship hulls, also fusion drives.

Page 185
Secondary batteries, laser cannons with grgeat quartz lenses broad as the eye of a kraken, spat a killing glare over Bellus' starboard flank.

...

The simple, animal mind of Bellus hissed and spat; it lacked the intellect to understand why another Blood Angels ship would attack it.
Quartz crystal lenses for the laser cannons comprisiong "secondary" batteries. The "Belus' machine spirit is defined as a "simple, animla mind" that only can recognize/understeand allies and enemies. This tneds to further reinforce the Titan analogy, since Warlords have a Grizzly Imprint, warhounds a wolfhound, etc.


Page 186
Even with the acres of armour and double-projected void shielding that protected it, a captain would be courting suicide to allow an attacking vessel the reedom to throw shells and las-fire into his drive nozzles.
Implies that the drive system is protected by "double-projected" void shields and "AcreS" of armour, whatever that means.


Page 186
They continued to trade fire as Misercorde came about, sighting the bore of her lethal hellguns over Bellus
Hellguns agin.

Page 190
Rafen landed hard and opened fire with his bolt pistol, thumbing the selector to full automatic
fire. Shells crashed from the muzzle of the gun, shedding spent casings in a fountain of gleaming
brass. The hot casings clattered to the stone floor, buzzing as they struck the gathering puddles of
rainwate
Full automatic on a bolt pistol, as wlel as ejecting casings.


Page 196
The change raced through him, down to the molecular level, the cells of the blood hammering in his veins blackening. Cradled in his grip, the potent arcane technologies of the Spear of Telesto tasted Arkio, sampled him through the genome sensors threaded into the weapon's ornae haft. Ancient science awoke in the lance, so far removed from the advancecments of the Imperium as to border on magic.
Once more indication of just how "magical" the spear basically is.

Page 196
The scent of Chaos was black and thick in the Reborn Angel, and the Telesto weapon
went white-hot in his grip, melting the mastercrafted gauntlets to muddy gold slag. The pain was
instant and heartstopping, and by sheer animal reaction Arkio released the burning lance,
superheated steam hissing from the burning tissues of his hands.
Interesting that something that is basically Pre-Hersy weapon knows what Chaos taint is and is programmed to fight it. It was almost as if the Emperor knew what he was doing ;) Either way the Spear finally wises up and melts Arkio's gauntlets.

Page 198
Rafen heard his bones breaking with the pressure. His Space Marine physiology made him and
his kind uniquely aware of their own bodies, so it was with certainty that Rafen sensed the biscopea
organ in his chest burst as his ribs pressed in on it. He was bleeding internally in a number of places.
Damage Rafen has sustained so far. This leads to an interesting question - how do they replace a Space Marine's implants if they become damaged or destroyed? Do they have to cultivate them from other gene-seed? Does the marine regenerate/regrow them?


Page 199
...fingers finding and clasping the hilt of his fractal-bladed close combat weapon. The Space Marine's knife had not differed appreciably in its design since the earliest days of the Imperium, the monomolecular edges of the Sol pattern weapon as familiar to Rafen as they would have been to the first Adeptus Astartes ten thousand years arlier.
More fractal-bladed molly-knife goodness. And they seem to have been in constant use since the HEresy era.

Page 200
Misericorde brought her fanged flanks to bear upon the two Blood Angels warships, unleashing
salvo after salvo of heavy rockets, hull-burners and laser fire into the zone of space about them.
Mephiston’s flagship Europae had speed and motion on her side, using generous bursts of vectored
thrust from her tertiary drives to turn and move beneath the sister ship Bellus. Spinning about its axis, Europae weathered the onslaught, distributing the strikes that reached the battle barge across
the ship’s glittering void shields.
rockets, hull-burners and laser fire. I'd guess the burners are some sort of melta or plasma weapon maybe.

Europae has tertiary drives that provide vectored thrust, and also seems to demonstrate that void shields seem better at handling multiple dispersed strikes (hence manuvering can be useful defensively for that reaosn, it seems.) There has to be a limited to it though, since the more common BFG stuff makes it clear that massed fire can strip void shields too (near-direct or direct tihts on voids seems commonplace with weapons batteries at range.)


Page 200
Europae was fresh from Baal’s orbital docks, fully crewed, perfectly maintained and at the peak of her performance; by contrast, Bellus was tired and worn. THe engagement over Sabien was just one more battle in a string of conflicts that the old warship had weathered - the wounds frfom the fight against the cruiser Dirge Eterna at Shenlong, the battleship Ogre Lord at Cybele and even the lasting lacerations from the mission into ork spacee, all of them took their toll on the Bellus. She was strung out and hobbled in comparison to her adversaries.
Bellus vs Europae. Even Battle Barges can be worn down. This does illustrate how generla wear and tear on fleet ships can impact their performance and ability to withstanda buse in specific cases, as Starships in 40K may often have long terms of patrol or operation and may end up facing multiple conflicts.

PAge 202
“Multiple
critical hits along starboard hull. Breaches on fifty-two per cent of decks. Enginseers report
imminent collapse of the fusion core’s spirit-monitor.”
..

Europae’s patience was at an end, and with unrestrained force she opened fire with every
weapon at her disposal, crossing the orbital range to punish Bellus for the perfidy of its crew and
Misericorde for the crime of daring to sully the Emperor’s space. In turn, the Chaos warship spat
hate back at the Blood Angels, pouring it into the darkness until the emptiness was thick with
radiation.

Bellus lay between them, striking out at everything and nothing around it, a mad wounded beast
alive with pain and the smell of death. Arkio’s flagship was caught in the crossfire of the battle and
fell into the hellstorm.

In the absolute silence of the void, Bellus detonated, breaking into huge
splinters of steel, her fusion reactor giving birth to an instant new sun.
- the Bellus has a "fusion reactor" that apparently explodes, which would tend to suggst it ain't a fusion reactor, but at this point I no longer know. Also the Bellus falls to multiple, full broadsides from both Misericorde and Europae at last.


Page 202
Rafen’s thruster pack ran dry when he was still a thirty metres from the ground, and he tumbled and
dropped as if he were made of lead. Slamming his balled fist into the release switch on his belt, he
felt the dead weight of the pack detach, and freed of the burden he turned into a spin, crashing
through age-rotted beams to land with a bone-jarring crack of sound.
- Rafen makes a fall of thirty meters without apparent harm. The poor bastard gets tossed and kicked over that distance quite a bit in these novels.

Page 208
The Space Marine gestured with a signum, complex lines of data glyphs and warning runes
marching across the device’s rain-slick screen. “We are outnumbered on the ground. Force
disposition of the loyalists is weak but they overmatch us with the reinforcements of the Word
Bearers.”
We get a signum showing up in the novels.

PAge 210
Stele raised a hand and a column of pressure shoved Delos in the chest,
pushing him back, knocking the power weapon from his grip. The air around him became dry and
greasy, the rain fizzing away. Invisible tendrils of psychic force coiled about the Chaplain and
slipped through molecule-thin gaps in his armour to touch his bare skin.
- "molecule thin" gaps in the Chaplain's armour.

Page 211
He ignored Ulan's warning and pressed the muzzle of his gun [laspistol] to the palm of his other hand.

..

Stele jerked the trigger and the pistol blew a burning hole through his flesh, vaporising three of his fingers and setting his cuff aflame.
Stele's laspistol basically blows apart his own hand, burning it it seems and (posisbly) vaporising three fingers. No cauterization obviously, but overpenetration is quite liekyl. the palm is probably mostly mangled too if thats where the barrel lay. Couple kilojoules to inflict third degree burns on what is (left) of his hand, say a couple kj to blow apart his hand.. high single digit to low double digit kj maybe. More if any significant vaporization actually occurs. Also the fact his cuff is set alight may suggest more severe burning (something closer to 100-150 j/CM^2 rather than 50 j/cm^2. (According to the blaster page on Luke's site, a 1-2 kj pulse ought to be able to blast a 3-5 cm diameter hole in bone and flesh. finger vaporizing is harder to explain but we can just treat that as pulverization, say from bone fragments)


Page 212
The inquisitor screamed, and clutched at his ruined hand, forcing the jetting blood from his severed veins to spatter about him in the sacred pattern he knew by heart.

...

The bloody meat of his hand clutched at her neck. She felt warm fluids pulsing over her skin.

....

and with a thrust of his arm, the lacerated fingers sank into the flesh at Ulan's collar. The pallid skin rippled like water and Stele merged his barbed digits into her bone and cartilage.
Stele's last bit of dickery.



Page 213
The warp daemon teased itself with the anticipation of the shift; it was so infrequent that the beast could find itself a vessel strong enough to contain its essence for more than a few hours. Most flesh-things in the other reality were gossamer constructs of wet, weak meats. They would burn or inflate or explode if the Malfallax issued even an iota of itself into them—but it had worked hard to prepare for this day.
Typical possession. Must be one reason they like Space Marines so much.


Page 213
Stele withdrew from the shaking body of the psy-witch, the oozing blood from his shattered hand wrapped about his forearm like a red glove.
Stele's hand is "shattered".

Page 215

- Malfallax, a Lord of Change, ,takes Stele's body and moulds it into his own form. Its implied however, that he may have derived addtional mass (the "blood mass" that consumed/drowned STele) from other sources, probably the surrounding battle. Later on we see Malfallax consuming other creatures on the battlefield, apparently adding their mass to his own.


Page 215
..Malfallax adopted the unhallowed aspect that all his kindred wore as the mark
of their fealty to the eightfold way. Stele’s bones shifted like putty, hollowing and distending. The
pallid human flesh glittered and took on a multihued riot of colours, flashing rainbows as sunlight
caught through a prism. The face pressed forward against itself, becoming a hooked beak with deepsunk eye pits burning with ruin.
Implies that some dAemons (at least Tzeentchian ones) may be less "dense" than creatsures of corresponding volume - or this may just be a reference to the Daemon's own birdlike nature./


Page 216
It returned with a hilt in its grasp, and with slow and careful motions the daemon withdrew
an edged weapon made from dead men’s bones and solid delusion.
The humans had a name for such a sword—they called them warp blades, semi-real constructs
existing half-in and half-out of the empyrean, raw funnels of mindform woven into killing blades.
..
Satisfied, it
drew up the sword and plunged it into a mass of fleeing slave troopers, liquefying their bodies with
the speed of its passage.
Warp blade makes its appearance.


Page 217
The daemon lord drew arcane runes in the air and unleashed a flood of cold fire across the square. Men caught in the white core of the flame swere instantly turned to vapour, disappearing into ash. Those on the edges of the blast caught fire and stubmled about, blind and mad with pain; the ones on the periphery became cursed with the fallo ut of mutation, spontaneously growing new limbs, hbursting out of their warghear or imploding.
Sorcerous attack. May be vaporization or incineration or may just be Tzeetchian craziness.


Page 217
Space Marines died on the tip of the monster’s ten-metre sword, adding their crimson to the
ankle-deep blood swamp. The warp blade left brief tears in the fabric of space where it passed, and things emerged from the hole, chattering with hunger.
- the Warp blade is 10 metres long and has teleporting properties/Vortex like properties.


Page 221
“Take this. Corbulo himself gave it to me. It will lend you the strength of the lords.”

He gathered up the exsanguinator and turned it in his fingers. Thick, heavy blood glistened
inside it, drawn from the highest Sanguinary Priest of the Blood Angels Chapter. Once this blood
mixed with Rafen’s own, the essence of Sanguinius would flow even stronger in his veins.
Super Sanguinius energy Drink.

Page 223
In its own way, Sabien was a mournful twin to the planet Cybele, a sister sphere
light years distant toward the coreward marches of the galaxy.
Cybele is "light years distant" towards the core of the galaxy.

Page 227
. There in its breast glowed a green oval with a yellow disc in its centre; a boon from its god, the Eye of Tzeentch grew like a living electro-tattoo, and through it the creature glimpsed a measure of the skein of time.
Malfallax saw enough of fate’s complex weave to know where the Space Marines would shoot,
veering here and there to avoid the burning bullets. It was like firing at smoke.
A third eye allowing the reading of proability and prediction. Not unlike a Navigator, it seems.

Page 229
Hot bolts stitched blossoms of
brackish blood where the hits found their marks. Necrotic skin peeled from yellowed bones,
embrittled by the rapid mutation forced on them, and loops of grey intestine emerged from what had
once been Ramius Stele’s abdomen.
- rapid mutation embrittled the skin of MAlfallax, or else it may simply be the vessel failing due to the sheer power of the daemon.

Page 229
A strong grip yanked him [Turcio] back. Corvus dragged Turcio by the neck ring of his torso plate, firing ove rhis battle-brother's stumbling form into the advancing daemon. Malfallax chewed on the bolt shells that sturck it, picking the flattened lumps of tungsten rounds frfom the holes in its chest.
Neck ring for dragging injured battle brothers along. Bolt rounds are also defined as tungsten rounds that flatten on impact.

Page 231-232
All things were under the motion of invisible strings that ranged from birth to death, past to
present; they pulled all life and matter like wayward marionettes. This man-thing, this Blood Angel,
was as much at the mercy of clockwork destiny as were the stars in the sky, the falling rains, the
rising and setting of Sabien’s sun
The world from the Daemon's point of view. I'll note this echoes alot of the "Skein" stuff from Path of the Seer as well.

Page 236
Warmaster Garand shot hellbolts into the bodies of the red-armoured Astartes that came in
range, but the death’s head shells did little to stop the crazed tide. Blood Angels with limbs missing
and great fists of meat torn from them still roared on in battle frenzy,
Death's head shells - blow limbs from astarted, blow out fist sized holes.

Page 237
The Marine writhed in his grip. “Our summonings have been ended, Lord. Every daemonform
we called to be for the battle has fallen dead and inert!”

..

“It drew back its essence when the host-body perished, and with it
all the warp-matter from the field of battle. Nothing remains. We are becalmed, lost to the empyrean
here.”
- the death of Malfallax nullified the Word Bearer's ability to summon/maintain daemons in realspacec. When its host body died, its essencee withdrew into the warp - and it took all warp matter frrom the field of battle along with it, which basically severed the connection for all the other daemons as well. I suspect that Malfallax was actiung as a focal point for a warp gate feeding the warp into the realspace, which also served as teh lifeline for the daemonic forces present. With the Daemon dead, the link to the warp is severed, and so goes all the Word Bearer's daemonic allies.

Page 242-243
“The ship is ready to depart, and I have ordered the astropaths to make
space for Shenlong. It will be… necessary to expunge any lasting traces of the heretic Stele’s plans.”
“You will destroy the forge-world.” It was not a question.

“Exterminatus,” breathed the Librarian. “A sad but inevitable conclusion.”
Can the AStartes just exterminatus an Ad Mech forge world like that? I'd be willing to say "no" but the blood angels (or other Astartes) would not be the first to give the finger to the AdMech in some form.

Page 245
“And what am I to say to him? Tell me, little man-slave, how I shall phrase my words to
inform the Despoiler that the allies promised him for the Thirteenth Black Crusade have been
denied?"
This suggests the novel is taking place sometime before or around the events of the 13th Black Crusade, so it is fairly "recent" in canon as far as things go.
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More blood Angels. We move onto Red Fury next. Single update for entire novel. Black Tide will be a tad slower. But we're almost done and then I can move onto other stuff (again.)

Page 7
Eritaen was such a thing. An urbanised sprawl-planet, too far off the axis of the Imperium’s prime trade routes to be thought of as a hive-world, it had at one time thrived in its own, limited manner.
Which i take to mean is pretty heavily populated, but not built up or populous enough to be a "hive" world. Proto-hive, I guess.

Page 8
Rafen dallied beneath the arching hood of an ornate atrium, the entrance to a public kinema. Shattered glass lay in drifts around the ticket vendor kiosk and the flame-blackened stanchions. Broken displays advertising pict-dramas and out-of-date newsreels glittered in the dimness.
Movie theatres. Used for news and entertainment.

Page 9
Like most of Eritaen’s municipalities, this conurbation was built on a grid of kilometre-long roads that crosshatched the landscape of the planet. The buildings that sprouted from each city block were sheer-sided and narrow, rising fifty to seventy levels high.
...
...by and large, they had the uniform cast of buildings thrown up by the dogged and uninspired colonial administrators of the Munitorum.
The scope of the urbanization.. seems to be standard Imperial, at least in this region. Possibly implies kilomre-long blocks, with buildings 150-200 metres tall (assuming 1 storey = 3 metres)

Page 10
“Atomics.” Brother Corvus was the last to emerge, panning his bolter back and forth in a wary arc. “Residual radiation from airburst detonations. It’ll fog everything out beyond a half-kilometre.”
Someone used atomic warheads on the planet.

Page 11
The young Astartes was still finding his feet; only a scant few weeks ago, Kayne had been a Scout in the tenth company, and his promotion to the rank of full battle-brother was still fresh in his manner. The Mark VIII Imperator power armour he wore was new to him, and to the trained eye of a line warrior, it showed.
...
...in all truth the sergeant would have preferred to spend more time drilling and training his unit so that they meshed like finely-machined gears before they embarked on this sortie.
...
Commander Dante had given him his orders, and he had left the home world the very same day, his small concerns paying no coin against the word of his sworn lord, the master of the Blood Angels. There had been time aboard the frigate that brought them to Eritaen, but not enough.
A few weeks since they left Baal on their mission on a frigate . We don't (yet) know where the planet is, although implications throughout the novel imply it might be well on the fringes of the galaxy somewhere.. so possibly thousands, if not tens of thousands of light years crossed in a few weeks.

Page 13
The Space Marine imagined the component parts of the collision
separating, mentally tracking them backward to their points of origin.

“The highway governance system’s machine-spirit died,” said Corvus, clearly thinking along the same lines. “The vehicles collided at high speed.”
Part of me wants to think this is high tech, but I suspect he's talking about traffic lights :P



PAge 15
The dissenter movement on Eritaen was not a product of that world alone. If anything, the Companitas were one of many minor factions that crawled and hid in the cracks of the Imperium’s monolithic culture. Rafen knew only the surface details about them, only the information that was of tactical value. Outwardly the Companitas preached unity, freedom and comradeship between all men; behind closed doors they were said to engage in acts of wantonness that most decent folk would think shameful, if not utterly repugnant. The hand of Chaos was at their backs; Rafen did not doubt it. Perhaps not in the rank and file of misguided fools like these, but certainly elsewhere, in their upper echelons.
A heretic/chaos movment which spans many worlds and can apparently coordinate between them. Naturally its a coven of Chaos cultts.

Page 17
They had been prowling the streets of this maze for days.
Days on planet.

Page 19
There were a few vehicles, mostly of the boxy, utilitarian kind pressed from the same Standard Template Construct pattern used on thousands of human worlds.
even mundane, civilian ground cars are based on well known STC designs. I wonder how much this limits variety.

Page 19
Ahead of them, sitting cross-legged atop the bonnet of a low-slung cargo flatbed, was a figure
partially clad in what appeared to be scraps of Imperial Guard-issue armour.
...
“He does not register…” said Corvus. “I read no organic traces from him.”
A person is there, but he does not register on a (biological) sensor, which I gather to be organic traces

Page 20
Kayne’s gun discharged and the flat bang of the shot echoed around them. The laughing man was slammed backward, his neck ending in a haze of pink mist.
Bolt round blowing apart a head. Note that the thing with the Blood Angels novels and this is that for whatever reason Swallow never seems to give the Blood Angels explosive bullets - they're always kinetic rounds - apparently large calibre and made from very dense metal (like tungsten)

Page 21
Puluo unleashed the heavy bolter, and inside the confines of the vehicle park the noise of the weapon’s discharge was a metallic bellow. A crucifix of muzzle flare split from the barrel as bullets the size of candlepins ripped into the advancing horde. Some of them were killed instantly as shots punched through the middle of their torsos, shattering them through hydrostatic shock; others lost limbs or hanks of flesh, spinning about as if they were taking part in some idiot dance.

The ones that did not die immediately showed no signs of fear, not the slightest jot of concern for their lives. They simply laughed and screamed, the meat of their faces bulging, puffed up with the surge of the dark fluid from the injectors.

