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by Dessel_Ordo
2012-02-29 06:55am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction.net: the good bits
Replies: 383
Views: 454743

Re: Fanfiction.net: the good bits

Mind = blown...
and I want to say I want more, I really do, but your right Ahriman238, any more would ruin it.
by Dessel_Ordo
2011-12-23 01:44am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction.net: the good bits
Replies: 383
Views: 454743

Re: Fanfiction.net: the good bits

A few more I have found after going on a bit of a Gunslinger Girl kick GSG Great Escape Set just after season two of the anime, and throwing out the manga past that point. Quite a few gramatical errors, but it stays more or less true to the spirit of the show. Of course its still a fic about the cyb...
by Dessel_Ordo
2011-09-11 12:11am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)
Replies: 18
Views: 7086

Re: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)

Formatting is a bitch, especially when trying to copy/paste from openoffice to bbc code. I apologize it its not uniform, or if thoughts are hard to pick out from descriptions, I'll try to fix that up later... probably -{*(*[Emperors Bounty, Captains quarters]*)*}- Three days later, and finally we ar...
by Dessel_Ordo
2011-09-11 12:04am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)
Replies: 18
Views: 7086

Re: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)

Anakin looks to his right, where Tahiri is sliding the last clip into her repeater “Why did you allow the Redemptionist tracker to escape alive again?” Amra asks, his knife in one hand, the lascarbine he took from one of the redemptionists in the other. “He was running” Anakin replies, sighing and s...
by Dessel_Ordo
2011-09-11 12:01am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)
Replies: 18
Views: 7086

Re: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)

I've been away for a while, and seem to have neglected updating here... sorry guys. So here, have the chapters I've finished over the last few months while I get to work on the next one. -{*(*[Bridge of the Emperors Bounty]*)*}- Garus sat at his regular post in front of the external voxcaster contro...
by Dessel_Ordo
2011-09-10 01:27pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction.net: the good bits
Replies: 383
Views: 454743

Re: Fanfiction.net: the good bits

(Edit: well, now I feel foolish, I found the story in the cleaned up/completed section, haha) As where its posted there ends when Killfrenzy got introduced... That aside, yea the Forgotten Realms bit did sag a little bit, especially in the underdark bits, though the "daddy, this is my husband t...
by Dessel_Ordo
2010-08-23 02:24pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)
Replies: 18
Views: 7086

Re: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)

wow, that one took me a while. serious action in the next part, I promise. c&c encouraged Riina fumed, pushed back into a back corner of her own mind by HIM. She fumed at her own weakness, raged at her inability to wrest control from the usurper, and raged at the red thing both for its inability...
by Dessel_Ordo
2010-07-27 03:31am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)
Replies: 18
Views: 7086

Re: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)

gah, this chapter and life have been kicking my ass. here it is, alot later than I wanted it to be, and hopefully the last of the setup chapters. C&C welcome, as usual. “I have no idea what a grox is, and even if I did, I’d rather not. Now do you mind telling me where I am?” Anakin replied, tryi...
by Dessel_Ordo
2010-06-02 09:07pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Invasion
Replies: 12
Views: 3446

Re: Invasion

has potential, I like where it might be going... but yea, still to little to pass judgment
by Dessel_Ordo
2010-06-02 02:03am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)
Replies: 18
Views: 7086

Re: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)

Deep orbit, Centrax Secundus Korus stepped off the lighter as soon as the ramp descended. “Break orbit and prepare to make a warp jump, somewhere outside this subsector, preferably somewhere we’ll be able to find a job. Jarvis, for your own sake I hope you re-supplied the ship according to the timef...
by Dessel_Ordo
2010-05-25 04:08am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction.net: the good bits
Replies: 383
Views: 454743

Re: Fanfiction.net: the good bits

a decent one I managed to stumble across was The Confederate . Devently funny Starcraft/40K crossover, the characterization is good (if a bit stiff in some cases) and the story has a good mix of funny and awesome. Some of the Cononical muck-ups and errors made it hard for me to get past the first fe...
by Dessel_Ordo
2010-05-25 03:53am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)
Replies: 18
Views: 7086

Clash of Realities (SW/40K crossover)

long time lurker, first-time poster here. I do not own Star Wars, Warhammer 40k, or any related properties. Ect ect ect, the standard fanfic disclaimer goes here; fill the rest in yourself. C&C Welcome Centarax Secundus Kel looked over at his captain, trying to hold off the pain in the back of h...