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by Crayz9000
2013-12-10 09:08pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: A Prelude to War (ST/SW) (Ch.29 up)
Replies: 82
Views: 134558

Re: A Prelude to War (ST/SW) (Ch.28 up)

Damnit you still killed Chewie! You bastard! Dare I say it it's a worse death this time around, at least in the original Vong War he got a nice defiant-to-the-end death. It may have been defiant to the end, but it also seemed generally pointless to me thanks to the circumstances. They made him powe...
by Crayz9000
2013-12-10 07:41pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: A Prelude to War (ST/SW) (Ch.29 up)
Replies: 82
Views: 134558

Chapter 28

28 [/b][/size] It was, Han reflected, another beautiful day on Sernpidal. The system's typical yellow star hung high in the sky, washing the plains with its bright light. Various trees and grasses that Han still didn't remember the names for yet were blowing in a gentle breeze, and the air, compare...
by Crayz9000
2013-12-09 11:29am
Forum: Pure Star Wars
Topic: Star Wars: Bohemian Rhapsody
Replies: 3
Views: 2025

Star Wars: Bohemian Rhapsody

Saw this going around on Google+ and was somewhat surprised nobody had linked it here yet.

by Crayz9000
2013-11-29 11:27am
Forum: Science Fiction
Topic: Let's talk Panem
Replies: 28
Views: 4677

Re: Let's talk Panem

Um, all of them? You decided to scream about me being a moron instead of responding to anything. That England was also the seat of empire has nothing to do with the fact that the impoverished classes not benefiting from the gains of imperialism were able to provide sufficient demand to support bake...
by Crayz9000
2013-11-28 10:41am
Forum: Fantasy
Topic: The 2nd Girl Genius Thread
Replies: 400
Views: 57903

Re: The 2nd Girl Genius Thread

Nah, don't think so. I doubt Otilia would be so dumb as to land right where the massive limb they sliced off was about to fall.
by Crayz9000
2013-11-21 02:57pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: A Prelude to War (ST/SW) (Ch.29 up)
Replies: 82
Views: 134558

Chapter 27

The bit about the concussion missiles in this chapter is pure speculation on my part, as I was trying to come up with a workable explanation for the effects documented in-universe. 27 [/b][/size] "Captain, we've received a FLASH-level dispatch." Captain Ollic regarded the Comm-Scan operato...
by Crayz9000
2013-11-13 05:42pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: A Prelude to War (ST/SW) (Ch.29 up)
Replies: 82
Views: 134558

Re: A Prelude to War (ST/SW) (Ch.25 up)

As promised. This chapter is still quite raw and has not been beta-read, so please let me know if you spot any typos in it. 26 [/b][/size] "Ferret data confirms PDC report on OpFor assets." Standing on the flag bridge of the Executor-class Star Dreadnought Lusankya , Commander Deanna Troi ...
by Crayz9000
2013-11-08 05:48pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: A Prelude to War (ST/SW) (Ch.29 up)
Replies: 82
Views: 134558

Re: A Prelude to War (ST/SW) (Ch.25 up)

So, was looking for this thread since I'm preparing to get Chapter 26 out sometime in the next couple weeks, and it seems that my record of providing an update once about... oh, every two years has not changed. This time, at least, it's not due to trying to go back and rewrite everything, but instea...
by Crayz9000
2013-11-08 05:30pm
Forum: Pure Star Wars
Topic: Imperial Warship Crew
Replies: 31
Views: 7783

Re: Imperial Warship Crew

It's kind of funny that I just noticed this discussion, since I was musing on the topic yesterday. Here's a brief essay I put together on a possible explanation for the discrepancy in crew between the Imperator and both earlier and later designs. The official crew requirements of ships used during t...
by Crayz9000
2013-11-06 10:38am
Forum: News and Politics
Topic: Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX
Replies: 39
Views: 4257

Re: Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX

It's especially ironic given that Benjamin Franklin was the one who said "They who can give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety, deserve neither liberty nor safety."

I wonder how many US schools actually mention that bit in their history classes.
by Crayz9000
2013-11-05 04:12pm
Forum: News and Politics
Topic: Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX
Replies: 39
Views: 4257

Re: Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX

Going back to what I said earlier about the arguments over Israel's success in counter-terrorism, the racial profiling of course is their most suspect method and one that's a bulwark of their actual airport security measures. I found a dissertation regarding that topic published on Google Books . Ho...
by Crayz9000
2013-11-04 10:54am
Forum: News and Politics
Topic: USS Zumwalt DDG-1000 Launched
Replies: 67
Views: 6063

Re: USS Zumwalt DDG-1000 Launched

Pretty much all ships run on unix based operating systems, along with almost all servers and industrial, research and defence supercomputers. Wrong. Wast majority of computers on ship are embedded industrial systems. These run on whatever embedded OS producer orders - things like RISC OS, LynxOS, T...
by Crayz9000
2013-11-04 10:38am
Forum: News and Politics
Topic: Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX
Replies: 39
Views: 4257