They had poor weapons, but many of them. Stubber rifles, mostly, along with clubs of all kinds and countless blades. Ballistic rounds rattled off Rafen’s chest plate, chipping at the red ceramite but gaining no purchase. He used his bolter to place single, pinpoint rounds into the head of any target that came his way.

The ones that had limbs blown out from under them did not appear to care. Rafen witnessed them reach for the ampules on their vests and fire fresh doses into their stomachs or necks. The Blood Angel was no stranger to combat drugs, although for the most part, his Chapter eschewed the used of chemical alterants to enhance battlefield ability, preferring to rely on the raw power of the bloodline of their primarch. But whatever it was that these rebels were using on themselves, it went beyond the scope of such things. The fluid was some kind of mutagen; he could actually see it altering the density of flesh or staunching the torrents of blood.
Heavy bolter vs probable zombies. A "candlepin" I gather from the net can be several inches in diameter and nearly a foot long.. that is an insanely large bullet if size means volume. Weight isn't much better either (pounds. I'm guessing it means diameter only, because a bolt round several inches across is huge enough. (50-75mm..) both it and heavy bolters are pretty easy at amuptating limbs.

Another mention of stubber rifles (which I take to mean semiautomatic rifles) which have no effect on Rafen's armour

Also discussion of combat drugs of some kind... although this is the chaos magic mutagen types that turn them into virtual immortals.

Page 27
“Orbital observation drones spotted your men entering the tower,” added Roan.
Flesh tearers using orbital observation drones (or maybe satellites)

page 28
...the days of aimless wandering in search of the Flesh Tearer forward command post..
Again days wandering on planet. This suggests slightly less than sevreal weeks in warp transit (1-1.5 weeks maybe)

Page 29
A massive, headless humanoid form pressed itself out of the ruins. The wailing
became screaming, the screaming became the maddened laughter they had heard inside the parking structure.

Rafen blinked through the smoke and saw the monstrosity clearly for the first time. It was no one being, but a mass of them. The form was an amalgam of the Companitas, hundreds of bodies all collected together, held in place by some arcane power; and all of them were hooting and chattering with their madness.
An amalgated chaos mass of hundreds of bodies into a super-zombie.

Page 29-30
“Grenades! Impact set!” He grabbed at the drumshaped
krak grenades clipped to his waist and thumbed the trigger from safe to armed, dialling the munitions to detonate when they struck their target.
...
A rain of the small bombs arced through the air and struck the Companitas amalgam in the centre of its mass, a chain-fire of explosions rippling through it. The fusion-body screamed louder and tore itself apart, falling into smaller pieces, corpses tumbling away.
Squads worth of krak grenades blasts apart hundreds of bodies in super-zombie body. that would imply at least scores of people per grenade blasted apart (Rafen has like.. 6 men I believe.)

Page 36
There was one other Astartes in the tent, his face lit from below by the colours of a hololithic chart table. Rafen glimpsed a tactical plot of the city, with shifting arrows floating in the air above it. The live feed from the orbital scrying drones mentioned by Noxx’s second.
(realtime?) Tactical plot receiving feeds from orbit, and probably from other units.

Page 37
"I find it hard to believe that Lord Dante would send a warrior out here, all the way from Baal to the edge of nowhere, and have him be little more than an ignorant errand boy.”
...

And once more, the voice at the back of Rafen’s thoughts spoke the mantra that had kept him in line these past few weeks.
Again implication that they traveled to the edge of the Imperium (somewhere.. some edge) in a couple of weeks or less.


Page 41-42
"Even now as we speak, battle-brothers of my Chapter range to the
points of the etheric compass, carrying the same message to the Masters of the Angels Encarmine, the Blood Drinkers… To each Chapter that holds a lineage to the Great Angel.”
This implies Blood angels have traveled all over the galaxy, in roughly a similar timeframe, given Rafen gets back towards the end.

Page 42
“As you know, we have a ship in deep orbit, the Tycho. It is ready to accept you, lord, and your party for our return voyage to Baal.”
..
"Eritaen may be at the arse-end of the Emperor’s Sight, but it is still an Imperial world and still subject to Imperial law!”
Again, seems to be on the edge of the Impeirum, whichever edge that is.

Page 45
...Rafen watched as Eritaen turned and fell away to port as the ship broke orbit. Above and to starboard, the dark dagger of the strike cruiser Brutus watched them leave, the saw-tooth disc of silver across her flank catching the blue of the local star. Laser pennants on the other vessel flared briefly in salute; a marked contrast to the sullen disinterest the vessel’s crew had shown on Tycho’s arrival a few days earlier.
They've spent a few days on planet.
Also "laser pennants"

Page 46
“I also have word from the bridge. The shipmaster informs me our Navigators are in harness and preparing to make space for Baal. Much of what he said to me is beyond my ken, I will admit, but the gist is that the etheric currents this far out along the galactic plane are less cluttered than in toward the coreward planets. Once we enter the warp, we should make swift time to the home world.”
Assuming I am not misinterpeting this and the mention of the "galactic plane" and reference to coreward planets suggests that they're actually out beyond the galactic disc and the core area, which fits with the "edge of the galaxy" thing above. I'm not sure WHERE exactly they are, but I'd guess not very close to Baal, so again thousdsn or tens of thousands of LY.. perhaps even halfway across the galaxy or more.

PAge 48
He had been here once before, soon after the wounded battle-barge Europae had made orbit, returning to lick her wounds at the orbital dock in the aftermath of the battle at the shrineworld, Sabien. On that day, he had felt a conflicted mix of emotion; anger and sadness, fear and elation, a torrent of senses that still echoed in his heart all these months later.
Implies less than a year has passed since the events in the first tow Blood Angels novels.

Page 50
“The psi-wards are in place, my lord. What we say and do in the room will not be sensed by any agent of the warp.”
Psi wards to block psychic detection or observation (partiuclarily from the warp - eG daemons)

Page 51
Not since the grim times of the Horus Heresy had brother turned against brother, and yet in recent months the Blood Angels had been pushed to the very brink of a civil war within their Chapter. It began on the cemetery world of Cybele...
Again "months" since the last novel.

Page 53
“These events have depleted our numbers beyond anything we have previously faced.” Dante stepped off the stage and came toward Lothan. “Did you not sense it, brother-captain? On your return from campaign, on your arrival this day?”
...
“To maintain the illusion of normality, we have sent senior battle-brothers to wargrounds all across the galaxy,” explained Mephiston. “The Imperium at large will see nothing unusual. For the moment, we may show the outside world a face that seems unchanged. But that mask will decay in time.”
Dante has dispatched forces "Across the galaxy" - presumably since Sabien.. meaning less than a year (again) Considering that we're talking at least halfway across the galaxy in some places (to across the galaxy in others) - a good 50-100,000 LY We must be talking a good 100,000c or more, and more probably hundreds of thousands of c

PAge 54
Since the rise of the gene-curse in the Sons of Sanguinius, there had always been priests whose sole purpose had been to study the complex skeins of genetic material that made the Astartes who they were.
...
Caecus worked at the Vitalis Citadel, a medicae complex hundreds of
kilometres away...
...
...the priest was over two hundred years into his service toward finding a
cure.
Sanguinary priests engage in (forbidden) research to cure their genetic curse.

Page 55
“There is a method, a technology that will allow us to recoup the losses to our Chapter in less than a solar year, if enough effort can be applied to it.”
...
"After the treachery of the Arch-traitor, the Emperor’s light forsake him,
the primarch Corax needed to swiftly rebuild his legion. I believe that the manner in which he did it can be opened to us.”
EG cloning.

PAge 56
"It is said that the Lord of the Ravenspire went to books of ancient knowledge from the Age of Strife, intent on gleaning wisdom from the Emperor’s own hand on the matter of the creation of Space Marines.”
...
Every Astartes knew of the legacy they shared, from the very first of their kind created by the Emperor’s gene-smiths to forge the army that united Terra and led it out of Old Night. Those warriors were the precursors to the Astartes of the Great Crusade and every generation that had followed.
Some reputed backhistory on the cloning issue. I wonder how this will mesh up with the HH series. It certainly implies the Emperor might have used cloning in the creation of his warriors.


Page 56
“Corax saw a way to repopulate his forces in these tomes,” Caecus went on. “Not through the process of induction, training and elevation that we practise in these times, but through a mastery of genetic duplication.”

“You speak of the old art of replicae,” said Corbulo. “The science that man called cloning.”
...
The ways of the magos biologis were beyond him, but even he knew that the creation of a life from a synthetic mass of genetic matter seemed… somehow improper. It was said by some that beings spawned in such manner could not be considered human at all, that they were born without souls.
...
“I believe these methods could be called upon to forge new additions to our ranks, my lord.” Caecus addressed Dante directly, a thread of passion building beneath his words. “Blood Angels, cut from the whole cloth of our legion, brought to maturity in a cycle of months instead of years.”
40K, as usual, tries using exotic terms for mundane sci fi (auspex instead of sensor, vox instead of comms.. or replicae instead of cloning.) It implies the cloning capability can produce troops in months instead of years, although the creation of living, intelligent creatures (I'd imagine) is not easy (prone to failures), althoguh we know they can do alot of vat grown bodies (for servitors) or body parts. The brain and other parts I would guess, are the hard part.

Page 57
“Corax did indeed use the way of replicae to bring his legion back from the brink of
dissolution,” said Argastes, “but the road to it was not a smooth one."
...
"Things more beast than man. Throwbacks. Monstrous aberrations spawned in error by the very process you suggest we now employ.”

“Mutants?”
...
“This is true. But that was ten millennia ago. The Imperium’s grasp upon such sciences is stronger, now. And I would warrant that no Chapter beneath the Emperor’s eternal gaze knows the nature of its own blood better than ours, Argastes! Corax was too hasty. He was unprepared. We are not. We can learn from the mistakes of the Raven Guard!”
...
"If mighty Corax, a primarch, a sibling of our liege-lord and a son of the Emperor, could not undertake this arcane art without error, then I ask you this, Caecus. What makes you think that you can succeed where he failed?”
The problems with replicae. Rather interesting that the Sanguinary priest thinks they cna top the Emperor - have they progressed technology and research wise truly? On the other hand Dante uses the 40K stnadard response (those in the past are better than us, how can we top them?)e

Page 58
"..you would not have brought this to us unless you had already made some attempt to echo Corax’s work. What have you accomplished?”
...
“I have had only limited success to date.”
Or rather he failed. Many times.

Page 58
"indeed, not even within the boundaries of the worlds that orbit our red sun. We must go further, across the galaxy if need be, to find the solution elsewhere.”
...
"We are not the Ultramarines. There are those who will simply ignore such a summons. Others lost to distance that we may never reach in time."

Lothan rubbed his chin, thinking. “We’ll gather all that we can.”
...
“First Captain? You will liaise with the shipmasters at the orbit dock and the astropaths. Have a deployment plan prepared for the Chapter Master by morning.”
Hence, the conclave. Implies they may have pulled in Blood Angel successors from across the galaxy. Also note the comment (derogatory?) about how rules-bound the Ultramsurfs are.

Page 63
Dozens of warships ranging in size from small corvettes to massive grand cruisers lay in lines of stately repose, at high anchor over the desert world’s equator. Each craft had its own packet of space to surround it, each ship positioned in the same orbital plane so that no one vessel was seen to be above or below the others, in order to satisfy protocol. Only one group of craft drifted higher, near the dry docks at cislunar positions; the warcraft of the Blood Angels themselves.
"dozens of ships" of the Blood Angels successor chapters and the blood angels. It would imply (probably) at least a dozen or so blood angels ships.

Page 73
Fenn’s ability to anticipate his master’s thoughts was
one of the reasons that Caecus had kept him in his service for so long, even to the point of granting the man juvenat treatments so that the serf might share in some small measure of a Blood Angel’s longevity.
Rejuv only seems to allow for a fraction of a Blood Angel's lifespan.. not really easy to say what fraction or how old a Blood Angel can get, so..

PAge 73
..their labours were largely ignored, the plaudits going instead to those who engaged in the many battles under the Blood Angels banner. There would never be honours given and portraits painted of the Apothecaries who toiled in this place. There were no decorations for discovering a new thread of research that might cure the Rage, no award for breaking ground on a theory that could one day stem the Thirst.
Sanguinary priest objecting to the way Blood Angels favor combat orver research.. although it shows that there are those who engage in pursuits beyond mere warfare (like Commanders, Techmarines, etc.)

Page 74
For a moment, his mind drifted; he recalled the stories he had heard of a successor Chapter from the Twenty-first Founding, the Lamenters. It was said that they had found a way to expunge the gene-flaws from their shared bloodline. If it were true… Caecus would have given much to meet such men and glean wisdom from them; but the Lamenters had not been heard of in decades, not since a tyranid force had decimated their numbers, and every messenger sent to find them returned empty-handed.
The Cursed founding. They dont know if they are alive, but suspect they're more or less gone, due to the Tyranids. Ships sent to locate them (multiple messengers) I assume to recall them fro the conclave couldn't find them. Considering they were on the edge of the Eastern Fringe where the Tyranids were when they vanished, this probably means the messengers crossed across the whole of Segmentum Ultima in a good few weeks to a few months - a few hundred thousand c.

Page 76
She looked up, the sharp lines of her face
accented by the night-black hair bunched in a tight fist upon her head. Discreet mechadendrite cords trailed from a line of brass sockets that began at her temple and ended at the nape of her neck. Like Fenn, she wore a simple duty robe of bleached cloth; unlike him, however, on her it miraculously accented the firm and well-muscled shape of her body.
Supposed Magos biologis.

Page 77
She had been here for months now. She never seemed to leave the laboratorium, always there when Fenn arrived after a rest period, always there when he left again to take sleep or sustenance.
...
He comforted himself with a thought; if she did turn out to have another agenda other than the
course of pure research she claimed, her life would be forfeit in moments.
Magos biologis (without much tech enhancement) present on planet for months now. Blood Angels aren't concerned over killing a Magos.

Page 78
“Series eight, iteration twelve,” noted the woman. “If you will observe?”

Fenn immediately frowned. “That one is still immature.”

“Quite so,” Nyniq allowed, “but it is far enough along to illustrate my point.”
...
Inside the tank, the milky fluid cleared to reveal a naked male, of similar proportion to a young Baalite tribal but lacking the pallid flesh and wiry build. The figure in the tank had skin toned a tanned red, with planes of hard muscle beneath. He would not have looked out of place in the armour of a Scout.
Looks good, but its a mutant. Also implie they might have made as few as 8 or as many as 96, depending on how you interpret the quote.

Page 79
“Despite our every effort, my lord, errors continue to creep into the
structure of the gene-matrix. With each iteration they become more pronounced. The replication
protocols are flawed at a level so primal, so inherent, that nothing we do can correct them.”
The cloning method they use is flawed, unsurprisingly.

Page 80
“But this is not the first impediment, lord. Not the second, not the tenth or the fiftieth.”
...
“Semantics,” said Nyniq. “I doubt he will be pleased to learn we went on regardless for all these months.”
Implying that this event has been going on since before Rafen left. at least fifty clones in a matter of a couple of months.

Page 80
“We know that Corax of the Raven Guard took decades over this process, and even then his yield was one success for every hundred stillborn failures!”
decades? He must have continued after the Heresy for some time before fleeing.

also the 1 in 100 success rate.


Page 85
The legacy of Sanguinius was laid out in this room, with representatives of nigh on every Chapter that paid fealty to the Great Angel’s bloodline gathered under one roof.
...
There, the Blood Legion, in diagonal tiger-stripes of red and lightning
blue; the Angels Encarmine, mirrors of Rafen’s own colours except for a blunt trim of cold black; the Red Wings in their panels of pale snow and ruby; the Blood Swords ashine in glossy crimson..
almost every chapter is present.. including some of their names.

Page 87
For a brief instant, Rafen lost himself in the sight of the armoured figure,
his memory caught on another moment, months before in a basement on the forge-world of Shenlong, a moment when the image of another golden warrior had stood before him. He blinked and shook his head slightly, pushing the reverie away. Rafen focused and found Mephiston looking at him, a hint of curiosity on his face.
Rafen seeing Dante decked out in his Sanguinius costume. Again months ago since the second novel.

Page 90
Nyniq bowed slightly and the stranger bent to place a chaste kiss upon the top of her head. He was far taller than a normal man.
...
“Haran Serpens, I presume?” said Caecus.

He got a shallow bow in return. “Indeed, majoris. I thank you for your gracious invitation.”

“How did you get here with such speed?” Fenn said the words before he’d even thought about them, earning himself a sideways look from his master.

Serpens seemed unconcerned. “We have our ways, Omnissiah be praised.” He tapped the Adeptus Mechanicus symbol of cogwheel and skull that fastened his cloak across his broad shoulders. “Fortune allowed that I was close by when Nyniq’s machine-call reached me. I found the content of her code-summons to be most interesting.”
Its interesting that they don't question this. Also I wonder what "machien call" means, since it would be FTL obviously. Some sort of astropath? But why "machine call?"

Page 91
“Where is your ship? It is important that your presence here be kept clandestine, for the interim. It would not do to have one of the other successor Chapter craft in orbit make issue with your vessel.”
...
“My transportation has made itself scarce. No one but those in this chamber knows of my arrival here on Baal.”
Again none question this. This Space Marine is not terribly bright due to his desire to "fix" the blood angels.

Page 92
Beneath a thick winter coat of dun-coloured animal hide, Serpens wore a peculiar over-suit that seemed somewhere between the design of Adeptus Arbites combat armour and the restraining straps of a straightjacket.

He was bedecked with overlapping waistcoats of varying cuts, each alike only in the numerous sealpockets across them. The magos scientist had a mane of straw-coloured hair that sat over his skull in tightly braided rows, extending away down his back in a snaking coil. But it was the size of the man that held his attention; Fenn had met members of the magos biologis and others of the Adeptus Mechanicus on several occasions, and never in all those times come across someone with this man’s stature.
Serpens depicted. Unlike other examples of supertall humans, they at least question him about his height.

Page 92
“You’re the size of an Astartes.” He nodded toward Caecus, and saw that his master was dwelling on the same thought.
...
“Throughout my life I have attempted to model myself in small ways
upon the Emperor’s most perfect children, the Space Marines.” He glanced down at his own hands, gloved in black leather. “I hope the majoris will forgive a mortal’s hubris, but I have modified my flesh in many ways to share a fraction of the greatness you were gifted with.”
again, interesting that they do not doubt this. That suggetss it might be possible.

Page 94
Fenn stiffened at the tech-lord’s words. He had heard them once before, only a few months ago, in a meeting that progressed in much the same way that this one had.
..
He stared at Nyniq. Those words had come from her lips, the dull echo of them now sounding once more in the serfs memories.
A "few months" since Nyniq arrived.

Page 95
The libraria of LXD-9768 were so vast that they covered three-fifths of the nondescript planet’s
surface.
...
Those satellites were gone now, mined to fragments by the Adeptus Mechanicus,
used to build the endless lines of blockhouses that went from horizon to horizon; chamber after chamber, annexe after annexe, each storage facility housing millions of books, scrolls, picts and other forms of data storage. Whole island continents were given over to certain kinds of media, even down to millennia-old devices of magnetic tape, encoded discs and solid-state memory rods.

Worlds like LXD-9768 were dotted across the breadth of the galactic disc, planets chosen for their sheer inertness, locations far distant from any suns approaching their death cycle, alien borders or other sources of potential harm. Many of them duplicated each other’s records, with multiple redundant copies scattered a thousand fold over the light years; but they were not all the same. Since Old Night and the loss of Mankind’s great technologies, the millennia that followed had seen in part a series of struggles to recover what was once known by all. The Adeptus Terra, in its infinite wisdom and incalculable patience, had decreed that such a fall to darkness was never to be permitted
again.

Thus, the libraria. Planets given over to file stores as big as cities, duplicating and protecting information so that the loss of any one of them would not mean the destruction of humanity’s knowledge base. Every fact recovered from the past, and every piece of data generated since, had a place here. Nothing was to be lost again.

