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by Sithking Zero
2011-05-31 08:48pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: What's the hardest part of your writing process?
Replies: 30
Views: 7377

Re: What's the hardest part of your writing process?

Resisting the urge to do infodumps. I find it difficult to avoid writting too much about the setting and it's tech rather than the character and story. I find it useful to write all that stuff up in encyclopedia-style format. That way it's available if I need it, and it gets the information out of ...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-29 12:30pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: What's the hardest part of your writing process?
Replies: 30
Views: 7377

Re: What's the hardest part of your writing process?

Character interaction and spacing.
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-28 02:08am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3

Your concerns are noted. I am redoing chapter three. Wasn't very happy with it anyway.
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-25 01:25am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3

Er, hard to aim as in "hard to hit a target 50 km away precisely enough?" or hard to aim as in "hard to draw a bead?" It is "hard to aim" battleship-caliber artillery at an attacking fighter-bomber; this does not mean that the fighter-bomber is too far away to be hit b...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-24 09:52pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3

Don't be too sure- ME ships are stated as not using laser weapons at close ranges because it's hard to aim them. Close range, in this case, is about fifty kilometers, which they refer to as "Knife-fighting range." Considering that now, on our world, in the year 2011, we can reflect a laser...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-24 04:23pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3

I was using BOLO! too- I'm just forgetful. And it's not all Mark XXXIII's that have to shut down their sheilds to use counter-grav, it's just that that one had no reaction mass at all. It was running on solar and batteries, not the usual fusion. Really? Wait, i have a story in "The Best of the...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-24 11:13am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3

That was very cool. Only one small comment: The Bolo the Golem resumed fire at a furious pace, but even battlescreens and the finest durachrome alloy can only take so much punishment. An instant after their last payload was released, they were holed through utterly. This is a bit vague. Are you say...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-23 09:10pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover

Here's Chapter Three. Oh, and Mr. Doom? Remember when I said that A Bolo wasn't the one who said "Battle Reflex Mode Activated?" This was technically true. More accurately, it was three Mk. XXVI Bolos and a military AI mounted on the Centerpoint Station. :twisted: Chapter 3: The Battle of ...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-23 06:06pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover

So far I like this story, but like Mass Effect I don't like how it is heavily reliant on the codex for back story. It would definitely be interesting to see mass Mass Effect ground forces attacking a bolo :D (Yes, I did that on purpose) Yay, two pages! But I sort of disagree. The codexes imply that...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-22 09:06pm
Forum: Off-Topic
Topic: Orion Drives
Replies: 37
Views: 5290

Re: Orion Drives

Plus, the whole, you know, the whole "Radiation," and "Cancers," thing. Maybe it's just me, but being in any proximity to a nuclear device is an experience I'd rather avoid.

But you guys know me; I'm weird like that.
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-22 09:04pm
Forum: Off-Topic
Topic: what are the best non american films you have seen?
Replies: 56
Views: 5567

Re: what are the best non american films you have seen?

Princess Mononoke. Greatest. Movie. Ever.


At least, to me.
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-20 08:43am
Forum: Science, Logic, And Morality
Topic: Really big upper-atmosphere detonations
Replies: 24
Views: 2978

Re: Really big upper-atmosphere detonations

madd0ct0r wrote:trying to fly a giant nuke driven spaceship through the atmosphere is bad?

well, i learned something new today.
And Knowing is half the battle!

G.I. JOOOOOOOOOOOOE!
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-20 08:40am
Forum: Science Fiction
Topic: EPIC FAIL Master Races
Replies: 143
Views: 17548

Re: EPIC FAIL Master Races

Agreed, the Etherdrive could be useful over short distances, particularly when boosted by a Navigator. Plus, since it has far less connection to the Warp, or as some call it, "Super Space Hell," it'd be far less likely to attract the attentions of, say, demons, hellmonsters, the Chaos God...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-20 02:26am
Forum: Science, Logic, And Morality
Topic: Really big upper-atmosphere detonations
Replies: 24
Views: 2978