Re: Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX

So it appears that the first instinctive reaction is to post armed guards at every airport checkpoint. I'm sure this will do so much for our actual safety from things that can't really be stopped by a bullet, such as... you know... explosives. But it makes the TSA personnel feel better, so I'm sure ...
by Crayz9000
2013-11-02 08:14pm
Forum: News and Politics
Topic: Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX
Replies: 39
Views: 4257

Re: Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX

I think it can be argued that there's something seriously wrong with anyone willing to kill themselves, regardless of religion.
by Crayz9000
2013-11-02 02:57pm
Forum: News and Politics
Topic: Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX
Replies: 39
Views: 4257

Re: Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX

Domestic flights in Mexico, for the most part, involve cursory metal detector checks throughout the airport and a checked bag search at the gate. I haven't made domestic flights in any other countries so I cannot say much other than pointing out that after 9/11, the US basically forced every country...
by Crayz9000
2013-11-01 08:53pm
Forum: News and Politics
Topic: Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX
Replies: 39
Views: 4257

Gunman Opens Fire In Concourse at LAX

http://www.cnn.com/2013/11/01/us/lax-gunfire/ http://www.latimes.com/local/lanow/la-me-ln-live-lax-shooting-tsa-agent-alleged-gunman-shot-20131101,0,3517669.story <show caption > A A A (resize font) Los Angeles (CNN) - A man armed with what police say was an assault rifle and carrying materials expr...
by Crayz9000
2013-10-03 03:36pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Star Trek: Republic (Book II: Ties of Blood)
Replies: 87
Views: 47212

Re: Star Trek: Republic (Book II: Ties of Blood)

It sounds like knowledge of Case Praetorian is very limited, which is not surprising given the circumstances surrounding it and the explicit mention that it was "quietly" put into place. I'm not sure any of Ordan's thralls are even aware of it.
by Crayz9000
2013-08-15 02:51pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Prime Mover : Chapter 1 - Alive
Replies: 8
Views: 6393

Re: Prime Mover : Chapter 1 - Alive

In regards to your question, instead of acting as bait, I had the opposite reaction. As soon as I saw the massive infodump I started skimming over it. I suspect many other readers will have similar reactions. In this case, the reason it's generally not a good idea to infodump in the story is because...
by Crayz9000
2013-08-14 04:29pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Prime Mover : Chapter 1 - Alive
Replies: 8
Views: 6393

Re: Prime Mover : Chapter 1 - Alive

I unfortunately don't have the time to make a detailed review, but after reading through about 1/4 of the chapter, I can say that your prose needs a severe trimming. Take the adage "Show, don't tell" to heart. Explore the surroundings piecemeal through the character's interactions, not in ...
by Crayz9000
2013-08-11 05:56pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: By the Horns (A BattleTech Alternate Universe)
Replies: 174
Views: 96283

Re: By the Horns (A BattleTech Alternate Universe)

I don't suppose that dear Maxwell's lady friend at CONTROL happens to be Agent 99... :D
by Crayz9000
2013-08-07 04:49pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: By the Horns (A BattleTech Alternate Universe)
Replies: 174
Views: 96283

Re: By the Horns (A BattleTech Alternate Universe)

Having read Arminias' other works, I think he'll do a decent job of balancing out any issues they may cause. It's one thing to have a secret uberweapon in your back pocket. It's another thing to know how to use it, and Arminias seems to have a good grasp of the damage that can be caused to plans by ...
by Crayz9000
2013-06-08 10:51am
Forum: Fantasy
Topic: The 2nd Girl Genius Thread
Replies: 400
Views: 57903

Re: The 2nd Girl Genius Thread

How can you be so sure?
by Crayz9000
2013-06-05 02:48pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: The Cameron Legacy: The Fall of the Star League
Replies: 213
Views: 74704

Re: The Cameron Legacy: The Fall of the Star League

Bismarck and Hood , huh? History repeats itself in strange ways... I have to admit, as much as the BT universe's technology annoys me, this story so far has been very enjoyable. With the exception of the 'Mechs (which really can't be rationalized with modern physics knowledge, no matter how hard fa...
by Crayz9000
2013-06-05 09:46am
Forum: Fantasy
Topic: The 2nd Girl Genius Thread
Replies: 400
Views: 57903

Re: The 2nd Girl Genius Thread

Well, can't say that I expected Agatha to remain incapicitated for long. After living with The Other in her head, she doesn't take very well to anyone attempting to control her.
by Crayz9000
2013-05-20 04:20pm
Forum: Fantasy
Topic: The 2nd Girl Genius Thread
Replies: 400
Views: 57903

Re: The 2nd Girl Genius Thread

Aaaand looks like more Sturmvoraus family antics.