But the reality did not marry with the vision. In the 41st millennium, true information retained the same power it had in earlier ages, and those who had it hoarded it like precious gems. Instead of the libraria becoming the home of all learning, they had turned into great dusty canyons of worthless data, collected by a bureaucracy that collated everything as if it were of the greatest import, no matter how trivial, how pointless. LXD-9768’s stacks could not tell a man what words the Emperor said upon his assent to the Golden Throne; but it could give chapter and verse about the migratory patterns of extinct breeds of rodents in the underlevels of hive cities, from worlds that had not existed for centuries.

The libraria cranked on, gathering and assembling information as a cetacean might strain ocean waters for krill through its baleen. And sometimes, by pure chance, they took in data that actually had value.
Interestiing forethought involved in actually setting up multiple, redundant libraries in secure locatiosn storing massive amounts fo knowledge against data loss. given how often "priceless" data or technology may be lost when a given world is lost or destroyed, or blown up... It makes sense. although it sounds like not everything is useful.

Page 96
It had taken Fenn six days to locate the correct annexe, in endless rounds of quibbling and arguments with the quillans and savants who stood as gatekeepers to the great oceans of data locked up in the libraria’s stores. Finally, the correct permissions had been provided, on a fanfold of greasy cardboard stamped with a dozen signets and consent indents. The books were close by, in a subbasement.
...
He had not taken food nor sleep since they departed Baal, he had said little to the
serf during the voyage aboard the transport ship and the shuttle flight to the surface of LXD-9768.
...
Ever since he had returned to the
Vitalis Citadel from his meeting with Lord Dante, he had been withdrawn.
...
The tomes had eventually come to LXD-9768, rescued from the obliteration of a
valetudinarium station somewhere in the Ultima Segmentum.

Caecus showed the first signs of interest in weeks; but when they reached the annexe...
Scanning the archives. given the implied scope of the data, finding references in a matter of days this is damn impressive.

Page 97
Nyniq was there, reading the Monedus papers with a repellor-field tool that let her turn the pages
without actually touching them.
Intresting reading implement. Applied force field/AG tech I bet.

Page 103
He gestured at the mix of displays that crowded the walls. There were paintings in various media, sculptures of stone and carved woods, tapestries and fine pieces of worked metal. Many were devotional items fashioned to show the Emperor or Sanguinius in reverent aspect, others abstract things made for the sheer pleasure of it, or representative works depicting landscapes from a dozen worlds.
...
“These are the works of our battle-brothers,” said Kayne. “Each one was crafted by the hand of a
Blood Angel."
Blood Angel artwork.


Page 110
To an observer caught up in the pitch and moment of the duel, Noxx’s blows would have seemed random, without order; but they were far from that. The correct application of force in the right places, even through the protective sub-dermal sheath of a Space Marine’s black carapace, could be enough to deaden nerves, to slow a fighting response. And if one were trained well enough, the right blow, no matter if it were struck with an edge-less training blade, would cause a seizure.
Flesh tearers know about nerve centers/pressure points. Black carapace no protection against that. Note as well that the Blcak Carapace here is indicated AS protection.

Page 121
“You have come here to take part in a rescue, cousins. To save the lives of
hundreds of your fellow Astartes, whose future hangs in the balance.”
"Hundreds" of Blood angels alive... and yet Dante feels a need to call some sort of enclave to beg recruits and gene-seed from other Chapters? WTF? THis is hardly the first time the Blood Angels have been decimated (Space Hulk 3rd edition is recent AND shows this.) and they never suffered before! Hell the Space Wolves have been nearly decimated 3 times in the past and have recovered...

Page 129
“But science is quest for knowledge, serf. If we allow ignorance to blind us, we willingly set ourselves toward a return to the Age of Strife and the darkness of Old Night!”
This from a supposed Magos Biologis (probably was) said to an Blood Angels Apothecary and his servants. The Servant is doubtful, and the Apothecary is an ass, but it's worth noting that the simple fact SCIENCE was mentioned was not an immediate cause for purging and burning. Of course, it's not the radicals who do that sort of thing right off the bat, and the AdMech has their own share of both radicals and puritans.

Of course this particulra Sanguinary priest is both stupid and desperate, so maybe he can be viewd as a radical :P

Page 133
“We cannot disband a First Founding Chapter!” Orloc was aghast.
“We know the history of the Astartes. It has happened before,” insisted Seth, “we can take the men among the successors, spread equally. As you said, Lord Orloc, we are all kindred beneath the armour…”

Dante looked around him and saw the spread of emotion, clear on the faces of Seth and Armis, hidden under Sentikan’s hood and behind the immobile mask of Daggan’s sculpted facia; and a dozen other points across the spectrum in the manners of the men of the Angels Encarmine, the Red Wings, the Flesh Eaters and all the others assembled.
Really? A first founding chapter has been disbanded? Which one pray tell?

And also at least a dozen or so successor chapters present.

Page 135
“He has the mind of a newborn, in many respects,” said Serpens, smiling like a proud parent. “Much of what he is remains locked in his brain through chains of genetic-memory. With the right stimuli, he will re-learn what he already knows.” He glanced away. “Give me a month of indoctrination and hypnocordia, and you’ll have a Space Marine fit for line duty.”
Not unlike Ork memorry I guess. I wonder if genetic memory really works that way, or if its weird psyker magic shit like the Akashic Reader.

Page 140
When the serf’s suspicions of Nyniq and Serpens had finally crystallised, it was to that man that Fenn went, bribing him with minor drugs from the medicae stores to see that an extra query was included in the machine-call message stack sent out toward the sector capital.

He had not expected to get a reply so soon....
...
“The Tech-Lord Haran Serpens is listed in the rolls of the Adeptus Terra as missing presumed dead. His craft was reported lost in the deeps of the Segmentum Pacificus, beyond the Thoth system.”
Machine call message to sector capital. I guess that is another way ofs aying astropathic communication.

Page 147
“The ability to recoup losses in months instead of years,” mused Orloc. “It would be a tacticaladvantage worth having.”
again "months" to grow troops instead of years. Frankly you have to wonder - if they can use it for servitors, why not make a shit ton more combat servitors? Or, for that matter, why not clone guardsmen? It's been hinted they virtually do that for Krieg Guardsmen as it is.

Page 152
"More than a hundred Blood Angels, alive and dead, have their DNA expressed within his physiology. I believe that with the correct stimuli, the clone will be able to assimilate the muscle-recall and genetic memory of each one of them!”
Again grain of truth or pure magic? I have no idea.

Page 153
“The replicae process duplicates many of the implants within the first budding of the modified zygote,” insisted the Apothecae. “Oolitic kidney, occulobe, multi-lung, bicopea, the secondary heart organ, all of these are naturally occurring structures...”
the clone has its own inherent, grown organs. Rather interesting since the multi-lung has been called bionic.

Page 156
Without hesitation, Rafen marched the contents of the gun’s sickle magazine up the Bloodchild’s body, ripping it into pieces in a welter of crimson. The remains of the clone sagged to the stones, twitching and dying.
Empying the clip inside the Astartes clone more or less blasts it apart. For a sickle clip 30 shots.

Page 167
“Forgive me if you find this method of communication alarming, but it is the only way open to us at the moment.” It was Nyniq’s tortured vocal chords forming the words, but the manner, the pace and meter of them, they were all those of Haran Serpens. “The girl has been altered by me. She can function in this manner for a short time, although it is harmful to her.”
Caecus nodded, grotesquely fascinated. Blood was trickling from Nyniq’s eyes in pink tears.

The analytical part of his thought process wondered after how such a thing was possible. A vox device implanted in her brainstem, perhaps? Or some form of psyker conditioning?
Forgive him? It's perhaps one of the most fucked up and brutal ways of communicating by using an unwilling host as a communicator. Did she know?

Also its a measure of Caecus (the Sanguinary Priest's ) stupidity that he's not tipped off by THIS either.

Page 171
Inlaid with mosaics of ruby and white gold, the decoration was protected from the abrasive storms of Baal by a molecule-thin layer of synthetic
diamond.
"molecule thin" synthetic diamond.

Page 171
Only the guardians remained, the two machine helots-at-arms in the
alcoves at the northern and southern ends of the chamber. Each of them rested down upon one knee, bowing toward the centre of the open space. They were fabricated from metal and ceramite, a thickset approximation of a man-shape cut to resemble an angel at rest. Steel wings of razored feathers were eternally folded at their backs. Their heads were the hollowed-out stone faces of old statues, within them remnants of brain meat and delicate mechanics programmed to ceaselessly watch over the chapel environs.
The Red Grail is protected by two Servitors that, appropriately enough, look like angels.

Page 172
Upon the death of their liege-lord, the sanguinary high priests of the Blood Angels had taken on the holy duty of ensuring that his vitae would never be allowed to perish along with him. His blood kept safe in their very flesh, for ten thousand years the priests had ritually injected and returned the blood of Sanguinius in an endless cycle, bolstering it, never letting it fade.

The Red Grail was the very chalice that had captured the first drops of the primarch’s spilled blood, and it was said that it still retained some untouched elements of that first spilling by some arcane manner of technology lost to the ages. It was no lie to say that a measure of Sanguinius
would remain captured in that sacred cup for all eternity.
Legends and practices of the Sanguinary Priests, especially pertaining to the Red Grail.

PAge 184
...and here, on this level, strewn casings from bolter rounds, the tarnished electrum glittering dully. He bent and chose one of them at random, sniffing at it. The cordite stink was still strong. This
shot had been discharged recently. He rolled it between his fingers. It was a pistol-gauge round, not the kind of shell a gun-servitor would have carried in its ammunition hoppers.
Electrum bolt casings?? What is brass not god enough? Anyhow the rounds use cordite (rather than fyceline or anything else) I'd say its an odd choice for rocket propellant.. except that he's sniffing casings. So the ammo was cased. I'm just going to be nice and assume Blood Angel bolters use cased and rocket propelled ammo and leave it at that.

Also the rounds are "pistol gauge" suggesting Blood Angel bolters have different calibre ammo for pistol and boltguns. Not surprising since the heavy bolter is implied to have something like 50mm rounds or bigger.

Page 185-186
From the deep shadows behind the fractionator columns came a thin thread of red, the targeting
laser dancing as it settled upon a point between Caecus’ eyes.
...
At once the targeting beam dropped away.
(visible) targeting laser beam for a bolt pistol.

PAge 189
...there were two distorted discs of metal, resembling the caps of fungal growths. The Apothecae nudged one with his finger. It steamed slightly, still warm with the heat of passage through the mutant’s flesh. Caecus had a flash of memory from his service as a battlefield medicae. He had seen the same thing many times when called upon to extract spent rounds from his injured brethren, the distended heads of bullets flattened by impact with dense flesh.
Bolt pistol rounds vomited up by Bloodchild mutant. They did not explode. They mushroom and expand on impact like hollowpoints.

Page 189
The thrusters flaring at maximum output, the Thunderhawk plunged toward the ice fields at near hypersonic velocity, speed bleeding off in a cherry glow about the wings as the transport aircraft entered the terminal phase of its suborbital flight from the fortress-monastery.
Sub orbital flight would imply they are up at 100 km or so... and near hypersonic velocity suggests Mach 4.5-5 at that height, which isn't unreasonable or unusual.

Page 194
“You are a scientist, Caecus. Cause and effect, reason and process, these are all things at the cornerstone of your self."
Again SCIENCE!.

Page 198
His helmet’s optical array set to preysight mode, he searched and found no heat sources save for the thermal exchanger pipes across the walls and ceiling. He returned his vision to normal..
Blood angel helmets have preysight mode for thermal viewing.

Page 204
“The Vitalis Citadel is built upon a geothermal vent,” explained Corvus. “A mineral aquifer
heated by a magma chamber kilometres below the surface.” He pointed at the exchanger pipes
across the walls. “Channelled by the works of the Mechanicus, it provides warmth and power for the whole facility. The terminatus chamber contains a governance system that will disengage the vent’s regulator.”
Yet another geothermal power source with a doomsday self destruct. Although this one actually isn't explosive.

Page 205
Corvus produced his auspex and held it up. On the screen, a wire-frame map showed a skeletal model of the complex’s layout
This Auspex has a mapping mode.

Page 209
“A teleportarium?”
“On this very tier, lord, used for the transit of delicate genetic samples,” said the Space Marine.
He frowned. “There are dozens of starships in orbit—”
How the hell did they get a telleporter for a research lab?

Page 212
Fabius eschewed the rituals of activation and the tiresome litanies of thanks to the Machine-God
that the teleporter’s drone-mind demanded. Instead, the chirurgeon upon his back extended a needlearm and injected a euphoric poison into the mechanism’s braincase, letting it drown in pleasure. So released, he was free to impose a new set of target coordinates and set the matter-energy conversion process to begin accumulating power for a transit.
Because he's a scientist, get it? Well that he's a chaos type. apparently the machine spirit does have organic components because you can poison/drug it. Note that the teleporter involves a "matter-energy" conversion process in its power generation.

Page 214
The Blood Angel’s world narrowed to the back of Noxx in front of him, the sergeant’s fusion-pack bobbing as they ran to reach the upper levels.
Flesh tearer armour has fusion power source.

Page 215
In quick succession he ran through the different modes of vision open to an Astartes in power
armour—electrochemical, ultraviolet, and infrared. Only when he turned to preysight mode did he
catch it, and by reflex the Blood Angel batted at the shape that suddenly appeared in the air.
Visual modes in RAfen's helm. Once again preysight, (infraread) as well as UV and others.

Page 219
The teleportation flux tore the air from his lungs in the shattering moment of transition. The Flesh
Tearer felt every atom of his body become fluid and ghostly, for one horrible millisecond existing as nothing but a mass of free particles in a sea of seething non-matter; and then suddenly Brother Roan was whole once again, the equilibrium of being restored as quickly as it had been taken.
The shocking transition was not new to him. Roan had taken part in teleport assaults on more
than one occasion, but it was not something that he relished. He had seen brothers twisted inside by perturbations in the flux, and worse still the warpings of flesh and ceramite that resulted from an incorrect reintegration, that had to be put down like diseased animals.
It "sounds" like its more of a "matter energy conversion" type teleporter than "shoot them through the warp" teleporter, but Mephiston still can sense and detect those things. So I dont fucking know what to think. Maybe it converts the target into a matter/energy stream and then shoots it through the warp.

Page 222
One of Lothan’s men, the honour guard Garyth, told Argastes of the energy-seers that had screamed as they detected the formation of a teleport bubble above the monastery. The elaborate sense-servitors were the fortress’ early warning system, but even their panicked reactions were not fast enough.
"energy seers" detected the teleport arrival of the unfortunate flesh tearer. They're sensor serivtors of some kind, and attuned to psychic emissions I guess.

Page 230-231
The Thunderhawk was on fire as it fell from the sky. The thrusters, pushed to a point beyond their
safe limits, began to consume themselves. Sun-hot fusion flame distorted and buckled the engine
manifolds, and great black trains of smoke marked the gunship’s downward passage. White sparks of broken metal fell in their wake, like spent tracer.

...
In order to convince the pilot-serf to take the Thunderhawk on a suicidal suborbital dive, the sergeant had dispatched the youth to the cockpit to provide some encouragement with his bolter. The plan had worked, and their return flight had taken a fraction of the time of their outward sortie; the only problem was the cost. This ship would never fly again; at best, the Techmarines would use it for scrap.

And that is if we can make it the last few kilometres without coming apart in mid-air, Rafen
thought grimly.
Thunderhawk engines can push past "safe limits" but not without estroying themselves. "fusion flame" as well. The fact thtat the craft made another suboribtal transit at a muc higher speed in a "fraction of the time suggests it was many many times its previous "near hypersonic" speed... mach 10 or mach 20 maybe.

Page 236
“contact Lord Sentikan aboard the battle cruiser
Unseen."
...
“Tell Sentikan that he has authority to stand as acting commander of all warships in Baal orbit.”
...
“Tell him to have lance cannons trained upon the planet, to this location. If we fail to stop these creatures, Mount Seraph is to be destroyed. We will not suffer abominations to live.”
Lance bombardment to destroy Mountain.

Page 239
Overhead, the walls vanished toward a curved roof covered with elaborate frescoes that showed spacescapes and the arc of the galactic arm. Picked out in clusters of gemstones and precious metals were the locations of Terra, Ophelia, Sabien, Signus and dozens other significant systems from the Chapter’s history, arranged as if glimpsed from the surface of Baal on a clear night. But there had not been a clear night on Baal since the War of the Burning that scourged the planet with nuclear fire;
Comment on the nuclear devastation that had devastated Baal during the DAoT.

Page 242
“A gate to the Eye of Terror opened, a warp tunnel forced through our spirit-wards and
defences,” hissed Mephiston. “Yes, it is clear to me now. He fled Baal and left this disorder in his
wake.”
Mephiston detects Bile's escape into the Eye via warp gate.. which is intresting since this means he's hauling ass across a good many tens of thousands of light years and two segmentums in a rather short period of time.

Page 243
“The Spear of Telesto?” The name escaped Rafen’s lips and he glanced at Mephiston.
The psyker shook his head. “The Spear would not end these brutes, brother. Its brilliant fires are
gene-locked by some manner of science from the Dark Age of Technology. Any Blood Angel who
falls beneath it emerges untouched.”
“And the Bloodfiends are alike to us on a genetic level,” Argastes frowned, understanding. “The
flames would be turned from them.”
The spear's magic flame and its genetic protections. Probably useful for melees, but I'm betting Sarpie wished the soulspear had a similar safeguard.

PAge 249
..for every two that attacked with claws or teeth or club-like fist, there was one with a looted weapon and the innate skill to use it. The clones carried the formation of an omophagea organ in the structure of their flesh. Almost identical to the function of the implant in the bodies of the Space Marines, the complex knots of nerve-sheath and organic bioprocessor keyed to viable elements of genetic memory in any ingested matter. The blood they consumed, still warm and raw from men drained dry, awakened locked muscle-recall and conditioned responses. The more they fed, the more they became.

But it also opened doors to fractured pieces of self, caught by the vagaries of evolution.
Fragments of memories from the hundred-fold donors whose DNA formed Caecus’ zygote code
emerged, conflicting, strident and unstoppable.
The Bloodfiends adapt. Again the magic "genetic memory" thing.

Page 251
A hissing crackle escaped Daggan’s vox-coder and he swung his ponderous mass toward the
towering Blood-fiend, blocking its path toward the great mausoleum. His palette of sensing devices cast x-ray, preysight and sonic energies over the clone’s body, instantly pouring information to the twisted clump of meat and brain tissue that was all that remained of Lord Daggan’s flesh.
Dreadnought sensing systems.

PAge 258-259
Emerging from the monolith were two huge extended angel’s wings, curving up and
around to form a protective cowl. The individual feathers were made of steel and silver and brass,
each one etched with words of remembrance. So the Chapter’s chronicles said, many of them were cut from the hull metal of loyalist starships that fought during the time of the Heresy, given in
tribute by brother primarchs such as Guilliman, Dorn and Khan, by the Legio Custodes, even the
admirals and generals of forces that had fought in the shadow of Sanguinius and counted themselves in his debt.

And between the wings; amid them a single giant hoop of spun copper burnished to the colour of
Baal’s red giant star, suspended there upon rods of milky crystal that intersected the ring like the
points of a compass, in echo of the design upon the floor of the Grand Annex.
Inside the copper halo lay the glowing heart, living and yet dead, forever in motion but always
still. The Golden Sarcophagus was not a casket in any conventional sense of the word. It was a sphere of molten gold, rippling and flowing, pendant in an invisible stasis envelope generated by
unknowable technologies buried beneath the stonework. In the ebb and flow of the fluid form, one
might imagine they could see brief conjunctions of motion that suggested a face, a countenance of most pure and handsome aspect.

Contained within a globe of suspended time, the mantle of liquid metal had never been allowed
to cool and solidify, not once in ten thousand years; for beneath it lay the flesh of the Emperor’s son, the Great Angel and Lord of the Blood, Master of the IX Legiones Astartes, primarch among
primarchs, the most noble Sanguinius.
The supposed resting place of Sanguinius, levitated in the air in a giant molten ball og fold. F ihs body isn't ash by now I'd be damned impressed.

