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by EarthScorpion
2010-03-24 06:39pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)
Replies: 66
Views: 33112

Re: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)

Yep, I must admit, Eclipse Phase was a large reason for the rewrite. I saw what a proper look at a properly mid-future tech society could be like, and... well, after the massive disappointment of Mortal Remains, I jumped at the chance. My NEG, by the way, is a clear Transitional Economy in Eclipse P...
by EarthScorpion
2010-03-22 08:13am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)
Replies: 66
Views: 33112

Re: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)

~’/|\’~ There was an irregular cacophony of noises from the machine, a chorus of bleeps and chimes. Sibilant hisses formed the bass, while a drum-beat of the footsteps of the nurses picked out the time. With effort, they slowed to a halt, straining against the inertia of the thing, as they prepared...
by EarthScorpion
2010-03-22 08:13am
Forum: Completed or Cleaned Up Stories
Topic: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)
Replies: 32
Views: 106205

Re: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)

~’/|\’~ There was an irregular cacophony of noises from the machine, a chorus of bleeps and chimes. Sibilant hisses formed the bass, while a drum-beat of the footsteps of the nurses picked out the time. With effort, they slowed to a halt, straining against the inertia of the thing, as they prepared...
by EarthScorpion
2010-03-22 08:12am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)
Replies: 66
Views: 33112

Re: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)

~’/|\’~ Panting, Shinji grasped at the nearest vertical object (which turned out to be an advertising panel), and clutched onto it, trying to stop the world spinning. His lungs were on fire, and his knees felt like jelly. Perhaps the heat is melting them , he thought, absently, as he pulled in one ...
by EarthScorpion
2010-03-22 08:12am
Forum: Completed or Cleaned Up Stories
Topic: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)
Replies: 32
Views: 106205

Re: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)

~’/|\’~ Panting, Shinji grasped at the nearest vertical object (which turned out to be an advertising panel), and clutched onto it, trying to stop the world spinning. His lungs were on fire, and his knees felt like jelly. Perhaps the heat is melting them , he thought, absently, as he pulled in one ...
by EarthScorpion
2010-03-22 08:11am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)
Replies: 66
Views: 33112

Re: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)

Chapter 1 A Harbinger / But where the dead leaf fell EVANGELION ~’/|\’~ If the thing did happen, then man must be prepared to accept notions of the cosmos, and of his own place in the seething vortex of time, whose merest mention is paralysing. He must, too, be placed on guard against a specific, l...
by EarthScorpion
2010-03-22 08:11am
Forum: Completed or Cleaned Up Stories
Topic: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)
Replies: 32
Views: 106205

Re: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)

Chapter 1 A Harbinger / But where the dead leaf fell EVANGELION ~’/|\’~ If the thing did happen, then man must be prepared to accept notions of the cosmos, and of his own place in the seething vortex of time, whose merest mention is paralysing. He must, too, be placed on guard against a specific, l...
by EarthScorpion
2010-03-22 08:05am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)
Replies: 66
Views: 33112

Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)

Yes. It begins. Perhaps a little information, for those who are not familiar with the history of this fic. Aeon Natum Engel was my first major fanfiction. It was long, complicated, and intricately plotted. It was, also, in an act of deliberate barbarism, throttled by me; killed off in a mean-spirite...
by EarthScorpion
2010-03-22 08:05am
Forum: Completed or Cleaned Up Stories
Topic: Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)
Replies: 32
Views: 106205

Aeon Entelechy Evangelion (ANE rewrite)

Table of Contents Yes. It begins. Perhaps a little information, for those who are not familiar with the history of this fic. Aeon Natum Engel was my first major fanfiction. It was long, complicated, and intricately plotted. It was, also, in an act of deliberate barbarism, throttled by me; killed of...
by EarthScorpion
2010-03-04 03:10am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 184
Views: 114255

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

Since this has been bumed recently... for those who don't know yet: Aeon Entelechy Engel, the rewrite, has been posted on SpaceBattles' Creative Writing forum. The first chapter anyway. Go check it out there. To be exact, that's the Prologue. I'll be posting Aeon Entelechy Evangelion here (and othe...
by EarthScorpion
2010-02-04 03:38am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 184
Views: 114255

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

I have to say, yes, that is pretty much the reaction I expected. And, yes, I do deserve this. This isn't the planned end. This is just how it ends. It's disappointing, leaves more questions unanswered than answered, and, of course, Everybody Dies. It's perfectly fitting for something based on FEAR, ...
by EarthScorpion
2010-02-04 03:38am
Forum: Completed or Cleaned Up Stories
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 41
Views: 146382

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

I have to say, yes, that is pretty much the reaction I expected. And, yes, I do deserve this. This isn't the planned end. This is just how it ends. It's disappointing, leaves more questions unanswered than answered, and, of course, Everybody Dies. It's perfectly fitting for something based on FEAR, ...
by EarthScorpion
2010-02-03 09:16pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 184
Views: 114255