Re: Really big upper-atmosphere detonations

Well, no, but in-atmo, as this topic refers to, it can be, uh, what's the word what's the word what's the word, Oh yeah, BAD.
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-19 06:23pm
Forum: Science Fiction
Topic: EPIC FAIL Master Races
Replies: 143
Views: 17548

Re: EPIC FAIL Master Races

Though I'll note that part of the reason I mentioned the failings of Etherdrive was because of the notion that it could be useful to the Imperium. Agreed, the Etherdrive could be useful over short distances, particularly when boosted by a Navigator. Plus, since it has far less connection to the War...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-19 06:18pm
Forum: Science, Logic, And Morality
Topic: Really big upper-atmosphere detonations
Replies: 24
Views: 2978

Re: Really big upper-atmosphere detonations

This, amongst many other reasons, is why an Orion Drive is considered a Really, REALLY bad idea. For those who don't know what an Orion Drive is, it's basically the idea that the propulsion of your ship is maintained by dropping nukes behind your ship and riding the blast wave. While awesome... you ...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-19 10:44am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover

Twenty- six ? Yay for self-aware Bolos! But given ME doesn't seem to have really heavy ground stuff, I doubt they could kill even a Mark I very easily, and even a Mark XV would probably require orbital bombardment to destroy, let along an XXVI... :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: 'Course, that's just w...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-19 12:43am
Forum: Off-Topic
Topic: Orion Drives
Replies: 37
Views: 5290

Re: Orion Drives

[...] Oh, and if you want a Sci-Fi series that uses an Orion Drive, check out the Troy Rising series, by John Ringo. [...] Having recently finished the trilogy, I'd strongly support Sithking Zero's suggestion, with a caveat: book 3, "The Hot Gates", most definitely does not exist. Books 1...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-18 10:49pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover

...Damn you. :evil: Never the less, I eargerly await more violence and bloodshed. :twisted: Just one question, though- what era? pre-First Contact with Melcon, and obviously way pre-Ragnarok, but what era? What's the latest mark of Bolo? The last type of Bolo released at the start of this story was...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-18 12:02pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover

doom3607 wrote:
Sithking Zero wrote: Battle Reflex Mode Activated…
Is that a Bolo? If it is, I think I'll just quietly write off a big chunk of that 'grand fleet'... :twisted:
Sir, I can personally assure you that this is not in fact, a Bolo speaking.
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-18 12:07am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: New Story: Alternate Antilles
Replies: 8
Views: 2907

Re: New Story: Alternate Antilles

You've actually made Vader's death here seem credible, and whilst this might seem an initial victory for the Rebellion, things are about to get a lot harder for them unless Palpatine discovers Luke's potential and tries lots of complicated schemes to catch him. Without Vader's desire to take Skywal...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-17 11:57pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover

Chapter Two: First Contact Turian Destroyer Talon of Palavan (name translated into English) "…And one must always remember that a Spectre's first job is to defend the citizens of the galaxy. Without them, our group wouldn't exist," lectured the avianoid being with a plated, painted face. ...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-17 05:30pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover

It's actually not as big a problem in military SF as it is in crossovers , especially crossovers done in the very hardware-centric, analysis-heavy style that comes with the territory here. In crossovers, specifically, it is quite challenging to make it about the men and not the toys. But the toys a...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-17 04:29pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover Ch. 3 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 17933

Re: Concordiat Ascendant: A Bolo/Mass Effect Crossover

Looks good so far. I wonder, do the starships have AI minds as well? That would be a large factor in dealing with both the Quarians and the Geth. They do, although the AIs are a little lower-grade than Bolo AIs. This is an interesting start to the story, and frankly, introducing Bolos into anything...
by Sithking Zero
2011-05-16 11:40am
Forum: Science, Logic, And Morality
Topic: End of an era! Shuttlelaunch.
Replies: 22
Views: 1978

Re: End of an era! Shuttlelaunch.

Whoops.

Doesn't mean we can't resurrect this thread when the last launch really DOES happen, though, does it?