PAge 262
The plasma gun stalled, the weapon’s machine-spirit refusing to release another shot until it
cooled for fear of an explosive burnout. Angered, the Flesh Tearer snarled and forced the weapon’s white-hot muzzle into the meat of the clone’s bare chest and held it there.

Flesh crisped and smoked, drawing a hooting cry from the mutant.
Plasma gun with "machine spirit and white hot (unmelted) muzzle.

Page 264
Puluo’s heavy cannon ate up bandoliers of ammunition in shining brass ribbons, the blazing muzzle sending rounds tearing through flesh and bone. At his side, Kayne sighted down the auto-sense targeting scope atop his bolter, carefully pacing bursts of three rounds into each mutant that came within range.
Autosense targeting scope on bolter, with three round bursts.

Page 265
It let out a very human sob of agony as the Blood Angel’s rounds hit one after the other, each bolt impact punching a red fist of discharge from the mutant’s
leathery skin.
Bolt rounds blowing fist sized holes in the enemy. Whether AStartes first sor human fists, I don't know. REmember that either way this is purely kinetic.

Page 268
Gravity pulled at Seth and he lost his grip; and in that moment the light of a punishing, vengeful
sun washed over him, a beam of blazing energy catching the wiry Bloodfiend in the fan of its full
power. The creature twisted and became fluid, corrupt flesh sloughing from blackened bones, then the bones themselves turning molten and then to vaporous ash. Seth reached up to bat the cinders away..
Dante's inferno gun.. cremates one of the Bloodfiends. Assuming Astartes proportions (150-200 kilos) we're talking at least a good 400-600 MJ, if not several GJ.

Page 271
Digging the flattened heads of bolt rounds from its undulating flesh, the creature came on
undaunted.
Once againb olt rounds flatten and expand on impact, rathe than blow apart.
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Re: Blood Angels novel series analysis thread

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I'm going to dump out Black Tide in a single go, because like with the Green novels I want to move on to other things. I'm creeping closer to clearing out the backlog, so hopefully soon I will be able to slow down again (at least thats the goal before the year is out lol) I'm thinking either Shira Calpurnia or Grey Knights next along with Imperial armour 5-7, Soul drinkers and the Night Lords stuff. I may do GK and Shira Calpurnia at the same time. Or I may do Bastion wars all in one go because I frankly put that in the 'average' quality despite it having a ton of technical details (its basically a 40K Baen novel for the most part, becuase I do think EM was a decent novel had Zou lightened up on the milwank.)

Don't worry, I'll throw out the Night Lords and more soul drinkers to balance this out.

Part 1

Page 8
From there, he moved up and up, spiralling through the turned tubes cut through the rock, passing once or twice through voids where great deposits of nickel-iron ore had nestled, back when this place had just been a vast stone adrift in the void.
Giant nickel iron asteroid, turned into a Tau colony (possibly a mining colony)

Page 9-10
The colony was like a kittick fruit from a tree infected by boreworms. Oblate in a rough sense, lumpen across its outer skin, inside the asteroid was all tunnels and voids, eaten through and crossconnecting. Factories and oxy-plants, arboreas and habitat pods, places of exercise and teaching and leisure, the home to a hundred thousand tau… Or at least, it had been.
...
La’Non had come when the colony had been opened, drifting out at the farthest edge of the Tash’var system.
...
A warp storm, sudden and terrible, swallowed up the colony and tore it away, spat it back out like indigestible food into some other part of space. Far from home. Far from Tau.
Whereupon good ol' Fabius shows up and it all goes (literally) to hell. I have to say again I am rather sympathetic to the poor tau bastard who gets caught up in Bile's schemes. Hard to dislike them for the Greater Good wankery when they've been tortrued and experimented on. Besides this isnt a fire warrior being propogandized, this is some poor earth caste worker who just had a kid and a wife and a simple job.


Page 12
The light tug of gravity generators, power still flowing to them from the mighty fusion reactor in the colony’s core, enabled him to walk the inner circumference of the corridor-tubes; the technology let the tau use every iota of space within the asteroid for living and working.
Tau colony uses fusion reactors. Of course, every starship in a Swallow novel seems to use fusion in place of plasma reactors. This is not neccesarily better or worse - fusion certainly has advantages over plasma (fuel is more readily available, fusion reactors aren't inherently volatile, etc.) It may even be most 40K starships use a dual power system (fusion reactors for most purposes and as auxiliary power to the plasma reactor, since plasma would be a finite quality in prolonged operations.) And of course with variable uses of technology in 40K it probably would make sense that at least some ships may use (for whatever reasons) an alternate power generation tech anyhow (Hell some Titans use fusion or fission power. There probably are even some fission powered starships somewhere. Of course with my luck there's also probably some steam powered starship somewhere too.)

Page 15
“Can you understand my words, xenos?”

The tau didn’t respond; after a moment, Ceris spoke. “It does.” The crystals pulsed slightly, and Rafen sensed a faint tang of ozone in the cool air, the overspill of the Codicier’s careful psychic pressure on the alien creature.

“La’Non speaks your tongue, gue’la,” it said, in a papery, weak voice.
Ceris is a Librarian, and we have yet again a case where psychic powers work on a tau.

Page 18
Ceris walked behind it, the faint glow of blue about his head and the tightness of his expression signifying the constant telepathic force he was keepingon the alien.


Ceris is again influencing the Tau's mind, but it quite clearly seems to be an effort. Perhaps the minimal warp signature of the Tau hamper psychic abilities to an extent? (It may take more effort to achieve the effects one would get on a human, for example.)

Page 19
Ceris, so barrack-room rumour had it, was one of several psychics personally selected by Mephiston to act as his eyes and ears throughout the Chapter; and Rafen could not shake the sense that in some way, everything he said or did within sight of the olive-skinned Codicier was somehow being observed by the man the Blood Angels called the Lord of Death. The ways of the witch-kin were beyond his experience, but Rafen did not find it difficult to imagine that Mephiston’s great distance was no obstacle to the preternatural power of the mind.
I would, but mainly because astrotelepahty is unreliable for the Imperium, and this sort of shit is usually done by Daemons. Of course Mephiston is a "special" Psyker in the same way Tigurius (I CAN SCAN THE HIVE MIND) of the Ultramarines is, so some sort of extraordinary super-connection like this is not impossible, either. At least we know Codiciers and other high level librarians can substitute as astropaths.

Page 20
But it had been several months now since he and his squad had left the Chapter’s home wo rld Baal aboard the warship Tycho, and in those days and weeks their victories had been few.
...
Their quarry was, if anything, even more elusive than his reputation suggested. They were chasing a shadow across the deeps of interstellar space, and to date they had constantly been one step behind him.
Several months have passed since Red Fury, and they've been hunting Bile all over the place in this time.

Page 20
In the gloom, Turcio’s extended arm was rock-steady, the dull steel and heavy carbon of his augmetic limb hidden under his armour...
Composition of an augmetic arm.


Page 21
The question was one Rafen had asked himself a dozen times over the course of the Tycho’s mission. On the surface of Seyrin Minoris; amid the ruins of a Dark Eldar slaughterdome; in the depths of Nadacar hive city; and through the rolling madness of warp space.

A dozen leads, fragmentary sightings and half-truths drawn from a network of spies, scrying viewers and Imperial intelligence reports. Every one of them had proven to be a dead end, a wasted journey. Each time, the question. Each time, the search unfulfilled, the target lost.
This implies that Rafen has, in his months of travelling, visited a dozen distinct locations.

Page 23
The gue’la who came after the storm had spat them out, the pain-bringer, he had made his home here. All the politic words and platitudes at first, all the masks he wore and the honest entreaties to help the lost colonists, his lip service about wanting to join them in the service of the Greater Good.
All lies.
Kinda shows how naive and trusting tau can be in this regard. And if you trust Chaos (or don't believe in it) you can get fucked over. And tau don't really seem to believe in daemons or chaos.

Page 23
He felt the mindforce
of the blue-armoured human at his back, making his legs move like stuttering pistons.
I imagine they do know psykers exist, since they have run across the Nicassar.

Page 24
Rafen was already bringing his bolter to bear, sighting down the scope atop the weapon’s frame.
Rafen's weapon like most blood angel weapons we see, seem to have a scope. Or rather, at least some of the squad's weapons are scoped. Don't remember if Ajir and Turcio's is, but I know Kayne's was.

Page 25
But in the next second a bolt of blue-white fire lanced through the sullen air and clipped the alien with a near-hit. The tau described a jerky pirouette and went down in a puff of thin blood.

Rafen reacted as a second pulse beam went wide of him and cracked into a toppled heap of storage bins.
Pulse rifle fire. Beam like here with no cauterization.

PAGE 25
The alien was clad in pieces of the sand-coloured armour Rafen recalled from hypnogogic training tapes, but the wargear was smeared with dark fluids and in poor order.
Fire Warriors. Rafen only knows about the tau from training tapes. Obviously they never got too deep into Segmentum Ultima.

Page 25
Rafen put the xenos down with a single shot to the chest, and it blew backwards into wet rags. The dying alien had not finished twitching when more lines of blue fire probed out towards the Blood Angels.
Bolt round (which are as I have noted, non explosive kinetic weapons) rather messily and effectively penetrates the Fire warrior's armor and kills him.

Page 26
The strident shrieking of pulse bolts echoed around the vast oval chamber, lines of perfect lightning blazing outward, hugging the ground.
Pulse fire again.

Page 26-27
Flame gushed from the flash-hider of the weapon in cruciform flares, great brass casings launching from the ejection port in a fountain of metal, a punishing wave of rounds lashing out as the Space Marine turned slowly in place, tearing down everything in his arc of fire. Unarmoured tau caught in the midst of his kill zone lost limbs or exploded into flecks of meat, while the soldier-xenos went down, howling if they were not already dead.
Heavy Bolter. Like bolters, Fire Warrior armour offers very little protection - limbs amputated and torsos (presumably) exploded. Of course since the weapon was also described as firing fuck-off huge rounds (50mm MINIMUM - cannon caliber) it probably should do that.

Page 27
Puluo’s weapon alone should have been enough to put the fear of the God-Emperor into any enemy; but still the tau came on. Rafen had never fought their kind before, and what he knew of them came only second- and third-hand from other warriors, from his late mentor Koris and the indoctrination schema of his training. All of that had told him the tau were a clever foe, wily and careful in battle. That was not what he saw here.

“Rage…” muttered Ceris, close at Rafen’s side. “Nothing but rage.”

The psyker sensed the mindset of the aliens more clearly than the sergeant ever could, and saw what Rafen did. Fury was something the Blood Angel knew well—far too well, he admitted—and it was there before him in the tau. Their tactics were blunt and hard, with only the letting of blood on their minds. This was not the combat of a foe defending a location from an invader. It was anger, pure and simple. These xenos had been wronged, and they wanted someone to pay in kind.
Ceris can sense the mental state of the tau, who are clearly enraged. Not that I can blame them after being guests of Bile - anyone would be enraged, and again this oddly makes me more sympatheti to them. We know from Mark of the Xenos (Deathwatch RPG) that the prolonged absence of an Ethereal can allow tau to degenerate into a more angry (feral is the word I want to use but they don't become like cavemen) state where they may fight back or rage. I suspect this is what we see here, although the sort of madness engendered by exposure to Chaos (like in Fire Warrior) no doubt contributes.

And an enraged tau is not a very competent tau, as we find out.

Page 28
The fire warrior led with a pulse carbine and the Blood Angel rocked off a fallen stone roundel to meet the alien in mid-leap. With one arm, Rafen forced the carbine away, shots screaming from it over his shoulder. In the heartbeat-fast pace, he was aware of a particle stream creasing the upper surface of his pauldron. The tau was smaller, lighter than the Space Marine, but its momentum was toppling Rafen backward.
Pulse fire described as a "particle stream" - since pulse weapons can be defined as a kind of plasma weapon, this makes sense.

Page 28
The world tipping about him, he jammed the muzzle of his bolter into the gap between the plates of the alien’s articulated armour and pulled the trigger. At point blank range, the tau was bifurcated, its legs and abdomen spinning away in one direction, the remains of the torso falling free, dragging wet ropes of intestine with it.
Rafen targets a gap in the armor and, I suspect severs the tau at the torso, which means a large, messy, torso width-hole (or nearly so) blasted through it by a KE round. This may actually tell us that tau armor (or at least this brand) is degrading the ruond significantly, if that is the bolter's effect on unarmoed tau.

Page 29
On the vox channel, Rafen heard a concussive grant of anger and moderated pain, and immediately knew it was Ajir. Swinging about, he found the other Space Marine where he had fallen to one knee, the black streaks of pulse hits marring the crimson perfection of his battle armour. The sergeant thumbed his bolter’s fire-select to fully automatic and lent his battle-brother support, blazing back towards the trio of fire warriors moving and shooting as they closed in. One went down, then another, bolts slamming through polymer and into meat and bone.

The last round belonged to Ajir, who made the engagement’s final kill from where he crouched, taking off the top of the last fire warrior’s skull in a low-deflection shot.
Ajir's armor seems to have been badly damaged, perhaps even breached, by sustained pulse fire, but he is still combat ready. These pulse rifles (for whatever reason) aren't doing terribly well against Power armour, mirroring the scenes in Kill Team with the Deathwatch.

Also note that tau fire warrior armor seems to incorporate some polymer of some kind (vague and unhelpful as that detail is) into it.

Page 33
Rafen shook his head, a grim certainty gathering in his thoughts. “I did not lie to you, xenos,” he told it. “I said I would end your agony. I will.”

With a swift motion, the sergeant drew his combat knife and buried it in the alien’s chest. The tau heart, as he recalled from his training, was in the centre of their torso, beneath a dense, bony plate in the middle of their ribcage. The fractal-edged blade slid easily through La’Non’s flesh and resisted a little as it bit into bone; Rafen applied even pressure and the weapon went in to the hilt, the very tip emerging from the alien’s back. The incision was clean and fast, cutting the heart in two. La’Non died silently, and Rafen allowed the body to fall off the edge of the knife.

Turcio watched him clean his weapon. “I didn’t know they could weep,” he noted.

Kayne gestured at the room, and his answer was Rafen’s. “Look around, brother. Any creature would weep to have such horrors forced upon them—”
Kindness of a sortm and the talk is better IMHO than "RAR FUCK THE XENOS". Also note the fractal-edged mono knife. Again.

Page 34
At once, every Space Marine in the room opened fire, and a flashing storm of bolts ripped into the figure, tearing it apart in a razored hurricane.

Rafen was rushing forward even before the body hit the floor, the burning bite of vengeance surging through his veins.

His moment of thunderous elation died, quickly and silently. Kayne’s lamp lit the face of the figure, still discernable despite a bolt wound that had eaten away a fist-sized chunk of skull.
...
It was a tau, after a fashion, but monstrously bloated, bulked up by veins filled with generative compounds and muscle transplants. A xenos, made to mimic the mass of an Adeptus Astartes.
Space Marine sized tau mutant torn apart by half a dozen bolters, mostly at least. Fist sized holes put in head and skull by a single bolt round.

Page 38
Water—purified fluid recovered from the ship’s reaction mass store, blessed daily by the Tycho’s resident sanguinary priest—flowed from a nozzle in the shape of a cherub’s mouth, and Ceris used it to dampen a cloth he recovered from a brass rack.
"reaction mass" in the strict definition means the stuff you shoot out the engines to move the ship, but it has been used to mean fuel. Given that Swallow treats all shisp as using fusion engines, I suspect either case could be (or both - maybe it uses plasma from the fusion reaction as propellant.) The reaction mass (either context) also seems to double as the ship's water. It may also be a source of fresh oxygen if they use it as a fuel source (strip the hydrogen from the oxygen.)

Page 41
One man, convinced he could rebuild the Chapter’s losses not through a tithe, but by the use of ancient, forbidden science, had unwittingly allied himself to a biologian of the Adeptus Mechanicus
Replicae/cloning seems to be a forbidden science (although we know the AdMech uses it fairly often, so I guess "forbidden" means "noone but us can use it.")

Page 42
Even now, after months had passed, Rafen was still sickened to his very core by the thought of this high transgression against his Chapter.
Months again passing since Red Fury.

Page 45
Through the diamond-hard tiles of colour, he saw a flash of light from a launch tube on the warship’s flank. Sleek cylinders of metal, pressed forward on white spears of fire, looped away from the vessel, tracking, swarming together. He followed their course, looking ahead of them, and found the murky shape of the asteroid colony caught by the light of distant stars.
...

Silent, hard flashes of refracted illumination reached out after him as the Tycho’s weapons did their work, and undid that of the traitor.
Diamond-hard "windows" This might be armourglass (defined later.) The strike cruiser is firing a broadside of self propelled munitions (rockets? torpedoes) to destroy the tau asteroid colony. Hard to calculate since we dont know the exact size of the asteorid (a few km maybe, given its size and population) but disintegrating that (espeically since it is hollow) wouldn't take alot of firepower - megatons easily. Of course that also depends on the manner in which it is destroyed and the kind of payload fired (if its melting shit, it will be more energetic - and inefficient, than simply using blast effects.)

Page 47
He turned it in his hands, hearing the collective gasp from the warriors arrayed around him. It was flawless and perfect, without any outward sign of the great affront that had been perpetrated against it only months ago.
Again months ago since Red Fury. "it" in this case is the Red Grail.

PAge 48
He mused on Corbulo’s words, wondering after the origins of these new Blood Angels. The majority were the intake from the tithes of Baal’s two desert moons, but a fair proportion were assignees from the successor Chapters that had elected to bring the Chapter’s numbers up to full strength. How many of them had been recruited by the Angels Encarmine, the Flesh Tearers, the Blood Legion or any of a dozen other brother-Chapters?


They tithed from a "dozen other" successor chapters, indicating the scope of the Blood Angels contribution to overall Astartes numbers (far smaller than the Ultramarines, unsurprisingly, but making up 1-2% of the Astartes Chapters when you are simply the other half to two thirds of the Ultrasmrufs reputed repreesntation isn't bad either. It makes them far more numerous than the Space Wolves, anyhow.)

Page 50
Mephiston nodded. “Just so. We live in a time of wonders, my Master. It is hard to believe that just a season has elapsed since our Chapter stared into the abyss. We faced the spectre of dissolution, but with the grace of Holy Terra, we have dispelled it.”
Hey! where did the grimdark and skulls go! I thought we lived in an age of war and devastation and hopelessness! there hasn't been wonder or anythign remotely positive since second edition :P

Page 51
“Better to remind us not to stride too high above the common people
we protect. What becomes of those of us who eschew their humanity?”
Dante seems to have changed his tune since Red Fury. Probably not a bad thing, since I get tired of arrogant asshole marines. It's one of the reasons I still like this series despite some of its silliness.

Page 51
“You have seen the most recent communiqué from the Tycho.” It was not a question.
...
"That xenos colony was a solid lead, but like all the others, it has turned to
ashes in our hands.”

“Our agents still seek new indications,” said the psyker. “Every battle-brother listens out for any fraction of information.”
We dont know where the tau colony is, but I guess they're getting fairly regular reports (eg not weekly or monthly I gather, every few days perhaps or less.)

Also "every battle brother" listens for information, which shows us the scope of the hunt for Bile, since it was mentioned in "Red Fury" that Dante had sent out battle brothers across the galaxy prior to the little Bloodfiend fiasco.

Page 52
“Fabius Bile has been sighted,” noted the psyker. “Those appearances are being researched by our cogitators and a contingent of my best epistolaries.”

“If we were to believe all that we are told, then it would seem that the accursed renegade is active in dozens of places all across the galaxy, all at the same time.” Dante’s voice rose in annoyance. “During the Festival of Ultimate Piety, observers place him in the Eastern Fringes, the Sabbat Worlds and the Damocles Gulf. Which of them is right? To which place do we send our warriors?”
As hinted at above, the hunt for Bile is pretty much galactic in scope, and it seems like he's been spotted everywhere. This hints Rafen and his bunch have probably been hauling ass back and forth across the galaxy more than once in the "months" of hunting, which furhter implies some pretty hefty FTL speeds (hundreds of thousands of c at least). This isn't definite of course, but it seems likely that they have been across the galaxy and back at least once.