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

~'/|\'~ The other two Evangelions spun to hear the roaring, tearing noise that the cockpit systems rendered the charge-beam shot as. It reached out, green aftertrail tracing out a path to Moloch. Unit 00... was not in a good state. That much was certain. And considering the level of damage that it ...
by EarthScorpion
2010-02-03 09:16pm
Forum: Completed or Cleaned Up Stories
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 41
Views: 146382

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

~'/|\'~ The other two Evangelions spun to hear the roaring, tearing noise that the cockpit systems rendered the charge-beam shot as. It reached out, green aftertrail tracing out a path to Moloch. Unit 00... was not in a good state. That much was certain. And considering the level of damage that it ...
by EarthScorpion
2010-02-03 09:15pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 184
Views: 114255

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

Chapter 16 CATOcylsm: Cessation ~'/|\'~ Although the motive came from within, the form taken by the cult has appeared to many to be of non-Israelite origin. Babylonia and Assyria, however, seem to be out of the question: malik , “arbiter, decider,” is there an epithet of various gods, and as an app...
by EarthScorpion
2010-02-03 09:15pm
Forum: Completed or Cleaned Up Stories
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 41
Views: 146382

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

Chapter 16 CATOcylsm: Cessation ~'/|\'~ Although the motive came from within, the form taken by the cult has appeared to many to be of non-Israelite origin. Babylonia and Assyria, however, seem to be out of the question: malik , “arbiter, decider,” is there an epithet of various gods, and as an app...
by EarthScorpion
2010-01-13 03:14pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 184
Views: 114255

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

What a nasty fight. And now the Angel-Herald awakens. Yep. And this chapter keeps on multiplying. Believe it or not, I foolishly thought, when I started it, that this would end up the same length as the Yam bit; you know, one chapter, the Herald appears, and then it's killed in the second bit. 40,0...
by EarthScorpion
2010-01-12 01:32pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 184
Views: 114255

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

~'/|\'~ Shinji swept the plasmagun over to the next set of targets prioritised by the onboard computers, the LAI part of the firecontrol minutely adjusting the arcanomagnetic sheaf around each bolt to hit precise targets within the cone of fire. There were so many of them now; the sky was filled wi...
by EarthScorpion
2010-01-12 01:32pm
Forum: Completed or Cleaned Up Stories
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 41
Views: 146382

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

~'/|\'~ Shinji swept the plasmagun over to the next set of targets prioritised by the onboard computers, the LAI part of the firecontrol minutely adjusting the arcanomagnetic sheaf around each bolt to hit precise targets within the cone of fire. There were so many of them now; the sky was filled wi...
by EarthScorpion
2010-01-12 01:31pm
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 184
Views: 114255

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

Chapter 15b CATOcylsm: Termination ~'/|\'~ “The brazen arms were working more quickly. They paused no longer. Every time that a child was placed in them the priests of Moloch spread out their hands upon him to burden him with the crimes of the people, vociferating: "They are not men but oxen!&...
by EarthScorpion
2010-01-12 01:31pm
Forum: Completed or Cleaned Up Stories
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 41
Views: 146382

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

Chapter 15b CATOcylsm: Termination ~'/|\'~ “The brazen arms were working more quickly. They paused no longer. Every time that a child was placed in them the priests of Moloch spread out their hands upon him to burden him with the crimes of the people, vociferating: "They are not men but oxen!&...
by EarthScorpion
2009-12-31 09:21am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 184
Views: 114255

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

Well, as much as she can have fun. I've read files you know, intercepted the odd coms signal. What stops her from understanding puns anyways? And tell me something I didn't already know-ok, ok, I suspected it. What the hell does Achtzig even mean anyways, my offline german-english dictionary says i...
by EarthScorpion
2009-12-30 11:43am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 184
Views: 114255

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

So, how "alien and unknowable" are the Tsab, really? Are we likely to get a POV chapter from them too? Not by current plans. At least at the present date. I might cover a certain series of events in AW1 involving a certain prominent Nazzadi on the Nostalgi fa Enfeniti , an interdiction cr...
by EarthScorpion
2009-12-30 11:01am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 184
Views: 114255

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

The Migou really are the good guys, I guess. And from their point of view, we're arcanoxenobiological abominations. This does not bode well. *shrugs* At least from their point of view. I think you probably noted that my narration is not unbiased; I take on the viewpoint and assumptions of each side...
by EarthScorpion
2009-12-30 05:23am
Forum: User Fiction
Topic: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)
Replies: 184
Views: 114255

Re: Aeon Natum Engel (NGE cross-over)

Antonio stretched, straightish his arms and swinging them around. “How was it, Var?” “Looking good.” The Nazzadi paused. “We're going to have to do a redub on some of the earlier packages, though. The fact that we got moved to a processing centre, rather than a rape camp, means that the narrative's ...