Page 53
“Only arcane, forbidden knowledge,” said Mephiston, with a nod. “I have seen the horrors he has wrought and then released upon the battlefield. His freakish ‘New Men’, things that walk like humans, each the equal of an Astartes.”
Fabius Bile's interests. The New Men are basically Astartes, only more psychopathic.

Page 54
“You… saw something? In the warp?”

“The skeins of past and future are open to some. In rare moments, I have been blessed to be one of them… Although some might think it more a curse.”
Mephiston talks about precog and visions. Like most things for the Imperium it is a vague, imprecise art.

Page 54-55
Dante nodded; Kale was currently serving aboard the cruiser Dario, a warship assigned to the picket force that patrolled the rim of the Baal system.
...
“Kale is inbound, sir. He brings with him a courier vessel that exited the warp just beyond the outer defence ring.”
Given the short duration between this message and the fact they greet the landing suggests a fairly short time, less than a day has passed, meaning the ship could travel in system in under a day (high single or low double digit gees at least, depending on emergence distance.


Page 56
Mephiston knew that as a matter of course, scouts armed with modified Zaitsev-pattern long-bolters were ranged in the upper towers bracketing the platform, watching for any signs of trouble..
an interesting pattern of "long-bolter" - long barreld bolter probably for marksman/sniper work.

Page 57
“The Dario intercepted a small warp-capable craft exiting the immaterium beyond the orbit of the twelfth planet,”
This would tned to suggest they are pretty far out, leaning more towards the "billions of km" interpretation, which might suggest double/triple digit gee accelerations to cover that distance within a day or so.

Page 58
The commander nodded and accepted the device. The instant his bare flesh touched the surface, Mephiston heard the quiet click of a bloodlock. With an oiled whisper of intricate workings, the box unfolded to become an oval plate crested with spines; atop the spines, a rarity glittered.

“A hololith diamond,” noted Dante. “A rare device. Great Seth has clearly spared no effort in bringing this message to me in secure order.” The Chapter Master stroked the facets of the fist-sized gemstone, and it shone as it caught an errant ray of sunlight.

As if from a prism, the diamond’s glow grew, emerging from the stone to become a ghost of shimmering light. The ghost stuttered and flickered, becoming a crude image of Seth, armoured but unkempt, as if he had just stepped from a battle.
...
Mephiston watched as the message encoded on the crystalline matrix of the archeotech device began to play out.
More 40K magic crystal technology, seemingly a high end and rare one - hololith diamond, combining magic crystal info storage tech with holographic capability.

Page 60
The hololith continued. “I have already sent a ship to rendezvous with your lad Rafen and his band. The Gabriel. The warriors aboard know enough.”
...
“You need only tell Rafen to accept the help he is offered."
Implies a fairly rapid travel time (since its been months since Red Fury, the Flesh tearers returned to Eritaen from the first book I think and then have again dispatched a ship to meet Rafen, wherever the hell he is) as welll as fast message transmit. If we only knew where Rafen was... and where Eritaein was. Maybe the second omnibus will help..

Page 61
They shared the bladed prow, the orchard of crenulated minarets along the dorsal lengths of their fuselage, the hammerhead castle rising from their hull. Cannons in brassy, murderous array gave mute defiance to all enemies, engines flaring like captured suns at their backs; these were rapid strike cruisers of the Adeptus Astartes, ships of singular, swift purpose that could turn cities to slag or land armies if the needs of battle demanded it.
Space Marine stirke cruisers. Can "turn cities to slag" - although in what timeframe or context we aren't told.

Page 62
"Is not your Chapter still engaged in the punishment of Eritaen?”
...
The Gabriel had left the Tycho little choice but to heave to, the Flesh Tearers’ ship venturing so close that its mass shadow would make any attempt to enter warp space a dangerous prospect. “That conflict is ended. But the rest of my kinsmen have been given a new battle to fight, against an ork horde in the Auro Cluster.”
I guess they're done with Eritaen, but now are in a new place (we don't know where.) Again would be useful for travel times if we knew where.

Also "mass shadows" can interfere with warp travel (borrowing SW terms now?), which I suspect means (entering/exiting warp too close to something means you run into it, and there are security measures to prevent this.)

Page 63-64
Rafen’s gaze dropped to the data-slate in his hand. The device had been presented to him by the runner from the astropath sanctum mere minutes before the cruiser’s scrying monitors had picked up the approaching vessel.
...
There, on the display, was the clear and unmistakable cipher of a message from Baal, appended with the highest priority suffixes. Ajir’s eyes widened as he realised that the communication had come directly from the Lord Commander himself.
Again rapid message transmissionit would seem. I'm willing to bet Seth planned the arrival of his envoy to coincide with the message arriving (and Noxx and his bunch) to be fairly close to each other.

Page 66
Turcio recognised the face of Fabius Bile. It was an artist’s impression of the fiend, dispassionately constructed by some machine-slave fed a diet of security camera footage, faded portraits and research data.

It depicted a man with the dimensions of a Space Marine, three metres high and another across the shoulders. Pallid of face, his flesh was pulled tight on his skull and around the rim of a cranial cognition accelerator implant. Strings of white hair fell down upon shoulder pauldrons of bloodstained bronze, blurred where the display engine’s self-censorship subroutines masked the eightfold stars etched there.
The Artist's representation of Bile.. compiled from various sources.. in a sevitor. Note the self-censoring nature of the cogitator.

Oh and "cognition accelerator" implants - IMPROVE YOUR BRAIN.

Page 67
A brass mechanism of limbs and manipulators—a device of mysterious origin known only as “the chirurgeon”—was attached to his back; skull-topped valves and reservoirs of black fluids, oil-thick and sluggish, chugged as they worked. The functions of the chirurgeon could only be guessed at. Several learned scienticians of the Imperium had attempted to divine its capabilities, suggesting it might be some sort of lifesupport mechanism, or perhaps even a semi-sentient servitor device. It reminded Turcio of the servo-harnesses worn by the technical adepts of his Chapter, but in a more bloated, grotesque design.
Bile's mysterious growth on the backo f his head. I bet its a daemon.

Page 67
Techmarines were a rare breed among the Adeptus Astartes, inducted into
their Chapters in the same fashion as every other initiate, but then trained on Mars to commune with machines… and so some would have it said, never again to be counted as truly trustworthy on their return.
Techmarines described. The lack of trust has been noted elsewhere I think, but I dont remember where.

Page 69
“This is the Magos Minoris Matthun Zentennigan Eight-Iota Zellik,” said Mohl. The Flesh Tearer’s voice was quiet, but it carried across the chamber. “A ranking tech-lord of the Magos Technicus of Mars, he is listed in the rolls as an adept-without-portfolio, with letters of marque from the Fabricator-General to conduct independent operations beyond the Segmentum Solar.”
...
"Zellik’s connections have so far enabled him to remain outside the grip of the ordos. But what has been determined, by agents in our employ, is that
Zellik is indeed operating outside the letter of Imperial law and Mechanicus doctrine."
...
"Apparently, he maintains an extensive private museum… In addition, he
has been trading in proscribed and rare technologies.”

“The cog-boys would go wild if they knew that,” said Ajir.

Noxx shook his head. “Don’t be so sure. The Adeptus Mechanicus are quite happy to bend the rules if it lets them gather up another dusty relic from the days before Old Night.” He glanced at Mohl and the Techmarine’s head bobbed in agreement.
Discussion of AdMech. I'm guessing Zellik's "adept without portfolio" and the Mark basically mean he's a free agent explorator beyond certain territories (territoriality is a big part of the AdMech). Also a glimpse of how politics plays betwene the Inquisition and AdMech, and the various rules.

Also we are told the AdMech (unsurprisingly) will bend rules if it means getting tech they want. Which we know and have seen in other novels (up to and including sacrificing guardsmen and starting wars.)

Page 72
“Archeohort?” The word was unfamiliar to Turcio.
“Show them,” Noxx told Mohl. The Techmarine touched a luminous keypad and the lens viewer shifted again. The new shape was hard to grasp, and for long moments Turcio stared at it, trying to draw meaning from what appeared to be a collection of gigantic derricks clustered about an eggshaped core. It reminded him a little of the fat dust spiders that lurked in the sublevels of the fortress-monastery. The scale was hard to reckon from the image, however.

“The construct is essentially a mobile processing facility, dedicated to the recovery of lost scientific relics. It moves from star to star, sifting planets for archeotech. Zellik has a small army of skitarii and savants, and the construct is well armed. A single vessel would not pose a serious threat to it.”
Zelliks' salvage craft/starship thingy.


Page 73
“Our Chapter’s starfleet is small. It was difficult enough to detach the Gabriel for this duty."
...
“You have this… construct’s location?”

“Beyond the Holda and Precipice systems, out on the lip of the void before the Ghoul Stars.” Mohl’s answer was immediate. “Zellik returns there frequently to sift the corpse worlds along that
axis.”
Zellik's location. The Ghoul Stars are up in the north-eastern part of the Imperium, beyond the edge of Segmentum Ultima. This tells us that, at the very very VERY minimum, the Tycho has travelled from Baal to Ghoul Stars - at least 10-20K LY.

Page 74-75
Teleporters would not work; the construct was possessed of some kind of arcane dispersal field generator that would scramble any incoming matter signal into something unrecognisable.
Teleporter jammers. Note agin the "matter signal" suggesting a non-warp nature.

Page 75
The Archeohort was rising above the bow of the Gabriel, and at last he understood the size of it. The construct was easily the mass of a city-sprawl, and the spider-like impression presented by the image viewer was cemented as he watched kilometre-long gantries cluster from the complex’s main core around the drifting remnants of a slab-sided space
hulk.
Archeohort's size and possible mass. At least (rpobably) several km across, probably several times that.

Page 78
...the disposition of the boarding torpedo’s short-range thrusters
was unknown.
..
The thrusters were supposed to double that speed, to bring them in too fast for the Archeohort’s gunnery cogitators to react. If they failed to fire, the capsule would move slowly and the guns would mark their range in short order.
Capabilities of Blood angel (or Flesh tearer) boarding torpedo engines. Given velocites of tens or hundreds of km/s, and assuming say a 30 second firing duration we're talking tens or hundreds of gees MINIMUM for the engines. If its a 5-10 second duration, we might be talking hundreds or thousands of gees.

Page 79
...instead a thundering roar sounded from the aft of the capsule, and every warrior aboard was forced into his harness as gravity fell hard upon them.
...
Outside, the Gabriel’s shipmaster had deployed his guns and fired on the Mechanicus construct at point-blank range. The boarding torpedo sailed among the unleashed maelstrom, masked once more by the salvoes as it made its
terminal approach.
...
Noxx was about to add something, but then the torpedo found its mark and struck the Archeohort’s outer skin.
The duration is enough for Rafen to discover above what the Gabriel is doing, and for half a dozen lines to be spoken, so we're probably talking a matter of minutes, even seconds for the passage. Range could vary from thousands to tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of km, depending on exact duration adn velocity implies (tens to hundreds of km/s)

Page 80
The entire forward quarter of the boarding torpedo was a massive brass drill, hardened with a molecule-thin layer of cultured diamond and a sentanium tip. Spinning at furious speed, it chewed through the outer layers of carbide plating on the Archeohort’s dorsal hull and ploughed inward. Tracks with spike-tipped teeth along the flank of the capsule pulled it through ripped splines of metal, plastic and wood...
As usual, they use a magic drill to bore through into the ship.

Page 80-81
Great phlegmy boles of vac-sensitive gel vomited from pressurised canisters, racing to seal the breach made by the Astartes—a nd all too quickly the boarding torpedo’s forward momentum was arrested.
...
The gelatinous matter ringing the capsule bubbled and spat, writhing as if it were alive; and then the torpedo jolted backwards.
...
“A cultured bio-form,” said Mohl dispassionately, probing the hardening matter with a finger.
“Programmed to act like living tissue. Sealing wounds and ousting foreign bodies.”
“On a tyranid ship, perhaps,” said Turcio. “But here?”
“Perhaps the stories of Zellik’s contact with the xenos were not wrong after all.”
Some sort of semi-organic self-repair/patching system. Possibly xenos tech, and powerful (and aware) enough to eject the boarding torpedo.

Page 82
Enemy fire from the front rank came past in a wash of laser light, beams hissing across the surface of ceramite armour, cooking off layers of protective sheathing. The strangled crackle of split air molecules sounded around the Astartes, and the corridor was suddenly filled with the acrid tang of ozone.
Tech-guard weaponry. Lasers seem to be of the heat ray variety, even if they aren't terribly effective on power armor.

Page 82
The machine-helots were all armed with close-range stubbers, fat ammo hoppers upon their bent backs feeding the weapons with frangible-tipped rounds. Close to the exterior hull of a starship, heavy bullet loads were a hazard—a single misplaced shot could breach a portal or even a wall, and cause an explosive decompression.
...
Rafen heard the shattering of the bullet-tips as they rattled harmlessly off Space Marine armour and grinned. In their haste, Zellik’s soldiers hadn’t rearmed their guns, using the low-velocity, manstopper shells more suited to dealing with pirates or common human foes. The candlepin-thick bolt shells of the Space Marines, on the other hand, were far more lethal, over-penetrating every target they hit. Turcio was already back up into a crouch, taking off the heads of gun-servitors with carefully aimed shots.
Frangible/fragmenting stubber ammo - good against unarmored but shitty against armor. dont know why they implied only the tips do that.

Page 83
Gun pods the size of habitat blocks spun and moved on thick brass rails that ringed the outer hull, pausing to reload at the maws of static ammo hoppers before sliding back to seek the Astartes ships and barrage them.
Archeohort's weapons systems seem to be mostly cannons.

Page 83
Tycho’s shipmaster threaded his ship between a pair of towering gantries and let his forward tubes lay upon the closest of the gun-carriages. Spatial torpedoes leapt into the dark, crossing the distance on angry flares of thrust before transforming into fists of nuclear flame. Sheets of mobile armour plate raced to absorb the detonations and came too slow, some of them torn apart and tossed into the dark.

Above, the Gabriel supported its brother-ship with sheeting rains of superheavy las-bolts, burning away the brassy lustre that clad the hull of the Mechanicus construct.
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"Spatial torpedoes" which I mean to take "torpedoes that travel in space" carrying what appear to be some sort of "nuclear" warhead. Archeohort uses mobile armour plate (mobile like the gun turets I imagine.)

"superheavy las fire" - who the hell knows what it means other than perhaps "big ship gun."
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Page 85-86
The harpoons were taller than the statues atop Mount Seraph. Spinning, barbed things the length of a gun-cutter or system boat, they were ejected from the Archeohort’s interior and ranged up and out through the hidden ports, probing after the Gabriel and the Tycho. The weapons had crews, after a fashion, if one were willing to give that name to a handful of limbless human torsos tanked in shock-resistant canisters of support fluid.

Chains with links that could loop a hundred men, double- and triple-threaded, rippled out behind the thruster-guided lances, screaming from helix rigs in the Archeohort’s hull. The weapons spun and twirled, racing for the bodies of their enemies.

Cannons answering with death, the two warships veered from their courses, making stiff turns that sent grinding gravity shocks the length of their iron spines;
Yes. The Magos is literally harpooning starships. Says something about the size and durability of the chains and shit, I'd imagine though.

page 89-90
The grenade landed and detonated—but instead of an explosive discharge, a globe of emerald energy expanded out, at full size perhaps big enough to envelop a groundcar. When the glow dissipated, there was a perfect circle cut through the decking, the edges smooth and bright as if polished.

“Baal’s blood! It must be a demat sphere!” said Ceris, firing off a burst as he approached. “An archeotech weapon. Like a teleport, but everything inside the radius is disintegrated. I never thought to see such a relic in action…”

“I though those devices were a myth!” said Eigen.
...
“Zellik must really want us dead,” ventured Turcio. “Those spheres are worth a governor’s
ransom.”
Demat spheres. Something akin to a vortex warhead I guess. Implied to be related to whatever teleporters operate on in these novels.

Page 90
And then, even as the echo of the impacts resonated and faded, the huge chains of vacuum-forged alloy flexed and pulled taut. Deep inside the mechanism of Zellik’s great construct, wheels began to turn, gears worked, and the lines drew home, reeling them in.

The shipmasters of the Tycho and the Gabriel had given their gunnery captains leave to fire with freedom, and so they did, punishing the Archeohort for such an attack, others training guns on the lines of chain, hoping to sever them.
again those super chains must be really durable, given they cna haul two starships (even despite their engines). The Archeohort must mass considerably more than both strike cruisers too (meaning it is also considerably bigger.)


Page 91
The melta bomb exploded and took down not only the armoured hatchway sealing off the command chamber, but also a few sections of wall to either side. The corpses of the heavy gun-servitors that had defended the entrance were ripped apart where they lay, the ammunition in their weapons cooking off in secondary blasts.
...
..those that had not already been killed by the funnelled blast of the breaching
charge.
The hole is at least Astartes size, although if it was pulverized through or melted through completely, we don't know. Or how thick the door is.

Page 93
A belch of hot, dry air vented into the chamber and Rafen caught sight of a harsh orange glow beneath them. A long tray of molten metal, perhaps a conveyer barge from the foundry modules of the Archeohort’s factorium...
...
They had moments before the strange folding room turned itself inside-out and deposited them all into the embrace of the molten iron. Even with their power armour, it would be questionable if the Space Marines could survive for more than a few seconds in such incredible temperatures.
The Archeohort has its own factory stuff. And a pit of molten iron of unknown size/volume would kill a marine within a few seconds from the temperatures if they were submerged in it. Not quite sure how one would calc this, but it seems damn impressive that they might even last a second or two (of course they aren't absolutely certain it would harm them, but I would say its a close thing either way - probably means exposure to a constant megajoules, perhaps even gigajoules of energy)

page 94
Beneath him, his weapon spiralled away into the glowing, sluggish liquid, melting into a string of hard, concussive blasts as the ammunition exploded with the heat.
Rafen's bolter instantly melting in a pit of molten metal.

Page 101-102
He turned around and felt a kick of revulsion as he saw something he certainly did recognise; the severed skull and forearm of a necron warrior, corroded and age-worn, but still horribly distinctive.
Yet another AdMechie who collects Necron stuff.

Page 106
Every one of the skitarii had been armed with weapons of arcane origin—laser fans, ornate bolt carbines, icefire guns capable of projecting streams of freezing flame, sonic mutes—and every one of them was killed before they could fire a shot.
"laser fans" - some sort of fanbeam laser I suppose for slicing people in half. The icefire guns are sillier though.

Page 106
..using his tools to perform a surgery on Zellik that cut out the tech-priest’s wireless machine-vox implant.
Wireless communications.

Page 107
Rafen’s eyes widened in surprise as he recognised the shape of a thickset plasma gun.
...
“A twin-core design,” Mohl was saying, “Dekker-pattern. The rare Baal-variant model.”
...
“It is not the only Astartes relic in the museum,” added Mohl. “Also, there are items of note belonging to the Adepta Sororitas and the Imperial Guard—”

“Continue your inventory. Take it all,” Rafen replied. “In Aryon’s memory, we will see every last piece go to the fate it deserves.”
They may or may not have recovered it all, since they frag the ship later on and at least some of the collection was lost. anyhow the "twin core" plasma gun design is interesting, I believe they actually existed in the codex fluff at some point (I remember twin barreled plasma weapons.

Page 108
“The name Haran Serpens was known to him. Beslian claims that Zellik has made several clandestine journeys into the Ghoul Stars region in order to meet with him. The most recent was only two solar months ago.”

Rafen halted. “After Fabius fled Baal.”
Two months have passed since Bile fled Baal (EG the events in Red Fury) and again Ghoul Stars location. 10-20K LY in 2 months is at least 60,000-120,000c, and that is, without a doubt, a dramatic understatement. IF we spread 2 months over 12 separate locales visited, thats 1 place every 5 days (or close to 1 per week) even assuming they crossed only one segmentum in that time (20,000 LY) we're talking well over a million c average travel time. Hell, We knew before they took the Archeohort and came to the Ghoul stars that "months" had passed, so we know that it took them far less than a month, a couple of days or weeks at most, to cross that 10-20K LY distance. we're talking half a million c minimum EASY, if not several million c just for that alone.

All that said its fair to point out this is a Space Marine vessel of a first founding legion on a mission of utmost importance, so every resource probably was devoted to Rafen being able to move about the galaxy quickly (fast ship, good navigator, etc.) - but even so it shows what warp drive is capable of and it meshes with the Dawn of War and Grey Knights novels.

Page 110
He raised the plasma gun, working the collimator dial with his other hand. “Such a superior piece of work. Handcrafted by Isherite artisans."
...
On its finest setting, the humming accelerator coils atop the weapon glowed blue-white and discharged a thin rod of superheated plasmatic particles. The plasma bolt sliced into the top of a servo-arm waving from Zellik’s spine, and turned it into a twist of slagged iron.
Plasma gun with variable focus (collimation) - fine/narrow beam or a much wider (and destructive one.) A previous example of a feature like this was in the novel Faith and Fire (Miriya's plasma gun)

Also unlike some novels, this plasma weapon actually fires particle beams (or plasma particles anyhow.) Also reduces part of a servo arm molten Assuming a 1 cm wide, 3 cm long bit of iron.. 30 KJ. Assuming 2 cm wide and 10 cm long..378 kj.

Page 111-112
“Fabius Bile is a myth! A monster from the dark past created by over-zealous preachers in order to terrify the masses!” Zellik strained at the manacles as Rafen closed the distance to him.
Interesting that the Magos doesn't believe in Bile, or considers him propoganda.

Page 113
“The fifth world of the Dynikas system,” announced Mohl. “Several parsecs out along the spinward edge of the Ghoul Stars. Our target.”
How far out the Archeohort was from the Ghoul Stars... meaning they didn't have much further to travel.

The interesting thing here is, the Ghoul STars are the territory of the Death Spectres Legion.. you'd think they'd be aware of goings on out here like this, especially if there was supposed to be an Imperial colony here...

Page 113
“A high content of metals was recorded, along with an apparent abundance of aquatic life forms. Ministorium adjuncts to this report indicate that the planet was classed as suitable for agricultural exploitation. A commerce flotilla was apparently dispatched, but records past this point were lost during the 9th Black Crusade.”
"commerce flotilla" sent to colonize and take advantage of the natural resoures. The 9th Black Crusade was launched somewhere in the middle of the 38th Millenium as I recall it mentioned.

Page 114
Now the patches of colour in Dynikas V’s oceans were dead and hollow, flat expanses of white and grey instead of the riot of reds and oranges on the original scan.
“This is a more recent long-range scan. Zellik sealed this datum and prevented its upload to the Mechanicus codex-network.”

“It looks dead,” said Ajir. “If it was teeming with enough fish for the explorators to set up a farming colony there, then what happened to it?”

“No radiological returns, no signs of planetary bombardment,” noted Kayne.

“Bio-weapon,” suggested Puluo.

...
"It’s the remains of a later destructive event. Zellik’s hypothesis is that it is the residue of a battle between the notably territorial Cythor Fiends and a tyranid hive fleet splinter.”
...
“It would explain the ravaging of the planet’s ecosystem. And the silence from the explorator flotilla.”
Probably a splinter fleet of some kind.. they seem to reach deeply inot the Imperium by this point in time. Note they compare the attack of a hive fleet turning it into a "dead world" with planetary bombardment (or a bio weapon) - indicating planteary bombardment can execute mass extinction events.

Note that they refer to the previously mentioned commerce flotilla as a "explorator flotilla" as well. And that the explorators tried setting up a farming colony. Also notice the mention of the Mechanicus "Codex network" into which data would be uploaded (presumably by astrotelepathy or whatever AdMech analogue there is.) This may be a modern reference to the transmat link/psychic servitors connecting all the Forge Worlds (supposedly.)

Page 115
"Hive ships often eject spores towards the nearest planetary atmosphere at the moment of their destruction."
Last gasp of defiance and probably an attmept to rebuild or restore themselves despite defeat.

Page 117
"Magos Zellik will survive. The medicae serfs managed to keep him alive after your… interview.”

“Some might consider that a waste of effort and good narthecia.”
...
“We do not shrink from the difficult choices, brother. That is why we were
made. To do the things that mortal men cannot, to transcend what others might see as the lines of morality, in the name of a larger power.”

“Indeed? It is said we Blood Angels are the most noble of the Adeptus Astartes. But to torture a man to within an inch of his life, even a criminal… Is there nobility in that, sir?”

“You think I could have found another way, is that it? Perhaps you feel I did not give all due respect to the esteemed Magos, despite his dalliance with Chaos!”

“Zellik is no servant of the Dark Gods, we both know that. For all his genius, his greed and his conceit blind him to the reality of his misdemeanours. He believes he is loyal to Mars and Terra with every fibre of his being, even as he lies to them to swell his coffers.”
Ceris and Rafen discuss his interrogation of Zellik. Rafen argues he did what he had to do to fufill his mission and would do it again, although he accuses Ceris of implying (wrongly) that he is like the Flesh Tearers. Ceris returns by denying this, but saying that Rafen may be deceiving himself and is crossing lines, and may have to cross yet more lines. It's an interesting scene, from the viewpoint of where the line between nobility and brutality lay, especially in context the beginning of Red Fury when Rafen met the Flesh Tearers. On the other hand, there's also the whole "how arrogant are the Blood Angels" viewpoint, especially form the Flesh Tearer POV. Rafen seems to be torn between these two different POVs and having difficulty balancing them.

Ceris' attitude towards Zellik is also interesting - he's willing to cut the guy some slack despite his crimes (which he treats as minor) because he views him as an essentially loyal servant of the Imperium, just skewed in his views perhaps.

Page 119-120
A vast, curved kite shield of metals forged by longforgotten science, the mirror told lies to the void around it, hiding its truth behind layers of energyshunt circuitry, malleable lakes of superfluid surfactants and long, arching ribs of impossibly thin metals.

The mirror told the void that nothing was here. It lied by drawing in the wavelengths of visible and invisible energies all about, computed them and gently projected back returns that even the most advanced suites of scrying gear would read as little more than a few stray molecules of free hydrogen.

At its thickest point it was barely the width of a human hair, and yet it could withstand a lascannon hit if one were set towards it. The mirror was another of Zellik’s great and secret treasures, a device that had enabled him many times to move the Archeohort’s great mass by stealth....
More interesting technical tidbits, a stealth device known as a "mirror field" with "energy shunt" circuitry and fancy exotic materials that can hide the craft from any detection, as well as absorb a lascannon hit (preusmably thermal rather than mechanical.) Probably lost tech by the way they describe it, but an interesting application of stealth tech nonetheless.

Page 122
The display buzzed and displayed a flickering rune-prayer before reforming into a grainy realtime image of Dynikas V. Indicator overlays projected on to lenses swung around into position. Hot lines of red appeared, dots of varying size and lividity scattering themselves over the planet’s dayside.

“Thermal blooms, lords,” explained Beslian. “Trace patterns of waste gases ejected into the air through bio-processes. Feeding, and the decay of corpses, I would warrant.”

“I thought this planet was dead,” growled Sove, another of Noxx’s Space Marines.

“It is,” said Mohl. “What we are seeing is evidence of xenos, brother. Tyranids, marooned on this world, living off each other after their hive was destroyed.”
"realtime" suggests they are within a light second of the planet, and in any case we get an idea of their organic/bio scanning abilitiesf rom orbit.

Page 122-123
“Is it not the tyranid way to gut a living world, then build
new bio-ships and move on to the next? If Dynikas V is bereft of all native life, then why are these monstrosities still here?”
...
"But this behaviour is not uncommon. It has been seen before, when a nest is denied the governance of one of their command organisms.”
...
“I hypothesise that there is no such beast on the planet below. As such, the
extant tyranid warrior-organisms resident there revert back to their base natures. Killing and reproducing. Given a dozen generations, if this new ecosystem was not interfered with, it would probably eat itself into extinction.”
Discussion of Tyranid practices, including what happens if they lose all thier contact with the Hive Mind. Also they will exhaust the biological resources of this planet within "a dozen generations" (200-300 years or so?) which gives you an idea of how insanely fast Tyranid biology and metabolism work.

It also gives us a rough idea of the sort of endurance a hive fleet (a small one at least) might expect from the biomass and other resources of a habitable planet (their usage rate, that is). Further, given that we know the timeframe of this book (around the time of the 13th Black Crusade given the previous novels) and knowing when the 'Nids first showed up, they couldn't have been on this planet more than a few centuries already, so its a fairly precise limit.

As a rule I'd expect a hive fleet to last decades or perhaps even years (for a large, millions-strong hive fleet if this was a small fleet or splinter fleet) without another planet consumed or the resources used for nothing else (replenishing troops, perhaps.) and longer if they use hibernation.

Page 123
He pointed at a regular cluster of heat signatures on a crescent-shaped atoll in the southern hemisphere. “That pattern is too coherent for an organic form.”

“Good eye, my lord,” said Beslian. He flipped another lens over the screen and turned it with his servo-arm. “You are quite correct to suspect this locale. Solar albedo returns correlate with manufactured materials down there. Ferrocrete and metal alloys.”
the sensors can differentiate between organic and artificial constructs.

Page 124
“Those look like embedded lance batteries, there and there,” he noted.

“Heavy gauge. Capable of reaching low orbit, I’d warrant.”

“Correct. I have determined that those weapons were among the items my former master traded in this quadrant. They are the secondary line of defence,"
"heavy gauge" embedded lance batteries. Must be somewhat prefaf or mobile if they can be sold and set up in a relatively short period of time. Also note that Zellik was a weapons dealer.

Page 124-125
“Gunskulls.”

There were orbs floating in the dark, kilometres up over the surface of Dynikas V, each of them clustered with engine nozzles and arrow-tipped spines. Even in the indistinct imagery taken in passing by the Archeohort’s watch-scopes, the screaming mouths worked into their surfaces were clearly visible, as were the complex strings of text in forbidden tongues carved into the metal.

Some of them dragged lines of chain with them, others were dressed with fans of solar panelling. No two were alike, but every one of them had a face. Ajir had once heard that the sculpted iron was modelled upon the aspects of certain champions of the Chaos Gods, as some form of veneration.

He could see where superheavy laser cannons and the tips of melta torpedoes protruded from gaping, crack-toothed maws and blank eye sockets. Each one of these killer satellites had at its heart the flesh of a crippled madman, wired in and entombed in a sheath of steel, never sleeping, forever awake and desperate to unleash death upon the enemies of the Ruinous Powers. There were hundreds of them, all with their backs to the planet and cannons aimed outward, hundreds of frozen, howling faces and screaming skulls.
"gunskulls" - Chaos tech defense platforms, armed with melta torpedoes and "superheavy laser cannons".. and there are hundreds of them.

Page 125
“The satellites are intermediate range weapons, but more than capable of
matching the guns of two strike cruisers. Anything less than a passing engagement would go in the favour of the defenders.”
hundreds of gunskulls outgun two strike cruisers. This suggests that together they have fewer guns than the gunskulls together.

Page 125
“At best, you might be able to close to heavy weapons range and release an orbital bombardment upon Bile’s facility. And even then, as the gunskulls swarmed your ships, you would not live to tell of it. Not to mention that it is highly likely that the traitor has hardened his base to well beyond—”
Wha tkind of orbital bombardment, we don't know, but later commentary hints it might be Exterminatus level (or at least, slagging the island, if not both) within a very short period of time (Before the gunskulls destroy them.)

Page 126
"I would respectfully suggest you call in reinforcements from your Chapter starfleet, brother-sergeant. A massed force of ships could obliterate Dynikas V with a sustained cyclonic torpedo barrage and suffer only a few losses in return.”

Sove snorted, his scarred face wrinkling. “It could take weeks to gather more ships.”

“The cousin is right,” Ajir threw the Flesh Tearer a nod.
The Flesh Tearers earlier noted that their fleet was small and detaching ships was difficult (Detaching the Gabriel was a big deal to the Flesh Tearers.) and given the context of Ajir confirming Sove's comments, we're probably talking about Blood Angel ships from Baal. 10-20K LY in under a month is about 170,000-350,000c or so, and quite probably faster than that (since I'm assuming time to prepare and deploy is negligible, among other things.

PAge 127
“Teleporters won’t work. There are wards in place to prevent their operation.” He tapped his temple.

“I see them.”
Ceris noticing teleport wards. Again seems to suggest teleportation is warp based despite all the matter transformation stuff.

Page 127
At first glance, it resembled a bomb, but larger than any Rafen had ever seen, greater even than the huge Atlas-class weapons deployed by the Imperial Navy against hardened ground targets.
Mention of the megaton Atlas class bombs from the first duology. The omnibus also mentions them as anti-Titan weapons, and I've heard even fighters can be modified to carry one.

Page 128-129
“My lords, allow me to present to you the Neimos. According to the dedication plaque within, it was built during the Great Crusade for the service of the Imperial Army."
...
"The Neimos is a combat submersible, designed for deployment on ocean worlds."
...

“The hull of the Neimos is constructed from a spun sentanium-ceramite mix. It is a solid piece, extremely durable and flexible. In addition, there are extra layers of ablative armour sheathing its length. While the craft was built for a crew of common sailors, I believe it can be quickly refitted to operate with a handful of Astartes and a contingent of servitors.”
...
“The Neimos is orbit descent-capable, lord,” Mohl replied. “Shunt-field systems and armour will protect it from the trauma of atmospheric interface. Ballute arrays will slow the fall.”
...
“Craft of this class have been deployed in combat many times. The survival rate is not exemplary, however.”
40K during the Crusade era had a submarine you could drop from orbit as an aquatic assault ship. Note again the shunt-field systems (alongside with the armour, protecting against atmospheric reentry - the same tech used in the mirror field.)

Page 131
“Shipmasters,” he was saying. “You know your orders. You have five solar days. If we fail in our mission, or if contact is not made using the correct cipher protocols, execute a maximum strike bombardment of the fortress.

By the command of our Chapter Masters, you are to do whatever is required to turn that island into slag… To the forfeiture of your vessels and crews, and beyond."
Both ships executing a "maximum bombardment" to turn the island into slag. Although we don't know what the bombardment entails exactly, and details we learn later ar ea bit sketchy (later they imply destroying the whole world, for example, but the method varies from lances mentioned in Legends of the Space Marines in Tarikus' sshort story to "tubes" which could mean ordnance or projectiles, and then there's cyclonic bombardment. It could even be a combination of the above.

Page 133
Immediately he began a chattering hymnal of harsh binary code...
...
“What was that noise?” said Rafen.
“Meme code,” said Mohl, with a grimace. “Clogs the mental functions of those who absorb it.”
Zellik tries this (on Beslian I think.) I dont know if it's meant ot work on everyone or just Coggies.

Page 135
Rafen could only imagine the torrent of machine code filtering into the warrior’s mind through the cables, the flood of binary babble from hundreds of chattering functionaries and cogitators.
Techmarine simultaneously coping with info flow from hundreds of sources at once.

Page 136-137
The satellites turned on manoeuvring thrusters, puffs of gas orienting them towards the intruder, even as quick sensor engines examined the silhouette of the vessel. They compared it to ships of all known types within their knowledge banks...
...
The whole process took only fractions of a second, and garbled machine speech back and forth via low-power laser beams swiftly led to a consensus. The web of gunskulls sent a vox code down through the turbulent, wind-swept atmosphere of Dynikas V....
Gunskulls observe and scan/analyze Archeohort in a fraction of a second, and use low powered lasers to communicate between themselves and surface. Seems like rahter complex coordination for a defnese system (especially given its origins and the fact it doesnt seem super-rare.)

PAge 137
Any ship intending to slow into a parking orbit over the ocean world would have required a scheme of careful thrust-gravity-mass formulae to avoid overshooting or unwarranted atmospheric interface. The Archeohort reached the point of transition and did not lose pace; if anything, with the pull of Dynikas V now upon it, the massive Mechanicus construct was accelerating.
This would suggest the Archeohort isn't accelerating very fast (single or double digit gees tops) and probably not a very high velocity (a few tens of km/s perhaps.. not more than a few hundred I'm pretty sure)

Page 137
...the first querulous, frightened messages began to trickle in to the command centre’s vox buffer from the minor adepts and more sentient of the ship’s servitors.
Archeohort's crew... some servitors can feel emotion of some kind it seems.Then again the line between "servitor" and "cyborg" seems a rather thin one most of the time anyhow. I mean a servitor is basically a zombie cyborg...

page 140
His implanted antennae—the ones deep in his muscle tissue and bone marrow, the ones the clumsy Astartes had not discovered and excised—picked up the short-range radio wave speech bursts between the minor servitors..
Sub-dermal antennae for radio transmissions. Vox seems to encompass any possible EM (or EM-like) signal, since both radio and lasers seem to be referred to in the novel as vox transmissions (unless vox is distinct and separate and both Gunksulls and Zellik have vox receptors in addition to laser signals for the gunskulls and radio for Zellik.)

Page 144
..the cannon batteries atop its derricks and ringing its rail-nets aiming
out in twenty different directions, seeking targets on the surface and amid the swarm of gunskulls.

But before it reached that point, there was a gauntlet of lances and missiles to run, a hard rain of particle beams, radiation and guided warheads. Nothing short of a battle-barge would have been able to weather such concentrated fire and survive...
Archeohort has at least 20 main guns. Gunskulls open fire with "particle beams, radiation and guided warheads" the last one is probably the torpedoes or missiles. Particle beams - no idea. Particle beams in true or plasma weapons, or perhaps both. "radiation" I suspect refers to the laser cannons, but both are referred to as "lances" as well.

Implies as well that a battle barge (or any battleship scale vessel) woudl have a similar magnitude of firepower (hundreds of guns, etc.)

page 144-145
Missile hits grew into spheres of flame expanding out to consume the brass limbs of the
construct..
...
Cannons howled in the darkness...
...
..silent payloads smashing gunskulls to fragments; but there were so many more of the satellites, and now they were jetting in from other orbits..
"spheres of flame" would tend to suggest we're not dealign with just radiation per se, but I suppose it might be hyperbole and be nuclear fireballs or something. Or maybe they're just plasma warheads. I mean its not like they can literally eat anything...

Also Archeohort defnese guns seem to rely on physical impacts to do damage, rather than warheads.

Page 145
...laser fire threaded across the void. Where it touched the hull of the Mechanicus construct, force field envelopes buckled and faded, allowing raking hits to cleave through armour and into the decks below.
Archeohort uses hull-level force field defenses to reinforce armor, it would seem. Probably akin to the powrefield defenses sometimes used to augment walls or hulls (Nightbringer, Battlefleet Koronus, etc.)

Page 148
The Blood Angel had briefly glimpsed a schematic of the Neimos, and knew that the bridge was one of a few compartments inside the submersible mounted on shock-resistant mechanisms, enveloped with arcane energy-shunt technology that would allow the crew to survive impacts that would otherwise turn a body into wet paste. The system was not powerful enough to encompass the whole of the craft, however.
Description of the shock-protection mechanisms and "energy shunt tecnology" - seems like the energy shunt stuff is forcefield tech (not encompassing the whole craft) that combines acceleration compensation with energy absorption/handling systems that can handle thermal (in the case of the mirror shield) or kinetic (in the case of the Neimos.) Unless this is lost tech (which it may, or may not be.) this may serve as another example of possible "hull enhancing" defensive measures. Possibly related to or a variation on powerfield tech, although it does not mean every ship automatically has it.

Page 151
This day’s events had revealed a truth to him.
Zellik reflecting on the events that have happened.. I'm guessing this means that less than a day has passed since meeting the Astartes and going to Dynikas V (Both for battle and FTL transit.)

Page 152
The bolter was heavier than he expected, and the weight of it was strangely balanced. He managed to drag it up into some pretence of a firing stance...
...
Zellik could hardly hold on to it..
Zellik has trouble lifting and aiming an Astartes bolter, reinforcing the size difference between normal and marine weapons. It also reinforces the idea of just how much more stronger a normal human is over a marine, one handed even.

Page 152-153
..then there was a massive, thunderous detonation of noise and light, and
suddenly the tech-priest was on the deck several metres away...
...
...Zellik looked back along the quaking deck plates and found Mohl’s body lying at an angle. Where the head had been, there was now a red ruin that
was part of a jawbone...
...
Had his body not been so greatly improved and reinforced by the works of the Magos, he would never have been able to hold the great gun, much less actually fire it; even so, the recoil of the act had caused him great pain.
Recoil of Astartes bolter knocks Zellik back, suggesting considerable recoil. Assuming he only gets knockd back at 20-50 cm/s and he weighs 70 kg, we are talking about 14-35 kg*m/s recoil momentum, which would put it on the scale of a very very high end full powered round and a heavy sniper rifle/AMR round, which seems likely given the effects. Remember that the bolter itself must mass a good 10-20 kg too, and I'd figure it would suffer at least 1-2 m/s of recoil velocity.

Bolt round blows the TEchmarine's head off at close range, which is interesting given Astartes bulk (at least 2x that of a normal human), Astartes durability, and a Techmarine's probable implants. and quite possibly a helmet. Again something approaching a BMR (or similar high powered rifle round) seems likely, and in these novels bolters are all kinetic projectiles rather than explosive warheads.

Page 154
The descent racks were arranged along the spinal corridor of the Neimos, resting on hydraulic rams and pressure cradles that would absorb the shock of a fall from orbit.
...
..the tubes flexing and chugging as they pumped shock-absorbing bio-gels into the racks. The semi-solid matter would dampen the impact effects still further; the Space Marines already cocooned inside the ceramite and plasteel cowls of their power armour, would know nothing until the drop cycle completed itself.
The crew protection measures in the ship. I dont know why they use this rather than suspensors or grav tech (witness later) but it may be due to complexity or expendability. I mean the thing is pretty damn huge (Bigger than a fighter I'd gather) so I dont see any reason why it couldn't mount AG and AG tech has always been fairly expendable.

PAge 157-158
At first, incredible heat buffeted the bullet-prow of the vessel, in seconds burning through the sheaths of lamellar armour protecting the leading edges. Beneath, energy-siphon technology invented twenty thousand years ago, its functioning and nature lost to time, worked to bleed off the intense glow. It fed on the friction, suckling on the heat to power itself, turning the energy back against its origins.
...
Sensor returns tripped switches in the vessel’s control systems, causing stubby dual-function winglets to emerge from the hull.
...
At the same time, great grey-blue cones of untearable synthsilk
billowed from the aft of the Neimos, filling quickly with a mix of spent gases from the engine core and the local atmosphere. The wide ballutes stiffened and gave the ship a moment’s stability.
...
..Neimos veered into a series of slow turns, the fins bending air this way and that, bleeding off the terminal velocity of descent..
...
The churning ocean waters rose and fell beneath a sky cut by streaks of fire, and from that flame-lit darkness the Neimos came like the hammer of a war god. Flicker-fast gravity displacement fields, fed on the energy converted from the heat of atmospheric interface, haloed the submersible as it touched the wave tops. An invisible bowl of force ballooned outwards, displacing kinetic power, cutting a channel into the murky sea.

The vessel howled as it passed through a storm of dynamic stress more powerful than anything it had experienced so far, and the back-shock discharged a sharp thermal flashover, oily water boiling instantly into a greasy fog of superheated steam.

All this happened in seconds..
Neimos taking reentry. Note the "energy-siphon" technology.. might be related to or the same as the shunt technology mentioned before. If so, then it is either lost tech (they don't have it anymore) or they have it and don't understand it and can only blindly replicate it (how they do that I have on fucking clue.) In any case its kind of interesting in that it suggests it is using part of the energy it absorbs to help protect the ship, which offers yet another insight into potential 40K defensive systems.

Now note the gravity fields (no AG or inertial damping, but they have repulsors.)

Page 159
Had the Neimos been manned by a human crew, he might have felt the mists of their anxieties, but the mind-wiped servitors working the vessel’s systems had no such emotions to give.

Dimly, he sensed the deaths of two of them...
Ceris, the Librarian, can't quite detect servitors due to their nature.

Page 163
Tethered by a long cable, a scrying pod sheathed in low-visibility, detection-resistant materials was released from a cowling in the dorsal tower.
Stealthy materials used to protect a spying device deploed from the Neimos.

Page 164-165
"The Standard Template Pattern of this barge is known to me. It is a Kappa- Rho-Six ocean transit freighter, Lapidas pattern.”
...
“Records indicate that several ocean-going craft were deployed with the explorator fleet sent to set up an agri-works on this planet."
[/quote]

There is an STC design for everything, including oceangoing vessels. I bet there are STC Standard eating utensils and dishes too. Such craft seem to be common amongst explorator and similiar fleets. And like most STC they are highly adaptable - Refitted weapons emplacements for example. And like all human tech it carries that blocky, "slab sided" appearance.
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Part 3 and I'm done with the Blood Angels. For now.


Page 166-167
“The antenna?”

Ceris nodded. “Perhaps a psionic dampener. When I reach out to sense the minds of the beings aboard those craft, there is nothing but a wall of white noise.”
...
“The sensor pod has been sampling the atmosphere of the planet to determine hazard protocols.” He held up a fan of printed parchment. “These readings suggest a large amount of a particular tyranid pheromonal deposit in the air. Several parts per million, far more than I would expect.”

“Spores?” Rafen’s lip curled as he said the word. He had witnessed the work of the xenos spores on the flesh of men, and been disgusted by their loathsome virulence.
Psionic dampers (Sjhields) and the spying pod has olfactory sensors to detect tyranid pheremones. RAfen seems to be thinking of these as being the microscopically invasive biowarfare "fuck up the enemy" type of spore.

Page 167
...in tyranid hives, just as in those of common communal insect life, information was passed via pheromone scent-markers. Thus, something that was toxic would be marked as not-food, something to be denatured and rendered in conversion pools would be marked as consumable, and should a hive member die, their corpses would secrete a pheromone that labelled them as dead, attracting workers to recover and recycle their biomatter.

Confronted by such scent-markers, the warrior creatures would simply ignore something their primitive brains considered to be dead, as long as it remained inert and did nothing to confuse that understanding. The subterfuge would never work on higher-order tyranids, those capable of ntelligent reasoning approaching that of a human being—but on Dynikas V, there was no apparent evidence of high-level clades such as norn queens or hive tyrants; only warrior forms adapted to the planet’s ocean environment.
We learn a bit more about how Tyranids work, and communicate. Not really surprising, as other troops like Lictors are known to do this as well. It's use is limited, since only the dumb animal types would fall for it. The pheremones are another masking system, basically.. they mark the craft of Bile's forces as something to ignore.

Page 169
...they felt their way through the oceans of Dynikas V through networks of electroreceptor nerves in their bony skulls and feeler barbels...
...
They tasted and smelled their way through the thick waters, riding
on sonic vibrations that showed landscapes of sound and pitch.
...
Once, when their hive had first deposited its spoor upon this world, they had been something close to the genus of tyranid that humans called a lictor; but a rapacious evolutionary cycle and a physiology based on an infinitely malleable octo-helix DNA had tailored them to fit the new environment where they found themselves.
..The returns from their sonic barks were garbled and confusing..
Ocean adapted Lictors. Indication of the adaptability and virulence of Tyranid life forms, even outside the Hive Mind. Also small wonder they consume themselves so rapidly. Note these forms have adapted sonar and some sort of electrical/eM based underwater detection.

PAge 174
Where the weapon struck the beast, the psyker
projected a bolt of telepathic power through the brief instant of contact..
Ceris' force weapon, a mace. Telepathic rather than physicla (energy or TK) attack enhancement. I imagine this suggests the "amplifier" or added effect of a force weapon can vary depending on the psyker wielding it and/or possibly construction.

Page 179
..although like some in the service of the Adeptus Mechanicus, Beslian was one of those who secretly believed that humans had actually evolved on Mars first, and cast off to her neighbour planet before the rise of the Emperor, and not as some insisted, the other way around.
Some of the AdMech believe mankind originated from Mars.

Page 191
Generations back down the line of its rapacious evolution, its ancestor-genotypes had torn their way through the life of Dynikas V’s seas and in the process, absorbed what they consumed to emulate and ultimately exterminate it. Trace elements of heavy metals in the waters were expressed in the dull matt sheen of the creature’s natural armour, in the tusks surrounding its oval mouth, and the rings of fangs surrounding every sucker along the manus of its tentacular clubs.
Tyranid descended creature even bigger than the lictor analogues.. its body has elements of metal (or rather "heavy metals") incorporated into its body armor - eg much like the rocky/silicate nature in other sources, Tyranid body armor is not just chitin or bone.

Page 192
It had consumed the remains of the selachian-form lictors in a single motion, extending wide to draw in the corpses and strain them through grids of metallic baleen. Brain matter was siphoned away to a secondary stomach lined with omophageacic receptor cells and denatured. Chains of ribonucleic acid broke down as memory elements were soaked into the creature’s own biosystems.

The tyranid drew on the remnants of sensory input and pheromone recall from the dead, reassembling what it could. Through the eyes of corpses, it experienced their killings and some sense of the meat-life they had tried to devour.


Again "metallic" structures to the Tyranid skeleton. And they also have lictor-like (or Astartes like) ability to absorb information from consumed biomatter.

Page 195
Gast applied a dermal stapler and a vac-tube of morphic glue to the incision in Beslian’s side, and began to close him up.
healing technologies. Whether this is rom Astartes stores or the stores of the ship, I don't know.

Page 199
The mindless servitors could barely be described as human. For the most part they were donestock, gene-formed replicae spawned in growth tanks beneath the mountains of Mars, or else the bodies of felons and heretics given over to the Cult Mechanicus for repurposing. Wired with implants, bionics, data-spools and tool pods, whatever scraps of a persona might exist in them were ruthlessly expunged by stringent rituals of conditioning. Some were programmed for combat operations, some for computing tasks in tandem with cogitators, but the helots aboard the Neimos were not nearly so advanced. They were technomats, capable of performing set regimens of duties and little else. They had no sentience, no more will of their own than a boltgun or an auspex.
Servitors described in terms of creation (clones or other living beings) as well as uses and cpaabilities. also indicates there are various kinds of servitors, with varying degrees of complexity, capability, and even sentience. The Neimos ones were low order. I gather "technomat" is naother word for a monotask servitor, whereas combat servitors or the ones for computation are higher order (more complex and relatively more versatile.)

Page 202
“A trigger word,” said Puluo. “Hypnogoge assassins use the same technique to activate a
servile.”
a useful trick. Some sort of implanted memory or conditioning.

Page 203
“This object was buried in the base of the medicae servitor’s cerebellum,” Gast explained, “and the wires you see emerging from it were laced into elements of the helot’s organic brain.”
Eigen grimaced at the gemstone. “A control device?”
Rafen nodded. “Or something of the like.”
“We know the Inquisition suspected Zellik of trading in alien materials."
Further confirmation, if we needed it of alien tech. I wonder if its eldar. either way interesting how they can integrate it with human tech. I guess 40K tech might be as versatile/adaptable as other universes technology in some ways :P

Page 205-206
"He splintered his mind and spread it out among them, parsed like the chapters of a book.” He paused, thinking. “Perhaps, with enough intact elements, he might have been able to reconstitute his psyche at a later time… and cheat death.”
...
“He did this as a desperate act. There are only fragments of him
left, perhaps enough to draw together briefly, but not enough to fully manifest.”
...
“There’s a core of intent, out in the web of connections between the implants.
That’s the strongest aspect of his persona. If we can isolate it, kill the servitor hosting that fragment of him…”
What the little implanted gems above did for Zellik.. again the parallels betwene this and Eldar waystones is hard to miss.

Page 207
Steely coils tightening, the predator-form cemented its embrace of the submersible, acidic
venom gels secreting from its body where metallic tusks snapped at the curved hull.
Metallic tusks (again metal used in 'Nid adapted bodies) as well as the acidic/venom secrtions we know some 'Nids can also employ.

Page 210
“The Neimos is armed with lascannon turrets,” ventured Eigen. “Mohl mentioned it before…”
He swallowed and went on. “Blue-green frequency lasers, tuned for use underwater.”
I actually believe this is based on RL technology, which I thik the US navy has worked on, so its technically possible, although I dont think it's been weaponized (only for targeting purposes) and even if not the range would probably be ludicrously short.

Either way, its a further example of laser weapons that can work underweater (along with Eye of Terror and Ghostmaker.)

Page 212
Rafen was walking from man to man, checking the joints of their wargear. “Make certain the closures of your armour are locked tight,” he said. “A single leak out there will be like a knifepoint to your flesh. You may lose a limb before you can stem the flow.”

Eigen was in a crouch, busying himself with his combat helmet. He ran a layer of sealant around the ring of his gorget. “We’ll need to stay on internal atmosphere,” he noted. “The waters outside are too noxious for our multi-lung implants to draw oxygen from.”
Space marine armor, properly sealed, seems protected against the depths and pressures the Neimos is operating at. Also multi-lungs have limits in their ability to extract oxygen from an enviroment.

Page 213
His bolter was a Godwyn-pattern variant, the standard iteration of the gun found in the hands of thousands of Space Marines across the galaxy. That said, each warrior’s weapon was unique in its own small ways. Many of them were centuries old, and some had been passed down from Astartes to Astartes over the life of a Chapter.
....
He checked the ammunition loads in the sickle magazine; the mass-reactive rounds were less a bullet, more a miniature rocket, and each one contained within its casing a measure of oxygenated igniter compound. Thus, even in stark vacuum or, as now, in a fluid environment, the boltgun could still deliver its lethal load.
Ajir's boltgun and its ammo. Notable for Boltguns being variable in design in "small ways" - which I presume includes features as well as appearance. The ammo is pretty standard fluff "self propelled rocket", meaning it has its own oxidizer and can be fired in space or underwater. In fact they seem to work rather well underwater.

Page 214
“Hull-breakers. Enough here for us to make chum out of that
monster.”

Ajir reached in and took one of the charges; they were a modified version of the more typicalkrak grenades, shape d detonators designed to be applied directly to the hull of an enemy ship.
Krak grenade variant. I presume meant for breaching hulls in ship boarding operations.

Page 217-218
Puluo’s grip tightened on his trigger-bar and he fired a three-round burst from the hip. The gun’s languid recoil pressed him into the current...
...
Two out of three of the shots missed the mark, but the third hit hard..
...
He fired as he went, and first blood was earned as the
flexing feeler tore apart along its length.
3 round burst froma heavy bolter.. accuracy reduced underwater, but round still tears things apart nicely.

Page 219
...the sergeant raised his plasma gun and fired it; for a brief moment the
area around the warriors was illuminated with a stark, hard glow that threw jumping shadows. A streak of burning white plasmatic matter lanced through the water, boiling a channel towards its target, and for a split-second Rafen vanished in a shroud of churning froth as the gun’s heat displacement backwashed across him.

Another tentacle shrank away, the tip withered and molten....
Rafen's plasma gun underwtaer. It too can fire and have the bolt stay coherent for some range. Hard to measure the melting, but if the beam is, say.. 5 cm diameter (larger than a las-pulse) and fires at least 2-3 metres through water, it boils (if not vaporizes) 5-6 kg of water at least. If the water is room temp (300K) we can figure around 300 kj per kg. call it 1.5-1.8 MJ.

Obviously the range could be greater, and its possible the diameter is less. If we assume (say) 10 metres but a 2 cm diameter beam (slightly narrower than a las weapon, but we know the collimation is variable and it makes sense Rafen would focus as much as possible in this caes) its 3 kg.. which is around 900 kj. This is of course, only the energy to pass trhough the water. The bolt still has enough to melt the Kraken (which has a partly metallic carapace, at that.)

Page 219
In the middle of the Neimos, sheathed with far greater protection than any other section of the vessel, the submersible’s heart and soul lurked within a massive armoured sphere.
...
A fusion reactor; behind those plates of titanium and hyper-dense alloy, an ember of blazing fire churned. It was an infant star, shackled there to give power to the Neimos’ drives and internal systems.
Powerplant is at the center of the ship, and the most heavily protected compartment. A fusion reactor.

Page 226
...Puluo firing a burst of heavy bolts into a questing serpent-limb that flicked up behind them. The warrior’s shots were true—he was getting the range now, as were they all—and the limb blew apart in a sphere of concussion.
Heavy bolter fire blowing another limb apart.

Page 227
Barbs ripped into ceramite and punctured layers of plasteel and flexmetals.
Flesh tearer power armor composition.

Page 232
The weapon discharged with a thundering gurgle of superheated fluids; the seawater around the muzzle was instantly turned into fat orbs of gas as the plasma stream speared out and blinded the kraken’s eye.

A hot backwash of xenos blood and boiling liquid flooded over Rafen..
Rafen's plasma gun again. Assuming a 10x10x10 cm sphere of water was gassified that might be a couple MJ - treat it as a very rough OOM calc.

Page 233
A tentacle as thick as a Thunderhawk hull struck Rafen on the backswing as
the kraken retreated.
If we knew how thick the tentacle was we might know a Thunderhawk's hull thickness (or vice versa.) Might make it worth knowing how powerful those heavy bolter rounds are too :P

Page 235
His body was feverish with heat, the outward manifestation of his enhanced Astartes physiology as it worked to repair him. Bones were knitting, fluids clotting and wounds drawing closed all over his body...
Rafen's self-healing mechanisms seem to cause a considerable temperature rise, which makes sense. figure there are some thermodynamic and fuel related limits (EG if starving it won't work too well.)

Page 236
The battle armour’s simple machine-spirit reacting, trying to keep him alive. The icy cold at his back from the broken cryo-pods of the microfusion reactor.
Microfusion reactor power source for armor.

Page 237
..in moments webber guns had been deployed, projecting nets of sticky matter out into the sea.
...
The mesh of cultured biofibres wrapped around the limbs of their target and stiffened; immediately the retractor mechanisms inside the webbers chugged into life...
Webbers seem to use some sort of semi-organic stuff to catch things.

Page 239
.and even then he killed two more, turning them to screaming torches
before the plasma gun could be struck from his grip.
Assuming the upper torsos torched 30-40 cm diameter and clothed (125 j/cm^2) - 100-200 kj

Page 246
Rafen heard the grinding of gears, and to his dismay he watched a pair of sentry cannons extrude from the open tops of the pillars.
...
In the next moment the cannons tracked, locked and fired. A brief storm of energy shrieked across the beach and tore the runner—the Astartes—apart. A slick of bloody mist and glass-fused sand were all that was left behind.
Laser equipped sentry autocannons (two of them) blow apart an Astartes. Presumably steam explosion givne the "glass fused" sand. Assume equal to at least several grenades total.

page 247
He could only see two of them, watching indolently from an arched gallery, but they were Astartes-tall and broad with it, men seemingly cut from planes of meat like those in a butcher’s shop window.
Bile's New Men. Roughly the size and capability of Space Marines.

Page 251
Hundreds of uniform cargo containers lay in rows along the slope, the standard rectangular boxes of iron like those used on thousands of starships.
Cargo containers.

Page 252
..conscious of the heavy shapes of bat-like things that circled through
the air below the lip of the crater...
...
but he could see the shapes of heavy lascannons dangling from their claws.
Aerial scouts with lascannon.

Page 254
...a heavy hatch leading into one of the cargo containers. A diamond window cut into the door showed the scene within; Rafen recognised the yellowish cast of armourglass. The material was technology from the Dark Ages, harder than steel, clear from the obverse side but opaque from the reverse. A dozen strikes from bolt shells would be needed to shatter it.
Considering Bile is reduced to scavenging and adapting technology far from any sort of industrial base, I doubt this is ultra rare lost tech. Hell this is on one of those "standard" cargo containers mentioned above, it can't be especially rare.

Page 255
“I think three years. Perhaps five. The passage of time here is difficult to reckon.”
Tarikus claims to have been here three to five years.

Page 256-257
He lay sprawled against a canted platform, the humming murmur of a g-field generator whirring behind him.
...
...but like Rafen he too was pressed fast against a gravity frame, the power of a hundred times Terra-standard g-forces holding him like a butterfly pinned to a board.
Again Bile must not be using ultra rare/lost tech, since he's been scavenging plenty of stuff to use on the base. Whether he found it here or traded for it from the Magos, we dont know. It's interesting they need to put a hundred-gee force down to hold the Marine in place, its suggestive perhaps of the level of force a Marine can endure or needs to be immobilized... but at the same time he isn't even remotely harmed (think of the gee forces humans pull in acceleration and what it does to the body.) This suggests it behaves a bit like an inertial damper/acceleration compensator device, which not only tells us suhc things do exist, but gives us an idea of the magnitude of the forces it can endure. Hell, this thing probably (in theory) could be fitted to some of the bigger attack craft (like starhawks or gun cutters) since it seems fairly compact.

page 262-263
“I was captured in the void. A medicae cutter was taking me back to my Chapter’s throne world, Gathis… I had been injured fighting the Necrontyr. The ship was snared and obliterated.”
Tarikus again. The short story concerning him in "Legends of the Space Marines" mentions he was heading to Segmentum Tempestus when he was captured by the REd Corsairs and traded to Bile.

Page 263
“The results of more of Bile’s unbound experimentation on human beings. Imagine the inverse of the noble ideals that created we Astartes.
Bile’s monstrosities are psychotics with prowess and strength that rival ours. But they are our antithesis, gene-adapted killers without souls, without conscience or morality…”
Tarikus describes the New Men.

Page 264
“If they catch us speaking to one another, they will flood our cells with rot-bane and scour our lungs.” The chemical gas was potent and could kill a Space Marine in large enough doses.
Rot Bane. Mentioned a few times, and Bile intends to use this stuff on a STrike cruiser.

Page 266
...the injured Flesh Tearer was stripped to the waist, his torso wrapped in diagonal bands of bio-active bandages. An auto-doser clung to his bare right arm like a fat brass tick, slowly administering supplemental anti-venoms to counteract the effect of toxins left in his system by the talons of the tyranid kraken.
More medical gear, again whether this is Astartes issue or normal to the Neimos I don't know.

Page 268-269
"We must contact the Tycho and the Gabriel and advance the kill order. Dynikas V must die."
...
"If this planet is bombarded with cyclonic torpedoes, nothing will survive.”
...
“If the Gabriel and the Tycho closed to deliver their lethal payloads, both vessels
would be ripped apart by the orbital gunskull flotillas and the multiple remote guns dotted across the other island chains. And if we do not, they will bombard the planet anyway.”
...
“The coward thief who stole the sacred blood must die, he
will die. But this cannot be a sanction taken from three hundred kilometres up, with the push of a button from the far end of a torpedo launcher!”
More clarification of Rafen's earlier order to destroy the Island. apparently it was, for all intents and purposes, an Exterminatus strike with cyclonics launched from the torpedo tubes (at 300 km distance, no less.) Getting close to launch would lead to their destruction, suggesting the bombardment would last no more than hours (probably more like minutes or seconds - especially using cyclonics)

Page 271
...Rafen let the catalepsean node implanted in his brain tissue
allow him to skate along the borderline between sleep and wakefulness; the effect was strange, but known to him. Time seemed to pass at accelerated rates, hours compacting into moments.
The Catalepsean sleep funcgion. Seems it involves some sort of time-perception compression too (rather than slowing things down it speeds it up for the Marine) suggesting the effect can go both ways for a Marine (they can slow down or speed up perception)

Page 271
Behind the moon that reflected that light, hidden from detection, were the strike cruisers of his Chapter and their Flesh Tearer allies. In less than twenty solar minutes they could move from concealment and attack this place from high orbit. He wondered if that would be his fate now, to hear the whistling screams of falling warheads and be consumed in a fusion inferno.
20 minutes to approach and deploy its assault. Warheads again suggests we're talking about cylconics or perhaps other munitions, rather than other weapons. Interesting he anticipates a "fusion inferno" - is the the kind of cyclonic warheads? That would suggest it's one of the "brute force" varieties rather than the exotic "technobabble" types.

Page 272
With care, Rafen took himself through the series of mental cues and
disciplines that lulled the catalepsean node back into its dormant state, and retuned his brain activity to normal. At its full function, the node implant allowed an Astartes to eschew normal sleep; the organ could partition a human brain in quadrants, resting some elements of the grey matter while others remained active.
apparently Blood angle brains are quartered rather than halved by the CAtalepsean.. so they can rest 3/4 of their brain at a time. Might actually be more effective that way. It also suggests Space Marine brains are inherently "compartmentalized" in some way allowing them to function (redundancy feature, but also quite possibly a way to preserve parts of themselves.. the way Alaric did in Hammer of Haemons.)

Page 284
..the Chaos champion twitching with pain as the servitor trailing at its heels used bio-wire to stitch the cut sections of its face back together.
"bio wire" used to sew up a nasty cut.

Page 296
Bile sniffed, and dropped the phial back into the tank, as if it meant nothing. “So much value ascribed to something that is, when all is considered, a trivial collection of protein chains, hydrocarbons and base molecular compounds. And yet, in the correct combination, a priceless
thing.”
Sanguinius' blood. From Bile's comments it doesn't seem like there is anything inherently rare, unusual or magical about it in the compounds and elements making it up. THe combination, however, seems to be the key (perhaps it is the combination that allows access to the superhuman nature, like the warp.)

Page 297
"The power of our new gods is so strong that it altered the nature of the Emperor’s Children, the Death Guard, the Night Lords, Word Bearers and all the others—”

“It corrupted you!” Rafen spat. “Poisoned you!”

“If you wish,” continued the scientist. “For what I had conceived, admittedly, you might be correct. I needed to find a more… stable source of genetic material. Something closer to the source.”
Chaos exposure has, unsurprisingly, accelerated gene-seed mutation of the Traitor Legions. Even the unaligned ones like the Night Lords seem to have suffered. Space Marine Gene seed by contrast is far more stable and pure.

Page 299
"I brought back the greatest warrior of all time from thousands of years of death…”

Cheyne gave a breathy sigh. “Great Horus…”

Bile nodded. “I made him anew. Gave life to our warmaster once again—”

Rafen had heard the dark rumours of the Reborn Horus during his time as a Scout Marine, but he had always thought them to be propaganda stories seeded by the archenemy. It seemed he had been mistaken.
...
“That ungrateful thug Abaddon should have welcomed my replicae with open arms… But instead he sent his Black Legion lapdogs to kill it and
raze my laboratoria to the ground. He called it ‘blasphemy’, as if such a thing can exist.”
If we believe Bile here, he admits to creating the Horus Clone. Now, givne what we learn later about the nature of "Bile" here, this may or may not be true. However, given the context I see no reason to doubt the veracity.

It leads to interesting ideas. Why haven't the Space MArines tried cloning Primarchs? Hell, if it was possible for Bile to do it, why could the Emperor never re-create the Primarchs after Chaos scattered them? That would suggest there were perhaps flaws in Bile's process.. or perhaps that the Emperor simply never had access to the right materials (or didnt have the time) to start over. It's quite possible Bile did in fact manage to surpass the Emperor in this regard, and technology has advanced far enough to allow it since the Great Crusade era. Despite what Dante pontificated bout in Red Fury and how impossible it was to surpass the wisdom of the Primarchs and the Emperor, it IS possible. the Imperium has one of those massive blindsides that they think their predecssors were inherently more intelligent and wise than they are, and never try to question or surpass it. I'm actually in sympathy with Bile in this regard.

Page 300
“Unlike you, whelp, I once walked the same ground as your idol. I
breathed the same air as him. And I tell you this, without lie or artifice. He never wanted to become what you have made him! He did not wish to be your god-thing. He abhorred such ideals! The slavery of your crippled, blind Imperium would sicken him, if he had eyes to see it.” He folded his arms across his barrel chest. “You may call me traitor, and be right in it, but I have never betrayed what I know to be true. I have never betrayed myself. You, Astartes, and all your kin, betray your Emperor with every moment of your worthless lives!”
Again Bile speaks some truth despite being a creature of Chaos, given what we know from the Heresy, and his words are spot on. It's one of the ironies of the Imperium, I suppose, but I'll give Bile credit for honesty.

Page 307
...a long-handled mass hammer; Rafen knew this kind of implement. It had a specially densified head upon it that could shatter boulders in the right hands...
I'm not sure how it is "specially densified" but it suggests the Imperium has ways of altering the density of objects. Whether this alteration is permanant or temporary.. who knows.

Page 309
...Rafen noticed the bright red dots of laser designators moving to and fro across the metal at his feet, tracing up over his legs and torso from the cannons they carried...
The flying lascannon-toting creatures above have laser designators.

Page 322
But still the beastmen were pathetically loyal. Whatever remained of their human identities was long gone, subsumed by a cocktail of genetic reorientation drugs and irrepression surgery. Bile had taken each one and caused dormant strains of animal DNA to reassert themselves; what emerged at the end of such a process was either dead or utterly inhuman.
Bile's splices. I wonder if this is some sort of reference to early 1st/2nd edition beastmen as Chaos troops? They would almost certianly have to be chaos mutation - I'm pretty sure humans do not have bird or dog DNA in their genetic makeup inherently.

Page 333
Tarikus opened fire with the bolt pistols, firing both weapons at once. Rafen saw an orangefurred, ropey-limbed simian blown backward with a fist-sized hole punched in its chest, a minotal at its side killed by a round that blasted through its eye socket.
Bolt pistol vs Splices. More fist sized holes.

Page 341
Atop the dorsal sail, a cupola extended from beneath a sealed cowling, presenting a tubular lens array made of etched brass. The weapon was modelled on the shape of an extinct form of Terran selachian, its toothy mouth the muzzle of the energy cannon. Sharp blue-green light lashed out, bursting canines unlucky enough to be caught in its nimbus.
...
Laser fire, red like hate, lashed out from the auto-guns on the beach, burning great craters in the hull of the Neimos. The vessel would not stop; in answer, the blue-green ray from the top of the sail cast around like a lighthouse beam, scorching a line over the rocky shore, fusing stone and gritty sand into black glass before finding the target. Pulses of emerald lightning flashed and the auto-guns were obliterated in fans of detonation, the servitor brains within boiled alive in their nutrient tanks.
The Neimos' lasers in action. Sustained beam weapon, bursting splices (at least grenade level damage), as well as detonating autoguns in a row. Boiling a brain probably involves several kg of water (the brain, the surrounding liquid, etc.) which will get into half a kj to several mj depending on mass and efficiency. This is probably conserative since the beam seems to operate at least partly like a heat ray, despite the "pulses" bit.

The auto laser turrets are powerful enough to punch holes in Neimos' hull (remember the ship was implied tough enough to survive reentry to an extent.)

Page 349
Nisos returned fire with his captured lasgun and scored hits on the second New Man; the genefreak’s cloak smouldered and caught fire.
Lasfire must be generating enough intensity to ignite cloth (125 j^cm^2)

Page 350
The enemy released a fan of laser fire, and had he been clad in his battle armour, Rafen would have dared to wade straight into it and let the ceramite shunt away the lethal flashes of hard light...
Power armour unsurprisingly resistant even to sustained lasfire. Lasfire referred to as "hard light" - whether that is hyperbole or literal I dont know. Hardlight is a sci fi term..

Page 350
At point-blank range, Cheyne’s gun blasted a massive divot of flesh from the creature and sent it howling to the ground. Nisos swept in, and fired another laser blast through the New Man’s eye; the energy bolt instantly flashed the guard’s brain matter to steam and his skull exploded in a cloud of pinkish-grey mist.
Lasgun shot vaporizes the brain of a New Man (literally) A normal human brian is aorund 1.3-1.4 kg, marines are roughly twice as big, so let's call it 2.5-3 kg possiby. Human body is roughly 70% water, meaning 1.75-2.1 kg was vaporized.. 7.4 to 8.82 MJ to vaporize. Assuming AStartes brains remain normal size, though, its "only" 2.3 MJ.

I suspect some will object to the above on the grounds that it would behave liek a grenade or something (even though lasguns in the novel have behaed more like magic heat rays than anything) so I'll allow for the possibility of it being a "blaster" like effect, meaning only a tiny portion of gray matter was vaporized and the head simply exploded. Its still going to require tens of kj to vaporize a hole into the brain to some extent, and given an Astartes head is bigger and tougher (and a new man is equal to an Astartes), you'd probably need something on that order (basically equal to a .50 cal round anyhow) to blow the head apart. Possibly triple digit kj, allowing for heating and inefficiency.

Another possible way is flash burns. 400-1000 j per sq cm should be enough to severely burn and explode things (flays skin from bone) If we go 20x20 cm for the head we get between 160-400 kj, and it might be several times that to encompass the whole head. If we want to flash burn the entire brain (call it 10x10x6 for roughly each facing, and 400 j per sq cm) we get 240 kj. That would again suggest triple digit kj, which I'd call a safe bet for this particular calc and call it an OoM calc either way (it can go down to 'double digit kj' for an explosive 'blaster' tpye lasweapon, or it can go up to MJ for a more thermal 'steam explosion' type that is less efficient.)

Page 354
“Aye. The beast’s psychic might is at Bile’s command. If he uses it to forge a
warp gate, he will be lost to us.”
Tyranid Zoanthrope. Earlier it was implied/believed by Ceris that he had located the thing that may have allowed Bile to escape Baal. It wasn't exactly identical, but it was close. This may not be an inherent ability of the Zoanthrope, but it suggests they can open portals. Of course thats not a shock - we know Tyranid ships use a teleporter worm type effect for transit, and other psykers have demonstrated teleportational abilities before.

Page 363
The mass-reactive round struck the traitor in the cheek and blasted away a third of his head in a puff of mist. Bile’s legs gave way and he dropped into a kneeling position, black blood jetting from his ruptured face.
...
The Blood Angel stepped in, touching the barrel of the gun to the ragged wound his first shot had made. He fired again, and this time Bile’s skull exploded, flinging his headless carcass to the floor.
Bolt round explodes a third of bile's head, and then blows the entire head apart with a second round.

Page 371
This was a madman who had dared to clone the arch-traitor Horus, who planned to rebuild the gene-code of the God-Emperor of Mankind—by contrast, cutting duplicates of himself, either from raw flesh or by alteration of living beings, would be well within his ability.
Yes. Bile cloned himself. So rafen didn't really kill him. Apparently he has LOTS of clones of himself too.

Page 377
The Flesh Tearer toggled the gain on his helmet’s audial sensors and the noise Eigen had detected became a rushing hiss in his ears. The helm’s simple machine-spirit pinpointed the source of the sound within seconds; behind them, closing quickly.
Power armour has machine-spirit controlled/adapted audio sensors. Presumably the other sensors/autosenses can be machine spirit adapted too.

Page 378-379
Rafen stalked forward, the lasgun held out in front of him. It felt small and delicate in his grip in comparison to the bolt weapons he was used to; he had his doubts it would be enough to kill Fabius.
Lasgun vs bolt weapon. This suggests the salvaged lasgun Rafen had is not Astartes sized, but something more suited to normal people (again Bile scavenges shit for his own use, or trades for it. So he can't be using too much specialized or custom buitl stuff.)

Page 382
Astartes power armour was not simply a layer of clothes a man
could choose to don like a robe or a tunic. To correctly mesh the organic machine of an Adeptus Astartes with the perfect function of his wargear took care, time and hallowed ritual; and if a traitor fiend like Bile attempted such a thing… Rafen imagined that even as they fought, the machine-spirit in Kear’s armour was working against the renegade, struggling to counter his every input.
In other words, the suit won't work as smoothly or properly as if the one it was designed for was wearing it. One of the drawbacks of powered armor, obviously.

Page 383
It was a summoner, an Imperial teleport transponder. Perhaps it had been taken along with Kear’s armour, or perhaps Bile had bartered it from Zellik for some unknown price; it mattered little. The rare archeotech device was encoded with command-level sigils, and correctly manipulated, it could reach through the ether and trigger a ship’s teleportarium to automatically lock on to whomever was its bearer.
A teleport homer, in other words. Interesting that it can transmit a signla throug the "ether" to activate it remotely, or be homed in on. Does "ether" mean Warp in this case, or just space?

Page 387
...in a few hours Rafen’s standing orders will come into effect. The Gabriel and the Tycho will blast this place to ashes. Even as we speak, the ships are moving to combat range. Soon they’ll engage the gunskulls and the matter will be done, one way or another.”
More on the destruction of the planet due to Rafen's orders.

Page 390
His timetable would be severely disrupted; the project would be set back years, and it would take time to mount a new facility, even using one of the other dozen bases he had concealed about the galactic disc.
...
He understood the need for care and preparation. Why else would he spread his plans so wide? Why else create an army of his own simulacra, each one indoctrinated to believe that they were the one and only Primogenitor? For the sake of patience; to ensure that even if a fortress fell, as it had today, no single act of interference from the minions of the Corpse-God could destroy his great strategy.
Bile is a believer in redundancy, having established multiple bases, lots of clones, etc.

Page 401
Nuclear firestorms the size of continents crossed the surface, shock-rings from multiple detonations boring down into the mantle and bedrock of the ocean world. The seas were already boiling into void as the atmosphere dissipated, the orbiting gunskulls consumed by the same fires. Within a day, perhaps less, the fifth planet would be little more than a scorched ember, and everything on it just a memory. The taint of Chaos and of the alien had been scoured clean.
The destruction of the planet. oceans vaporized, and it, plus the atmosphere, carried off in the resulting devasstation, all happening in less than a day. Blasting mantle-deep holes through the crust and continent sized firestorms. assuming a 1500 kmx1500km continent sized firestorm 5-10 km up, and 5,000 K temps, you'd get double digit teratons if I did my math right (e7-e8 megatons basically). Blasting a hole in the crust down to the mantle could be depending on thickness could be hundreds, if not thousands of gigatons depending on exact depth and position/placement of the detonation (50-100 km lithosphere assumed and close to surface cratering calc for granite on the SDN ADC)

That tells us a bit about the general effect per warhead... but the overall effect is much worse. Vaporizing the oceans is e27 J or thereabouts, as is removing the atmosphere (roughly). But removing both ekes the numbers up to e28-e29 joules which is.. considerable. Spread out over a day we're talking e23-e24 watts sustained "firepower."

Now impressive as all that sounds... we actually don't know the means of destruction. Or rather it's not explicitly stated here. They imply several times it might be a general bombardment, but on the other hands they also explicitly mentioned cyclonics (despite earlier mentioning needing to amass a fleet to blast the planet with cyclonics...) and it doesn't help that Tarikus in Legends of the Space Marines mentions lance fire to obliterate the prison. Despite the ambiguity, I am inclined to think cyclonics did it, simply because they mention warheads consistently, and that was specifically mentioned (assembling the blood angels to blast the planet may simply have been an efficiency issue to minimize losses.) That doesn't rule out other weapons contributing - eg the lances, either - we know multi-tiered bombardmenst have occured (56-Izar, Cyrene, etc.) - its just that the cyclonics are carrying out the bulk of the work. Besides we know Cyclonics can be brute force weapons, and the context Rafen and others discussed them as (as well as above) definitely suggests brute force here. We dont know the exact ratios, but even if the lances only contributed a sustained firepower 1/1000000th of the Cycloincs, we're still taking e17-e18 watts for the lances, and that works quite well. Hell I doubt conventional firepower is more than millions or billions times greater than ac ycloincs either (akin to the disparity between conventional weapons and nuclear WMDs IRL.)

Page 403
The Raven Guard Kilan and some of the other escapees from Bile’s prisonfortress were to travel with the Flesh Tearers, to rendezvous with representatives of their own Chapters along the Gabriel’s course back to Cretacia. Tarikus and the rest were remaining aboard the Tycho, and the Blood Angels would do the same for them, quietly guiding them back to their home worlds.
The main interesting thing about this is again in context with Legends of the Space Marines. Tarikus mentions weeks having passed since he returned to Gast from Dynikas V, which means that (going by 5th edition map) he traveled more than halfway across the galaxy from Ghoul STars to somewhere in segemntum Tempestus to go home, which again confirms the "hundreds of thousands to millions times c) numbers mentioned earlier.

The odd thing about this is that they mention Tarikus going home with the Blood Angels, when the Flesh tEarers are closer to segmentum Tempestus.... oh well.
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